First, the direct opening method My father is short, slightly hunched on his back, and walks like a cripple ... This is the most used opening method for students and the simplest one. This straightforward beginning often makes the article seem boring.
Here are four vivid ways to open it. Second, start with a classic sentence 1 and a poem.
"Don't be idle, you will lose your head." My father is over forty and his head is white, but he is still very ordinary ...
There is a saying in China that "three sticks don't fart." My father is a person who doesn't like to talk ... You can also use couplets, starting with idioms and so on.
Third, the appearance description begins: Example 1: "My favorite little friend" I have a good friend who is inseparable. Her fleshy little face has a pair of slender arch eyebrows, and there are a pair of watery big eyes under the eyebrows.
There is a smooth cherry mouth under the delicate nose. All in all, this is a lovely little face.
You know who she is. To tell you the truth, she is my good partner-Zeng Yushu. Example 2: "My favorite person" My favorite person-mother.
Mom is tall, fair-skinned, thin but not thin, plump but not fat, with thick curved eyebrows and big bright eyes, always shining with wisdom. This is my mother. How's it going? She looks beautiful.
1, description of appearance+characteristics at the beginning: Example 1: My grandma is a middle school teacher. She has bright eyes under her black eyebrows. She is not tall and her chubby body is always so busy.
Grandma is very serious and responsible for her work, and I admire her very much. Example 2: "My Dad" My dad is tall and thin, with two thick eyebrows and a pair of special round eyes, which often shines with wisdom and alertness. He can sometimes make people feel humorous.
He is only in his early forties, and his black hair has somehow fallen off very little. What I respect and admire most is his fighting spirit.
Example 3: The lovely gardener-my teacher. She has bright eyes, a mouth that can teach us thousands of knowledge, and a motherly smile on her face. Who is she? She is our head teacher-Miss Liu.
Example 4: "Little Musician" My little friend Zhang Mengyao has big eyes and neat white teeth. She's cute. Tell you, she is still recognized as a "little musician" by her classmates! Example 5: "My grandfather" My grandfather is over sixty years old. At noon, he has a thin face and a tall nose. Although his temples are gray, he looks very energetic.
He always has a smile on his face. My cousin and I both like to be naughty with him and tease us.
I nicknamed him "the old urchin". 2, voice description+character characteristics at the beginning: Example 1: "My Good Partner" has not arrived at her home, she heard a crisp and melodious reading sound. I don't have to guess, I know it's her-my good friend and good partner who studies hard.
3. Describe the characteristics of the characters at the beginning: Example 1: "My companion" I have a good companion. She is a Chinese learning committee member in our class. She was told to be serious and responsible for her work and never be careless. The tasks assigned by the teacher are meticulously completed. The most special thing is that she cherishes the collective property.
Ex. 2: After Grandma became the general manager, people called my grandma a strong woman. Although she has watched it for half a century, the bones are still hard.
After she became the general manager of the supermarket, a few crow's feet climbed on her forehead, and there were many silver threads in her black hair. Usually, a pair of bright eyes are often bloodshot. And those who ask for help to send gifts, like running water, flock to my door one after another, to my exhausted grandmother.
Fourth, direct narrative begins: Example 1: "Mom, you are doing something wrong." I was sitting at the dining table and soy soup spilled all over me. I cried sadly.
Example 2: After My Mom was finished, I walked quickly on my way home, because I kept singing Empty City Strategy in my stomach. I walked happily, thinking: at the moment, maybe my mother is cooking something good for me! Thinking, thinking, I seem to smell the tempting fragrance of the food, and I can't help but speed up the pace.
5. Various voices start with 1 and start with songs. "Smile sweetly, you smile sweetly, like flowers in full bloom in the spring breeze.
"It's almost eleven o'clock in the middle of the night, and my father is still singing online with a broken voice in front of the computer. I tossed and turned in bed and couldn't sleep. I'm really upset. There will be a Chinese exam tomorrow ... 2. Start with a noise. " Pida, Pida.
"There are dull and lazy footsteps in the quiet stairs at night. Dad must have come back from playing mahjong. Maybe he lost badly this time ... or he can use dialogue, piano, wind, thunder and so on. Anything that can make a sound can be a start. Six, from one thing to another.
Every time I go back to school after school, I think of my father when I see an old and permanent bike parked downstairs. It was this bike that he used to send me to kindergarten ... 7. Let's talk about the results first.
My family is having dinner, and my father is watching TV while eating. He suddenly stood up and shouted, "Bingo, Bingo.
"It turned out that he won the lottery of 5 million. The whole family danced, laughed and cried, and everyone was so happy that they didn't know where to put their hands and feet.
My father's fascination with lottery began ten years ago ... these five methods can be derived from various methods. If these methods are used well, the beginning of the composition will become easy, and the composition will catch people and be vivid and colorful. Typical start: 1, flashback always begins.
Explain the results first, and always start with the full text. Exodus 1: Thank God and bless the Bodhisattva! This terrible big German shepherd was finally taken away from the campus by his master.
The students gave a long sigh, and a hanging heart fell back to its original place like a stone. "Terrible Big Wolf Dog" Example 2: The classmate who won the honorary title of "civilized little master" in the school was actually Feng Guangze, and the principal of the school gave him an award.
"Wow," the audience suddenly burst into thunderous applause. This troublemaker's.
I love my mother to describe her appearance at the beginning and end of the composition. My mother has beautiful long hair (short hair), round face with two big eyes like jewels and a small cherry mouth, which makes people feel like "peerless beauty" at first glance. My mother loves me very much. Once, I had a high fever, and it was raining, thundering and flashing outside. This kind of weather is frightening. My mother was about to wake me up. She saw that I was blushing and touched my forehead. Knowing that I had a fever, she carried me to a nearby hospital. It's so cold outside, so terrible! My mother held an umbrella in one hand and held me in the other. My back was wet by the rain. I really feel sorry for my mother! I asked my mother if she was cold. My mother smiled and said, "Silly boy, I'm not cold." When I got to the hospital, I got an injection, and the fever gradually subsided before my mother was released. My mother caught a cold because of me. I love my mother. My mother is the best mother in the world! Mom, I love you.
Teacher's comment: The first paragraph focuses on the mother's appearance, comparing her eyes to gems, which not only describes the size and beauty of her eyes, but also reflects her energetic appearance. The second paragraph describes the experience of my mother carrying the little author to the hospital on a rainy night, which further enriches my mother's image. However, the teacher thinks that this description is not very good, lacks a specific description of the mother's behavior language, and the selected event is not classic enough, because this event is badly written and cannot highlight the mother's personality very representatively.
3. What are the essay topics describing the beginning and end of the characters: "My Father"?
First, the direct start method
My father is short, slightly hunched and walks like a cripple. ...
This is the most commonly used and simplest way for students to open it. This straightforward beginning often makes the article seem boring. Here are four vivid ways to open it.
Second, start with a classic sentence.
1, starting with a poem.
"Don't be idle, you will lose your head." My father is over forty and his head is white, but he is still very ordinary. ...
2. Start with a proverb.
There is a saying in China that "three sticks don't fart." My father is a quiet man. ...
You can also use couplets, starting with idioms and so on.
Third, the appearance description begins:
Example 1: My favorite little friend
I have a good friend who is inseparable. Her fleshy little face has a pair of slender arch eyebrows, and there are a pair of watery big eyes under the eyebrows. There is a smooth cherry mouth under the delicate nose. All in all, this is a lovely little face. You know who she is. To tell you the truth, she is my good partner-Zeng Yushu.
Example 2: My favorite person
My favorite person-mother. Mom is tall, fair-skinned, thin but not thin, plump but not fat, with thick curved eyebrows and big bright eyes, always shining with wisdom. This is my mother. How's it going? She looks beautiful.
1, appearance description+opening features:
Example 1: My grandma
My grandmother is a middle school teacher. She has bright eyes under her black eyebrows. She is not tall and her chubby body is always so busy. Grandma is very serious and responsible for her work, and I admire her very much.
Example 2: My father
My father is tall and thin, with two thick eyebrows and a pair of particularly round eyes, always shining with wisdom and alertness. He can sometimes make people feel humorous. He is only in his early forties, and his black hair has somehow fallen off very little. What I respect and admire most is his fighting spirit.
Example 3: The lovely gardener-my teacher.
She has bright eyes, a mouth that can impart thousands of knowledge to us, and a motherly smile on her face. Who is she? She is our head teacher-Miss Liu.
4. What are the methods of beginning and ending the composition? "A good beginning is half the success of an article", but students often worry about not knowing how to write a good beginning and how to end it.
In fact, there is no fixed method at first, but there is a method. Articles are divided into writing people, writing notes, writing scenes, writing objects, imagining, explaining, discussing and applying. There are similarities, differences and nuances in each type of article.
The beginning method (ending) of narrative is 1. The beginning and end of appearance description can highlight the character or personality characteristics of the character and leave a clear impression on people. The ending echoes the beginning, which can deepen the theme.
Example 1 at the beginning: My mother is of medium height, with big eyes, thick eyebrows and black eyes, and likes to wear red skirts and clothes. Mom's personality is like her love of red. She is warm, witty and helpful.
End: Mom has to do housework when she comes home from work. Neighbors often come to see her when they are ill. She works hard every day without complaining. I really like my mother.
Although she is not a famous doctor, she is respected. I admire my mother very much, and I want to be like her.
Example 2 begins: Do you know Zhang Chaoyang? He is a famous naughty boy in our class, and even the teachers in other classes know him. As long as his little eyes roll around, he must be thinking something bad again.
Small nose and mouth make him lively and smart. End: Gee, Juck Zhang's naughty things can't be finished in a short time. I'll tell you next time.
Example 3: At the beginning: Liu Tongchuan in our class is white and fat, and his red lips look like lipstick, which is very cute. His greatest feature is delicious, and his mouth can't stop for a minute.
Ending: Meiyu! This is the "little greedy cat" in our class. 2. Writing personality traits at the beginning and end of personality traits can guide the text and indicate the theme of the article.
Example 1 at the beginning: I am a lively and lovely little girl with many advantages, but I also have one of the biggest shortcomings, that is, timidity. The end: On another occasion, my good friend Wang Juan shouted behind my back, and I jumped with fear. As a result, everyone laughed
I really hate being so timid! 3. The psychological description of the beginning and the end can create suspense and make the beginning attractive. Example 1 beginning: In the third activity class this afternoon, the teacher came into the classroom with a smile and mysteriously said to us, "Today, I want to make you laugh enough. Do you believe it?" At this moment, there was a buzz in the classroom.
I thought to myself: What medicine is sold in the teacher's gourd today? The end: This "laughing" game really made us laugh. 4, cut to the chase, cut to the chase at the beginning and end, and directly cut into the theme.
Example 1 at the beginning: If someone asks me, "Who do you admire most in the world?" I will answer proudly from time to time: "I admire my father the most." End: Dad, I admire your knowledge, but I admire your "stupidity" even more.
When I grow up, I can be an upright person like you! At the beginning of Example 2: From the mirror, I found that I have grown a lot, and I also found that I am more sensible and clever than before, and I am not as naughty as before. End: I grew up, constantly changing myself, from outside to inside, constantly seeking beauty and innovation.
I accidentally found myself growing up. 5. Quotations begin and end with poems, famous sayings, epigrams or lyrics, which can enhance the linguistic beauty of the article.
Example: the beginning: "The thread in the hand of a loving mother makes clothes for her wayward son;" Before leaving, I had a stitch for fear that my son would come back late and his clothes would be damaged. However, an inch of long grass is a bit sentimental, and it is rewarded with three spring rays. "
End: Tomorrow is your birthday. My son only expressed his wishes and wishes in this article. Ah! Mom, I will say softly: I love you-forever.
5. The beginning and end of a good composition "A good beginning is half the battle", and the beginning of an article is very important. With a good beginning, the article can not only drive the whole article, make it unfold smoothly, but also catch the reader and make it fascinating. The ancients said that the article "phoenix head, pork belly, leopard tail" contains this meaning. Here's how to start and end: 1. Principles to follow at the beginning of the composition: 1. Centrality. At the beginning, we must closely follow the main content and central idea of the full text in order to highlight the center. 2. simple. Language should be concise, and it is best to come straight to the point. FAQ at the beginning: 1. Beating around the bush is too far from the point. I always beat around the bush when I put pen to paper. Some people compare it to
2. The same format is fixed. Just a few words at the beginning. 3. Pursuing tricks is self-defeating. It is well written, and the expression of thoughts and feelings is unclear, unclear and untrue. (a), cut to the chase method 1. Cut to the chase, don't beat around the bush, the first sentence is directed at the title of the article. Novices had better use this method. For example, at the beginning of Kingfisher, "Kingfisher likes to stop on a reed by the water." Another example is Edison. 2. explain. Explain the "four elements" of time, place, people and events at the beginning, such as the beginning of Deadpool: "193 1 year (time) late autumn,
Comrade (character) was unfortunately arrested in Baotou (location) (incident) "(2), indirect law 3. Descriptive method. Or describe people, animals, buildings or the surrounding environment. Give a clear impression. For example, the beginning of Swallow: "A suit of black feathers, smooth and beautiful, looks chic and light ..." 5. Start or quote famous aphorisms to point out the center; Or quote the language of the character to highlight the character; Or quote poems to arouse readers' singing; Or quote proverbs, explain things, and so on. Such as "
Beginning: "People say"
. "6. Lyric style. Speak your mind from the beginning and be emotional. For example, A Farewell to China I Love begins: "A Farewell to China I love and China I love wholeheartedly! "Patriotism and affection suddenly came out. 7. Always start. Always get the full text at the beginning. Such as "
Beginning: "Marx and Engels are good friends. They * * * just like learning knowledge, * * * and ... "8. Lenovo. The beginning of the article is from far to near, or
Start with other things, and then think of what you want to write, so as to set off what you want to write. For example, "Spring Silkworm" begins with the association from spring to sericulture, from sericulture to foster mother, and then recalls the scene of raising silkworm by foster mother. 9. Flashback. Start with the result of the matter, be fascinating, and then go back and describe the reason and process of the matter. Such as "
Beginning: "1April 927 18, I will never forget that day. It was my father's disaster, and it has been sixteen years now. " Frequently asked questions at the end of the composition: 1. Gild the lily. It's not important to add something. 2. Formula. Empty call medium. End of common composition: 1. A natural and fluent method for interpreting results. The matter is over, and the article is over. For example, at the end of Sparrow: "I hurriedly called back mine.
Took it and left. "2. The head-tail anaphora at the beginning of anaphora. The ending or main point, and the title.
; Or with the beginning, collect the full text. For example, the Summer Palace ends with: "The scenery in the Summer Palace is really beautiful!" Starting with "The Summer Palace in Beijing is a beautiful big park", it effectively highlights the center. 3. Make the finishing touch of the summary method. End or expand the association,
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Deepen the theme; Or summarize and improve, so that the theme can be sublimated. For example, "high"
End: "Thinking, thinking, in my heart, it seems that a seed is taking root and sprouting ..." 4. Lyric method. The ending directly expresses the author's feelings, thus arousing the readers' heartfelt wishes, from which they are infected and educated. For example, "Goodbye, dear, our hearts will always be with you" at the end of "Goodbye, dear". 5. Evaluation method. Summarize people or things at the end.
6. Describe the whole story of a child. She has a pair of beautiful eyes on her face, with childish and long eyelashes, like two crystal grapes.
Hei Hu, the child, has a strong head and two big eyes, and is very energetic. His brow wrinkled tightly from time to time, forming a question mark between the two; Sometimes I stretch happily, like an exclamation point.
His red face sparkled like an apple ripe in September. His ears are white and red, his helix is distinct, and his outer ring and inner ring are very symmetrical, like a carved work of art.
Her small mouth contains rich expressions: when you are happy, tilt your lips and make a face; When you are angry, you can catch a small oil pan by pouting. Words from this mouth sometimes make people angry and choke, but sometimes people can't help laughing.
Miss Li has beautiful hair, black and bright, thick and dense. When she stands in the sun and shakes her head gently, her hair will flash with colorful rings. Our classmate Xiaohong is wearing a big braid, which is black and bright, with a pair of big black eyes embedded under his thick eyebrows. She looks beautiful.
7. A work that describes the beginning and end of a character.
1, Flashback always begins. Explain the results first, and always start with the full text.
Exodus 1: Thank God and bless the Bodhisattva! This terrible big German shepherd was finally taken away from the campus by his master. The students are very long
With a sigh, a hanging heart fell back like a stone. Terrible big German shepherd.
Exodus 2: The classmate who won the honorary title of "Little Master of Civilization" in this school is actually Feng Guangze, and the principal of this school is Qian.
Award awards. "Wow," the audience suddenly burst into thunderous applause. What a change this troublemaker has made!
What a surprise
2. suspense. Ask questions to arouse the appetite of readers.
Who is she? That skirt, that beautiful little face, looks so familiar. My cousin
3. Lyrics always start. I began to express my feelings through the scenery, and then I always started the full text.
Example: childhood is like a river, rippling with joy in the morning sun. It's really interesting to catch cockroaches at the seaside in the crisp autumn season. Interesting things by the sea
4, always like people. Write a general sentence first, and then describe the appearance of the characters.
Exodus: My brother is really cute. A pair of big eyes are embedded in a small round face, and when you smile, you will see two.
Dimple. My little brother.
5. Portrait always begins. Write a description of the characters' appearance first, and then quote the full text in the general sentence.
Example: Open the photo album and there she is: short black hair, rosy mouth, arch eyebrows, naughty smile.
Look at that. She is a lovely and earnest Li Xiaohong. My classmate
6. The sound always begins. I began to write "songs, laughter, wind and rain" to pave the way, and then I have been writing the full text.
Example 1: "Only mothers are good in the world, and children with mothers are precious." Whenever I listen to this song, my eyes turn to me.
Show your mother's shadow, unforgettable mother
7. Compare the total tense. Compare many things with people and one of them or one thing, and highlight one of them.
Exodus I have almost forgotten my childhood. Only one thing looks like a knife, and I will never forget it. Unforgettable event
8. Cut to the chase. Tell people and things directly.
Example: On Saturday again, I braved the cold to go home and met my grandfather. Grandpa's crutch
9. Scene import.
Example: The blue water is under your feet, there are groups of seabirds flying outside the window, and there are large reeds growing on the beach. Qiang Qiang's favorite grandpa's cabin is here. An ordinary reed leaf, after three folds and two rolls by grandpa, became a reed flute playing melodious tunes. Grandpa's reed flute
Second, the end.
1, summarizing anaphora. This is the most commonly used ending. At the end of the paper, the full text is summarized, the center is pointed out, and the topic and the beginning are taken into account.
Example 1: Please! The owner of the German shepherd must take good care of this terrible German shepherd. This is really terrible.
Today, I am often awakened by this terrible big German shepherd in my sleep.
Ex 2: What a surprise! Yesterday's troublemaker, today's Feng Guangze won the honorary title of "civilized little master" in the school. Isn't this warm applause a heartfelt admiration for him? What a surprise
2. perception. Write your own inspiration by writing about people and things.
Example: The teacher smiled and laughed happily. I have always realized that the best gift for students to give their teachers is to keep working hard and making progress! a present
3. Natural style. End naturally with the result of things.
Exodus: I learned to ride a bike and felt like honey. I learned to ride a bike.
4. Lyric style. Express your feelings in a lyrical way.
Example: ah! Teachers are selfless candles, burning themselves and illuminating us;
Ah! Teachers are ordinary bridges, sending off groups of students without complaint.
5. Memory type. Write down the people or things you don't want to forget and keep them in your heart forever.
As if it happened yesterday, my concern and love for my parents are unforgettable. Parents who are far away from home, please give me more advice.
Take care, son, you will live up to expectations. Parental love
6. Lenovo. Draw associations from the people and events written and write your feelings.