Li Qingzhao's ci always gives me an inexplicable sense of silence. Her poems are fresh and beautiful, with beautiful artistic conception, or melancholy, but they are always passed down from generation to generation with simple and natural language and cadence and cadence, bringing people beautiful infection, supreme artistic atmosphere and unforgettable singing. Because she writes about her own personal feelings and inner experiences, the words are especially sincere, delicate and euphemistic. Starting from women's psychology, she selects things that are easy to be associated with when women are depressed and sad, and organizes them with women's delicate brushstrokes, which is unique. The so-called "entering the melody with ordinary language" is also called.

Qingzhao's life is bounded by the first year of Emperor Gaozong Jianyan in the Southern Song Dynasty, which can be divided into two periods, and her ci works also changed with her life. Before Du Nan, his works mainly described nature, expressed sincere love, and were fresh and beautiful, with beautiful artistic conception. After crossing the south, he felt sad about his life experience and loss of happiness, and faced with national disaster, so he felt sorry for the world when he was injured, sad for homesickness, depressed and sentimental.

What I remember most is that song-"Like a Dream". "Last night, the rain suddenly and the wind suddenly, a deep sleep did not consume wine. Ask the shutter man, Haitang is still there. Do you know that?/You know what? Do you know that?/You know what? It should be green, fat and thin. " This poem is the masterpiece of Li Qingzhao's early boudoir poems, which embodies the quiet and elegant life atmosphere of Qing Zhao. The word begins with a line drawing, which first describes that she woke up in the early morning of spring and remembered the sound of wind and rain she heard in her drunken dream last night, thus drawing attention to the flower affair. Then, by the way of shutter maid's question and answer, I wrote the scene of begonia blooming after the rain in late spring, expressing the feelings of the poetess who cherishes spring and flowers, and also revealing the faint sadness that youth is fleeting and beauty is old. The ending sentence "It should be green, fat, red and thin" is novel and beautiful. From another angle, it also reflects the poet's delicate and sentimental mind and the carelessness of the maid.

If the photos in the early Qing dynasty don't know what "sadness" means, then since she left her husband, her life has lost its focus, and whatever she sees can cause sadness in her heart. Even irrelevant things can cause her attachment to her husband. The most representative poem is Drunken Flowers, which expresses the poet's loneliness and lovesickness through mourning for autumn. The festival is also a double ninth festival, and the jade pillow gauze kitchen is half cold at night. Dongli drinks until dusk, and faint chrysanthemum fragrance overflows his sleeves. Mo Tao is immortal, the curtain rolls west wind, and people are thinner than yellow flowers. "The coolness of' fog' and' thick clouds' in autumn makes people feel uncomfortable and can't help but feel sad. However, The Beast of Renau Xiao Jin not only wrote a long and boring time, but also set off the sadness of the environment. However, it happened to coincide with the Double Ninth Festival. It was supposed to be a family reunion, but her husband was not around and she was alone. Naturally, sad words appeared. The chill in the middle of the night woke the author up, only to find that there was no one by the bed, and the chill in my heart could not help deepening. The last sentence "people are thinner than yellow flowers" shows the author's lovesickness incisively and vividly.

Qingzhao is such a talented woman who puts all her feelings into her works. She made no secret of her feelings, whether she was happy or sad, whether she loved or hated, whether she missed or suffered-she was her, an alternative of feudal women, and she integrated her talents and feelings. It is this weak woman who became one of the famous representatives of the graceful ci school by virtue of her talent, making her works a well-known masterpiece.

Text (cold wind blowing)

After the wind blows, there is only a tingling feeling on my face and tears in my eyes.

At the request of my friend, today I want to write an appreciation of one of Li Qingzhao's masterpieces, Slow Voice and Whispering. Any friends who have different opinions, please feel free to advise.

Looking around, lonely and sad. It is the most difficult time to rest when it is warm and cold. Three glasses and two glasses of wine, how can you beat him? It's late in the wind. The geese are sad, but they are old acquaintances. The yellow flowers on the ground are piled up and gaunt. Who can pick them now? Looking out the window, how can a person be dark? Indus is whispering, dripping at dusk. This time, what a sad sentence?

She wrote this word after her husband died. In her early works, she also wrote sadness, but it was only the sadness of birth and separation, personal sadness, and this one wrote the sadness of death, eternal sadness, personal pain and the prosperity of the motherland.

"Egdu" seems to be an "old acquaintance". In autumn, geese go from north to south, and Li Qingzhao is also a northerner, taking refuge in the south. She wrote a lot about geese, such as "Who sent a brocade book?" in her early years. The word "wild goose" returns, and the moon is full of the West Building, which is "full of sorrow". Although they are also full of sadness, they contain sweet memories and hope of meeting each other. This song shows a kind of despair and extreme sadness. Looking up, you can see the geese crossing the Liao Dynasty, and looking down, you can see flowers everywhere. Although the chrysanthemums are extremely lush and even piled on the branches, they have withered now. In previous years, when chrysanthemums were in full bloom, they were picked and put on their heads. Now, who has this way of celebrating?

Sudden wind deceives people, light wine is useless, geese meet old friends, and chrysanthemums make new worries. What they hear, see and feel are all sad things. "How can it be dark when a person looks at the window?" Until dusk, the autumn rain phoenix tree will only increase your troubles. The "whispers" and "dribs and drabs" are also the faint and desolate sounds that can only be heard by "window guards" in this extremely silent dusk. For a sad person, raindrops not only drop into the ears, but also into the heart. The whole dusk, so little by little, when will it end? How long before dark? Isn't it still like this when it gets dark? This scene, is it "a sad word" can include it?

Infinite pain and melancholy, gushing from the heart, is naturally touching.

Teacher: Class!

Student: Hello, teacher!

Teacher: Hello, class! Please sit down!

Teacher: Students, many teachers from other schools came to class today and arranged a class temporarily. A classmate has given a speech this morning. Whose turn is it tomorrow? Can you give an impromptu speech today?

Student 1 (Sun Hailin): (Stand up and get ready to go to the podium, but because there are too many people in class, the teacher said, "Just stand in your seat and give a speech!" ! He thought for a moment, and I gave a speech. There was that famous saying on the table, "No one will frustrate your mood, only you can give up the possibility of persistence." ...

Teacher: It is not easy for Sun Hailin to make an impromptu speech in front of so many people, nor is it easy for the president of the United States! I think it is appropriate to sum up his speech with an advertising word, that is, "Love to fight will win, and dare to sing will be popular"! But he seems a little nervous. Let's listen to a song to get rid of this tension. (The teacher started to operate the stereo, but it's a pity that the power amplifier just broke down at this time, and the teacher said) Let me sing (pause): "Lotus fragrance and jade died, Luo Shang was alone in Lanzhou ..." (With the applause of the singing students, even the teacher gave warm applause after singing)

Teacher: Students, guess what class we have today (no information was revealed before class-on purpose! )

Health 2: Han Han! (We just learned Han Han some time ago)

Student 3: "Read.

Health 4: Li Qingzhao! I probably sang Li Qingzhao's song! )

Teacher: How clever! Listening to music is not free. Today we will learn Li Qingzhao's ci! (Show the title of the courseware "Carry Poetry to the End-Appreciation of Li Qingzhao's Ci")

Teacher: Do the students think this topic is good?

All beings: good!

Teacher: What are the benefits?

Health 5: It reminds people of "love to the end"! (Laughter)

Student 6: It conforms to the content of the class!

Health 7: Use both the main title and the subtitle!

Teacher: Yes, I can't help but stop and praise myself (Xu Xiaoping New Oriental) has such a good title, which expresses my determination and attempt to lead my classmates to sunshine avenue who loves poetry, reads poetry, writes poetry and even becomes a poet! (Laughter)

However, do you believe there is a problem with this topic? (Students are startled! ) because it is a sick sentence! (great surprise! "Go" is an intransitive verb. Although "poem (or emotion)" is advanced with the word "general", it will show its true colors as soon as it is reset. Can we say "go to the table"? We didn't find it because of its popularity. In fact, there are many mistakes in popular things, such as "pain and happiness" is an unconventional statement. The purpose of saying this is to hope that everyone can form the habit of "thinking about everything" (Marxist). But let's borrow mistakes today!

As the source of China literature, poetry should attract our attention. Mr. Lu Xun said that the labor slogan of primitive society was the origin of poetry, which shows that poetry has a long history. Mr. Zhu Guangqian said that "a person who doesn't love poetry has low literary interest" and "because everything in literature must have poetic temperament". In recent years, poetry teaching has attracted more and more attention from the Chinese language community. Last year, the cover of the first issue of Sinology was impressively printed with "Calling for the Return of Poetry", and the weight of poetry appreciation in the college entrance examination became heavier and heavier, and the reference of "style is not limited to excluding poetry" was cancelled. Some people even think that the college entrance examination only needs one article, one poem and one pair.

Why do you want to use Li Qingzhao's words as the content of this lesson? Because Ci is a form of poetry, everyone is interested in Li Qingzhao's Ci, and Li Qingzhao's Ci is easier to understand. Let's take it as an introduction to do some research.

Let me talk about some essentials of appreciating poetry: first, pay attention to reading aloud, preferably reciting. As the saying goes, "if you are familiar with 300 Tang poems, you can recite them if you can't write them"; Second, we should make full use of our association and imagination, because poetry is jumping. Otherwise, understanding Li Bai's "Silent Night Thinking" means that dementia patients are in a daze in front of the bed (laughs)! Third, we should dare to have different opinions, which is also the ability of "research, discussion and in-depth understanding" that we should exercise in this course. Ok, who can introduce Li Qingzhao?

Health 8: She is a woman! (Laughter)

Health 9: She is the representative of graceful and restrained poets!

Teacher: Even graceful school knows it's not easy!

Health 10: Her husband's name is Zhao Mingcheng, and he is a stone collector.

Teacher: Hey, everyone knows who her husband is. It seems that Li Qingzhao is a big star! (Laughter)

Health 1 1: Her life is very rough!

Teacher: What is the method of frustration?

Health 12: I'm not sure.

Teacher: OK, let's take a look at her introduction. (Slide show) (Focus on the differences between Li Qingzhao's early and late life)

Teacher: So how much do you know about words? How many nicknames does a word have?

Sheng 13: Words are composed of epigrams, epigrams and epigrams, also called long and short sentences.

Teacher: Yes, but some words are not necessarily up and down, such as Xiaoling. Ci also includes Quzi Ci, poetry (it can be seen that the status of Ci was low at that time, and Liu Yong once angrily called himself "Liu Sanbian who was ordered to write lyrics"), musical interest, and so on. Let's look at the slide (Ci knowledge).

Teacher: Let's take a look at Li Qingzhao's "Like a Dream" (the rain suddenly dispersed last night). Perhaps the students are more familiar with her other poem "Like a Dream". Would any of them like to recite that word to everyone with an expression on their face?

Health 14 (Liu Jing): As a dream, I often think of the sunset in Xiting, and I don't know where to go when I am drunk. Always had a good time, but lost to the swimming pool deep in Zhu Feng. How to row a boat out, accidentally, but scared a group of Oulu.

Teacher: What a good book! It shows the romantic and interesting life picture of Li Qingzhao as a teenager! Would you like to continue reading this song "Like a Dream"?

Health 15 (Liu Jing): Yes! (Pause) "Like a Dream" It suddenly began to rain last night, and the wind suddenly blew, so I had a deep sleep and there was no wine left. Ask the shutter man, Haitang is still there. Do you know that?/You know what? Do you know that?/You know what? It should be green, fat, red and thin.

Teacher: Who will comment on her reading?

Health 16: I think I can read more slowly. "You know what? Do you know? " You should read the tone of doubt. "Ying" should be pronounced as "Y and ng", not "Ying".

Health 17: I think we should read it sadly!

Teacher: What is the reason?

Health 17: Because the ancients generally used wine to sell their worries and had the word "thin", Li Qingzhao had a sentence in which "people are thinner than yellow flowers".

Teacher: That's Li Qingzhao's Drunk Flowers. The original words are like this (the teacher's back): "The fog is thick and the clouds are light and always sad, and the golden beast disappears. Double Ninth Festival, lying in bed, in the middle of the night, the cold on my body has just been soaked. Dongli drinks until dusk, and faint chrysanthemum fragrance overflows his sleeves. Mo Tao does not die, the curtain rolls west wind, and people are thinner than yellow flowers. " So you think this song "Like a Dream" is her later work?

Health 17: Yes!

Teacher: Do you have any different opinions?

Health 18 (Wan Haiyan): I think it's her early work!

Teacher: Why?

Health 18 (Wan Haiyan): Because drinking is not necessarily selling sorrow, people can also drink to celebrate when they are happy! Li Qingzhao was addicted to alcohol in her early years, which can be seen from the sentence "I don't know where to go when I am drunk" in another poem "Like a Dream". In addition, this poem also shows Li Qingzhao's leisure. You can see someone unhurriedly rolling curtains for her, and her concern for flowers and plants can also be realized.

Teacher: Then who do you think is the shutter man?

Health 18 (Wan Haiyan): I think it should be her husband Zhao Mingcheng!

Teacher: Look, "It's good to be a woman", and my husband will roll the curtains! So you think the "green" of "green, fat, red and thin" is grass?

Health 18 (Wan Haiyan): I think so!

Teacher: It seems that adding the word "ba" is uncertain? Do you have any different opinions?

Health 19: I think the shutter should be her servant, otherwise she wouldn't ask. "Green" should be leaves, so as to match the flowers.

Teacher: I agree with you, so imagine what kind of mood Li Qingzhao is asking the maid. Why does she ask? And what kind of mentality did the servant girl answer the master?

Health 20: I think Li Qingzhao's question shows her concern for the flowers after the rain last night, and she is worried about whether the flowers will remain after the destruction of the wind and rain, and the maid's answer seems careless, which makes Li Qingzhao very disappointed, so she corrected the maid and said, "Do you know? Do you know that?/You know what? It should be green, fat and thin. "

Teacher: Well said, you are Li Qingzhao's confidant, and you are also a poetic person. So what do you think is the theme of this word?

Health 2 1: I think it is the love of spring flowers, that is, the love of spring!

Teacher: I basically agree with you. Thank you! Let's recite this word, shall we? (The students all replied: "OK"! (How many minutes did you say it would take? (two minutes! All right, I'll give you two minutes. Go!

(Two minutes later) Who will carry it?

Health 22: I will do it! (Reciting fluently)

Teacher: OK! This word must be easy for everyone to recite. Let's look at another poem by Li Qingzhao, slow down! In order to thank the students for their active participation, I read it to you personally. Please listen, feel and evaluate it. The requirements are the same as the previous song, "Ask if you have doubts" and "Send if you have feelings". (The teacher began to read aloud with an expression: "The Sound Slow" searched and searched, cold and clear, sad and sad. ..... is ... is ... is ... is ... is ... is ... is ... is ... is ... is ... is ... is ... is ... is ... is ... is ... is ... is ... is ... is ... Yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes. )

Teacher: Please boldly comment on the effect I just saw!

Health 23: I thought it was a good reading, and I read out Li Qingzhao's sad mood at that time, but it seems to exaggerate this mood too much, especially the last two sentences, "... how can you be alone with the window?" "Indus is Mao Mao rain, dripping at dusk. This time, what a sad sentence! "

Teacher: I think this view is representative to some extent. When practicing these sentences at home last night, my son immediately "uh-uh" (made a nausea) (laughs). But I think it is necessary to use this tone to express Li Qingzhao's feelings at that time. The power amplifier is repaired another day. I'll show you that famous recitation and see what kind of recitation can achieve the best effect of expressing feelings.

Teacher: When do you think this word was written by Li Qingzhao?

Health 24 (Xiao Peng): It must be very late!

Teacher: Why?

Health 24 (Xiao Peng): You see, people have become yellow flowers, of course it's late! (Laughter)

Teacher: Yes, this word is indeed Li Qingzhao's later work. Let's talk about our doubts and opinions about this word.

Health 25: Teacher, "He came early and the wind was urgent, so how can you beat him?" should be "He came late and the wind was urgent", because what I saw in the extracurricular reading of ancient poems in Jiangsu Province was "He came late". Besides, where can I drink in the morning?

Teacher: That's a good question. What do other students think? Looking around the classmates, you can see that I basically agree with this classmate. Let me talk about my own point of view. At present, there are two opinions in academic circles, but I basically agree with Xiao's point of view, because it can better show that Li Qingzhao tossed and turned all night and could not sleep. In addition, in fact, the ancients also had the habit of drinking in the morning, which was called "supporting the head and supporting the wine". So where else does the whole word show the author's feelings?

Health 26: The use of 14 reduplication at the beginning is the most obvious place. This 14 reduplication describes Li Qingzhao's lonely and helpless mood at that time. Despair is her situation, misery is her feeling and sadness is her sadness.

Teacher: the analysis is in place! What do you think she is looking for?

Health 27: It should be a happy and beautiful day in the past!

Health 28: Happy time with my husband!

Health 29 (Yang Xiang): Treasure hunt! (Laughter)

Teacher: Oh, this is a new insight. ...

Sheng 29 (Yang Xiang): You misunderstood. I once read in a book that Li Qingzhao kept looking for treasures that Zhao Mingcheng sold to Persians before his death, and wanted to give them to the Southern Song Dynasty as anti-gold expenses, but finally failed.

Teacher: ok, read more extracurricular books, which shows that you are knowledgeable. Can we leave this question to study after class? I think this word is mainly to find something that can pin my emptiness and loneliness. Does anyone else want to talk about their experiences?

Health 18 (Wan Haiyan): I think the last sentence "The phoenix tree is more raining, dripping at dusk. This time, what a sad sentence! " Best of all, it pushed the sadness of the whole text to a climax. As long as you read the last sentence and imagine the scene at that time, you will naturally know how sad Li Qingzhao is!

Teacher: Being able to read with inspiration is a very effective way to appreciate poetry. What else is worth studying?

Sheng 18 (Wan Haiyan): I think this word blends the scene well. Winter has just passed, and early spring has just arrived. Wild geese in the north are flying and yellow flowers are piling up. It seems that everything is lifting Li Qingzhao's "things are different, tears flow first." ("Wulingchun") Sad, so I have to sell my sorrow through wine. I don't know that "selling wine makes me more worried", but the raindrop phoenix tree is in tears, as if dripping on Li Qingzhao's injured heart!

Teacher: That's good. You are just a little poet. Do you like writing some poems?

Sheng 18 (Wan Haiyan): Yes, I think reading and writing poems are both a kind of enjoyment, and I can express my feelings incisively and vividly. I just sometimes feel that I am not skilled enough!

Teacher: Thank you! You set an example for us, and I believe you will make great achievements in poetry through your own efforts in the future!

Health 18 (Wan Haiyan): Thank you, teacher!

Teacher: Well, because of the time, let's borrow what Wan Haiyan just said as a conclusion. Next, I would like to invite students to make an artistic comparison between these two words, so as to further approach Li Qingzhao. Who will go first?

Health 30: I think these two words represent the emotional process of Li Qingzhao's works in different periods, which is very beneficial for us to understand Li Qingzhao's life experience.

Sheng 3 1: I think these two words both embody the characteristics of Li Qingzhao's ci "beautiful language, simplicity and nature".

Health 32: I don't like the "graceful school" represented by Li Qingzhao very much, but I prefer the "Hao" represented by Su Shi.

The style of the word "school", because those words can inspire our positive pride!

Teacher: This embodies the characteristics of appreciating literary works that "different people have different opinions". Let's take this class as a good start! A good beginning is half the battle! Interested students may wish to go to the Chinese website of our school to participate in the after-class discussion. I will post the relevant information online, and I hope you can think about the following questions. (The teacher shows the topic for discussion after class: ○ 1. Find out Li Qingzhao's ci poems with different styles in different periods and make a comparative study to deepen the understanding of Li Qingzhao's ci style. ○2. Choose a poem by Li Qingzhao and write an appreciation article. ○3. Compare Su Shi's or Xin Qiji's Ci with Li Qingzhao's Ci, and realize the difference between bold and graceful; Or compare Liu Yong's ci with Li Qingzhao's ci to understand the characteristics of graceful and restrained ci. At this time, the bell rang, but the students seemed to be dawdling! )

Finally, let's relax. Who wants to read the following poem?

Health 33: I'll come-"There are stone peaks between the branches and clouds, and the veins are on the red shore. Chi Qing plays together, and the trees fly in autumn. "

Teacher: Who will read this poem backwards?

Health 34: I do-"Ye Fei and Qiu Shu spread out and got together to play billiards. The coastal mountains are extensive, and the peaks are Shi Yun. "(Students are fresh)

Teacher: This is called "palindrome poem", which shows that poetry is interesting and worth studying! Ok, stop here, class is over!

Note: This is a demonstration course for teachers from other schools, which conforms to the learning focus of Unit 2, Book 2 of Chinese in senior high school, and coincides with the new curriculum concept of "research-based learning", and at the same time prepares for "appreciation of literary works" in senior high school. )