Reference examples:

Eliminate the unreasonable existence

There is often no single word. Everything seems to have two sides, such as the "double-faced Buddha" in India. Therefore, Hegel said: "What is realistic is reasonable, and what is reasonable is realistic."

there is no denying that the existence of a thing has its causal inevitability, but is it correct to unilaterally conclude that "existence is reasonable"?

I'm afraid not. As we all know, the world is developing with each passing day, once things often disappear quickly, and "existence" is also changing rapidly. For example, once feudal ideas are hard to understand today. If we recognize that "existence is reasonable", it will undoubtedly lead to the changing of judgment standards and the transient of values. What's more, such a view can easily lead to relativism, believing that there is no absolute right or wrong, as long as it exists, it is reasonable. As Yukio Mishima said, "Everything is forgiven in advance"-it is reasonable to sell one's conscience for profit in society, and it is also reasonable to harm all beings for self-realization, because they exist objectively and have their causes and consequences. Relativism will inevitably lead to the fuzziness of ethical values and the lack of values.

But relativism is wrong, and so is "being is reasonable". Plato has proved this for us thousands of years ago. He said that ideas exist objectively, even if things with this idea don't exist. Thousands of years later, Solzhenitsyn reiterated this point to us. He said: "I don't think there is an absolutely correct truth, a criterion for judging correctness and goodness. It not only exists, but also is not changeable." The existence of absolute truth denies the value of sophistry, which only judges whether things exist or not.

And, it is precisely because of this realization that "existence is not the same as right, as long as what exists does not conform to truth and justice, it is wrong", and Lu Xun questioned the existence of incorrect things: "It has never been like this, is it right?" It is precisely because of such doubts that he woke up and devoted himself to correcting the feudal thought that existed for thousands of years and the numbness and cowardice of human nature that existed universally at that time.

Only by denying that "existence is reasonable" and then choosing the standard of truth and eternal goodness and justice can we get rid of the unreasonable things in existence and approach the truth. Milan Kundera said: "The history of mankind is not a circular circle, but a straight line that moves forward rapidly." It is in the process of constantly eliminating the unreasonable things that exist at present that human beings can make progress. For example, the Enlightenment and Renaissance bound theocracy and eliminated irrationality, and human values and rationality were revealed. Therefore, Liang Wendao said: "People in every era think that the era they live in is the worst, because it is criticism and progress." Because of the constant questioning of existing things, and the values and truth of goodness and justice throughout the questioning process, human beings can make progress.

Only by refuting and putting the truth into practice can human beings gradually approach the truth, and the process of pursuing the truth is reflected in the unreasonable elimination of existence.

test analysis: this is a famous material composition. Hegel's words are full of speculative colors, which can confirm that what is realistic is reasonable, and what is reasonable is realistic and can also be denied. Mr. Lu Xun's rhetorical question, "It's never been like this, is it right?" It is a good entrance. The writing is well-founded, just talk about your own opinions. 2. Read the following famous sentences and write as required

Refer to the composition marking standard of the college entrance examination.

In addition, special attention should be paid to the following requirements:

1. All compositions with messy and unclean volumes, irregular fonts and poor overall writing effect will be scored below 4 points.

2. 1-3 points will be deducted for irregular punctuation.

3. 2 points will be deducted for missing the title.

4. 1 point will be deducted for each typo, and repetition will not be counted until 5 points are deducted.

5. If there are less than 8 words (the length is more than 2/3), 1 point will be deducted for every 5 words.

test analysis: this is a propositional composition, and we can consider it from the following aspects: weeping willows are dense and flowers are dazzling. Describe the spring scene of willow trees in shade and flowers in profusion. It is also a metaphor for meeting a turning point in difficulties. According to this interpretation, the article can describe the spring scene in its original meaning, that is, an article about scenery; According to its figurative meaning, it can also tell a story about a turnaround after encountering difficulties; Of course, you can also combine your life to explain your feelings and talk about lyricism. Stylistically, you can write lyrical prose and argumentative prose, as well as narrative and argumentative essays. Candidates can choose their own style according to their own preferences.

Comment: The most important thing in propositional composition is to grasp the eye of the topic and the center of ideographic expression. The focus of the article is the key words that can best reflect the center of the article. Only by grasping the key words can we reflect the characteristics of the article and write a better composition. Generally speaking, the structure of the phrase with partial correction focuses on the modifier, for example, The Meaningful Life focuses on the word "meaningful", so it is enough to think closely about the word "meaningful" when examining the topic. Another example is "The Years Full of Vitality", which focuses on the word "full of vitality". What candidates need to think about is how to interpret a middle school student's understanding and definition of "vitality" through specific people, things and things. 3. Read the following materials and write an article of not less than 8 words as required

Reference example A man is a reed grass that can think. As the saying goes, life is a lifetime, and grass gives birth to an autumn, which makes sense. Even Cao Mengde once lamented that "life is short, such as morning dew".

Life is not only short and fragile, but also like a reed. "The sun and the moon suddenly don't drown, and spring and autumn take their place", and life has been in a hurry for decades, "though silken-black at morning, have changed by night to snow".

The sun and the moon will not change, the mountains and rivers will remain the same, but people will all go to aging and death without exception. When we look back, we can't help but sigh: Man, how short it is! In fact, this is only a short-lived human body and attached wealth, honor, etc. In fact, people can be immortal, but only thoughts can make people immortal. A person can write down his thoughts on paper in words and live forever.

Descartes, a great French philosopher, said, "I think, therefore I am." It means that only thinking can show my existence, and vice versa seems to have never existed at all.

how sharp and profound! Isn't the difference between man and others in the final analysis that man has ideas and can make and use tools? Is it his thoughts that make a person last forever after his body leaves this world? How long has it been since Qu Yuan left us? How long has Sima Qian been away from us? During the period, how many people "Ercao's body and name were destroyed", and why did they "not waste the rivers and rivers forever"? Aristotle, Socrates, Rousseau, Bacon, Descartes, Confucius, Mencius, Lu Xun, and Sun Yat-sen-why are these names eternal? Because they write books and say that their thoughts make them immortal. The ancient sages and sages of our country once set the goal of life as "three stands": to make a statement, to establish a person and to establish morality.

Among them, "making a statement" is the result of thought; While "establishing people" and "establishing morality" are the results of actions, they are also the products of thoughts. It is with their actions that many people with lofty ideals will engrave their thoughts in the hearts of future generations and remain immortal.

In ancient times, Meng Mu, mother-in-law and Tao Mu were never called thinkers, but they were Lei Feng, Li Suli and Lu Erkang. They never wrote a book or even handed down a few words, but their actions under the guidance of noble thoughts shocked all the people of their time and were passed down by later generations. They were great men with high standards and deeds in thought. A person who has no thoughts, no matter how strong his physical strength is, is small and fragile even if he "pushes the mountains and breathes the world", and he can only be defeated by people with thoughts and wisdom.

People's physical strength is inferior to that of many animals, but why is man called the spirit of all things? What makes people stand out from the rest of the world? Thought and wisdom are the root of people's strength. A man without thoughts is like a walking corpse. He is dead when he is alive. Even if he engraves his name on a stone, he can only stand the tide of history as if he were engraved on a beach.

Life is short, like reeds. But as long as we give it ideas, it will no longer be short-lived, small or fragile.

let's be a thinker, either in writing or in action. Wisdom makes us strong, and thoughts make us eternal.

test analysis: this is a famous aphorism composition. Famous aphorisms refer to the conclusions or suggestions made by some celebrities, written, recorded in history, and obtained through practice, as well as the more famous words of warning.

Generally speaking, it is meaningful. Proverbs, aphorisms, etc. said by celebrities can all be called famous sayings and aphorisms. In this kind of new material composition, the proposer often provides famous aphorisms (one sentence or several paragraphs) closely related to the writer's moral cultivation or a certain aspect of his study life as the composition topic. The key to examining the topic is to understand the profound meaning of the given famous words or words.

Famous aphorisms are rich in profound philosophy, and their meanings are often implicit, with strong metaphor or symbolism. If you talk about things, you can only get a superficial understanding. If you want to penetrate the deep philosophy, you must be good at digging deep into the inner meaning from the outside to the inside, and realize the truth related to life. When you conceive, you can write your own philosophical thinking on a certain side of life, and when you write, you can skillfully use images as a carrier to reason with images as a starting point for your argument.

generally speaking, we should pay attention to the following three aspects in the examination of famous aphorisms: 1. capture key sentences. The composition of new materials is generally composed of materials and requirements, and key words either appear in the materials or are set in the requirements. Grasping these key words can help us grasp the main idea of the materials and accurately understand the intentions of the materials and propositions.

The key words in the composition of new materials are often the words that the proposer particularly emphasizes or appears repeatedly when stating the object and highlighting the center. It is the critical language in the proposer or the material, which often reveals the emotional tendency of the proposer. It is not difficult for candidates to glimpse the clue as long as they pay attention to it. 2. Pay attention to the outside and the inside.

Grasp the key words and phrases of famous aphorisms, interpret famous aphorisms in combination with the background of social times, grasp the philosophy and hidden meanings contained in famous aphorisms from the surface to the inside, and dig out metaphorical meanings. 3. Be good at this and that.

Within the scope of the hidden meaning of famous sayings and aphorisms, from this to that, it is conceived from multiple angles in combination with social reality. In short, we must first understand the meaning of famous sayings.

Secondly, we should develop associations and determine our intentions. Examples of ideas: ① Man is a reed that can think; ② Thought forms man's greatness; ③ Noble thoughts create an eternal soul; ④ Be a great man who holds high standards and acts ideologically. 4. composition (6 marks) read the following materials, according to the requirements.

Before writing, you should carefully examine the meaning of the topic-what you read is "famous poems and sentences". If you neglect to examine the topic, you will write "random thoughts" about famous sayings, proverbs or aphorisms in essays and novels, which will fundamentally deviate from the requirements of the topic.

In addition, since it is "random thinking", the brushwork should be as flexible as possible, instead of sticking to the explanation of the meaning of the original sentence, it should be expounded in connection with real life and personal feelings; Of course, it would be better if we could make a new and reasonable interpretation of the selected famous poems and sentences.

[Examining the topic]

1. Reading "famous poems and sentences" and writing "random thoughts" about famous sayings, proverbs and aphorisms in prose and novels fundamentally deviate from the requirements of the topic.

2. Since it is "random thinking", the brushwork should be as flexible as possible, instead of sticking to the explanation of the meaning of the original sentence, we should make use of the topic to explain it in connection with real life and personal feelings; Of course, it would be better (innovative) if we can make innovative and reasonable explanations for the selected famous poems and sentences.

3. Whatever you think is random and rambling, any article should have a clear center, for example, an argumentative article should have a clear point of view and an essay should have a clear theme, and it should not be aimless and rambling.

①. Learn from the past and learn from the present-only by taking history as a mirror and being prepared for danger in times of peace can we avoid repeating the same mistakes.

② Imagine the future-as long as we work hard, there will be no unattainable ideals and aspirations.

③. Appreciate the philosophy of interest-the carefree and carefree life with no desire. Such as Tao Yuanming's hermit poems.

④ cultivate moral conduct-integrity, kindness and loyalty.

⑤. Open your heart-learn to be tolerant, confident, never give up, look at problems from different angles and so on.

⑥, activate your inspiration-this time, what a sad word! 5. Read the following famous sayings and write an essay of not less than 8 words according to its meaning. < P > It is beneficial to both sides, while fighting hurts the nose, which is used to breathe, the eyes are used to communicate feelings, the ears are used to convey information, and the mouth is used to express itself. Everything is indispensable.

However, they think highly of themselves, don't buy each other, strive for their own merits, and are not good at making necessary concessions in the collaborative cause, which can't help but make people sigh: the combination will benefit both sides, and the fight will hurt both sides. (Highlights: In the first few words, it refines the material and leads to the argument, which can be described as concise! ) Sun and Liu United, set fire to Chibi, and defeated Cao Jun greatly, which achieved Zhou Lang's reputation of "talking and laughing, and it also laid the foundation for Wu and Shu to share one point in the world.

But Sun Wu was greedy for small profits and took Jingzhou, Lv Zimeng crossed the river in white, Maicheng captured Guan Yu, and a generation of tiger generals died in Dongwu. (Highlights: the length of the language is patchy, which is very impressive. ) caused Wu Shu to attack each other, and both sides lost, and Cao Cao's fisherman benefited.

Previously, Liu Bei and Sun Quan swam hand in hand and galloped, vowing to * * * attack Cao Cao, but later they turned against each other and became enemies, which led to disaster. Before and after points, before winning and then losing.

Sun Tzu said, "The weather is not as good as the geographical position, and the geographical position is not as good as human harmony." Can't help but sigh: if you combine, it will benefit both, and if you fight, it will hurt both.

Isn't it the case with the Taiping Heavenly Kingdom? Looking back at the grand occasion of the Taiping Heavenly Kingdom, which controlled 18 provinces and occupied half of the country, it was the result of the concerted efforts of all the kings Qi Xin, but I didn't want them to fight for power and seize power and distrust each other later, which led to frequent infighting, division of the army, and the Taiping Heavenly Kingdom turned from prosperity to decline and eventually fell. "Its prosperity is also rich, and its death is also sudden."

History always makes people helpless and powerless. Great achievements are built on unity, and the collapse of great achievements is precisely due to infighting and division. Can't help but sigh: if you combine, it will benefit both, and if you fight, it will hurt both.

A group that lacks cooperation is doomed to be fragmented. Those who only know how to take care of themselves alone are doomed to fail to achieve great things. Only cooperation can create a win-win situation or even win more. As krylov said, "One swallow does not make a spring."

If Qi Xin can't make concerted efforts, then any force will be weak. Looking back on the Nobel Prize winners in recent years, many of them have achieved epoch-making breakthroughs in their own fields by cooperating with others.

The 21 Nobel Prize in Chemistry was awarded to richard heck, Ei-Ichi Negishi and akira suzuki. The 29 Nobel Prize in Physics was awarded to willard boyle and Joe.