Huang Fengchi, a Ming dynasty, compiled a painting spectrum "Four Spectres of Mei Zhu Lan Ju". In the introduction of the painting spectrum, he said, "The study room is clear, and the one who takes the four kings of Mei Zhu Lan Ju alone has no other one, but with its elegance, it can cleanse people's dirty intestines and clarify their bones."
each of the four gentlemen has its own characteristics. Plum, spitting in the snow; Bamboo, accompanied by the moon in the mountains; Orchid, the bottom of the valley is fragrant; Chrysanthemum, field frost. Today, people's feelings about Mei Zhulan Chrysanthemum are always based on the profound national cultural spirit, and they call Mei Zhulan Chrysanthemum "Four Gentlemen", which is used to flaunt a gentleman's beautiful virtue, or to express his noble, or praise his modesty, or his elegance, or his elegance. The four gentlemen are beautiful and virtuous without any worldly state.
China's excellent culture, including "Mei Zhu Lan Ju Four Gentlemen", is unique and has influenced generations of young people. Maybe you like the Four Gentlemen, maybe you like one of them better. Why? Please write an article on this basis. Requirements: choose a good angle, determine the concept, clarify the style, and draw up the title yourself; Do not copy, copy or disclose personal information; Not less than 8 words.
Proposition analysis
There should be no deviation in writing this proposition. However, it may not be easy to deduct the unique character of the "four gentlemen". Generally speaking, writing on one side can be profound, even if the "four gentlemen" all "love", but the writing is inevitably superficial and not easy to shine. The writing of a case corresponding to a "gentleman" is often inaccurate. Fear is mainly in the accumulation of knowledge and the quality of thinking.
from the proposition, talking about the reason of "like" ("why") is tangible and intangible, and "self" must be among them. In other words, focusing on the unique feeling of "I", talking in general terms without self-feeling, or just taking other people's examples to prove the characteristics of "gentleman" is not in line with the meaning of the question.
Actually, it should be about attitude and orientation towards life. "Noble", "humble", "elegant" and "elegant" are not accurate and comprehensive enough to summarize the character of Mei Zhu Lan Ju, which can be used in writing, but must be suitable for its characteristics.
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Peeking at people in bamboo
Mei Lan, Zhu Ju are the four gentlemen in flowers. If plum is clean, orchid is quiet and chrysanthemum is light, then bamboo is a combination of beautiful mountains and rivers, cleansing people's dirty intestines and clarifying their bones. Watch the growth of a bamboo, not as wanton as other flowers, but leave a clear breath in your life. Through the green appearance of bamboo, we can see an individual and the backbone of a nation.
A bamboo spends a lot of time in the dark. How much endless darkness we have to endure and how many days and nights without the sun, 3 cm, is just a tiny unit of length for us, but it takes four years for bamboo to break through the solid soil, and then it grows wildly and rapidly every day. In fact, in the first four years, bamboo did not wait, but silently extended its roots in the soil for hundreds of square meters, and finally paid off. In the growing bamboo, I got a glimpse of the persistence and perseverance needed for the rise of a nation and a country. Just like the tea sister Yang Ronglian, she devoted herself to her post silently for more than ten years, and finally broke through the solid soil like bamboo, which was well known and recognized by people, rewarded the society and achieved personal greatness. And in our country, our nation, there are countless Yang Ronglian in their posts, quietly rooted like bamboo, gritted their teeth and persisted, and they should not be forgotten.
Look at that bamboo. Now it has grown into a bamboo soaring into the sky. Its life is still going on. It is giving itself away. Bamboo shoots bring people the enjoyment of taste buds, bamboo clothes provide people with good materials for making cloth shoes, and bamboo poles are split to attract people to clear mountain springs. However, bamboo rafts, bamboo curtains, bamboo chopsticks and other humble uses have a simple dedication. From bamboo, I can see the selfless dedication and greatness of giving myself out. Wu Mengchao, a retired military doctor, touched the whole China with his selfless dedication like bamboo. Wu always treated patients with endless sincerity and treated the cause of liver surgery with pure love. The doctor was kind, and a great doctor touched the world not only with medical skills, but also with kindness. He took out his burning heart and lit up the hearts of many liver patients like a torch. He is like a bamboo, silently dedicated, and even more willing to give himself out.
Look at that bamboo. No matter the wind and rain, it has been strong there since it grew up. To taste the growth of a bamboo, we can not only be touched by the toughness of life, but also realize the backbone of a nation and a country. Peeking at people in bamboo, we can see the pride and nobleness of bamboo, and the backbone of a nation like bamboo. If each of us can have the consciousness of becoming a bamboo, will the society we live in be more clear? Just think, if any nation can have more "bamboo forests", will its "spring scenery in one garden" be particularly different?
To cultivate a thousand bamboo poles, we can draw thousands of people's affection and control one branch. We should write about the spring scenery on earth and the love of bamboo, which should be based on the contemporary prosperity, the quality of bamboo, the contemporary learning, and the glimpse behind the bamboo festival. It should also be a bright future for a nation.
General comment:
Content: The article gives a glimpse of people's perseverance and dedication through bamboo; Write about people, society and the Chinese nation by bamboo; Combined with the growth characteristics of bamboo, it is more convincing to step by step; Count 2 points.
expression: natural language and clever cohesion; Without deliberate discussion, but revealing personal opinions; 2 points.
development level: 2 points can be scored in terms of "richness" and "creativity".
score: 2+2+2=6
a gentleman should be like a bamboo.
A few branches of bamboo stand in the mountains, and the fierce wind blows it with flying sand to keep its unchanging strength, and the beautiful moon praises it with white flowers and holds it down to green leaves. Bamboo, a gentleman's thing, is sober and modest, and a gentleman's way is also.
The Romance of the Three Kingdoms once sighed: "Bamboo can burn but not destroy its festival." If you have experience in rural life, you will know that bamboo often breaks into long pieces after wildfire burning. But even if it is burnt to charcoal color, the prominent bamboo joints will never be burned. Not afraid of the howling tigers outside, not attracted by the tide of glory, and firmly maintain inner integrity. People are also similar to this, or herding sheep alone in a remote desert but still retaining the staff to return home wholeheartedly, or looking at the ocean and sighing in anger at the death of high-ranking officials, or hiding in the mountains and forests without cutting the previous hair. You are not Su Wu, but you should also raise the national flag in your heart. If you are not Wen Tianxiang, you should also bring the mountains and rivers of the motherland into your heart. If you don't be Zhang Dai, you would rather die than eat "Zhou Su". Where can there be a home without a country? As a member of the nation-state, the first duty of national citizens is to love her and this country that has gone through many vicissitudes. No matter where you are, no matter when you walk, the country-mountains, rivers, land and people-has already become a daily necessity, infiltrating your body and mind bit by bit and casting a soul that supports you to move forward. And a person can never lose his soul, patriotism is the foundation of a gentleman.
Oscar? Wilde said that "everyone was born a monarch, but most of them died in exile", and Gu Cheng once said: "People can be born as ants and beautiful as gods". Bamboo was born in rocky terrain, but it still yearns for the sky above its head. Life is a hard practice. When we encounter setbacks and pains, we should stick to ourselves. We believe that rain is the messenger of sunrise and that we can meet the challenge with a smile. The monarch is above, but everyone can be a monarch. Your success does not depend on your status, but on your determination and persistence, self-confidence and tenacity. Li Bai is a "fairy in wine", but his experience is not without twists and turns. It is precisely because his son of heaven called him out of the boat that he became a wild poet. Li Xuejian filmed the chapter of Song Jiang's words in the Water Margin, painstakingly seeking to practice calligraphy, and finally perfectly demonstrated Song Jiang's free and easy pride; The takeaway in the Chinese Poetry Conference, as a mediocre person, confidently stepped onto the field with his love for poetry and self-persistence, and became the most grassroots poetry champion. "Feces and insects are filthy, and they turn into cicadas and drink in the autumn wind, and rotten grass is dull, and they turn into fireflies and shine in the summer moon." Clean books come from pollution, and bright books come from darkness, and I have my own heart.
Zheng Banqiao wrote: "An open-minded bamboo has bowed leaves." Mature wheat often bows its head, and inner abundance and spiritual nourishment make people more rational and mature. Being open-minded, that is, looking at the world with a pure heart, is a bright but not dazzling brilliance, a mellow but not unpleasant sound. This not only gives you praise for your talent, but also adds a height that is not steep. Vulgar language: "Modesty makes people progress." There is a saying in ancient times, "Confucius studied Tanzi, Changhong, Shi Xiang and Lao Dan. The disciples of the scorpion are not as wise as Confucius. Confucius said,' If you have a threesome, you must have a teacher.' "Ancient sages, Confucius learned six fine poems, but he was still learning from others. Such modesty made Confucius. It is this modesty that makes Confucius constantly learn and improve himself, bringing himself closer to the way of sages. Confucius made today's Confucian culture with the knowledge he constantly acquired. Therefore, "with an open mind, you can see the wizards." Only by constantly learning with an open mind and consulting others can a gentleman make progress. Otherwise, blindly thinking that you have become a "sage", you can only retreat if you don't advance. Only by calming down and looking at everything can we discover a new world and create new opportunities. With a normal heart, you don't need to stretch your thick, a smile that ignores the noise is enough.
In life, when you lower your head to do things and raise your head to be a man, you will get a gentleman's way, making your spirit tough and your behavior poor. A gentleman should be like a bamboo, become a great instrument with humility, and see a wizard with strength.
General comment:
Content: Taking "bamboo" as the writing object, it highlights its "gentleman's way" of "keeping to the festival and being modest", deepens its attitude and orientation towards life, and can reach the category of "conforming to the meaning of the topic" when examining the topic; In the process of discussion, the focus is on "keeping the festival and being open-minded", and the center is prominent; The poems and famous sentences are handy and rich in content. Count 2 points.
expression: it conforms to stylistic features, with flexible sentence patterns, fluent language and brilliant literary talent; Layer by layer, interlocking highlights the rigor of the author's thinking. Count 2 points.
development level: 2 points can be scored for "literary talent", "richness" and "profundity".
Scoring: 2+2+2=6
Moistening things silently
I remember that Lin Bu loved Mei and Tao Qian loved Ju. In Wei and Jin Dynasties, celebrities still loved bamboo, but I felt sorry for Lan alone.
elegant colors, quiet and light floral fragrance, Leng Yan and fragrance. Although it is not gorgeous or ostentatious, it is like a modest gentleman and seems to symbolize all good things.
My impression of Lan mostly comes from Qu Zici. He can really be called the first person in Mulan in the ages. After reading a "Songs of the South", Lan Caofang is everywhere. He loves Lan's "seclusion and solitude", and his long-cherished wish to serve his country was broken by the bad king. What he did was "stepping on Lan Gao" and "staying in the secluded orchid", which really made no secret of his love for Lan. He planted orchids, eulogized orchids, pitied orchids, and cultivated orchids in the hope that he could be as noble and quiet as orchids. Unfortunately, he was bound by the times and ended up at the bottom of the Miluo River, leaving only large chunks of words for future generations to daydream about a world where orchids were blooming.
apart from orchids in poetry, calligraphy and painting, I once raised three or two pots of orchids in my room. It's not very eye-catching, with slender leaves and plain white petals. If you don't sniff it carefully, you won't smell any fragrance. Only when sitting alone at the table the night before reading that you are tired can you find a faint fragrance, which is thin, but it can fill your nose and make people feel awake. I spent countless months in the spring with this fragrance, and when I was reading a book one day, the fragrance wafted again, which made me feel that the quality of a gentleman should be like an orchid, which can make people invisible.
the ancients said that there are four kinds of purity in the orchid: the purity of qi, the purity of color, the purity of spirit and the purity of rhyme, which really showed the clarity of the orchid to the fullest. People love orchid, not only for itself, but also for its spirit. Orchids are elegant and elegant, and have been named as gentlemen in flowers. With humanity, orchids are not only plants that spread fragrance in the morning dew, but also have the character of gentlemen.
"If you live with kindness, you will still enter the room of Zhilan. If you don't smell its fragrance for a long time, you will melt with it", that is, you will compare a gentleman to Lan; Confucius said, "Zhilan was born in a deep valley, and it is not fragrant because of no one;" A gentleman cultivates morality, and does not change the festival for the sake of poverty. "That is to say, a gentleman is similar to Lan. Orchids, which moisten things quietly, can not only infect people around them, but also have the function of educating the world. Otherwise, how can Su Shi "smell the wind and smell the fragrance" in a place where "Peng Ai is nowhere to be seen"?
I pity Lan alone, and I am good at it.
general comment:
content: from the form and meaning of the orchid, it describes the "moistening the heart" and "humanizing people" of the orchid, with outstanding center and high intention; The article is mixed with reality, with things and me, and has a strong cultural flavor. Unfortunately, the title is slightly flawed; 19 points.
expression: beautiful language and brilliant literary talent; Step-by-step deepening is higher than the general in "structure", but it seems that there is a missing end of the full text; Style is regarded as argumentative prose (or cultural prose); Count 19 points.
development level: 2 points can be scored for "literary talent", "richness" and "profundity".
score: 19+19+2=58
who gives the love of bamboo?
"The study is clean, and the one who takes the four monarchs of Mei Lan, Zhu Ju alone has no one else, but because of his elegance, he can cleanse people's dirty intestines and clarify their bones."
Plum blossoms in the snow; Bamboo, accompanied by the moon in the mountains; Orchid, the bottom of the valley is fragrant; Chrysanthemum, field frost. However, I love bamboo's appearance of "sharing hardships, being humble and open-minded".
I remember that there is a dense bamboo forest on the back hill of my hometown. The seasons change from spring to summer, autumn to winter. It seems to live outside of time and only care about the appearance of live high. "Section after section, thousands of branches save thousands of leaves. I don't bloom, so I don't want to tease bees and butterflies. " This is a proud part of bamboo.
Although Mei is charming in the snow, she always has an indifference of "strangers are not allowed to get close", and only appreciate each other can have a heartfelt connection with her; Although orchid spreads fragrance for a long time, it can easily become an arty thing for boring literati; And chrysanthemum, although it is the representative of recluse, has a little arrogant smell, which makes people reluctant to get close. But when it comes to bamboo, everything seems to be different: it has charm, which is the hidden strength; It has fragrance, which is fresh, natural and refreshing. It also has pride, but its pride is the pride that touches people and makes changes. How can people not love such bamboo?
I especially love bamboo's modesty. "Light narration with an open mind", who said that modesty means weakness? The bamboo joint is hollow, and it still grows upward, and it goes straight to the sky and clouds, and it has a strong character that is often unattainable. The power of humility is a strong power from the inside out in generate, and it is the power contained in the body to support people to forge ahead and realize themselves. The modesty of bamboo, for many people in modern times, is a valuable spiritual wealth, which deserves our repeated taste.
I also love the meaning of bamboo. No matter when and where you see bamboo, if it is a plant, you will definitely not be interested, but if it is a bamboo forest, the peace in your heart will be drawn out. Bamboo seems to know its own characteristics, but it doesn't do it deliberately. It just lets it grow, bringing shelter to animals, shade to farmers and peace to anxious people.
On the other hand, the pace of modern life is getting faster and faster, and people's natural innocence is covered with a thick layer of dust by material interests. Even bamboo has added the word "wealth" before its name [exotic species. ] The utilitarian heart can be seen from this. Unfortunately, bamboo has never settled in the city, the environment in the city forced it to leave, and the utilitarian impetuous people in the city also made it eager to leave this land of right and wrong.
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