Things, including plants, animals, still life, etc. When we write something, we can not only explain and describe things, but also express our thoughts and feelings and explain the philosophy of life with the help of things. So, how to write good things?
(1) Make good use of the sensory organs.
In vision, hearing, smell, taste, touch and so on. The description of things is meticulous and accurate, making it full of color, flavor and fragrance, moistening things silently, moistening things silently, thus vividly presenting it to readers.
(2) Looking for commonness and comparing people with things.
We can not only simply explain and describe things, but also use things to describe people, portray their tall images and reveal their lofty character. Writing is also about people, using things to describe people, so that things meet and set each other off. When you write like this, you should find out the similarities between what you write and people, which can be similar in shape or spirit. It is necessary to describe the similarities repeatedly, so that the two can be gradually integrated and sublimated naturally.
1, grasp the characteristics:
Carefully observe the size, shape, color, quantity, charm and dynamic texture (manufacturing materials) of the articles written. Because different items have different characteristics, even the same item will have some subtle differences and its own uniqueness.
2. Write in a certain order, layer by layer.
(1) Write in the order of total score and total score.
(2) Write according to spatial order in each part of the article.
(3) Some projects should be written in the order from the outside to the inside, that is, the order of writing the appearance first and then the inside.
3. Things need imagination and association, which not only makes things more concrete and vivid, but also opens up the artistic conception of the works and enhances the appeal of the articles.
Human beings live in colorful nature. Climate phenomena such as spring, summer, autumn and winter, wind, frost, rain and snow; Seasonal time series such as spring planting and autumn harvest, sunrise and sunset; Birds, beasts, insects, fish, flowers, trees and other animals and plants, as well as countless famous mountains and rivers, fertile fields, grasslands, vast deserts and oceans, constitute this rich world. We live in this world, and we must touch it, understand it, observe it, feel it and even describe it. Reproducing these between the lines is the description of the scenery.
The similarity between writing people and taking notes is that both of them should write something, have the core of the story and have specific content. Writing people's articles focuses on people's appearance, language, manners, movements and psychological activities; Chronicle articles take things as the writing object, focusing on the cause, process and result of things. Finally, write your own experience, add psychological description in the narrative process, and grow from the event. Articles that record events focus on the events themselves, while articles written by people focus on the characters themselves.
When the composition describing animals or plants is delivered to the door, the words "New Millennium, New Century" come into view. There are clusters of colorful flowers in the flower bed. They are as dim as fire, as white as snow, as pink as Chardonnay ... plus green leaves, they are more vivid and beautiful.
Then we go in. Suddenly, I saw a leopard with its big mouth open, as if to pounce on my door. I was so scared that I hid behind my parents. Mother said, "Xinxin, don't be afraid. Look carefully! " "I looked at it carefully. It turned out to be a fake leopard, so I was relieved. So, I rode on its back and took a photo with it. Then, I took a photo with the lovely panda and zebra.
Let's move on. I found many people coming to play. People everywhere are watching this and that. It was so busy in front that I ran to see it.
It turned out to be an elephant! The elephant is tall and big, with a long nose, big ears like a cattail leaf fan and two long white ivory. The elephant was kept in a big cage. I want to see if it is clever, so I take out a banana and see if it can't pass. Wow! It's really coming! I threw the banana into its mouth. I was so happy! It is so clever that I even shook hands with its long nose!
The second animal I saw was a peacock. This is a snow-white peacock with long feathers and petite figure. It looks very beautiful. I really want to see it open. But like a shy little girl, it always refuses to open its tail. I thought: don't peacocks love beauty? So I opened a small umbrella and waved it in front of it. Peacock saw this small umbrella and quickly opened its tail. "Yes! Peacock finally opened the screen! " I jumped up with joy. Dad immediately took a photo of me and recorded this wonderful memory.
Finally, we visited zebras, flamingos, ostriches, sika deer and other animals. They are all lovely, and I like them very much. I'll see them next time!
3. Writing composition about animals and plants in the fourth grade, the spread of mammals mostly belongs to some medium and large fleshy fruits or dried fruits. Generally speaking, mammals are relatively large and need a lot of food, so they will choose some big fruits. For example, macaques like to eat the fruits of persimmons and bananas and help these plants spread.
The life of all things in the world is rich and colorful, and each kind of life will multiply in its own way. "When children grow up, they have to say goodbye to their mothers. They are home all over the world." Cattle and horses have feet and birds have wings. Plants all over the world want to spread the seeds of life to all corners of the earth. By what means? As we all know, seeds play an important role in the family tree of plants. They can travel around with magical skills, so plants can settle anywhere.
There are two ways to spread plant seeds: one is to rely on external forces, such as wind, water, animals, humans, etc. The second is to rely on the power generated by itself. In order to reproduce, plants can be said to be "eight immortals crossing the sea, showing their magical powers."
The wind is everywhere, and the wind on the earth has become a "free car" for seed travel. Seeds scattered by the wind are generally small and light, which can be suspended in the air and blown far away by the wind; Some seeds often have flocs and fruit wings on their surfaces, and these special structures are suitable for flying with the help of wind. For example, Showa grass, the most common grass in South China, has a small umbrella on its seed. As soon as the wind blows, the umbrella floats with the seeds and goes far away to settle down. Another example is the seeds of willows, with soft fluff, flying freely in the spring breeze in May and flying far away; Another example is the seeds of pine, maple and elm, whose wings are very small. With the help of wind, they can easily fly in all directions and expand their territory.
Humans and animals will also help plants spread seeds. Some seeds are covered with bristles, barbs or can secrete mucus. As long as you touch it gently, it will immediately attach to people's clothes or animal hair and feathers. When you find them, take them off and throw them on the ground. At this time, their desire to spread is realized, such as Xanthium sibiricum, stealing clothes, Bidens bipinnata and so on. The fruits of some plants are colorful, sweet and juicy, which can attract animals to eat and spread seeds. For example, when birds or other animals eat cherries, they throw away cherry stones and inadvertently sow seeds for them. In case of being swallowed by a belt, the hard cherry pit can resist the strong acid in the digestive tract and protect the seeds from running away. However, when people eat these delicious fruits, they often throw them away and inadvertently become "messengers" of seed spread. There are also some nut seeds, such as chestnuts and pine nuts, which are squirrels' favorite foods. They are moved home and stored by squirrels, some of them will be eaten, and the rest will take root and sprout in the next year.
Plant seeds that grow in water and swamps are usually transported by water. For example, the fruit of our common lotus is the lotus. Its shape is an inverted cone and its weight is light. It can float on the water like a boat, will float everywhere with the current, and will spread the seeds far and wide at the same time. There are coconuts in terrestrial plants, and their fruits have many functions. Coconut mesocarp is very loose and rich in fiber, which can adapt to floating in water. Endocarp is extremely thick, which can protect seeds from seawater erosion. The fruit also contains a lot of coconut juice, which is enough to provide nutrition and moisture for seed germination, so that coconut can germinate in salt water. There are many coconut groves on the tropical coast, which is inseparable from this ability of coconut.
Another way to spread seeds is through your own strength. Our common pods, when mature, often burst with a bang in the hot sun, and the seeds will be ejected into the distance like bullets flying out of the gun chamber. Therefore, cash crops such as soybean, rape and sesame must be harvested in time after maturity, otherwise the seeds will be scattered in the ground and people will suffer losses.
Some plants also have special devices for automatic sowing. There is a plant called "spray melon", which will produce ugly small melons with burrs. Do you know its mystery? When the melon is ripe, it will fall off as long as it is touched lightly, and the seeds in the melon will be instantly ejected from the top, with a range of up to 6 meters, hence the name "spray melon".
The most interesting thing is the wild oat seeds that grow in wheat fields. They can "crawl" into the soil by themselves. There is a long awn on the shell of wild oat seeds, which will rotate or straighten with the change of air humidity. The seeds will advance bit by bit in the continuous stretching of the long awn, and once they encounter a gap, they will drill in the next year to take root and sprout. Of course, the "crawling" speed of wild oat seeds is quite slow, and it can only advance 1 cm in one day and night. However, this ability to spread seeds has reached its peak.
If plants want to survive and develop in nature, they will try their best to reproduce. Therefore, in the course of hundreds of millions of years of evolution, every plant has the special ability to make its seeds "travel", which makes the seeds widely circulated and endless. This magical phenomenon belongs to human beings.
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4. How can I write a composition about plants or animals? This week, the teacher assigned a composition topic about bugs. Today, my father and I went to the park to observe bugs.
Suddenly, I found some ants crawling on the ground. "Dad, there are many ants here." I said in surprise, "Look at ants today. Can you help me find a fly? " "ok!" Dad went to call a fly, put it on a twig, then put the fly where there are ants, and then pressed the branch with stones. Soon, an ant "scout" came. It sniffed it with its nose and moved it with its tentacles. Then, it turned around the fly several times, pulled the fly again, and he got into the hole again.
I thought he left despondently, but after a while, another little ant came, no, two or three ... a large group of ants crawled in. They pulled and lifted, but they couldn't lift it. Because the fly was pinned down by my father with a stone. Immediately, an ant went back to help. This time, he was called "General Big Head". "General, the prey outside is too big. We need you to break it down before we can move it. " "Oh, lead the way!" The little ant took the general to his prey. The general skillfully climbed onto the fly's back and easily cut off its wings with big pliers. An ant immediately took its wings back to the hole. Then, four ants immediately lined up in two rows and straightened the fly's legs. "General, cut off this leg!" "Okay" and "Click", the leg was cut off and two ants carried it away. On the way, one ant said to another ant, "Hey, does it take two people to lift such a small cow? You underestimate me. You go about your business, and I'll mention it when I come alone. " Seeing this scene, I can't help wondering, "a monk carries water to drink;" Two monks carry water to drink; Three monks have no water to drink. " The correctness of this famous saying.
Animals and plants are friends of human beings.
Animals can't live without humans just as humans can't live without animals. Long ago, animals and humans were good friends.
They help each other, depend on each other and live in harmony, and no one can live without anyone. However, with the passage of time, due to human reasons, the relationship between animals and humans has deteriorated, and there is an increasingly serious trend.
First of all, the wanton killing of animals by human beings, on the one hand, has caused a large number of animals to decrease, on the other hand, it has also caused an increase in hostility of animals to human beings, which has destroyed the friendly relationship between animals and human beings to some extent. In fact, human abuse of animals has never stopped. Eating peacocks, owls, monkey brains, red-crowned cranes, and bear bile really reached the point where "everything is in your mouth"! You think, how can this not cause the anger of animals? How can animals not stand up and fight back? This is also an important reason why animals attack humans and even endanger human life.
Secondly, with the continuous progress of human society, some bad behaviors of human beings not only destroy the earth environment, but also destroy the living environment of animals. Bad behaviors such as factory sewage, automobile exhaust and excessive deforestation have caused serious damage to nature, but also caused direct harm to animals living in nature, making it difficult for animals to survive, with fewer and fewer species and numbers, destroying the balance of the whole ecosystem and eventually leading to the demise of mankind.
It can be seen that the relationship between animals and human beings has deteriorated seriously, and it also threatens the survival of human beings. Can humans be so stubborn? ! I think human beings should change their bad habits in time, love animals and protect the earth's environment.
As a primary school student, we should start from me. From now on, we should cherish our nature and protect the animals around us. Let's act together, love and treat animals well, become good friends of animals, and make our due contribution to improving the relationship between animals and human beings! I like animals. Why? Because animals are friends of human beings, we humans are also animals, just advanced animals, and we are transformed from animals. I once took part in a painting competition called Friends of Animals and Humans, which was held in a wildlife park, so I won't introduce the details of J.
We should love animals, just like protecting the environment. We should protect the environment, why not protect animals? There are plants in the environment, and plants are living things, but animals are also living things, so we should love animals (speaking of plants, we should also tell you to love the environment and plants). Please don't hunt (otherwise animals will be short of L), and tell hunters these things and ask them not to hunt. If you see them, you must show them to the animals. I hope they can live happily in this world and post publicity reports everywhere in the zoo. I hope everyone understands these truths.
The relationship between man and animals is close. We studied the article Pearl Birds, which mainly tells the story of the author's careful breeding of pearl birds and the establishment of a deep friendship with them.
Between the lines of this article, the author's love for pearl birds is revealed. People and animals are good friends, as if they existed thousands of years ago. This feeling is very deep.
I still remember the general content of a clip: the author let the pearl birds live in a quiet forest-like environment without disturbing them. The author of "Pearl Bird" is different from other bird people. He just wants to appreciate the colorful feathers of birds and listen to their beautiful songs, so that birds can live in fear all day.
Some parents buy birds, put them in cages, and then say to their children, "This is for you to play!" " "The children will listen to them, kick and hit the cage, put sticks in the cage to pick birds, and let them fly around in horror. The adults not only did not stop it, but also applauded.
Birds are free. If those bird owners put themselves in the birds' shoes, maybe they will know what to do. There is another clip that I still remember vividly: when the young pearl bird was writing at the author's desk, it gently fell into the sweet dream on the author's shoulder.
I looked at it, as if I saw this little girl sleeping sweetly and squinting, how cute she was! In contrast, many hunters now kill good friends of mankind for profiteering, such as giant pandas, Bengal tigers and African elephants ... They are on the verge of extinction because they have beautiful fur and white and hard ivory that people are eager to have! In a series of model performances, the models wore mink coats, crocodile shoes and squirrel hair scarves. When they turn around, not only animal life, but also blood is swaying in the wind! Kill animals! What an inhuman act this is! Is this still a person? What a good animal! Thousands of years ago, animals were friends of human beings. I hope that from now on, animals and humans will live in peace forever and will always be the best friends from generation to generation! Dogs are friends of human beings. Last Sunday, my mother and I passed a restaurant called Red Lantern on our way back from Tongxi Steamed Shop, and happened to see a waiter in their shop killing dogs. He plucked all the hair from the dog. I felt very sad after reading it at that time. I felt sorry for these dogs and thought, "What do those guests think about eating dog meat?" Why did the dog killer kill these lovely puppies so badly? Don't they feel alive when they eat dog meat with relish? And dogs are man's most loyal friends. "
Later, I asked my mother why they did it. My mother replied, "Silly daughter, I know you feel sad after seeing it. In fact, my mother, like you, is very sour whenever she sees this scene, because these animals include chickens, ducks, geese, sheep and fish. "
It is an unchangeable fact that people are born to contribute to mankind. You shouldn't eat dog meat if you see those dogs being killed to pieces. "In the evening, I am still nervous about the dog in the morning, because I think some things are wonderful. Even if it is difficult for people to become friends, it is because of people.
6. Help write a composition about plants or animals, about 400 words. My favorite pet.
My favorite pet-tadpoles.
Taking the opportunity of visiting New jiangwan city, I caught some tadpoles in an unknown ditch, put them in mineral water bottles and took them home.
As soon as I got home, I excitedly and carefully put them in the basin. Observe them carefully, they gather and disperse. Almost oval chubby body, oily pure black, thin and long tail and flexible swimming style fascinate me. This is simply a set of life notes! When a tadpole swims, it moves forward, backward or turns around. Its tail is like a paddle-like a rudder. It can not only generate electricity, but also master the direction. It's amazing! Tadpoles are less than 2 cm long and weigh less than 1/4 g. They are very cute to play in the water. Seeing that they sometimes get together and don't move, I deliberately tap the edge of the basin with my fingers. When I saw them shaking their small tails rapidly and fleeing in panic, I couldn't help secretly rejoicing.
A few days later, I was surprised to find that they had grown up a little. I also found that they have two hind legs, separated by tails. I said to them excitedly, "Wow! You are going to become frogs. " Soon, they grew two front legs and heads. I shouted, "Look! Tadpoles are going to take off their tails and become frogs! "
I want them to return to nature. But I really can't bear to part with them, and they seem to be reluctant to part with me. However, the little frogs decided to leave me, as if to say to me, "I'm really sorry, my friend!" " We have our own mission, to help heaven and eliminate pests-mosquitoes. "
Goodbye! My dear friend!
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7. Composition describing animals and plants 100 The word animal 1, ant
There is an ant hole in front of our house. I go to see it every day. The little ant has a pair of small tentacles, round eyes, an oval head, a body as big as a grain of rice, six legs as thick as lines and black fur. Some ants have wings.
One day, I saw a little ant find a crumb. He pulled, but he couldn't pull. Suddenly, he had a good idea. He immediately went back to find a brother and touched the other's small tentacles with his own small tentacles, as if to say, "Dude, there is a piece of bread. Please gather some companions and we will carry them together. " Soon a group of ants came, shouting one two one, and carried it into the hole.
We should learn the spirit of unity and cooperation of ants. plant
One day, my mother and I went to the park to play and saw a pot of daffodils. I asked my mother, "How do daffodils grow?" Mother said, "I don't know how long it is." Why don't I buy you a pot and watch it carefully? "
"Great!" I shouted.
Narcissus grows very fast. When it was first planted, its leaf buds were very small. Soon, it jumped high!
One day, the daffodil pulled out a rhizome and grew three flower buds in the shape of lentil horns, which were covered with a transparent skin. A few days later, the flower broke its skin, the petals outside extended outward, and the petals inside closed tightly together. Slowly, the whole flower bloomed. You see, white petals, layer by layer, with a yellow stamen in the middle. I smelled it, and it was very fragrant, with a little sweetness in the flowers. Its leaves are slender and green, and there is a layer of "white frost" outside. Green leaves set off white flowers, what elegant daffodils!
I like daffodils.
8. Ask for a composition about observing plants (the characteristics of plants should be clearly written). Mimosa has seen mimosa on the hillside of Jiulong Mountain in my hometown before. According to parents, this plant is a perennial herb, but it is not as weak as other herbs.
The flowers of mimosa grow very special. He has a purple or pink flower ball, but it is not a flower, but a tidbit made up of many small flowers.
If you accidentally separate a small unit on the ball, you can see that each small unit has four split petals and four long nuclei. It turns out that every small unit is its flower. But why is this plant called mimosa? Oh, it turns out that when you gently touch him, his open pinnate compound leaves will be closed immediately, and then the whole leaf will hang down again, showing "shyness", but a reaction of the plant after being subjected to * * * and vibration.
Central reflex is biologically called nose movement, which is the result of the change of cell tension after mimosa is subjected to * * *. Judging from previous observations, there are still many gains today.
At least I understand why mimosa is called mimosa and how it is "shy". Mimosa is also very green, with green in it.
Observation diary of aquatic plants 1 It's sunny on Friday. It's crisp in autumn and clear in Wan Li today. I came to school early in the morning to see how the daffodils were doing.
When I came to the classroom, I found that Narcissus was like a different person, proudly facing the south station. I quickly measured it. Wow, today's buds are 5 mm longer than yesterday's. I was overjoyed and even ate twice as much lunch as before! 165438+1Saturday, October 27th, sunny today is the weekend. I got up a little in the morning, but I saw narcissus wake up early and bask in the sun.
I walked lazily to the balcony and rummaged through the buds of daffodils, but nothing changed. Suddenly, I found another bud about half a centimeter on the branch near the root of the largest daffodil. I was so happy 1 that I only heard a squeak. I took a look, patted my chest and said, "Fortunately, I didn't break it." 165438+1October 28th I got up at 6 o'clock this morning on a sunny Sunday, because I was going to climb the mountain with my father.
Of course, I can't forget the first thing when I get up in the morning. As soon as I got up, I picked up a ruler and ran to Narcissus. Unfortunately, how to make daffodils lazy today? I have no spirit at all.
I looked at the bottom of the jar. Oh, it turns out that Grandpa Sun came out wandering around these days and stole all the nutrients from the daffodils. No wonder I am listless. I looked at him helplessly and thought: I hope he can stand up again! 165438+1It's sunny on Tuesday, October 30th. Today's music class was really fun. I went home to watch daffodils humming a ditty. Oh, my God, how did he fall to the ground? It turned out that my mother dropped him when she was hanging clothes. I picked him up and blamed my mother.
After I conditioned the daffodil roots, I put them in a small jar. I looked at him and thought, the teacher is right. Raising flowers is much better than raising animals.
65438+February 1 Wednesday sunny will have a comprehensive practice class again tomorrow. I adjusted the daffodils, and in the process of readjustment, I found that many buds were still wrapped in small buds. I wiped the thin ash on the daffodil, which looked very energetic, clean and attractive.
I think my daffodils will be the best in our class tomorrow. Maybe no classmates will call him onion.
65438+Thursday, February 2 nd is fine. Today is the comprehensive practice day. I came to school happily with my daffodils in the morning. As soon as I entered the classroom, I found that my classmates had put plants on the south windowsill. There are many kinds: garlic, celery, radish, potatoes, and many flowers I can't name. It seems that the students have gained a lot. I held the daffodils high and strode to my position. "oh! How high! " Look at me on the surface, but I'm still complacent in my heart! I took out my ruler and looked at the daffodils. Oh, dear! The new bud has grown half a centimeter again! How happy I am! Saturday, February 4th, 65438 got up late this morning. I was going to do my homework at my classmate's house, but my mother wouldn't let me, so I had to observe the daffodils. Oh! I was sick yesterday, but I recovered so quickly today! Hey! I have grown taller again. Did yesterday's rest lay a solid foundation for today? What a good mind! On Sunday, February 5, 65438, it was sunny. Today, the weather is getting cold. Narcissus was so cold that I had to take him to my father's office. At noon, he stretched again, bathed in sunshine, and looked happier than me! 65438+Wednesday, February 8th, sunny, tomorrow is the comprehensive practice day. I wonder what the students' plants will look like in a week. I will take good care of them and show them my true skill tomorrow. Wait and see, students, you will lose badly! I met Li Xiaojing on my way to school this morning. She wrapped daffodils in a convenient bag. Her daffodils are as tall as those in the convenient bag, and they have two flowers! Look at mine again. What a sharp contrast! But my daffodils are not without skills. You see, he also grew a flower bone flower, and a small branch on the right side of the flower bone flower also grew. So cute! 65438+February 10 It's sunny on Friday. The air is really good this morning. I ran for half an hour in the morning, eating bread and watching daffodils.
Because the weather is fine today, every branch of narcissus is separated, stretched and relaxed. The flower bone has blossomed and has been climbing high. Today, it is half a centimeter taller than yesterday. It is really worth mentioning! 65438+ February Monday, 65438+ March sunny. What a big change today! The flower bone not only grows taller, but also grows small buds. What happiness! Wednesday 65438+February 14 Today is cloudy, but it has not affected the daffodils, but it has not changed. Unfortunately, I will take it to school tomorrow. I thought I would be envied by my classmates. Alas! All the plans fell through. Take your time. I hope there will be an accident tomorrow.
65438+ February 65438+Friday 07 sunny. It was very cold this morning. I'm really worried that daffodils will freeze to death. When I came home at noon, as I expected, all the leaves fell. Oh, what a pity.
65438+February 18 It rained in Mao Mao today. I think it's a good opportunity. I put him in the rain. I didn't think about him all the time because I went to school. This must have spoiled him. It's true. Anyway, there is no regret medicine in the world. On Sunday, February 20th, it snowed today and was frozen yesterday. Alas, it's hard luck! Jesus Christ. What are you?