1. Regarding the verses about revising the composition, the composition should be revised repeatedly, which is a famous saying that describes the repeated revision of the composition or

1. The article is not tired of being revised hundreds of times, and the best sentences are refined over and over again

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Quoting from Wang Anshi's sentence "The spring breeze turns green again to the south bank of the river", when writing the sentence "The spring breeze turns green again to the south bank of the river", the word "green" was repeatedly scrutinized and revised, successively from "to", "blow", "Guo", "Lai", "Zhu"...we kept changing them until we were satisfied with the word "green", and this is how we came up with this famous saying that has been passed down to this day.

2. When you write, you will get wind, and when you sharpen it, you will get results. Studying poems will make you refine your poems, and your parallelism will be particularly good. Lou Yao's "Elegy to Jiang Cixi".

Translation: If you want to write like the wind, you must practice every day. Careful consideration makes the poems lean and the couple handsome and neat.

3. "Reading for ten years, adding and deleting five times" "Every word looks like blood, ten years of hard work is unusual" ------Cao Xueqin

Cao Xueqin was born in Nanjing and lived a wealthy life in his youth. When he was thirteen years old, the year after the Cao family was confiscated, the family moved back to Beijing, and the family declined rapidly. From then on, Cao Xueqin lived a difficult life. Every word looks like blood. Ten years of hard work is unusual. This masterpiece took him a lifetime of hard work, but before it was completed, he fell ill because of the grief over the death of his beloved son, and "died after all his tears", before he was even fifty years old.

4. Throughout the ages, anyone who has written well has probably spent time revising. ------He Qifang

The moral is to tell us that constant revision is the ladder of our progress.

5. Don’t rush to write, don’t hate revising, but rewrite the same thing ten or twenty times. -----Leo Tolstoy

The moral tells us that we should not rush for success in everything, but should be calm, seek gradual progress, and strive for excellence. 2. Ancient poems about diligently revising articles

Ancient poems about diligence

1. Life depends on diligence, nothing can be gained without asking. --Zhang Heng

2. Proficiency comes from hard work but waste from play; success comes from thinking but failure comes from following. -- Han Yu

3. If you have perseverance, why do you need to sleep at three o'clock and get up at five o'clock? The most useless thing is to be exposed to ten days of cold in one day.

4. If you are diligent in poetry and writing, you will have something, but if you are not diligent, you will be empty. -- Han Yu

5. If a person can do something once, he can do it by a hundred; if a person can do it ten times, he can do a thousand things. -- "Book of Rites"

6. Wealth has no roots, it can only be obtained through hard work. -- Feng Menglong

7. Although it is hard to go through thousands of waves, you will only get gold after blowing away the yellow sand. --Liu Yuxi

8. The prime years will never come again, and it is difficult to come back in the morning. You should be encouraged in time. Time waits for no one. ---- Tao Yuanming

9. Diligent study is like a seedling rising in spring. If you don't see it growing, it will grow with each passing day.

Dropping out of school is like a sharpening stone. If you don’t see the damage, you will lose every day.

10. Read thousands of volumes and write like a master.

11. How can you get the fragrance of plum blossoms without experiencing a bone-chilling cold?

12. The lights are on at three and the chickens are on at five, which is when men are studying.

13. Heaven is moving vigorously, and a gentleman strives to constantly strive for self-improvement. ----"Book of Changes·Qian" (Confucian classic before Qin and Han Dynasties)

14. The running water does not rot, the door hinges do not become beetles, and the people's livelihood is diligent.

----Zhang Shaocheng

15. The tree that embraces each other is born from the smallest grain; the nine-story platform starts from the base soil; the journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step. ----Lao Dan

Quoted from "Laozi·Tao Te Ching"

16. A horse can't take ten steps with one leap; a horse can drive ten times, but the success lies in perseverance; perseverance If you give it up, rotten wood will not break; if you persevere, gold and stone can be carved.

---- Xun Kuang Quoted from "Xunzi, Encouraging Learning"

17. There are roads in the mountains of books, hard work is the path, and there is no limit to the sea of ??learning, and hard work is the boat.

3. What are the verses in the poem to illustrate that the article needs to be revised repeatedly?

The spring breeze is green again on the south bank of the river. When will the bright moon shine on me again?

The original sentence is: The spring breeze comes to the south bank of the Yangtze River again, when will the bright moon shine on me again?

He chanted and thought repeatedly along the way, but always felt that the word "arrived" in the third sentence was too banal and not appropriate enough. Later, it was changed to the word "guo". After reading it several times, I didn't think it was good. Then it was changed to the word "enter" - "The spring breeze has entered the south bank of the Yangtze River again." Hey, what does this sound like? not good! He muttered to himself, and then changed it to the word "Man" - "The spring breeze fills the south bank of the river again". Alas, the more he changed it, the more outrageous it became. The poet abandoned the word "Man" again and ran for more than ten miles, I thought about it again and again, and changed it again and again, but I couldn't find the right word. Finally, he suddenly thought of the green mountains, green water, green fields and vegetation he saw on the boat... Isn't green the symbol of spring in the south of the Yangtze River? Why not use the word "green"? So the poet chanted loudly:

"The spring breeze is green again on the south bank of the river" - what a word "green"!

Only then did Wang Anshi decide to use the word "green" to replace the words "to", "guo", "enter", and "man". 4. "If you want to have a good article, you must revise it repeatedly." Write at least one sentence about what you have accumulated

Tori lodges beside the tree, and the monk (knocks) on the moon gate. - "Think about it" The origin of the word ""

The spring breeze turns (green) to the south bank of the Yangtze River - once used, "passed" and "in"

So there is a poem saying: Yin'an is a word, and several stems are broken. .

He also said: Not because of wine or poems, but because of chanting, the soul is often annoyed and intoxicated.

Because of human nature, it is difficult to read good sentences, and the words are not surprising. - Du Fu

Two sentences are obtained in three years, and one chant brings tears to the eyes.——Jia Dao

One word of chanting, twisting several stems and whiskers.——Lu Yanrang

Change the new poem and recite it yourself. - Du Fu

Everyone has his own addiction, and my addiction lies in chapters and sentences. All the connections have been eliminated, but this disease has not gone away. - Bai Juyi

Only when the demon of poetry has not come down, I chant leisurely every wind and moon.——Bai Juyi

Only then can I chant a five-character sentence, and a few white mustaches.——Fang Qian 5. Essays for primary school students about revising poems 100 ~150 words

Xu Gongdian, Suxin City (an expansion of ancient poetry)

I (the poet Yang Wanli) stayed in a small inn in Xin City owned by a person named Xu. In front of the window of my room, there was a loose fence. There were many flowers, plants and trees growing beside the fence. In the middle of the fence, there was a path leading into the distance. Spring has just arrived in the world, and the flowers, plants, and trees have just woken up from their sleep. Therefore, the leaves have not grown so thickly that they cannot cover the ground and have not yet become a dense shade.

Looking from a distance, the birds are singing on the branches, and the flying bees are dancing for the birds. On the path leading into the distance, there is a little boy, wearing a blue shirt and yellow trousers. Holding the tool for catching butterflies in his hand, he hurried forward. You see, right in front of him, a beautiful yellow butterfly is dancing. Oh, it turns out that the little boy wants to catch that cute butterfly. I saw the butterfly's antennae bending outward like two filaments, and six small yellow feet growing on both sides of the furry body, arranged in a row, stretching and contracting, like the hands and feet of a newborn baby when it cries. Kick around. Her wings are decorated with circular, circular, dotted and other patterns, and when paired with colorful colors, it shows a beautiful pattern. Just when the little boy was about to take action, suddenly, a yellow butterfly flew into the rapeseed bushes, and the vast golden color was nowhere to be found... Suddenly, the little boy's face was full of helplessness.

Seeing this scene, I couldn't help but sigh, so I sat in front of the window and wrote a poem:

The fence is sparse and a path deep, and the flowers on the tree heads have not yet become shade.

The children hurriedly chased the yellow butterfly, flying into the cauliflower and nowhere to be found.

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Broken Moon (an expansion of ancient poetry)

The Han Dynasty and the Xiongnu were at war for years, and the working people were in dire straits...

On a quiet night, the pale light of the moon made people feel even more desolate. At the entrance of a small village, an eight-year-old man came walking The ten-year-old old man's weather-beaten face was covered with wrinkles. His face was as dry as old tree bark. His hand on crutches was covered with scars. He staggered all the way and finally arrived at the village. His There was an expression of excitement on his face.

At this time, a woman came from the opposite side. The old man quickly asked: "Who else is in my family?" The woman looked at the old man up and down. He sighed and said, "That's your home, right? There are already many graves under the pine and cypress trees. Alas..." The old man's eyes suddenly dimmed. He didn't believe that his sixty-five years of hard labor could be replaced by a new one. This was the result. He quickly walked over and opened the door. A rabbit jumped out of the dog hole in the house, and a pheasant flew down from the beams. The house was full of dust. It was obvious that no one had lived in it for a long time. Wild millet actually grew in the house, and weeds grew beside the well, which was a desolate scene. The old man could only cook with wild millet and pick wild vegetables to make soup. When the rice was ready, the old man picked up his chopsticks and thought to himself: "I've prepared a meal, who can have a meal with me?" Because he was too excited and sad, the old man's hands trembled and his chopsticks fell to the ground. The old man opened the door and looked to the east. The moon in the sky was as bright as a bright moon. The jade plate hung high in the sky. Under the moonlight, every house was brightly lit, and the family gathered together for reunion. The old man looked back at the empty house, and his eyes were filled with tears. He thought of his childhood days and childhood memories. The friends happily played games and celebrated the reunion with their families... But now everything is in vain. The old man's tears dripped onto his clothes and into the well. The moon in the well was broken, as if it would never recover... …

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Expanding the ancient poem "Looking at Tianmen Mountain"

Early in the morning, When I walked out of the cabin, the sun had not yet risen. A layer of blue fog had risen early on Tianmen Mountain. The mountain breeze was a bit cool, and I could only hear the sound of the river flowing. Standing on the bow of the boat, I looked around and saw that Dongliang Mountain formed a gate of heaven, which seemed to be cutting off the gate. The river flowed slowly and calmly, sometimes wide, sometimes narrow, sometimes urgently, sometimes slowly. Occasionally, waves splash and hit the side of the ship. The sound of "squeaking" is refreshing and refreshing. The whole body and mind are enjoyed.

The spotless clear water flowed eastward, dancing to a happy note. Suddenly, it was stopped halfway by the Tianmen, and the clear water rolled in the other direction. Suddenly, two green mountains faced each other before my eyes. The green and black rocks are hard and straight, and the mountains are as black as ink and stand steeply, leaning towards the center of the river, as if they are about to pounce down. Spring has dyed the two mountains again. There are rows of pines and cypresses, and only a few clusters of wild flowers can be seen on the mountain, which are gorgeous embellishments on the green hills.

Where the sky and water meet, the sun rises vertically, as if it is carrying some heavy burden. The fog dispersed, and the scene in front of me was clear. The sun shot out thousands of rays of light, and a white sail came out. The sun gave the white sail a golden edge. The river seemed to be awakened by the sun and flowed rapidly.

Seeing this scenery, I not only want to stand for a long time and look around, but also want to recite a poem about heroic strides. 6. You must revise your writing so that you can produce a good article. He can use this famous saying to teach you

When a publishing house writes a manuscript, should it be sent out immediately after it is finished? Don't dare to do that! Be sure to revise it carefully from beginning to end. The requirement of the ancients for writing poems is "the words are not surprising but not endless." The refinement of the poems requires revisions countless times. When we compose, we must carefully control the "revision level". After the manuscript is sent out, the editors have to revise it again to ensure the quality of the article.

2. Revision is the last step of a composition. The completion of a composition often includes the following five steps: First, review the topic and understand the requirements of the proposition.

The second is to select materials and determine the center, deciding what content to write and what thoughts to express in this composition. The third is to make an outline and clarify the content to be written. The fourth is to write in one go. The fifth is to revise and submit the paper when you are satisfied. Some students don't understand this, so after writing the last paragraph, they hand in the paper immediately. Wouldn't that mean cutting off a link yourself? Anyone who does this, I dare say, will not get very good results. It is often those good students who, after finishing writing, always think over and over again, revising again and again, and are never in a hurry to hand in the paper. They know that writing is not a race.

3. The idea of ??"revision" runs through the entire process of composition. Revision must be in mind from the beginning of the composition. Why do you say this? Because of the specific steps of "revision", from reviewing the topic to completing the manuscript, there are three steps that must be grasped:

1. After reviewing the topic, start selecting materials. The process of selecting materials and "revising" starts in my mind. For example, the topic is "A tree near my house." Which one should I write about? At first, Xiaozhao wanted to write about the tall ancient locust tree in the courtyard. Later, he felt that although this ancient locust tree was very tall, what kind of theme did it express? Not sure myself. Then, he thought of the newly planted small pine trees on the roadside outside the gate. "Although this pine tree is only as tall as one person, it was planted by our teammates in the team last spring. We often water it and take care of it to grow..." Writing about it can highlight the rapid growth in the sun. central idea. Isn't this just a modification? Although others cannot see this modification, I know it is happening in my heart. With this change, Xiaozhao got good results by writing Little Pine Tree.

2. Modify the outline. Once, I guided my classmates to write "Morning on the Street". Xiao Zhuang made an outline and brought it over to ask for my opinions.