1. Write a composition using ancient poems

Child At dusk.

The bright moonlight is like a layer of gauze. At this moment, wearing a straw hat and still wearing the straw hat, I stared at the brightly lit window for a long time... and soon it turned into a bright moon.

And I was standing in the bush, holding the bamboo flute tightly in my hand, dancing... Listen - who blew such a cheerful and melodious flute sound, with two little feet The cow's back swayed from side to side. After another trot, it turned out that the flute player was a late-returning shepherd boy riding on a strong ox, and he didn't even take off his raincoat.

I followed him quietly, found a flat place, and yawned. He was still wearing the green coir raincoat; under the faint light of the moon. The wild grass danced softly - in the vast green grass on the moonlit night, gently covering the quiet field, with a slender piece of thatch in his mouth, I saw him coming to the field again; a little shy , with a hint of joy, I was also tired, stretched out, and with the breeze echoing in the wilderness, the child came out again with brisk steps. He was wearing a raincoat, intermittently - intermittently, cheerfully Returned to a thatched house by the creek.

He walked in and saw that he was walking through the forest like an excellent magician. He lay down to rest and fell asleep not far from him... The rooster started. Singing, he transformed slightly, wearing that little straw hat, and the sun gently threw itself into the embrace of the mountains.

2. How to correctly use ancient poetry and poetry to write compositions

First of all, it must be very suitable for use before it can be used. In other words, the poems you choose should not only fit the theme of the composition in content, but also be in harmony with the style and writing style, otherwise you would rather not use them;

Secondly, avoid poems and ancient prose Stacking, although when dealing with an essay, this method of stacking poems will not only make the article look gorgeous, but also greatly increase the number of words, but if you want your article to become a masterpiece, this approach is absolutely undesirable. Not to mention whether the quotation is appropriate, the composition is mainly to test your ability to control words, but you have brought a bunch of other people's words into your composition. This can only mean that your knowledge is broad, but your level is not obvious. Even if this is not a problem, I know that there is a saying that the poems you brought are like a piece of cloth. No matter how good the cloth is and how meticulously sewn it is, the finished product will be rags.

Also, your poetry accumulation must be high. Otherwise, if you only know that everyone knows it, then you might as well not use it, or you might as well say something new and original that you want to say. 3. How to flexibly use ancient poems to write compositions

Ah, in fact, what I usually use is to divide poems into several words and use them together, such as Wen Tingyun Yao's complaint "The sky is as clear as water and the clouds are light at night".

You can write:

"The sky is as blue as water, the sky is clear and blue, it is a dream or an illusion, the night moon wanders into my eyes and blends into my heart."

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To put it simply, it means sentence expansion and sentence expansion.

But if you want to quote, you can change the sentence structure based on parallelism and repetition.

Such as:

Is that the pipa sound of "there is love before the tune is formed"? (from Pipa Xing)

Or the helpless voice of "It's easy to go"? (From a Yuan song, I can’t remember clearly)

Or is it the vastness of "Xiao Xiao Ban Ma Ming"? (from Li Bai's Farewell to a Friend)

Is it the silence of "weeping without singing" again? (I can’t remember what it comes from, but it’s a Song poem anyway.)

More changes can be added, but they must be similar things, which is a bit hard to think of.

I am at the level of a first-year junior high school student. If you are a high school student or even a college student, you should know more. You can just bring it in by yourself (*^__^*)

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If the article wants to have an ancient meaning, just try to reflect the ancient style between the lines. It does not have to be quoted.

The higher realm we pursue is like E-da’s Night Sing of the Tang Dynasty. Not one sentence is completely quoted, but every sentence is quoted from the classics, and they all have allusions! If you can use it to this point, you will be powerful~

I hope it can help you~ 4. Ancient poems used in compositions

Quietness can cultivate one's morality, and frugality can cultivate virtue. Without indifference, there is no clear ambition; without tranquility, there is no far-reaching goal!

Be faithful and eager to learn, and stick to the good way. Don’t enter a dangerous country, and don’t live in a chaotic country. If there is a way in the world, you will see it, but if there is no way, you will hide it. If the country has a way, poverty and despicability will be shameful; a country without way will be shameful. , Wealth and honor are also shameful.

The future generations are to be feared. How can we know that those who come are not as good as they are now? At forty or fifty, if you are not heard of, it is not enough to be afraid.

If the name is not correct, the words will not be smooth; If you are not happy, then the punishment will not be correct; if the punishment is not correct, *** will not do anything wrong.

A gentleman is easy to do but difficult to explain. If you do not explain it in the way, you will not explain it; and it will make people do it. , Qi Zhi. It is difficult for a villain to explain things easily. Although it is not explained in the way, it is said; and it is also used to make others better.

Those who are born knowing are the best; those who learn to know can only It’s the second best thing; if you’re tired and learn it, it’s the second best thing; if you’re tired and don’t learn it, the people will be in trouble. 5. Looking for an excellent 600-word composition for junior high school that uses a lot of ancient poetry

I live in the south of the Yangtze River. Proud

A candidate in Jiaxing City

Five thousand years have passed since the mysterious Jiangnan, and five thousand years have fascinated the passionate Jiangnan. I am a woman in a sarong skirt, who has always collected mulberry trees in the sunshine of green water; I am a woman with bright wrists and jade bracelets, peeling water chestnuts on a waterwheel; I am the white-haired old woman beside the green grass on the eaves, Drunk, Wu Yinzhong enjoys family happiness. I live in the watery and tender Jiangnan, and I am proud of Jiangnan. Because there is...

Small Bridge

Bridges are the dream of Jiangnan water towns, and bridge culture ripples from here. The graceful posture is a woman dancing lightly, the ingenious figure is a flying rainbow drinking water by the stream, the rusty stains are the precipitation of history, and the everlasting existence is the strength of tenderness. Your petite yet majestic body carries so much bright laughter and so much sorrow for the country and the family. The mist and rain are misty, and the willows are lingering. The blue tiles of the blue house are reflected; the bits of sunshine and the smoke from the kitchen are calling for the awning boats returning in the evening; the bluestone road on the riverside leads leisurely to the tall stone arch bridge in the distance, and the boats pass leisurely under it , people walk gently on it, just like in the painting...

Flowing Water

The flow of Jiangnan flows into Bai Juyi's "Recalling Jiangnan": "The sun rises and the river flowers are redder than the fire. , the river is as green as blue when spring comes.” The flowing water in the south of the Yangtze River maintains the elegance of the south of the Yangtze River. It is neither arrogant nor impetuous. It looks exactly like Xiaojiabiyu. When speaking, it is like a small open red lip, and when walking, it is like a golden lotus swaying. Later, the river seemed to open up when it entered the sea, and Xiaojiabiyu gradually became a graceful woman. Her charm was conveyed in her every move, and the flowing water showed her beauty in this way. She was neither humble nor overbearing, neither pretentious nor deliberately showing off. This is the character of the entire Jiangnan.

People

The simple Jiangnan people have romantic fantasies. The girl from the south of the Yangtze River with bright eyes and white teeth spoke Wu Nong's soft words, her beautiful eyes were full of hope, and she smiled sweetly. She stood in the pose of Huanyi in the gurgling water, hummed Huanyi's ditty, and smiled softly in the sunset. Since ancient times, there are many talented people in the south of the Yangtze River, and there are only ten fights in the world. The nine leading figures in the south of the Yangtze River are romantic. Some people say: "Southeast is charming, the female takes over the male", which is true but also wrong. Here walked out Tang Bohu, who was full of poetry and wine, walked out Wu Jingzi, who smiled proudly as a scholar, and walked out Qiu Jin, who did not hesitate to spend a lot of money to buy a sword. Let us shed tears to express our condolences. The chapter on the previous page has faded with the silence of the notes, and we will write the glory for you on the next page.

My Jiangnan has been sung in many chapters in Tang poetry and Song lyrics, and has been shown in historical pictures many times; my Jiangnan is a short song in the rain. In the song, there are fishermen boating on the river, and people getting up early. The woodcutter wading in the water. I live in the watery and tender Jiangnan, like a cup of whispering wine full of tea charm. Jiangnan, I am proud of you.

Highlights: This excellent composition for the high school entrance examination is simply a beautiful prose poem. The main highlights are:

1. Ingenious ideas. The article adopts the structural form of "total-point-total" to arrange the article materials, which makes it clear and well-organized, and is easy for newcomers to read. The first paragraph is the outline of the whole article, using the form of parallel sentences, which sets the tone of the article, adds atmosphere and builds momentum for the following narrative and lyrical writing. The middle main part specifically explains the reasons why "I am proud to live in Jiangnan" from three aspects: "small bridge", "flowing water" and "houses", which are representative of Jiangnan. The ending part echoes the previous text, echoes the beginning, echoes the title, and once again points out "Jiangnan, I am proud of you."

2. Beautiful language. The wording is appropriate and precise, and the ability to form words and sentences is extraordinary. For example: "Five thousand years have made the mysterious Jiangnan ancient, and five thousand years have haunted the passionate Jiangnan. I am a woman in a sarong skirt, who has always collected mulberries in the green water of the sun; I am Hao Wan. The woman with jade bracelets rides on the waterwheel peeling water chestnuts; I am the white-haired old woman beside the green grass on the eaves, enjoying the happiness of her family in the drunken Wuyin." Such beautiful writing does not require a certain amount of reading accumulation and experience. The ability to control words cannot be achieved through writing. There are many such statements in the article.

The article uses a lot of rhetorical techniques such as parallelism, metaphor, personification, and quotation, and uses integral sentence patterns and long and short sentence patterns in an intricate manner. It is catchy to read, has a sense of rhythm and musical beauty. 6. There is a subtitle that uses 600 words of ancient poetry. Left and right

— Why is it the most beautiful, ancient poetry too

Who has witnessed the little-known past events in the long history and brought today’s glory? Who has described the beauty of the motherland’s gorgeous mountains and rivers, It makes people indulge in it and forget to leave. It's you - ancient poetry, you are the pride of the Chinese nation and the treasure of Chinese culture.

Time flies like an arrow, and time flies by. Even the tough rock cannot escape the fate of being penetrated by water drops, but you remain glorious, ah! Ancient poetry, time flies, but you will last forever, you are the most beautiful.

I don’t know when I met you. Your beauty made me deeply fascinated by you. You once took me to appreciate the pastoral life of Tao Yuanming of the Jin Dynasty, "I wake up in the morning to sort out the filth, and return with the moon and the lotus to hoe." This seemingly hard life contains the poet's leisurely elegance and the poet's uncompromising attitude towards "five buckets of rice". 'True quality. Without you, we would know nothing about their little-known past. ah! Ancient poems, you are the memoirs of history, you are the most beautiful.

Time flies, looking back to the Xuanzong period of the Tang Dynasty, where your prosperity reached its peak. In ancient times, many students stayed at home every day and studied hard. Late at night, they dug into walls to borrow light, and even at dawn they could still hear the scholars talking loudly. Why? Ten years of hard work were spent just to create an eternally famous poem, win the first prize, and be famous for generations to come. In ancient times, how many people became famous because of you. The famous ancient poet Li Bai is a typical example. Li Bai was a poet famous for his romanticism and left many famous poems throughout the ages, so he is famous at home and abroad. Not only Li Bai, but also the poet Du Fu, who is famous for his realism, and the poet Wang Wei, who said "there are paintings in poems and poems in paintings". Ancient poems not only record the rise and fall of ancient times, but also entrust the poet's thoughts and feelings. ah! Ancient poems carry historical deeds, and you are the most beautiful.

Reading Li Bai's "Farewell at Crossing Jingmen", "I still pity the water of my hometown, I see the boat sailing thousands of miles away", I read the poet's attachment to his hometown. After reading "Climbing the Yueyang Tower", I read that this poem expresses the poet's wanderings through the rivers and lakes, the pain of displacement, the decline of the country, the worries of China's turmoil, and the poet's sad and lonely feelings through climbing the tower. ah! Ancient poetry, you convey the poet's thoughts and feelings, you are the most beautiful. 7. Topics for application of ancient poetry

1. If we are welcoming friends from afar, we should say (it is a joy to have friends from afar).

2. If a good friend is separated and reluctant to say goodbye, we can say (I send you a thousand miles away, but you must say goodbye eventually). ” 3. The idiom “inseparable” is generally used to describe the close relationship between friends. 4. Whenever the moon rises, you will have a beautiful yearning for happiness and reunion in your heart, and you will think of (I wish you a long life). , Qianli *** Chanjuan) 5. Whenever you see the spring light urging the flowers of peach, plum and pear to bloom overnight, you will naturally think of it (like a spring breeze coming overnight, thousands of trees and pear blossoms blooming) 6. Sweat The historian and writer (Sima Qian) of the Tang Dynasty said: "Everyone is destined to die, and it may be heavier than Mount Tai, or lighter than a feather." When talking about "comparison", it is the same as the poem written by the poet (Du Mu) of the (Tang) Dynasty. "Yu" in "Mountain Journey" (frost leaves red in February flowers) (poem) means exactly the same.

8. It feels very comfortable to come to the foot of the waterfall and hold the clear spring water. Looking up at the waterfall pouring down, splashing water, hitting the edges of the rocks, splashing beautiful water splashes

Looking at the beautiful waterfall, I can't help but think of "(Floating water plummeting down three thousand feet). , suspected to be the Milky Way falling from the sky)". 9. People often use Du Fu's sentence (sneaking into the night with the wind, moistening things silently) to praise the teacher's silent cultivation and subtle influence on the students.

10. Every During the festive season, we will write or send emails to our relatives far away. We can quote this poem ("I am a stranger in a foreign land, but I miss my loved ones even more during the festive season.") to express our longing.

< p> 11. To write a good composition, you must not only read books, but also participate in more practical activities. As the ancients said ("Read thousands of books and travel thousands of miles.") 12. Whenever the motherland needs you, use ( "Don't be afraid of being broken into pieces."

) to express your determination. 13. Classmates, when your friends are wasting time and slacking off in their studies, we can use ("If a young man doesn't work hard, he will be a fool.") Sadness."

) to advise him 14. In the face of success and failure in life, we should have a mentality of (not to be happy with things, not to be sad with ourselves). 15. Reform and opening up Since then, advanced figures from all walks of life have emerged in endlessly. We can use the words and phrases in *** "Qinyuan Chun·Snow" (to count the romantic figures, also look at the current situation)

16. "Song of White Snow". The famous sentence in "Send Wu Judgment Back to the Capital" that uses spring flowers as a metaphor for winter snow is (Suddenly a spring breeze comes overnight, and thousands of pear trees bloom) 17. The sentence in "Tianjingsha·Autumn Thoughts" expresses the sadness of wandering in the world is (The sunset sets in the west , Heartbroken people are at the end of the world) 18. Standing up at a critical moment and bravely shouldering heavy responsibilities can be described as (taking charge of the defeated army, being ordered to be in danger). 19. Su Shi's famous philosophical sentence in "When Will the Bright Moon Come?" Yes (people have joys and sorrows, separations and reunions, the moon waxes and wanes, this is difficult to do in ancient times).

20. In life, we must be good at learning from the good aspects of others, but also good at drawing lessons from the bad aspects. This is just like a sentence in Confucius's "The Analects" (When three people walk together, there must be one who is my teacher.) Choose those who are good and follow them, and change those who are not good) 21. The famous line that has been passed down through the ages in the poem "Remembering Shandong Brothers on September 9th" is (I am a stranger in a foreign land alone, and I miss my relatives even more during the holidays). 22. In the poem "A Gift to Wang Lun", Li Bai uses ("The water in Peach Blossom Pond is a thousand feet deep, not as deep as Wang Lun's gift to me") to express the deep friendship between him and Wang Lun.

23. In the poem "Shi'er", the poem that expresses the author's thoughts is (I know that everything is futile after death, but the sadness is not the same as in all nine states). 24. After reading "Hurry", I want to borrow the famous aphorism "(The poem in "Long Song Xing": Young people don't work hard.

Old people are just sad.)" to remind myself not to let time "Gone in a hurry".

25. When you see your friend wasting his time and not studying hard, you will use this famous saying to warn him: (If a young man does not work hard, the old man will be sad.") 26. Educate people to be positive, The best is better: (If you want to see farther, go to the next level).

27. It shows the tenacity of vitality and is used to praise the tenacious spirit and attitude towards life that are indomitable, vigorous and promising: _______________________________ . 28. Education to save food and cherish the fruits of farmers’ labor: (Who knows that every grain of food on the plate is hard work)

29. Education only allows us to keep reading and learning, and to absorb fresh knowledge, ideas, talents, and wisdom. It will never dry up, never become stale, and will always be full of vitality and vitality: _______________________________. 30. Teach us to be calm and fearless when facing severe tests: (Only heroes can drive away tigers and leopards, and no heroes are afraid of bears). /p>

31. ("Tomorrow comes tomorrow, and there are so many tomorrows. If we don't do it today, when will this happen.") Yes, the swallows have gone, but they will come again; the willows will be withered, but they will be green again. When the peach blossoms fade, they will bloom again.

Our days are gone forever. If we don’t seize today and always look forward to tomorrow, will luck wave to you? ? 32. We walked hand in hand silently on the way to the train station, speechless to each other.

How can we be separated from each other in a moment after being with each other day and night? ("Please ask Dongliushui. , Who do you want to be with?")? Everyone looked at each other with tears, and their affection was infinite! 33. When our teacher guided everyone in writing, he often quoted two lines from the famous Song Dynasty poet Su Shi's "Inscription on the Western Forest Wall" ("Horizontal Look at it like a ridge on its side and a peak on its side, with different heights near and far"), emphasizing that writing is a release of the soul and a release of emotions. The writing style must be eclectic, and the language must have its own personality.

34. Once again The failure of the election threw my heart into the abyss. Hey, you know how much energy I invested and how much time I spent on these two campaigns. How come God is not kind to me at all? How can I be a golden person and walk quickly into the autumn")! 35. During the Mid-Autumn Festival, the bright moon is in the sky.

The full moon is set off by the yellow halo, and the moonlight is like a transparent tulle, hazy. Covering the earth dimly, the breeze blows on my face, and I can't help but stir up my homesickness: I've been away from my hometown for so many years, how wonderful my relatives are! I can't help but cry with sadness ("Looking up at the bright moon, looking down at my hometown"). Ah, you know the hearts of overseas tourists! 36. By the lake, the graceful willow tree stands gracefully, with slender young leaves glowing with green light. From a distance, it looks like a green gem tree, and the willow branches are no less beautiful. The low eyebrows are pleasing to the eye, soft, lingering, and graceful. 8. How to apply ancient poetry in composition for the college entrance examination

1. Provide materials for practicing. Ancient poetry is a precious heritage of ancient Chinese literature, and its content is very important. Essence, concise language, beautiful artistic conception and sincere feelings.

According to the needs of expression, the poet's language is highly condensed and summarized, and the plot spans a wide range. Has strong jumping ability.

This leaves many "blanks" in the poem. Contact your own life reality, make reasonable imaginations based on your own understanding, supplement the skipped plots, and make the condensed and summarized language concrete. Transformation is a good practice of writing. 1. Expand the connotation and practice writing the full text from multiple angles.

Some ancient poems are rich in content, complete in structure, and have distinctive characters. This can be used as an organic supplement to students' compositions and can be practiced selectively.

When practicing writing, in order to enable students to understand the meaning of poetry more deeply, teachers should introduce the source and background of the poem to the students in detail. After students understand the connotation of the poem, let them use various angles to practice writing, expand, rewrite, write their thoughts after reading or what comes to mind from a poem, an unforgettable lesson, etc., giving students the freedom to use their imagination.

Students will let their imagination run wild, become interested, enter the realm of poetry, understand emotions, and produce exquisite articles. For example: When I was teaching students the poem "Inscribed on Li Ning's Residence" by the poet Jia Dao of the Tang Dynasty, after the students understood the origin of the poem, they wrote the article "Joking on Jia Dao's Industry" based on the TV series "A Play on Qianlong" that was being performed at that time. .

The article narrates that Jia Dao was a young monk with considerable literary talents. After being persuaded by a man who traveled far and wide and was known as a fortune teller, he grew his hair and returned to secular life and went to Beijing to seek fame. But he failed despite repeated attempts, and there was no trouble returning home.

He heard that Corporal Han Yulixian of Jingzhao Yin at that time had a wide circle of scholars all over the world. He thought this was an opportunity for development, so he frowned and took the plan seriously. One day, while Han Yu was out, he deliberately broke into Han Yu's honor guard in the name of thinking about poetry, and was caught by the soldiers and taken to Han Yu.

Jia Dao quickly explained that it was because he was addicted to poetry and did not know whether it was better to "knock" or "push" in "The bird stayed in the tree by the pond, and the monk knocked on the door under the moon". I accidentally bumped into you while I was meditating, and I hope you will forgive me.

After hearing this, Han Yu not only did not blame Jia Dao, but was deeply moved by Jia Dao's studiousness. He happily invited Jia Dao into the mansion for a long talk.

And strive to ensure that Jia Dao becomes an official. From then on, Jia Dao began to flourish.

In the article, the image of a clever, scheming character who also likes to play little tricks is about to emerge. Although the writing is biased, the author's ingenious conception and bold imagination cannot help but impress people.

There are also many poems, and teachers can practice them in a targeted manner according to the needs of the teaching materials. For example: Xin Qiji's "Qingpingle. Village Residence" asked students to practice expansion with the title "Look at this family"; Li Bai's "Yellow Crane Tower Farewell to Meng Haoran in Guangling" asked students to use "Ah, Goodbye, Friend" as the title, It narrates the feelings of farewell between friends; Cen Shen's "Song under the Sai" allows students to practice writing essays with the title "Flying General Li Guang".

There are many ancient poems and articles similar to these that can be practiced, such as: "Ode of Lime", "Returning to Hometown", "Seven-step Poetry", "Gift to Wang Lun", etc. As long as careful guidance is given, many ancient poems and articles can be used for students to practice writing the entire article.

2. Practice snippets with purpose as needed. The students' composition level is inconsistent, there are certain differences, and there is also a certain degree of incompatibility.

This requires teachers to conduct writing training in a purposeful, step-by-step and targeted manner based on the actual situation of students. The writing training mentioned here is selective training of fragments according to needs.

For example: "Looking for Flowers Alone by the River" requires students to describe a spring riverside scene with blooming flowers, flying butterflies, and the chirping of birds and warblers based on the poem, and students will be trained in scene descriptions. Another example: "Children's Fishing" requires students to use delicate brushstrokes to depict an innocent child with disheveled hair, holding a fishing rod, hidden in the grass by the river. Pedestrians ask for directions and wave their hands hurriedly, but no answer is given. He is free, innocent and cute. modality.

There are many poems in ancient poetry that can be used as fragment training, such as "Xugongdian, Suxin City", "Spring Night Happy Rain", "Little Pond", "Wen Guanjun Takes Henan and Hebei", etc. Teachers choose content and guide students to conduct targeted segment training, which can continuously strengthen students' sense of language, enrich their vocabulary, make sentences more fluent, and make the organization clearer. Ultimately, practice makes perfect and students' writing skills are improved.

3. Create situations and conduct oral communication training. There are many works in ancient poetry. The author only succinctly describes what happened, stopping abruptly at the key point, leaving room for imagination. Or in the narrative of the work, when communicating with the characters, he only intercepts typical and unique things. Representative words, the rest of the language is simply ignored.

Of course, this is a "technical" treatment that the author needs to express. But this leaves a good place for us to create situations and conduct oral communication training.

For example: Liu Changqing's "The Master Stays at Furong Mountain in the Snow" depicts a picture of a night stay in a cold mountain based on the theme of "tourists staying at night, people returning to the mountain home after a storm". "At dusk, the mountains are far away, the sky is cold and the white house is poor, the firewood gate hears the barking of dogs, and people return home on a stormy night." There are jumps in the first two sentences. There is a period of time between entering the hut and settling down for bed. There should be something that can be described. of.

For example: the host's inquiry, the guest's response, the host's wishes as a landlord, and the guest's gratitude to the concierge, the author has omitted. Then here the teacher can create a scenario and arrange an oral communication training so that students can put themselves in their shoes and try to figure out the possible dialogues that the characters may have.

Another example: The author of "The One Who Seeks Hermitage Is Not Encountered" only writes a few typical lines of language in the poem, and ignores the rest. Here I have arranged a training in oral communication. After the students fully understood the meaning of the poem through recitation, I asked two students to play the role of poet and boy respectively for practice.

During the later writing practice, the student wrote: The poet was panting, and while wiping his sweat, he came to the hermit's door and raised his hand to knock on the door. "Who is it?" Accompanied by a clear child's voice, the door creaked open, and a boy with double buns walked out of the door, "Is there anything, sir?" The poet quickly raised his hand: "This "Brother, I'm so polite here."

"Return the gift, return the gift." The boy quickly bowed his hand and said, "Ah, brother, please tell me that Jia Dao is coming to visit."

The poet said respectfully. When the boy heard this, he looked apologetic: "Hey.

9. Looking for an excellent 600-word composition for junior high school that makes extensive use of ancient poems

I am proud to live in the south of the Yangtze River. A candidate in Jiaxing City has five thousand years of days. The ancient and mysterious Jiangnan is haunted by five thousand years of days. Detoured around the passionate Jiangnan.

I am a woman in a sarong skirt, who has always collected mulberries in the sunshine of green water; I am a woman with bright wrists and jade bracelets, who peels water chestnuts on a waterwheel; I am a woman beside the green grass on the eaves The white-haired old woman was enjoying the happiness of her family in the drunken Wuyin. I live in the watery and tender Jiangnan, and I am proud of Jiangnan.

Because there is... small bridge. Bridge is the dream of the Jiangnan water town, and the bridge culture ripples from here. The graceful posture is a woman dancing lightly, the ingenious figure is a flying rainbow drinking water by the stream, the rusty stains are the precipitation of history, and the everlasting existence is the strength of tenderness.

Your petite yet majestic body carries so much bright laughter and so much sorrow for the country and the family. The mist and rain are misty, and the willows are lingering.

Under the arched bridge, boats leisurely pass by, and people walk gently on it, just like in the painting... The flowing water of the Yangtze River flows into Bai Juyi's "Recalling Jiangnan": "When the sun rises, the flowers on the river are as red as fire, and when spring comes, the river is as green as blue." . The flowing water in the south of the Yangtze River maintains the elegance of the south of the Yangtze River. It is neither arrogant nor impetuous. It looks exactly like Xiaojiabiyu. When speaking, it is like a small open red lip, and when walking, it is like a golden lotus swaying.

Later, the river seemed to open up when it entered the sea, and Xiaojiabiyu gradually became a graceful woman. She spread her charm with every move and gesture, and the flowing water expressed her beauty in this way. She was neither humble nor overbearing, and she did not pretend to be pretentious. There was no deliberate showoff. This is the character of the entire Jiangnan.

People The simple Jiangnan people have romantic fantasies. The girl from the south of the Yangtze River with bright eyes and white teeth spoke Wu Nong's soft words, her beautiful eyes were full of hope, and she smiled sweetly. She stood in the pose of Huanyi in the gurgling water, hummed Huanyi's ditty, and smiled softly in the sunset.

Since ancient times, there have been many talented people in the south of the Yangtze River, and there are only ten fights in the world. The nine leading figures in the south of the Yangtze River are romantic.

Some people say: "The charm of the southeast is that the female overtakes the male." This is true but not right either. Here walked out Tang Bohu, who was full of poetry and wine, walked out Wu Jingzi, who smiled proudly as a scholar, and walked out Qiu Jin, who did not hesitate to spend a lot of money to buy a sword.

Let us shed tears to express our condolences. The chapter on the previous page has faded with the silence of the notes, and we will write the glory for you on the next page.

My Jiangnan has been sung in many chapters in Tang poetry and Song lyrics, and has been shown in historical pictures many times; my Jiangnan is a short song in the rain. In the song, there are fishermen boating on the river, and people getting up early. The woodcutter wading in the water. I live in the watery and tender Jiangnan, like a cup of whispering wine full of tea charm.

Jiangnan, I am proud of you. Highlights: This excellent composition for the high school entrance examination is simply a beautiful prose poem.

The main highlights are: 1. Ingenious ideas. The article adopts the structural form of "total-point-total" to arrange the article materials, which makes it clear and well-organized, and is easy for newcomers to read.

The first paragraph is the outline of the whole article, using the form of parallel sentences, which sets the tone of the article, exaggerates the atmosphere and builds momentum for the following narrative and lyrical writing. The middle main part specifically explains the reasons why "I am proud to live in Jiangnan" from three aspects: "small bridge", "flowing water" and "houses", which are representative of Jiangnan.

The end part echoes the previous text, echoes the beginning, echoes the title, and once again points out "Jiangnan, I am proud of you." 2. Beautiful language.

The wording is appropriate and precise, and the ability to form words and sentences is extraordinary. For example: "Five thousand years have made the mysterious Jiangnan ancient, and five thousand years have haunted the passionate Jiangnan.

I am a woman in a sarong skirt, and I have always collected mulberries in the green water. Zhiyang; I am the woman with the jade bracelet on her wrist, riding on the water wheel to peel water chestnuts; I am the white-haired old woman beside the green grass on the eaves, enjoying the happiness of her family in the drunken Wuyin. "Such a beautiful writing style. , it is impossible to write without a certain amount of reading accumulation and word control ability.

There are many such statements in the article. The article uses a large number of rhetorical techniques such as parallelism, metaphor, personification and quotation, and uses integral sentence patterns and long and short sentence patterns intricately. It is readable and catchy, with a sense of rhythm and musical beauty.