In our ordinary daily life, everyone has come into contact with composition. Composition is the transition from internal language to external language, that is, from compressed and concise language that one can understand to unfolding and The transformation of external language forms with standardized grammatical structures that can be understood by others. So, how to write an essay? Below are the comments on fourth-grade compositions I compiled. They are for reference only. Everyone is welcome to read them. Comments on fourth-grade composition 1
1. The concept of the work is ingenious writing style, and it is also concise, smooth, bold in imagination, and creative. The article is novel, unique and attractive to read.
2. Rich imagination and innovative ideas. The self-introduction at the beginning leads to the following. In addition, the language of the article is concise and to the point, and the style is humorous.
3. The article is not long, but the process is clearly described, the characters’ activities are described in a concrete, authentic and credible way, vivid and interesting, the full text structure is compact and complete, and the writing style is relatively fluent.
4. The plot is vivid and interesting, the narrative is clear and complete, and it also shows the author’s intelligence and wit, full of family life interest, and the writing style is fluent and lively.
5. You are very good at grasping the characteristics of things and describing them in detail... There is emotion in your writing.
6. The article is very persuasive and thought-provoking. From the writing point of view, the plot is vivid, the article is interesting, and it is deeply instructive to read.
7. The theme is condensed and concentrated, and the discussion is profound and powerful, which is shocking.
8. The wording in this article is accurate and rigorous. The language is plain, natural and the use of metaphors and personification makes the article even better.
9. The main feature of this composition is the narration of specific details, real description, vivid description and true feelings, and the use of rhetorical techniques such as metaphor and personification to write... very vividly and at the same time express...'s love for....
10. The language in the full text is vivid and accurate, and the plot has exciting twists and turns, which seem to bring readers into a happy paradise. The full text is easy to understand and interesting. Fourth grade composition comments 2
1. You are very good at observing life and can keenly capture meaningful moments; you are a student with great potential.
2. The language of the article is very fluent, and it also expresses the teacher’s feelings. You are the teacher's bosom friend, and I hope that we can learn from each other and pick a bunch of fragrant flowers in the garden of literature.
3. I’m sorry, the teacher didn’t understand this paragraph. Are you willing to explain it to the teacher? Thank you.
4. Your handwriting is neat and beautiful. The teacher wants to learn from you. If the material selection of the article is more novel, it will definitely complement the writing. what you think?
5. Great! Your article reproduces the straightforwardness and straightforwardness of Northeastern people, making readers feel refreshed. The language is extremely fluent, and the use of synesthesia is particularly clever. Your writing is contagious and contagious. Work hard and create greater glories!
6. Careful observation, vivid descriptions and careful selection of materials, clever arrangements and flexible descriptions, relaxed writing style, correct subject matter, detailed expressions, novel stories, clear and clean writing
7. Elegant speaking , the text is vivid and smooth, the lyrical and true narrative is concise, to the point and charming, interesting, fresh and smooth, and natural.
8. The text is vivid, the description of the scene is picturesque, the description is subtle, the description is lifelike, the description is profound and vivid, the sentence is beautiful, and the narrative Vivid and profound descriptions, rigorous structure
9. The material is novel, the writing style is sophisticated and rigorous, the narrative is detailed and content-rich, the writing is fluent and free and easy, interesting and meaningful, the layout is novel, and the wording is concise
10. The layers are well-organized and well-structured. The narrative is vivid, interesting, sad, touching, and the words are heartfelt. Every sentence is touching and reveals the true feelings, which is deeply touching. Comments on fourth-grade composition 3
1. The layout of the article is concise and reasonable, and the author’s emphasis on the original text The understanding is also very profound and thorough. The language of the full text is sonorous and powerful, and it makes people's blood boil and their hearts surge when reading it.
2. The article is detailed and brief, orderly, and the content is vivid and detailed. It can be regarded as an excellent article.
3. The full text has a bright rhythm, fresh language, and is always full of humor and fun. It is endless fun to read.
4. The narrative of the whole text is coherent, without branches or branches, the language is simple and smooth, and the emotions are sincere and touching.
5. The tone of the whole article is relaxed and humorous, making it full of wit and fun. It is hard to put down after reading it.
6. The author has a clever idea, is good at selecting points to develop, and the writing is ups and downs, which is thought-provoking.
7. There are many noteworthy sentences in the whole text, which adds some literary interest to the article.
8. The article is complex and stable, and can be detailed and appropriate, and the key points are highlighted. .
9. The article renders the atmosphere of... fully and appropriately, and gives an exquisite and realistic portrayal of the focus of the article...
10. It is realistic and contains simple and profound philosophy. It is energizing and exciting to read.
11. This article is full of passion, and you can feel the author's love for... from between the lines. The whole text is clearly organized and the sentences flow smoothly.
12. The case description is vivid and detailed, and the opinions are meaningful and consistent with the previous metaphor... At the end, the author uses a few words to express his feelings about..., which is touching.
13. The article is coherent and forms a complete image.
14. The language of the article is fresh and vivid, the description can capture the important characteristics of things, the length is short and concise, and it is worth reading.
15. The content of this article is vivid and rich, the language is fresh and fresh, and the layout is unique and reasonable. Fourth grade composition comments 4
1) Make full use of language, action, and psychological description to make things concrete and vivid
2) Briefly describe the antecedents and foreshadowing
3) Reading your article, I seem to see a young writer thriving. come on!
4) Dialogue or some psychological description can be added to this part
5) It is more appropriate to change... to...,
6) Natural connection between the past and the following, detailed description Highlight the qualities of the characters and make people move
7) The narrative includes descriptions of scenes to save people and express their feelings
8) Personification of language makes the article more lively
< p>9) The description of the appearance is very interesting, highlighting that... the cute introduction incorporates his own thoughts and is infectious10) Add character behavior to make the picture vivid
11) This paragraph is redundant, why not delete it to make the article more concise
12) Use wonderful imagination and subtle metaphors
13) Childlike personifications and metaphors make the article radiant
14) This description is touching to read
15) The psychological description is delicate and metaphors are used well.
16) The use of ranking names is The article adds a lot of color
17) The taste is tempting and the artistic conception is profound
18) The metaphor is appropriate and the words are vivid
19)…with a relaxed and happy tone , told to us, it is endlessly memorable
20) The ending is implicit and highlights the theme. Fourth grade composition comments 5
1. Such beautiful handwriting and clear and strict structure can’t help but give people a refreshing feeling. The teacher should really learn from you. Let us promote each other in future Chinese studies, shall we?
2. The article is as simple and open-minded as you are. Your composition skills are very good, which is also the result of your long-term practice. I hope that in the future learning process, you will feel and appreciate life with your heart and write more touching and good articles.
3. Writing can speak louder than words. I think articles are a reflection of your soul. The road of life is indeed very tortuous and long, but as long as you work hard and persevere to move forward, the crown of success will belong to you.
4. Wen Neng and Qing. You should not regard writing as a burden to yourself, but should record your mental journey with a positive attitude and delicate writing style.
5. It can be said that your article is full of true feelings. As a human being, failure is inevitable, but having the courage to face failure is even more valuable. I believe that gold will always shine. I hope you adjust your mentality as soon as possible and you will find that the sky is bluer.
6. It’s true that “writing is like a god”. It seems that you must have read a lot of literature. Such rich content shows your literary skills. It's just that if the materials are adjusted in a certain logical order, this article will be more exciting.
7. After reading your article, it feels like a stream is flowing in front of me, pure and lovely. I hope you can maintain this style of writing and express rich connotations in pure language.
8. Composition is like being a human being. It can be seen from your life experience that you are a positive and motivated young man. You have your own unique insights and profound understanding of things, which is really valuable.
9. This article uses specific examples, vivid and beautiful language, and novel and unique writing methods to express the sincere praise for the beautiful soul
10. The beginning of the article is simple and appropriate through the description of the environment. It is very artistic to set off the character's mood. Fourth grade composition comments 6
1. The full text is clear, vivid, compact and interesting.
2. The language of the whole text is fluent, the writing is relaxed and natural, and it can be regarded as a relatively successful work.
3. The tone of the whole article is simple and humorous, making it full of wit and fun. It is hard to put down after reading it.
4. The article blends emotions into the scene, expresses emotions while depicting the scene, and is good at using metaphors to make the article vivid and concrete
5. The article is complex but not cluttered, and can do The details are appropriate and the key points are highlighted.
6. The case description is vivid, concrete and interesting, and is consistent with the previous metaphor... In the end, the author used a few words to express his feelings about..., which is touching.
7. The language of the article is fresh and lively, the description can capture the main characteristics of things, the length is short and concise, and it is worth reading.
8. This article is based on real life, the material is appropriate, very innovative, the paragraphs are clear, the transition is natural, full of interest, and highly readable.
9. The article can use fresh and interesting language to describe... The words between the lines are full of the true childishness of childhood, and the laughter is endless. It can be regarded as a masterpiece.
10. Appropriate detail and the coexistence of reality and fiction are the two major features of this article. ...The information is richer and more vivid.
11. The article is coherent and forms a complete image.
12. The full text has a bright rhythm, fresh language, and is always full of humor and fun. It is endless fun to read.
13. There are many noteworthy sentences in the whole text, which adds some literary interest to the article.
14. The author has a clever conception, is good at selecting points to expand on, and the writing is full of ups and downs and is thought-provoking.
15. Although the language in this article is not gorgeous, it is extremely accurate and vivid, rich in emotion and true, and it is enjoyable to read.
16. The close-ups are unique and full of interest. The full text is full of childlike innocence and fun, and makes you feel cordial when reading it.
17. The full text has a concentrated narrative, without branches or branches, with simple and smooth language and sincere and touching feelings.
18. Pay attention to observing specific things and develop appropriate imagination. This is the success of this article.
19. The article renders the atmosphere of... fully and appropriately, and depicts the key points of the article... in a delicate and vivid manner.
20. The article describes the events of... in the order of their development. The language is relatively fluent, the levels are clear, and it seems enjoyable from beginning to end.
21. The language of the full text is vivid and accurate, and the plot is exciting and tortuous. It seems to bring readers into a happy paradise, making people smile.
22. The article has novel information, reasonable structure, smoothness and coherence, and natural accessibility.
23. ... is realistic and contains simple and profound philosophy. It is inspiring and exciting to read.
24. The structure of the article is concise and reasonable, and the author has a very deep and thorough understanding of the original text. The language of the full text is sonorous and powerful, and it makes people excited and excited when reading it.
25. The information in this article is vivid and rich, the language is novel and refreshing, and the structure is unique and reasonable.
26. This article is full of vitality, and you can feel the author's love for... from between the lines. The full text is clear in level and the sentences are fluent.
27. The full text is easy to understand and interesting.
28. The full text is fresh and elegant, friendly and tactful, simple but not vulgar, and it is worth reading.
29. This composition uses novel materials, wonderful ideas, and vivid language. The fresh breath of life and children's interest are revealed between the lines.
30. The article is detailed and well-organized, and the information is vivid and concrete. It can be regarded as an excellent article. Comments on fourth-grade composition 7
1. The language is concise and standard, and the opening is attractive
2. It starts with... which is more innovative and tells the story of the causes and consequences
3. The opening is concise, concise and orderly; the key description... leaves a deep impression on people
4. It is quite innovative to start with a scene metaphor; the flashback starts to enhance the artistic conception
5. Go straight at the beginning Theme is also a way of writing
6. The beginning is very lively. The use of personification makes the beginning lively
7. The beginning of a rhetorical question attracts readers
8. The beginning Go straight to the topic and make it clear at a glance
9. The wording of the opening question is very attractive
10. The author is clever in conception and good at selecting points to expand the text. The ups and downs are intriguing and the language is lively, lively and interesting. Although the story is ordinary The emotion is sincere but touching. The ending of the article is unconventional and gives people a feeling of wanting to stop. Comments on fourth grade composition 8
1. The plot develops slowly and lacks a certain ups and downs.
2. The plot changes are bland and lack new ideas.
3. The plot is straightforward, without any suspense, and the narrative is straightforward and like a running account.
4. The process is detailed, but the ending is brief and incomplete. The structure is unreasonable and gives people a feeling of anticlimax.
5. The concept is unreasonable, the content is full of loopholes, and it cannot reflect the reality of life.
6. The plot has ups and downs, the transition is too fast, and it is not coherent and natural enough.
7. The metaphor is vivid and appropriate, and the ontology and metaphor are similar in form and spirit. The interest and persuasiveness of the article are greatly enhanced.
8. Appropriately use techniques such as contrast and comparison to effectively support the center of the article through the disparity and differences between things.
9. Use the technique of parallelism without losing any opportunity to explain the characteristics of things from many aspects, which not only enhances the momentum of the language, but also leaves a very deep impression on the readers.
10. Skillfully use personification techniques to make the objects in the article possess human behavioral characteristics and human thoughts and emotions, so that they can reflect the spiritual journey of the protagonist in the article from the side.
11. The selection of materials is too popular and not representative. The old themes and old ideas are bland.
12. Although events in life with certain narrative value were selected, due to the incomplete analysis and insufficient excavation, the underlying truth of the events could not be deeply reflected.
13. The selection of materials is bland, too old, vulgar, simple and childish, has no new ideas, and is difficult to profoundly reflect the authenticity of the contemporary life.
14. Failure to reflect big principles through small things, and the expression technique of "seeing big things from small things" is not skillful enough.
15. There is a lack of multi-angle portrayal of the characters. They only select a narrow subject matter and one-sidedly display a certain aspect of the character's personality characteristics.
16. Be able to choose themes with typical significance in life, and the events are highly representative.
17. The selection of materials is novel and unique, not mediocre, and sweeps away the pedantic atmosphere, which is refreshing.
18. Although the story is ordinary, the analysis is thorough and reasonable, and the rationality is deep, highlighting the essence of the incident.
19. Although the incident is small, it reflects a profound truth and has certain universality.
20. The materials are selected from multiple aspects and angles, fully reflecting the personality characteristics of the characters and making the characters full-bodied. Fourth grade composition comments 9
1. The language is simple, the feelings are flat, and the affection is not deep enough.
2. The emotion is too strong, and it doesn’t seem to be expressed out of emotion. Instead, it is just showing off and being sentimental.
3. The emotion lacks depth, and it fails to express feelings through scenes, and fails to generate feelings from things. Although feelings are hidden in the text, they fail to be deeply explored.
4. The psychological portrayal is not vivid and specific enough, and fails to effectively express the character’s ideological attitude, likes and dislikes. Principle: Repeatedly emphasize the author's point of view from different angles and aspects, with thorough reasoning and clear intention.
5. Quote classic examples of famous quotes, which are more persuasive and can express the author's point of view more effectively.
6. The arguments are sufficient and powerful, the analysis is thorough and reasonable, and the philosophy is strong.
7. The examples are rich, the materials are properly selected, the descriptions are detailed and appropriate, and it is more convincing.
8. Strong emotions, like a volcano erupting, gurgling out, can deeply move readers.
9. Sincere feelings and deep affection are like mellow wine, making people drunk without drinking.
10. The emotions are real and natural, without any pretense, and the true feelings can be realized with a calm heart.
11. The inner process is real and delicate, and the characters’ thoughts and attitudes are clearly visible to the readers.
12. The feelings are true and delicate, and the words are touching. They are indeed words from the author’s heart.
13. Seek gains and losses in life from self-reflection, reveal true feelings in repentance, and the words are sonorous and powerful, shocking.
14. The sentences are fluent, the meaning of the sentences is smooth, the words are beautiful, the narrative images are vivid and vivid, and the language expression ability is strong.
15. The language is concise and to the point, concise and concise, and the expression is concise and powerful. The writing is full of power, and a few words can convey the spirit of the character.
16. The language is smooth and clear, the description is detailed, and the description is vivid; the meaning of the sentence is implicit and euphemistic, and contains deep meaning. After reading, it is like the lingering fragrance after drinking, which lingers in your mouth.
17. The language is lively, humorous and makes people laugh.
18. The behavioral descriptions are carefully worded and accurate, and the series of verbs vividly highlight the character’s psychological state and highlight the character’s personality traits.
19. The language is basically fluent, with occasional problems.
20. The language is not clear enough, the meaning of the sentences is vague, and the teeth are twisted and awkward, which is difficult to understand. The sentences are long-winded, do not convey the meaning, are only detailed but not omitted, and are full of redundancy. Fourth grade composition comments 10
1. It captures the characteristics of " " and is very accurate; " " gives people the feeling of " ".
2. When describing the scenery, write down your own experience and express your inner feelings. For example, the surprise when you find the first grass sprouting, the excitement when you see the swallows building a nest under the eaves of your house, the admiration when you smell the fragrance of peach blossoms, the joy when you hear the teacher announcing spring outings... these They are all inner feelings. While describing the scenery, appropriately expressing inner feelings and even associations will make the work more vivid and real, and will also move others.
3. Write down all the beautiful things about spring that you see, hear, smell, and feel into your homework, so that your homework will be as vivid and beautiful as spring!
< p> 4. Kite flying is children’s favorite activity, and the fun is self-evident. Through detailed description, the colorful flying scenes of kites in the sky are shown.5. Reading your exercises, let us see how lovely and crystal clear a childlike innocence is.
6. Grasp the different characteristics of spring, such as grass, trees and flowers, and follow the order of " " to depict the vibrant scene of spring and reflect your sincere joy.
7. The scene of happy play of " " is vividly written, the language is vivid, the description is specific, and the beauty of " " is written using vivid metaphors.
8. " "; coupled with the breeze and the fragrance of willow flowers, the spring in the pen is like a poem, so beautiful!
9. The description of " " and " " is very distinctive , quite childish and refreshing, and the ancient poem quote " " is also very appropriate, which enhances the expressive effect of the article.
10. The " " in spring is so beautiful. I captured the " " and wrote the characteristics of " " and the characteristics of " ". Although we have all seen these scenery, through the Your careful observation gives us a new feeling.
11. Observe carefully and write clearly the characteristics of " " according to the method of summarizing first and then dividing. The language is accurate and the images are concrete, giving us an immersive experience.
12. This passage has a general description and a specific description, some dynamic and some static, and it describes the cuteness of " ". I took care of everything before and after the composition, observed carefully, and even wrote down my own feelings about it.
13. Because of the rich associations, the writing is full of brilliance. Look, compare " " to " ", compare " " to " ", how vividly these metaphors are written. " ".
14. Write scenes to capture the characteristics of the scenery, describe the blending of scenes, from far to near, from surface to point, handle it in an orderly manner, and the written articles are even more organized, and the scenes have different shapes and colors. Capture the shape characteristics.
15. In your writing, "" is like a small garden, so full of life. The description of "" is unfolded in order, making it clear to read.
16. From the outside to the inside, the characteristics of "" are introduced. The observations are sequential and detailed. The writing is accurate and vivid, mobilizing multiple senses, and the content is real and specific.
17. First write "", then "", then "", and finally "". How clear the writing idea is and how delicate the description is. Look, use appropriate metaphors to write "" It is vivid and realistic, highlighting the beautiful scenery of spring. In addition, the "" scene is also written vividly and expressively, highlighting the word "乐", how wonderful it is to have scenery and feelings.
18. Write out the characteristics and new ideas, the beauty of the scenery - natural beauty; the beauty of people - the lovely, innocent and flawless beauty.
19. The quiet picture is full of vitality and vitality. The beauty of nature is both quiet and dynamic - it is all beautiful. What if there is no movement? So you think of it again - ――
20. Spring has come quietly, and it has spread everywhere inadvertently. The pace of spring is really unstoppable. Fourth grade composition comments 11
1 , the thinking is (not) clear, the punctuation is (not) correct, the structure is (not) complete, and the wording is (not) accurate enough,
2. In chronological order, introduce the Yongfeng Spring Festival in a clear and coherent manner. Customs
3. Can reflect the lively scenes of the Spring Festival through specific examples.
4. The details are appropriate, and the festive atmosphere of the Spring Festival is written
5. The wording is accurate and the description is vivid, reflecting the excitement and people of the traditional Spring Festival
6. Expresses the author’s infinite happiness
7. While describing traditional customs, he can write his own unique feelings. Negative comments:
8. Inappropriate details, covering every aspect, keeping a running account, without focusing on the key points
9. Some customs are not introduced in detail.
10. Did not write down my unique feelings
11. The language is plain and not vivid enough.
12. Confused and disorganized thinking. Fourth grade composition comments 12
1. The language of the article is vivid, rich and readable.
2. The beginning is extraordinary and attracts readers
3. The beginning is touching and has real feelings.
4. The very clear explanation at the beginning of the article plays the role of leading the whole article.
5. The novel selection of the article arouses the readers’ desire to read on.
6. The article ends with..., which is concise and concise.
7. The full text narrative is not concentrated. Zhi Buman's language is simple and smooth, the emotions are sincere and touching
8. The character's ideological quality is set off by enriching the character's language and actions. The article is imaginative and reasonable. The narrative is natural and vivid, the structure is compact, the connection is natural and coherent, the center is prominent
9. The language is simple, the center is clear, the conception is reasonable, the writing is clear and the level is clear
10. It is indeed rare to be able to write the inner activities of the characters very vividly, which leaves a deep impression on people. The beginning and end of the article refer to the center, the clear structure is complete
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