If a person has no long-term worries, he must have immediate worries.

——Confucius

The process of growth is a process of absorbing others and showing oneself. It is long and short, and there is no end to life. We must always move forward and rush to a new station in life. During this process, we might as well take a walk and take a look to see whether our ambitions are lofty, whether our life is ordinary but also extraordinary, and whether our personality is perfect.

Be able to be at the top of the mountain and see all the small mountains at a glance

Gorky once said: "The higher the goal a person pursues, the faster his talents develop and the more beneficial he is to society. "Who doesn't have ideals and who doesn't yearn for success? Determination is the starting point of success. With great ideals and unremitting efforts, through climbing up to eighty-eight, slow and eighteen, you will definitely be able to climb up. Reach the pinnacle of success. Gorky lived in a divorced family, read and wrote in prison and under the whip of his boss, and finally became the first proletarian writer, writing "Mother", "Childhood", "In the World", "My University", etc. A masterpiece. Reading Gorky's story, I couldn't help but wish to be a writer, study hard, and write hard... As for the pressure of study, the pain of growing up, and the sarcasm of classmates and teachers, what does it matter? Yang Le wrote in his mathematics textbook " The ideal of "Chinese Academy of Sciences", Saint-Simon's first words when he opened the door were "Get up, great things are waiting for you". Darwin was about to travel around the world when he was nine years old. Zhu De was determined to "revolution from the beginning" and finally joined the Communist Party of China. The Communist Party...

Don’t be happy with things, don’t be sad with yourself

Edison had more than a thousand inventions, what is the secret of his success? "No matter when, no matter what , I will never allow myself to be a little discouraged. "Optimism is confidence in one's own abilities and a reflection of a happy spirit. Looking at the talented people in ancient and modern times, who did not face reality, take countermeasures and get out of the predicament?

Fan Zhongyan was lonely and poor since he was a child, and he studied hard. When he was young, he had high ambitions and took the world as his own responsibility. He said: If a person cannot study and have great ambitions, even if he can eat and drink well, there is little point in living a comfortable life. If you are greedy for delicious food, how can you endure hardship in the future? In life, you can look down on fame, fortune, and suffering, like Tao Yuanming, who "does not worry about poverty and lowliness, and does not indulge in wealth." Zhuge Liang, who believes that "tranquility can never reach far", must learn to give up, establish the correct optimism of bitterness, and achieve what the Ming Dynasty scholar Hong Yingming said: "There is no intention to go or stay, smiling at the clouds rolling in the sky; unfazed by favors and humiliations, watching the flowers bloom and fall in front of the court." Realm, our state of mind is far away from the hustle and bustle and closer to nature. You will be happy and devote yourself to study and work. Success will definitely knock on your door. Just think, don’t celebrities all achieve success with such a mentality?

I have something to remember

In human history, almost all those who achieve their careers rely on their friends Success in life and career is achieved through the joint efforts of comrades, comrades, and the collective. This is how Ji Xiaolan compiled the "Sikuquanshu", how Bao Zheng handles cases, and how Deng Jiaxian, the father of two bombs, is like this. Winning the support of more people is the power for your success.

Improve yourself! Be honest and sincere, Qi Huangyang, a man who "does not avoid enemies when doing things externally, and does not avoid relatives when doing things internally", Bill Gates "only needs a phone call to do it" Replace any part" letter. Try to adapt to the general public. In the melting pot of society, like Lei Feng, Lai Ning, and Xu Honggang, you will run wherever you are needed. "If you want to get something, you must first give it to it."

Dedicate your youth , dedicate your strength, and you will shine like a star on the land of China!

[Comments]

This is an argumentative essay with profound intentions and rigorous arguments. The article puts forward the central argument straight to the point. It discusses the need for people to "see while walking" in the process of growth from three aspects: ambition, life and self. In the process of discussion, some famous quotes are used to explain the truth, or some examples are summarized to demonstrate, and the discussion is profound and powerful. Each of the three sub-titles has its own focus, and each part highlights the influence of celebrities on themselves, and then reveals the strength and experience gained from celebrities, which is quite powerful and profound. The detailed information, fluent language, and novel form are the fundamental reasons why this article received full marks.

Excellent Work 2

Autumn Wind and Autumn Rain Touch My Heart (One Candidate from Xuzhou, Jiangsu Province)

What are ignorance and barbarism, and what is their opponent - civilization? Every In one fight, civilization may not be defeated, so we. Shout for it from far and near.

——Inscription

Scream

“Our ancestors haven’t finished speaking yet. We don’t have to be so filial, but why not listen quietly? Ask a few questions when you don’t understand.

"Listening to the chirping of birds and waves under the Sha Tin in Hong Kong, and thinking about the past and future of his hometown, a scholar is bidding farewell to ignorance, accusing barbarism, and shouting for the victory of civilization!

Who is he? With the famous Befriended the painter Liu Guosong, met with Nobel Prize winner Yang Zhenning, lectured in Hong Kong, and was thinking all the time while wearing glasses... Yu Qiuyu, a scholar and famous essayist, wrote "Notes on a Mountain Dwelling" in this autumn season. Series...

Ten years later when I understood all this, I entered middle school, faced with more than 500 pages of "Autumn Rain Prose", and read "The Back of a Dynasty", "Su Dongpo's Breakout" and "The Fragile Capital" flashed before my eyes the pleasant summer resort, the ancient city of Pompeii, the angry Li Bai, and Lin Bu who burned the harp and cooked the crane... History is shouting, and the literati are shouting: Give me back Fairness, give me my freedom! Yu Qiuyu is shouting: Calling for civilization, calling for sincerity!

I want to point out the country, inspire words, call for civilization, and call for peace! When I was in the first grade of junior high school, I dreamed of being a writer.

Wandering

"You are already in the second grade of junior high school and you still don't know how to study? Just read extracurricular books!" After the class teacher finished speaking, he took away my copy of "Morning Blossoms Picked Up at Dusk"

"Student XX, the article you wrote is very beautiful, but there is still a certain gap between the level of publication and publication. Please remit 100 yuan to you for publication..." I sent the article more than ten times, and most of them received reminder notes. .

"Well, so what if I got a perfect score in the Chinese language test? With my level of mathematics..." The math teacher looked helpless.

After the mid-term exam, I was depressed and confused. Are there so many obstacles on the road to being a writer? Li Bai's boat cannot return to Wan Zhong Mountain, Fan Zhongyan's worry about the world turns into the general's white hair and his husband's tears, and even the great scholar and great writer Yu Qiuyu He was also thinking about how human beings defeated barbarism but civilization was rejected everywhere. A series of articles he wrote were not recognized as prose... Thinking of this, I couldn't help but pick up {Recitation of Ancient Poems and Essays" and start "Mathematics Lessons"... …

New story

"Are you the Mr. A who wrote {A Thousand Years of Smile", "Civilized Travel Notes", and "The Fairy of Hundred Flowers Travels in the Universe"? Very good, you have my style, But the depth of thinking has increased. "Mr. Yu Qiuyu held my hand at the Bell Award Ceremony and said.

"Where? My "Civilized Travel Notes" was influenced by your "Fragments of Civilization", and "A Thousand Years of Smile" is the " A companion piece to "A Sigh of a Thousand Years". It was your article that inspired me and led me to embark on the path of true prose culture. "I said from the bottom of my heart.

"Civilization must be inherited and developed, and culture must be inherited and innovated! Let us work together for the take-off of Chinese prose!"

When I woke up from a sweet dream, I just remembered to be Yu Qiuyu second, and he seemed to tell me; if you want to do it, be yourself first.

[Comment]

This is it. A rare essay with a perfect score for the high school entrance examination. It introduces the process of "getting acquainted", "getting to know each other" and "meeting" with Yu Qiuyu in a detailed and concrete way, using exquisite conception, vivid language and unique composition method, giving people an immersive experience. There are two unique features in the writing of this article: First, the candidates can connect with the writer's works, associate with their own lives, and imagine a better future, which transcends time and space, reflecting the "dispersion of form but persistence of spirit" in prose. The second is the use of inscriptions and subtitles. The inscriptions refer to the whole article and point out the theme of the article, giving it new connotations and integrating Yu Qiuyu with "my" life. It not only summarizes the contents of each part, but also appears eye-catching and vivid.

Meet Li Bai (an examinee in Xuzhou, Jiangsu)

In one book. In the early morning, Li Bai, who was dressed in white and elegant, approached me; in the night when the moon was full in the west building, my clothes were getting wider, and I approached Li Bai who was haggard and thin.

I first met Li Bai. Li Bai’s song of homesickness has resonated through the ages. “The bright moonlight in front of the bed is suspected to be frost on the ground. Raise your head to look at the bright moon, lower your head to think about your hometown. "We have been in love for thousands of years. From then on, Li Bai and I have an inseparable complex.

In the prosperous Tang Dynasty when the golden powder of the Six Dynasties and the music of the Sui Dynasty gathered together, Li Bai was a myth. He had great ambitions and feet. Traveling to Chang'an, he wrote his own legend at the feet of the emperor. "The wine man is filled with sorrow, three parts of it roar into sword energy, seven parts turn into moonlight, and half of the prosperous Tang Dynasty is revealed." "What a rebellious Li Bai! "The powerful man took off his boots, the noble concubine studied the ink", you helplessly wrote the Tang Dynasty court song "Gold and jade outside, but the ruins inside". Finally one day, the volcano erupted: "An Being able to crush my eyebrows and bend my waist to serve the powerful makes me unhappy. "You threw up your sleeves and walked away again, leaving behind a legend that has been passed down through the ages.

Li Bai has always been my idol. His spirit of unyielding to the powerful and daring to remonstrate has deeply influenced me: Chinese history has been five thousand years, and there are more than tens of thousands of heroes! A brief sip of "The Bright Moon in the Qin Dynasty" In the Han Dynasty, there were those who marched thousands of miles and the people have not yet returned." There were those who sang, "The yellow sand will wear golden armor in a hundred battles, and the Loulan will never be returned until the building is broken." There are those who shouted, "Every man is responsible for the rise and fall of a country."... The Chinese nation has countless heroes! Some people may say that Li Bai can't dance with guns and swords, and can't stain the battlefield with blood. Why should he be admired and worshiped by you? History will never forget: In the peaceful era of the Tang Dynasty, , in the prosperous age, how many people like Li Bai could have a look of righteousness in front of the emperor and a tone of contempt in front of the powerful? "I send my sorrow to the bright moon, and follow you to the west of the night", like Li Bai, in the presence of friends How many people can help with all their strength when in trouble? How many people like Li Bai can still be heroic when encountering difficulties and setbacks? History tells Us: Very few, very few.

When I am wasting my time, I will think of Li Bai and his saying "The water of the Yellow River comes up from the sky and rushes to the sea and never returns"; when I encounter difficulties, I will think of Li Bai and him. "There will be times when the wind and waves break, and the clouds and sails will be hung directly to help the sea"; when I am depressed, I will think of Li Bai and think of his "I am born with talents that will be useful, and thousands of gold scattered will come back"... Li Bai's poems will always be It attracts me, and Li Bai's thoughts always inspire me. In every flower blooming and falling, in every cloudy and sunny period, I will think of Li Bai and step into Li Bai's world. Li Bai is the "immortal of poetry" and an unparalleled celebrity.

[Comments]

This article writes about Li Bai, focusing on three aspects: first, the "eternal legend" left by Li Bai; second, through the relationship with "five thousand years of history" "The comparison of "thousands of heroes" strengthens Li Bai's contempt for powerful people, emphasis on friendship, and heroic character; the third is Li Bai's "influence" and "attraction" to me. Of these three aspects, the first two aspects are written from the front, focusing on Li Bai; the third aspect is written from the side, focusing on "self": highlighting Li Bai's eternal charm and charm from two different angles, both positive and negative. eternal.

Excellent Works 4

The subversion of thinking (a candidate from Xuzhou, Jiangsu)

When I heard about Sanmao for the first time, I thought he was the little one in "The Wanderings of Sanmao" I later found out that she was a Taiwanese female writer.

I fell in love with Sanmao the first time I read her article: I loved her life, her persistence, her freedom and ease, her beautifully decorated hut, her burning Vegetables cooked with a unique taste.

Reading her articles, you can feel her passion and love for life, her longing and desire for true love, and her wisdom and thinking about life.

Reading her articles, you will unknowingly enter the dream weaved by a girl with pure love. There are not only wonderful dreams, but also the subversion of rationality and the precipitation of wisdom.

A person who can stay away from his parents’ homeland, a person who can live in the Sahara Desert for a long time, a person who can support the pain of losing a husband, a person who can endure long-term loneliness, her feelings It must be profound, her spirit must be tenacious, and her thoughts must be rich.

She rose up in the face of adversity, left behind many works, spread shining ideas, and influenced the lives of one or even several generations. Sanmao is a woman who never gives up, is full of curiosity, is persistent and uninhibited, and is free and refreshing.

However, she left. Why did she leave? And, left in such a hurry? Was it because she lost her loved ones? Was it because of the gossip? Or was she losing the stars and moon in her life?... People gave various speculations. No, I always think it's because her thinking is exhausted and she wants to die to defend the dignity of her thinking.

Thinking is the essential difference between humans and animals. Everything in human beings is based on thought and is built on the edifice of thinking. When Sanmao lost her husband, she thought about death, but she realized that she could still think and write wise articles, so she survived strongly; and when her thinking dried up, she became completely desperate. So, she chose to die. She could only use death to defend her dignity.

Yes, Sanmao’s charm lies in the depth of her thinking. Thinking made Sanmao successful and led Sanmao to greatness.

Comments:

The title of "Subversion of Thinking" is refreshing.

This article writes about Sanmao and his "love" for Sanmao. "I love her character, her life, her persistence, her freedom and ease." I even love her cabin and the vegetables she stir-fries. If the young author only writes on this level, the idea can only remain mediocre; the valuable thing about the article is that it digs deeper, from the outside to the inside, and pens down to the inner part of the character; Sanmao's " "Wise thinking", "Thinking deeply". Sanmao's death lies in her "exhaustion of thinking"; Sanmao's charm lies in her "depth of thinking" and the spiritual shock her thinking leaves people. Undoubtedly, Sanmao's charm is unique, and the concept of the article is novel and profound.