Skills of high score in college entrance examination composition: use ancient poems skillfully and quote famous sentences of ancient poems wonderfully.
(A) the use or partial reference
It is to quote the famous sentences of classical poetry in the local position of the article, such as title, inscription, first paragraph, end of the article and so on. These places are located in prominent positions, which are easy to attract readers' attention and leave a good impression on readers.
Quoting ancient poems and famous sentences in the title can make the title look elegant, rich in literary talent and play a dazzling role. For example, in the composition of the 2004 Shanghai College Entrance Examination. Busy? For the topic, a candidate used Xiang Yu's? What if you are worried? Draw up a title? Busy, busy, but what? Criticize the impetuousness brought by modern urban civilization with calm and serious brushstrokes? Busy? , issued a lack of humanistic care for these? Busy? The helpless sigh and the deduction at the end make the article have a poetic aesthetic feeling besides serious thinking.
Embedding poems at the beginning of an article can make the whole body move, make the language concise and incisive, and make the commentators see it immediately? Peeping? Cultural accumulation and humanistic accomplishment of the author. For example, in 2004, the beginning of Shaanxi examinee "Looking for Happiness and Wonderful Life":? Walking on the path where the fallen leaves fall slowly in autumn, I can't help singing: Under the rustling of boundless leaves, endless sadness rolled in. ? Lament the sadness and misfortune of fallen leaves. In fact, the life of falling leaves may be like this, just asking for spring and colorful autumn colors. Change your mind, Gong Zizhen once said? Falling red is not heartless, but turning into spring mud can protect flowers better? Hmm! We should rejoice and enjoy the colorful autumn scenery. ? This beginning starts from the scene and becomes Du Fu's? Leaves fall like the spray of a waterfall, while I watch the long river roll forward? , naturally leads to the association of fallen leaves, and then quotes Gong Zizhen's famous sentence, which is properly interpreted? Happiness and our way of thinking? The connotation of this philosophical topic. The beginning is profound and poetic.
Quoting ancient poems at the end of the article has the effect of making the finishing point, enlightening people, subliming the main idea and receiving endless expression effects. For example, in 2004, the end of Fujian candidates' "relying on the sea and relying on the sky":? Have you seen how the water of the Yellow River left heaven and flowed into the ocean, never to return? How lovely it was locked in a bright mirror in a high room, although it was silky black in the morning and turned into snow at night? Time flies like water, time is like electricity, maybe only history can make it? Is the headstone full of words? Perhaps only history can best interpret what Zeng Guofan wrote when he added himself to the sky. There are countless flowers in the sea that depend on the sky, and flowing water has self-knowledge. The three quotations are appropriate and natural, which makes the article colorful and profound, and makes a dialectical and profound evaluation of Zeng Guofan, a historical figure. Is it really beautiful and amazing? Leopard tail? .
(two) long or a large number of citations
It refers not only to a large number of citations in the whole paragraph, but also to a large number of citations in all paragraphs of the full text. Due to the profound cultural accumulation of ancient poetry, a large number of allusions from many places will greatly enhance the cultural taste and aesthetic taste of the article and enrich the inside story of the article. The whole passage is quoted from the excellent composition "The Meaning of Loneliness" in the 2000 college entrance examination: What is loneliness? Once upon a time, what did Li sing? Until, holding up my cup, I asked the bright moon to bring me my shadow and let the three of us? Also, loneliness is the feeling that the moon is in the sky, the wind is like water, everything is silent and inseparable! Once upon a time, Li Houzhu regretted it? Alone in the west wing, the bright moon is like a hook, and the lonely phoenix tree deep courtyard locks the clear autumn? Perhaps, loneliness is a deep palace compound, and worrying about the country and the people is also a love entanglement! Once upon a time, Chen Ziang lamented? Where were those lost times before me? Behind me, where are the future generations? I think of heaven and earth, there is no limit, there is no end, I am alone, and my tears fall down? Perhaps, loneliness is the kind of melancholy mood that the grass remains the same, the sky remains the same, and things are transformed! So, I asked the moon, and Chang 'e of Guanghan Palace told me, what is loneliness? The shadow of mica screen candle is deep, and the long river gradually falls into the morning star. what's up Blue sky, clear night heart? . What is loneliness? I can't answer this question. ? Quote five famous sentences in a paragraph as the carrier of emotion and justice in the article. Lonely? It has profound cultural connotation, which not only adds bright colors to the article, but also enhances the persuasiveness and appeal of the argument, making the article rich in connotation, full of elegant poetry and rich humanistic atmosphere.
However, the excellent composition of Sichuan college entrance examination in 2003, which is quoted in many places in the whole article, is a model. This article takes Su Shi's famous sentences as the topic, and deduces the topic of the composition very appropriately and implicitly. Emotional intimacy and cognition of things? ; And quote Cui Hu? Last spring, in this door, the girl's face contrasted with the peach. People don't know where to go, but peach blossoms are still smiling in the spring breeze. , will naturally lead to, right? Emotion and cognition? Understand the relationship and establish the main idea of the article; Then I followed the first paragraph and quoted Li Qingzhao's Dream? Last night, it rained suddenly and the wind blew. Du Fu's "The Hut was Blown by Autumn Wind" and Su Shi's "Nian Nu Jiao"? Du Mu's "Red Cliff Nostalgia" and "Red Cliff" further elaborated this theme from several angles, vivid and rational. Su Shi's At the Last? I don't know the true face of Lushan Mountain? Close the full text. Throughout the whole text, the proper quotation and embedding of classical poems make philosophical thinking and emotional expression profound and profound, and make the article have a high cultural taste.
Second, cleverly set up the structure of ancient poetry.
The ancients paid great attention to the composition of poetry. Every poem or article has its complete writing structure and writing context. In addition, the ancient poetry itself is concise and harmonious. Using ancient poetry to lay the writing structure of the article can not only make the article structured and clear, but also give people an elegant and beautiful feeling, which can impress readers in the shortest time. At this point, the excellent composition "Pipa Star's Parents Have Feelings" in Hunan College Entrance Examination in 2004 is a model. Bai Juyi's "Pipa Journey" runs through the whole article with the performance of the pipa girl, which integrates the emotional appeal of music with the feelings of the performer and the listener, and sets off the story of the pipa girl and the poet's anguish. Its writing structure is in harmony with emotional expression, and it is a wonderful work of a long song. The beauty of the composition of Pipa Xing Parents Love lies in directly applying the structure of white poems, directly extracting poems about music description from Pipa Xing, and weaving the structure of the full text. ... she turned the tuning pin and tested several strings, so we could feel her feelings even before she played? ,? Is the flower bottom slippery? ,? Big strings hum like rain, and small strings whisper like secrets. Humming, whispering-then the good and the bad are mixed, and the big beads and the small beads fall on the jade plate? ,? The ice spring is cold and astringent, as if it can't pass; And notes, fade away. Don't worry about life, silence is better than sound? ,? Moreover, before she put down the pick, she only played it once, and the four strings made a sound, just like tearing silk? ,? But which of them cried the most? The eye is bright with tears (what is the original poem? This Jiujiang official. My blue sleeves are wet? )? . In Pipa Xing, these verses are the key verses that connect the poetic content and weave the lyrical context. They are cited as language symbols of article transformation, which not only skillfully string together the stories of parents from childhood to adulthood. Me? Concern and education about some details of life also make the structure of the article open and close, and it has a unique flavor to read.
Third, imitate the language of ancient poetry.
The language of college entrance examination composition should not only be as appropriate and accurate as possible according to the needs of the article, but also reflect personality as much as possible. If you have a solid foundation in classical Chinese, you might as well imitate the language of classical poetry and express your modernity in writing. This is undoubtedly a composition for the college entrance examination? Brilliant? Coup. There are successful examples in this aspect in college entrance examination compositions over the years, such as The Death of a Red Rabbit written by Nanjing examinee Jiang Xinjie in 200 1 2002, The Book of Advising Qu Yuan written by Jiangsu examinee in 2002, The Story of a Fool written by Sichuan examinee in 2003 and The Turning Point written by Beijing examinee. In addition, it is worth mentioning that in 2002, Jiangsu candidates wrote a five-character narrative poem "Peacock Flying Southeast", the language of which was born out of Gu Yuefu's famous poem "Peacock Flying Southeast", with a talented person interested in the development of the western region as the narrative center, which was well written. Please look at the beginning:? Peacocks fly southeast and wander for five miles. He entered primary school at the age of five, entered provincial middle school at the age of nine, traveled to Nantah at the age of fifteen, and was a graduate student at the age of twenty. I have good conditions in my life, so I don't need to find a job. The master's grandmother also praised, and Aunt Xi also praised. My sister and brother are laughing, and my parents are very happy! Good people come down in one continuous line, all over Nanjing. ?
These excellent college entrance examination compositions, on the basis of drawing lessons from classical poetry and prose language, show the author's writing talent, profound ancient prose accomplishment and good language control ability.
In the preparation stage, if we can combine the preparation of ancient poetry with the preparation of composition, pay attention to accumulation and internalize it into our own accumulation, maybe we can find more and better ways to write an article? Brilliant? Come to the college entrance examination composition.