First, handwriting.

A, the handwriting is delicate and neat, just like the streets of seaside towns, with no dirt at all? Straight handwriting is really comfortable to read, isn't it? Your handwriting is as beautiful as it is printed?

B, whatever, why doesn't the word look like a cat? The words are not in the middle of the grid, of course they don't look good? Your handwriting is crooked. Is it because of the strong wind today? I don't believe your handwriting is not good, and you will continue to scribble like this? Write carefully and patiently, and you will write better than me?

Second, the content

A, is this rich content similar to what the writer wrote? Your exercise is flesh and blood. Reading is really a pleasure, isn't it? Your composition is very specific, and I like reading it very much.

1. The content is close to modern life, novel and unique, grasping the pulse of the times and showing the flavor of the times.

2. The context is clear, the sense of hierarchy is strong, and the narrative is orderly and not chaotic.

3. Proper details, clear priorities and clear thinking. Carefully selected, the material seems to be tailor-made for the theme.

4. The narrative is detailed and concrete, the details are vivid and vivid, the characters are vivid and prominent, and the images are full and vivid.

5. Use the environment to set off the emotions of the characters, and the scenes blend, the feelings are in the scene, and the scene is in the scene.

6. Rich imagination, strange ideas, not divorced from the truth of life, tied with the association of life, broaden the reader's thinking and make people feel lively and interesting.

7. Scenery description is vivid and lifelike, words and sentences are appropriate, scenes are born together, and scenes blend together, just like a vivid sketch painting presented to readers.

8. Imagination is wonderful. It not only comes from life, but also transcends life, broadens readers' horizons and is full of artistic charm.

9. The description of the event process is detailed and specific. Although there are many contents, it seems to be orderly, which reflects the author's clear thinking and planning ability for the layout of the article.

10. The appearance is lifelike, the characters are lifelike, and the clothes are decent, just like a mirror reflecting the characters' personality, which is really called "life depends on each other".

1 1. The description of the environment is objective and true, and the environment serves the characters, which better explains the ins and outs of the formation of the characters' personalities.

12. The expression is vivid and vivid, and there are not many words, which outline the personality characteristics of the characters at a glance. The words and manners of the characters have distinct and unique personalities.

The contents before and after (1) are not closely related, and some contents are too isolated and not closely related to the main body of the article.

(2) The narrative is short and rough, with only a frame structure, and the characters lack distinctive personality characteristics.

(3) Improper arrangement of details and unclear priorities.

(4) The content is mostly outlined by lines, and there is a lack of detailed description based on points.

⑤ It doesn't match the flavor of the times, and the content is too old and aging.

B, the dry content is like boiled water, and there is no taste at all. Just add some beautiful words and phrases and it will be delicious? Not as many words as primary school students (or name other poor students), don't you feel a little embarrassed? Your composition is like the mouth of a 90-year-old woman. It's dry and empty, and it's all missing?

Third, the theme

1. Focus is prominent, the center is clear, and the thinking is clear.

2. Clear views, clear likes and dislikes, making people clear at a glance.

3. Directly highlight the theme in the content, clear and to the point, without redundancy.

4. The theme is serious, the thought is noble, and the enterprise is strong.

(1). The center is not clear enough and the concept is not clear enough.

⑵. The theme is obscure, the meaning is vague, and the purpose of writing is unknown.

(3) Although there is a central theme, the expression is not strong enough, but it is empty and powerless.

The theme is not serious enough, and there are still dross in thought.

Fourth, the plot

1. The plot is tortuous, and the narrative process has a certain sense of ups and downs, which reflects the curvy beauty of the plot and is fascinating.

2. The plot is strong in faltering, and there are accidents at ordinary times, which can attract readers' attention.

3. The plot changes unconventional, with occasional suspense, waves and surprises. The development process of the event embodies the author's innovative ideas.

(1). The plot develops smoothly and lacks certain ups and downs.

(2) The plot changes are unremarkable and lack new ideas.

(3) The plot is straightforward and there is no suspense, just like keeping a running account.

(4) The process is detailed, but the ending is short and incomplete. The structure is unreasonable, giving people the feeling of anticlimactic.

5. The idea is unreasonable and the content is full of loopholes, which can't reflect the truth of life.

[6]. The plot fluctuates greatly, and the conversion is too fast and not coherent enough.

Verb (abbreviation of verb) sentence

A, fluent and vivid sentences, like Lushan Waterfall, fly down, very smooth? The metaphor is very appropriate, which means that you have been observing carefully? How did you come up with such a clever personification sentence? How appropriate is the rhetorical question here? Does this exclamation express your true feelings at that time? The quotation of ancient poetry is just right. Do you want to use the poems you have learned in your future composition? The use of two-part allegorical sayings is wonderful, which makes my stomach ache?

1. The sentence is fluent, the sentence meaning is fluent, the text is beautiful, the narrative is vivid, the image is vivid, and the language expression ability is strong.

2. The language is concise, to the point, to the point, concise and powerful, full of pen power, and a few words can convey the appearance of the characters.

3. The language is fluent, detailed and vivid; The meaning of the sentence is implicit and euphemistic, with profound implications. After reading it, it is like a lingering fragrance after drinking.

4. The language is vivid and humorous, which makes people laugh.

5. Behavior description

The words are delicate and accurate, and the verb series vividly highlights the psychological state of the characters and points out their personality characteristics. (1). The language is basically fluent, occasionally fluent.

(2) The language is not fluent enough, and the meaning of the sentence is vague and puzzling.

(3) The statement was wordy, but it didn't convey the meaning. It's just detailed and verbose.

(4) The language is too brief, which looks like an outline narrative, but it fails to get an outline, with incomplete meaning and dull, dry and lifeless narrative.

B, the composition is bumpy and uncomfortable to read, just like walking on a bumpy road in the country, and it is easy to fall down if you are not careful? Who seems to have cut off the sentence, which is incomplete? Look carefully after writing, and you will find something meaningless? Don't be afraid of trouble, all the good articles have been changed? You can't always count on others to help you correct, but learn to correct every sentence yourself?

Sixth, rhetoric:

1. The metaphor is vivid, vivid and appropriate, and the ontology is similar to the metaphor, which greatly enhances the interest and persuasiveness of the article.

2. Appropriate use of contrast, comparison and other methods, through the disparity and differences between things, effectively prove the center of the article.

3. Taking advantage of parallelism to explain the characteristics of things in many ways not only enhances the language potential, but also leaves a very deep impression on readers.

4. Using personification skillfully, the images in the text have the characteristics of human behavior, thoughts and feelings, and reflect the spiritual course of the protagonist in the text from the side.

Seven, material selection:

1. Can choose typical themes in life, and the events are more representative. 2. The selection of materials is novel and unique, not mediocre, and it is refreshing to sweep away pedantry.

3. Although it describes ordinary things, the analysis is thorough and reasonable, and the rational excavation is deep, which highlights the essence of the event. Although the incident is small, it reflects profound truth and has certain universality.

5. Multi-angle material selection fully reflects the personality characteristics of the characters, and the characters are full. (1). The selection of materials is too popular and unrepresentative, and the old themes and ideas are unremarkable.

⑵. Although the events with certain narrative value in life are selected, the hidden truth of the events cannot be deeply reflected due to the incomplete analysis and excavation.

(3) The selection of materials is dull, too old, vulgar, simple and naive, and there is no new idea, so it is difficult to profoundly reflect the times and authenticity of life.

(4) Failing to reflect the truth through trivial matters, and using the expression of "seeing the big from the small" is not skilled enough.

5. Lack of multi-angle description of the characters, only a narrow theme is selected, showing the one-sided personality characteristics of the characters.

Eight, emotion:

1. Strong feelings, such as volcanic eruption and bubbling out, can deeply impress readers.

2. Sincere feelings, strong feelings, like mellow wine, make people drunk if they don't drink it.

3. Emotions are true and natural, and there is no suspicion of affectation. Show your true feelings with a plain heart.

4. The mental journey is true and delicate, and the thoughts and attitudes of the characters are clear to the readers at a glance.

The feelings are true and delicate, and the words are touching, which really comes from the author's heart.

6. Seek the gains and losses of life from self-reflection, reveal the true feelings in confession, and the words are powerful and shocking.

(1). The language is simple, the feelings are dull, and the affection is not deep enough.

The emotion is too strong, as if there is no emotion. On the contrary, they are coquettish and complacent.

⑶. Emotion lacks depth, fails to convey feelings through scenes, and fails to generate feelings from events. Although feelings are hidden in words, they fail to dig deep.

(4) Psychological depiction is not vivid and concrete enough to effectively express the characters' thoughts, attitudes and likes and dislikes.

Nine, things:

1. Repeatedly emphasize the author's point of view from different angles and aspects, with thorough reasoning and clear thinking.

2. Quoting famous sayings and classic examples is more convincing and can express the author's point of view more powerfully.

3. Strong arguments, thorough and reasonable analysis and strong philosophy.

4. Rich examples, proper selection and description are more convincing.

(1). The logical reasoning ability is weak and the evidence is not conclusive enough.

(2) Failing to tell the truth, telling the truth, shaping true personality and expressing unique individuals.

X. level

A. Is the paragraph clearly divided? Is the paragraph division appropriate? A paragraph has a meaning and different levels?

B, the level is chaotic, and the section contains so much content that you feel breathless after reading it? There are too few points in the bar. Are you reluctant to add more? The middle part can be divided into several sections. The first section and the second section should not be separated, but should be combined? This section cannot be linked with the previous section?

XI。 detail

A, focus? The key part is very detailed, not bad? Described what happened in detail? The scenic spots are described in the order of tour. What are the key points?

Sections b and x are too wordy? I can't see the meaning of this composition. Is there anything that is not important that should be simply written out?

Twelve. theme

A, the topic is fresh, like bamboo shoots in spring, tender and crisp? The topic is so interesting that people can't help but want to read it? Tell me, where did you come up with such a wonderful topic? Punctuation marks (ellipsis, question mark, exclamation mark, dash) are added to the title. What is the difference from others? I really like your interesting topic?

B, the topic is the same, people are not interested in reading your composition? Everyone can think of such a topic, isn't it too general? The content doesn't seem to match the title? Use your head. What topic is more appropriate? I think the title is "?" Better, more appropriate?

Thirteen. punctuate

A punctuation marks are very regular, which shows that you are an honest person? Punctuation marks are accurate?

B, the content is wonderful, the punctuation is sloppy, and everyone doesn't want to read your composition. I lost a lot of punctuation marks. Do you want me to read it in one breath and suffocate me? Punctuation is not delicious, is it? Too many punctuation marks make you dance like a basket case? I hope you can do every punctuation carefully. Should we stop when the meaning of a sentence is finished? Ellipsis occupies two squares, so you can't type it in one square?

Fourteen General comments

1. The article is miscellaneous but not chaotic, but it can be detailed and focused.

This article fully and appropriately renders the atmosphere of … and gives a detailed and vivid description of the key points of the article.

3 ... it is practical, contains simple and profound philosophy, and is exciting and moving to read.

This article is full of passion. Between the lines, we can understand the little author's love for …. The full text has distinct levels and fluent sentences.

The narrative of the case is vivid, concrete and interesting, which is in line with the previous metaphor. Finally, the author expressed his feelings for … in a few words, which is touching.

6. The article is well organized and forms a complete image.

7. The language of the article is fresh and lively, the description can grasp the main features of things, and the length is short and pithy, which is worth reading.

8. The content of this article is vivid and rich, the language is novel and refreshing, and the structure is unique and reasonable.

9. The article is meticulous, orderly, vivid and concrete, which is a masterpiece.

10. The close-up is unique and interesting. The full text is full of childlike innocence and interest, and it is very kind to read.

1 1. The article can be described in fresh and interesting language ... Between the lines, it is full of childlike interest and laughter, which is a masterpiece.

12. Appropriate details and the combination of reality and reality are the two major characteristics of this article, which is also the content of this article ... richer and more vivid.

13. The full text is fresh and elegant, friendly and euphemistic, simple and unconventional, which is worth learning.

14. The full-text language is vivid and accurate, and the plot is wonderful and tortuous, which seems to bring readers into a happy paradise and make people smile.

15. This text is easy to understand and interesting.

16. The full text is clear, vivid and compact, and interesting.

17. Pay attention to specific things and develop appropriate imagination, which is the success of this article.

18. The article melts into the scenery, paints the scenery lyrically, and is good at using analogy to make the article vivid and concrete.

19. The article is novel in content, reasonable in structure, fluent and coherent, and naturally accessible.

20. This article is based on real life, with appropriate materials, innovative ideas, clear paragraphs, natural transition, full of interest and strong readability.

2 1. The full-text language is fluent and the writing is free and easy, which is a relatively successful work.

Although the language of this article is not gorgeous, it is extremely accurate and vivid, full of emotion and truth, and it is very interesting to read.

23. The structure of the article is concise and reasonable, and the author's understanding of the original text is also very profound and thorough. The full-text language is forceful, hit the floor, exciting and exciting.

24. This composition has novel materials, wonderful ideas and lively language. There is a fresh breath of life and children's interest between the lines.

25. This article narrates the events of … in the order of events. The language is fluent, the level is clear, and it is very enjoyable from beginning to end.

26. The full text is lively, the language is fresh, and it is always interesting and interesting to read.

27. The full-text narrative is concentrated, the language is concise and fluent, and the feelings are sincere and touching.

28. The tone of the whole article is relaxed and humorous, full of fun, which makes people fondle it.

29. The author is clever in conception, good at choosing points to expand, and his writing is ups and downs, which is intriguing.

There are many wonderful sentences in the full text, which add some literary interest to the article.