(Red double circles in the composition book) Main content
comprehensive study: unforgettable primary school life When we started this comprehensive study, students had been studying in primary school for six years and were about to leave primary school and start a new study life. In the past six years, students have grown from naive children to physically and mentally strong teenagers, which is not only the result of children's own efforts, but also the painstaking efforts of schools and teachers. How many exciting, joyful, sad and sad things have happened in these six years; These six years are unforgettable years for children to start on the road of life. When I am about to graduate, it is the common demand of teachers and students to carry out a series of meaningful activities to express the feelings of teachers and students, classmates and gratitude to my alma mater, and to cherish them forever as beautiful memories. This comprehensive study is to make full use of various language forms, so that students can recall their beautiful primary school life, encourage each other and move on. "Reading Materials" * * * selected five articles, all recalling primary school life. Unforgettable Enlightenment is an article recalling the first teacher. By Sha Jiansun. This paper focuses on three things: the anti-Japanese speech contest, the teacher's two criticisms of "I" and the boycott of Japanese class, which shows the strong patriotic spirit and rigorous teaching style of the enlightenment teacher and expresses the author's reverence, gratitude and nostalgia for the enlightenment teacher. The text is written in the order of "I'm grateful to the enlightenment teacher and I miss the memory of the enlightenment teacher's influence on" I ",among which three things in the memory part are the focus of the full text. To read this lesson, we should first understand the meaning of "enlightenment", and on this basis, what enlightenment education did my first teacher give me? For example, love one's motherland, be strict with students, seek truth from facts in writing, and study hard. Let the students understand the sentence "From this kind of leniency and strictness, we primary school students have also realized some truths that the teachers didn't say clearly", and understand what "leniency" and "strictness" mean in the text, and why the teachers are so strict about composition and writing, but so tolerant about Japanese lessons, so as to further realize the patriotism and rigorous and serious teaching attitude of the teachers. The Teacher Leads the Door is the work of Liu Shaotang, a contemporary writer. This is a memoir. The author recalls his childhood, and under the guidance of the enlightenment teacher, he was infected by literature since childhood, sowing the seeds of literature in his heart, expressing his respect for the teacher, his love for the teacher and his deep gratitude to the teacher. When reading, you should understand what specific examples the article narrates and express your deep gratitude to tian teacher. The article focuses on a poem written by tian teacher. He made up a story based on the poem and told it beautifully, which made the children "fascinated, as if they were there". These stories of tian teacher, like spring rain, have sown the seeds of literature in the author's mind. Let us deeply feel that the influence of the first teacher on people's life is very great. At the end of the article, "ten years of trees, a hundred years of people; It's the crowning touch of the whole paper. The author explains the great influence of education on people with aphoristic sentences, and thanks the teacher for his enlightenment education. With affectionate memories and concrete examples, the article illustrates that tian teacher is "very eloquent and writes well", and the image of an excellent teacher is vividly displayed on the paper. Vivid narration and concise writing are the characteristics of this paper. The New Teacher Wang is a novel. It was written that a newly appointed teacher Wang asked Cai Lin, a "poor student", in the first Chinese class, which caused a burst of laughter. After school, teacher Wang gave Cai Lin a "poor student file" to encourage Cai Lin to study hard. Cai Lin's idea is very representative: he thinks he is a "poor student", "no one asks me" and "everyone thinks so. I, I admit it myself. " The so-called "poor students" first lost their self-confidence. In view of Cai Lin's mentality, Teacher Wang prescribed the right medicine and gave Cai Lin a "poor student file". In fact, this "poor student file" is the "shortcoming" of celebrities when they were young. Their achievements have been known today, and they have overcome their own shortcomings with their own efforts. This "poor student file" has inspired Cai Lin's confidence, and we believe that he will make great progress under the education of Mr. Wang. Although many students are not judged as "poor students" like Cai Lin, there are times when their six-year study and life are not smooth, so this article is very likely to arouse students' * * *. On the basis of reading the article, students can recall the past events that the teacher helped and encouraged them to make progress. "Unforgettable Laughter" is an article about classmates. The article focuses on "all the students in the squad love to laugh, and everyone's laughter is different", and writes the unique laughter of the students in the squad, which shows the characteristics of the students through laughter. Between the lines is filled with the cordial friendship between classmates, and the writing angle is unique. When reading, we should pay attention to the writing angle of the article, and guide students to observe the characteristics of their classmates and choose the right angle to write them down. The author of The Red Double Circle in Composition is Huang Beijia, a contemporary writer. The article "Make-up Examination" mentioned in this article is her first work. Because of the success of this composition, it gave the author confidence and strength. Since then, she has published literary works one after another and eventually became a famous writer. Therefore, the composition "Make-up Examination" can be said to be a milestone in her growth, and the teacher's 98 red double circles opened the door to her literary creation. Sometimes, success comes from a little encouragement. The article sees the big from the small, and praises the teacher's leading role in his life from the red double circle in an essay. When reading, let students realize this, and at the same time, encourage students to tell their own growth stories. (2) There are five articles in the "Reading Materials" that focus on the topic of "Farewell to Alma Mater", but their styles are different. A Letter to the Teacher is a letter written by Weng Qinlu, a student of No.3 Primary School in Hongkou District, Shanghai, to her teacher Gu Jiazhang. When the author wrote this letter, he was already studying at East China Normal University. In the letter, she wrote down all kinds of care and instruction that Teacher Gu had given herself, and praised the teacher's dedication. Writing a letter to a teacher is not unfamiliar to students. It is important to understand when reading. The author combines narration, description and imagination to express sincere gratitude to the teacher with beautiful lyrical sentences and memories of specific cases. Speech at Primary School Graduation Ceremony is a passionate speech. In this paper, I recall three unforgettable past events in my six-year primary school life-the first day of primary school, the sports meeting in the third grade and the parent-teacher meeting in the sixth grade, and express my nostalgia for my alma mater, gratitude to my teachers and reluctance to part with my classmates. It is the basic feature of the speech to inspire people with emotion. Students can use this as a model to learn to write speeches. "Advice to the Principal" is a letter written by a sixth-grade graduate to the principal, focusing on making suggestions. In view of the existing problems in the school, the letter puts forward some suggestions for reopening the library. Not only put forward his own ideas, but also put forward specific improvement methods, and expressed his love to his alma mater in a special way. Taking this proposal as an example, students can find out the shortcomings of the school through investigation and interview, learn the writing method of this article and write a proposal to the principal. Classmates is a short poem. Classmate record is a kind of eternal memory on campus, and it is innocence that can't be forgotten in the years. This poem is also an emotional initiative. By reading it, students can understand the role of alumni record and make a classmate record of their own class. Two groups of messages were selected from "Graduation Message", one group was written by students to teachers; One group is given by the teacher to the students. As students are approaching graduation, they have a lot to say to their classmates, teachers and alma mater. "Graduation Message" provides them with an opportunity to express their feelings and exchange ideas, and a platform to show their personality and talents. Although everyone can write the graduation message, because of its special commemorative significance, the graduation message should be concise, vivid, contemporary and full of emotion, which can inspire people. In teaching, students should be guided to experience sincere feelings between teachers and students, and students should be guided to express their wishes in vivid, appropriate and concise language according to the characteristics of different objects. 1. The author of Unforgettable Enlightenment, Sha Jiansun Sha Jiansun, was born in Yixing, Jiangsu Province in 1934. Professor Peking University is a doctoral supervisor and a professor at the Central Party History Research Office. 2. Liu Shaotang Liu Shaotang (1936-1997), the author of "The Teacher Leads the Door", is a contemporary writer. A native of Rulin Village, Tongzhou District, Beijing. He joined the revolution in 1948 and the China Producer Party in 1953. He started publishing at the age of 13, and became the youngest member of the Chinese Writers Association at the age of 2. He was a "child prodigy writer" in the literary world of China in the 195s. In 1991, he was awarded the expert certificate of "making outstanding contributions to China's cultural and artistic undertakings" by the State Council. He used to be a member of the Standing Committee of Beijing Municipal People's Congress, vice chairman of Beijing Writers Association, member of the National Committee of China Federation of Literary and Art Circles, and vice chairman of China Writers Association. Liu Shaotang's literary career of more than 4 years has experienced ups and downs and is determined. He has devoted himself to the creation of "China style, national customs, local characteristics and local themes" for a long time, and is the flag bearer of contemporary local literature. He is the author of 12 volumes (5 volumes have been published) of Collected Works of Liu Shaotang and Local Literature System of the Grand Canal. The novel Jingmen Lianzi won the Beijing Excellent Novel Award. Telling Stories from Jingliu Pavilion won the first China Popular Literature Award. "Pu Liu Ren Jia" won the national excellent novella award. "The Beauty of the Moth" won the National Short Story Award, and "The Yellow Flower Girl Pond" won the Excellent Novel Award in the 199s. Many Chinese and short stories have been translated into English, French, German, Russian, Japanese, Spanish, Thai, Bangla and Albanian for publication. 3. Huang Beijia Huang Beijia, the author of The Red Double Circle in Composition, was born in Rugao County, Jiangsu Province in June 1955. In 1977, he was admitted to the Literature Department of Peking University Chinese Department. In 1984, he was transferred to Jiangsu Writers Association as a professional writer. Since he published his debut in 1973, he has published nearly 3 collections of essays, novels, short stories and essays. His main works include Please Walk with me, This moment is so brilliant, Eyes as transparent, Rose Room, I want to be a good boy, China Fairy Tales and so on. Every writer will have a touching story when he talks about his own road of literary creation. Huang Beijia's literary road began with 98 "red double circles". At that time, she was still studying in middle school. At one time, the school held an essay contest. One of her "Make-up Exams" wrote 5, words. Later, this article was put in the window. At that time, when the teacher changed her composition, she used to circle good sentences with red double circles. Huang Beijia childishly counted the red double circles of the teacher's circle one by one through the glass and found that there were 98 * *, which was the starting point of her writing. (II) Creative Design of Class Album The origin of the class album "Memories of Childhood in 65": The singing started, and the June season of graduation came again. Looking at this group of children who have been "fighting" in the same classroom for six years, the scene was like a movie clip. Parents say that the feelings between our classmates are really good, so they have a flash of light. Let's make a souvenir book! Different from the usual class magazines and activity CDs in our class, if we want to keep them as souvenirs, we must have them for everyone. We should put something memorable in it, which should be a book for students to keep for a long time. After hovering in my mind for a few days, the outline of my heart finally became clear. Practice: 1. Announce the world: In June, the teacher began to plan to make a class yearbook. First, he announced the world and told the whole class: "We want to make a book that belongs to our class." The expected question came: "What?" "Where are we going to' move' books?" "How to do it?" "Teacher, can we ...?" After the problems are solved one by one, the name of the book will be decided in class. 2. Brainstorming: From Class 65 Book, 65 Commemorative Album, Our Class, Bee Family to Happy Childhood, Colorful Childhood and 65 with Flying Wings ... appeared one after another. At this time, the teacher gave the order and voted. 3. Make a final decision: The final vote is decided, and the title is "65 Childhood Memories". 4. Recruit: In order to let children have a sense of participation and take advantage of the opportunity to train their ability to do things, we hired several editors in the class, two for pushing manuscripts, five for typing and two for editing. After fierce competition, the candidates finally came into being. 5. Take office: I was worried about the children's three-minute fever, but in the end, the teacher had to carry it all on one shoulder. But the next day, when I saw the children who were in charge of pushing the manuscript, I carefully typed a submission form with the computer, listed all the classmates' names and seat numbers, divided photos, articles and pictures into spaces, and sketched out the submissions. The teacher's heart was slightly relieved, but the children were children after all, and sometimes they still needed the help of the teacher. At noon, they took turns to take a lunch break. Sometimes it takes more time to solve students' typing problems than to type by yourself, but in order to let children participate and exercise, children are still allowed to do it. Fortunately, there are also several typing experts in the class who have helped a lot. The final proofreading is still to be done by the teacher himself. In the end, the thirty-four children finished thirty, and the big stone in their hearts was finally put down. 6. There are always a few "slow doctors" at the end of each class, and my class is no exception. In order to get the last few to hand over the most satisfactory articles and photos in the past two years, it will take a long time, and by this time, the final exam of the school is approaching, and the progress of things has stopped. This experience tells me that the next time I do it, I should start from the middle term so as not to be too busy at the end of the term. ) 7. You're done: At last, every child handed in an article and photos of life, and collected some paintings, but I felt that there was something missing, so I added a one-page personal file for each child, a message for my classmates, and finally sent it to the printing plant. 8. Parents' support: A book is not released to the public, only more than 3 copies are printed, and the cost is huge. Therefore, it was originally planned to be photocopied and bound with black and white photocopy paper, which would require about 75 yuan for each book. However, after informing the president of the parent-teacher association of this class, with his support, the president's self-operated printing company sponsored the printing. Without increasing the budget, the commemorative album of this class became a color hardcover edition, which is really like a commemorative album! Results: activity photo: six years of activity photos. Teacher's words: teacher's personal files and whispers. ※. Student profile: each child has two pages, one page of personal profile and mood message, one page of composition and personal life photo. ※. Words for classmates: it's a "merit bombing" to publish a piece of words written by each classmate to classmates. ※! Appreciation of works: excellent appreciation of art works and comics. ※. Signature office: there are three pages left at the end of the book, which are blank pages for teachers, students and classmates to sign each other. ※. Echo: When "Memories of 65 Childhood" was released, the children were surprised that it was printed so beautifully, far exceeding their imagination, and they held it fondly on their chests. Parents said that this book was even better than the sixth grade graduation commemorative album, and it was meaningful. This year's Teacher's Day, the last one just rose to the first grade of junior high school, and the 34 male and female protagonists of "65 Childhood Memories" were divided into fragmented old classes. On the eve of Teacher's Day, the whole class secretly agreed to give the teacher a surprise, so the second class was over that day, and the former 65 was heavy.