A, the notebook is beautiful and neat, just like the street in a seaside town, but it is not dirty ... The straight handwriting makes people really comfortable to read ... Your calligraphy is as beautiful as printed ... I am ashamed that my calligraphy is not as good as yours. ...
B, whatever, the handwriting doesn't look like a cat's ... The handwriting isn't in the middle of the grid, of course it doesn't look pleasing to the eye ... Is it because the wind is too strong today, and your handwriting is blown like this ... I don't believe that your handwriting is not good, and you will keep scribbling ... carefully and patiently, and you will write better than me. ...
Internal capacity
A, such a rich content is almost the same as that written by a writer ... Your practice is flesh and blood, which is really a great enjoyment to read ... Your composition is very specific, which I enjoy reading ... You must love reading documents at ordinary times, so you can write so many words. ...
B, the dry content is like boiled water, and there is no taste at all. A little more kind words would be delicious ... not as good as Vivienne Liu's words (or the names of other poor students). Don't you feel a little embarrassed ... your composition is like a 90-year-old woman's mouth, dry and empty, and it leaks straight. ...
sentence
A, fluent and vivid sentences, like Lushan Waterfall, are very fluent ... The metaphor is very appropriate, which shows that you have been carefully observing ... How did you come up with such a clever anthropomorphic sentence ... How appropriate this rhetorical question is used here ... This exclamatory sentence expresses your true feelings at that time ... The ancient poems are quoted just right, and I will use the poems I have learned in my composition in the future. ...
B, the composition is bumpy, and it is very uncomfortable to read, just like walking on a bumpy road in the country, you will easily fall down if you are not careful ... The sentence seems to be cut off and incomplete ... After you read it carefully, you will find that it doesn't make sense ... Don't be afraid of trouble, good articles have been changed ... You can't always expect others to help you change it, but learn to modify every sentence yourself. ...
First, the division of labor among the parts is clear ... these parts are properly divided ... each part has a meaning and different paragraphs. ...
B, the level is chaotic, there are too many sections, and I feel breathless when I read them ... There are too few sections, and I can't bear to add more ... The middle part can be divided into several parts ... The first part and the second part should not be separated, so we should merge them ... This part can't be related to the above parts. ...
give exact information
First, highlight the key points ... The key parts are written in detail, which is good ... The events are described in detail ... The scenic spots are described in the order of sightseeing, and the key points are ...
How to write * * * comments 1 in the evaluation set of primary school students' children's compositions? You are very good at observing life and can keenly capture meaningful moments; You are a student with great potential.
2. The language of the article is fluent, which also shows the teacher's feelings.
You are the teacher's bosom friend. I hope we can learn from each other and collect a bunch of fragrant flowers in the garden of literature.
Sorry, the teacher didn't understand this paragraph. Would you like to explain it to the teacher again? Thank you.
Your handwriting is neat and beautiful. Teachers should learn from you.
If the material selection of the article is novel, it will definitely complement the writing style.
what do you reckon ? 5. Great! Your article reproduces the simplicity and frankness of the northeast people, which makes readers feel refreshed.
The language is extremely fluent, and the use of synaesthesia is particularly clever.
Your writing style is conquering and attractive.
Work hard and create more glory! 6. Your article is like a slow stream, delicate and smooth.
Beautiful writing, sincere and delicate feelings, very personal style.
May you continue to pick the waves of life on the road of writing and make your style more perfect!
How to write a composition for children with rich associations, delicate language and full emotions? We can point out the shortcomings of the exercises from the aspects of whether the content is specific, whether the sentences are fluent, whether the emotions are true, whether the center is prominent, whether it is off topic, whether the language is vivid and vivid, and put forward suggestions to encourage students. The requirements should not be too high. We should look at their exercises with children's eyes! Handwriting A, the notebook is handsome and neat, just like the street in a seaside town, but it can't find any dirt ... It's really comfortable for people to see ... Your handwriting is as beautiful as printed ... I'm ashamed that my handwriting is not as good as yours ... B, whatever, how can it not be like a cat's handwriting ... It's not in the middle of the grid, of course it looks unpleasant ... Just like this ... I don't believe your handwriting is not good. You will write better than me ... Content A, such a rich content, is almost the same as what the writer wrote ... Your exercise is flesh and blood, and reading is really a great enjoyment ... Your composition is very specific, and I enjoy reading it ... You must love it very much at ordinary times. It's tasteless at all. It's delicious with more kind words ... It's not as good as Vivienne Liu's words (or the names of other poor students). Don't you feel a little embarrassed ... Your composition is like a 90-year-old woman's mouth, dry and empty, and her words are leaking straight ... Sentence A, fluent and vivid sentences, like Lushan Waterfall, flowing downstream and flowing smoothly ... This metaphor is very appropriate. Explain that you have been carefully observing ... how did you come up with such a clever anthropomorphic sentence ... How appropriate this rhetorical question is to be used here ... This exclamatory sentence expresses your true feelings at that time ... The ancient poems are quoted just right, and I will use the poems I have learned in my composition in the future ... The magical use of the two-part allegorical saying makes my stomach ache with laughter ... B. The composition is uneven and uncomfortable to read. It's like falling down easily if you're not careful ... The sentence seems to be cut off and incomplete ... If you read it carefully after writing, you will find the impassability ... Don't be afraid of trouble, all the good articles have been changed ... You can't always expect others to help you correct them, but learn to correct every sentence yourself ... The levels of A and sections are very clear ... These parts are properly divided ... Each section has a meaning. The paragraphs are also very clear ... I feel breathless when I read them ... There are too few sections to add ... The middle part can be divided into several parts ... The first section and the second section should not be separated, but should be merged ... This section cannot be related to the contents of the above sections ... It is detailed and focused ... The key parts are well written ... This event is clearly described in the tour order. ...
Parents' advice to teachers on how to write children's composition evaluation: Thank teachers for their concern and education for Zhang Jingyi.
Please be strict with Zhang Jingyi and do more practical things.
I'm glad that Mr. Li discovered the problem of students' poor command of stroke order in time. Please continue to make corrections, and we will actively cooperate.
Since the beginning of this semester, Teacher Li Yong has asked students to accumulate every day. This is a good habit, which broadens their knowledge and improves their writing ability. I hope I can arrange more writing training, including in-class and out-of-class, and my writing ability is in my usual practice.
Teacher Li Yong is a teacher with great personality. Your quality, unique insights and teaching methods have influenced Zhang Jingyi. Thank you! Thank you for your hard education and concern for my children. My child is a child with poor consciousness and doesn't like reading at ordinary times. As parents, sometimes we don't know any good ways to help and guide him. I hope the teacher will take more trouble.
Thank you for enriching some extra-curricular knowledge, increasing Chinese extra-curricular reading, and practicing various types of compositions at ordinary times.
Thank you very much for your education and concern for Wu this semester. I feel that my daughter has made significant progress again, and all aspects cannot be separated from the help of teachers. I would like to express my deep gratitude here! Wu is a little timid in raising his hand to express his language. I hope the teacher can care more about her in this respect, cultivate her more and make her more lively.
In the reading of books, I hope the teacher can tell them not to read too many books when recommending reading titles, because what the teacher says is sometimes more important in students' minds, and reading is too important in Chinese learning.
Teacher Li Yong, you give the students the impression that you appreciate education too much. The children feel that the environment is too relaxed and the drums have to be beaten again. What's more, a child who lacks qualitative characteristics like my son hopes that the teacher will be stricter with Liu Zhipeng in the future, and our parents will fully cooperate with the teacher's teaching.
I hope that in the next time, we will have more opportunities to communicate with teachers and listen to their scientific educational methods, which will benefit us a lot.
First of all, I want to thank the teacher for his hard education for the children.
For parents, children's learning and thinking have been further improved, which is very gratifying. Secondly, I hope that teachers will treat all students equally, so that each child can take a little responsibility and let her study in order to make a collective contribution.
Teachers are required to strictly demand children's study and school life, cultivate children's good study habits and living habits, and arrange children to participate in various cultural and sports activities in schools and classes.
And it must be completed in a limited time.
Let him answer the teacher's questions if possible. I hope that under the guidance of Mr. Li and with the active cooperation of our parents, our children will develop in an all-round way, and I also hope to communicate with Mr. Li alone.
More composition training to strengthen the cultivation of children's interpersonal relationship.
Thanks to the teacher's education and cultivation of Tang, the child has made a lot of obvious progress after entering the fourth grade, but we also found some weaknesses in her: 1, afraid of difficulties.
2. In learning, the ability to analyze and answer some difficult questions needs to be improved.
I hope the teacher will be stricter with her, so that she can make greater progress. Thank you again for your hard work.
Students with fantastic ideas bring a lot of trouble to teachers, especially class teachers. Here, I want to thank you for your hard work.
I am busy with my work this semester (which should not be the reason), and I don't care much about my children. Do not cooperate with the school to educate children well, and strengthen management next semester.
Do more public welfare activities for children in class.
Make children more outgoing and brave.
I hope the teacher can communicate with us more when he is free.
Thank you. I feel small. I have made remarkable progress this semester. Teacher Li Yong naturally put his rich knowledge into the teaching of lesson plans, which improved children's interest in learning. The cultivation of learning interest is very valuable and may affect a child's life.
Thank you very much, not so much for teachers' requirements and suggestions as for parents' reflection.
This semester, my son's Chinese foundation has been completed well. For example, good sentences, poems and phrases that the teacher asks to recite can be completed on time, and his homework can also be completed on time.
The temperament of not paying attention and playing while doing homework requires the supervision and patient teaching of adults.
My son usually does well in the exam, but the result of this Chinese exam makes me feel ashamed, which makes me determined to catch my son's carelessness. Here is a small request for the teacher: I hope the teacher will urge my son's fault in class, and our parents will strengthen the management and teaching of his son after class.
Thank you teacher! In addition, can tutoring materials be purchased by teachers? Students are strict. If possible, can he send a message to his parents about his usual exam results in Chinese, math and English, so that parents can keep abreast of their children's learning? Chen Chen didn't tell his parents the exam results of one unit of English this semester, and even didn't take the initiative to tell me the exam results and papers for half a year. I won't know until I ask other children.
Here, I also thank the teachers for their care and help to the children.
Requirements for teachers: I hope that Chinese, math and English teachers will keep in touch with their parents, and teachers and children will communicate the progress of their children and what changes have taken place during this period.
I hope teachers can call or visit their parents regularly.
Teachers can tell us how to teach children how to strive for review methods, what are the shortcomings and how to make up lessons.
Teachers should give students positive praise when they make progress. I feel that China teachers communicate more, and math and English teachers prefer to keep in touch.
After our daughter entered the fourth grade, our biggest feeling was that he was more active in learning, more demanding of himself, competitive and conscientious in finishing his homework. Our greatest comfort is that he has developed the good habit of reading excellent extracurricular books, and he has to read them for a while almost every night.
We feel that we can't do without the guidance of the teacher, so here, we thank the teacher at home. As my daughter grows older, I hope her writing will improve. Please give us more advice. Our parents will give us careful guidance.
Teacher Li Yong is an idol in her daughter's mind, an expert in her mind and the best teacher in the school. She is humorous and knowledgeable. ...
How do parents evaluate their children's compositions? At this time, I am taking the final exam in the examination room that is quiet enough to hear my hair falling.
Dad, first of all, I want you to know that I am a bird.
The nature of birds is to fly freely.
However, you tied me up with a birdcage.
No matter my hospital since I was a child, every time you went to the bookstore, you always brought back a big bag of books, stipulating how long it would take me to finish reading them.
Indeed, I have formed the good habit of reading.
However, you forbid me to watch cartoons and go out to play with other children.
After that, I hated your guts.
Gradually, I grew up and stepped into the gate of primary school. I thought I could get rid of it, but I didn't expect ... you want me to join the brightest star in Huakao Fanwen. Please let me learn to fly first.
The ocean is wider than the stream, and the sky is wider than the ocean. That's the space I yearn for.
Dad, please give me a chance to fly this bird.
How to write a composition for children with rich associations, delicate language and full emotions? We can point out the shortcomings of the exercises from the aspects of whether the content is specific, whether the sentences are fluent, whether the feelings are true, whether the center is prominent, whether it is off topic, whether the language is vivid and vivid, and put forward suggestions to encourage students. The requirements should not be too high. We should look at their exercises with children's eyes! Handwriting A, the notebook is handsome and neat, just like the street in a seaside town, but it can't find any dirt ... It's really comfortable for people to see ... Your handwriting is as beautiful as printed ... I'm ashamed that my handwriting is not as good as yours ... B, whatever, how can it not be like a cat's handwriting ... It's not in the middle of the grid, of course it looks unpleasant ... Just like this ... I don't believe your handwriting is not good. You will write better than me ... Content A, such a rich content, is almost the same as what the writer wrote ... Your exercise is flesh and blood, and reading is really a great enjoyment ... Your composition is very specific, and I enjoy reading it ... You must love it very much at ordinary times. It's tasteless at all. It's delicious with more kind words ... It's not as good as Vivienne Liu's words (or the names of other poor students). Don't you feel a little embarrassed ... Your composition is like a 90-year-old woman's mouth, dry and empty, and her words are leaking straight ... Sentence A, fluent and vivid sentences, like Lushan Waterfall, flowing downstream and flowing smoothly ... This metaphor is very appropriate. Explain that you have been carefully observing ... how did you come up with such a clever anthropomorphic sentence ... How appropriate this rhetorical question is to be used here ... This exclamatory sentence expresses your true feelings at that time ... The ancient poems are quoted just right, and I will use the poems I have learned in my composition in the future ... The magical use of the two-part allegorical saying makes my stomach ache with laughter ... B. The composition is uneven and uncomfortable to read. It's like falling down easily if you're not careful ... The sentence seems to be cut off and incomplete ... If you read it carefully after writing, you will find the impassability ... Don't be afraid of trouble, all the good articles have been changed ... You can't always expect others to help you correct them, but learn to correct every sentence yourself ... The levels of A and sections are very clear ... These parts are properly divided ... Each section has a meaning. The paragraphs are also very clear ... I feel breathless when I read them ... There are too few sections to add ... The middle part can be divided into several parts ... The first section and the second section should not be separated, but should be merged ... This section cannot be related to the contents of the above sections ... It is detailed and focused ... The key parts are well written ... This event is clearly described in the tour order. ......
Parents should observe their children's usual performance, pay attention to their advantages, write down their advantages as far as possible, and be comprehensive, mainly in off-campus performance, such as being helpful, respecting their elders, loving labor, caring and so on. , labor, health, civilization, treat people.
Example: Children can do what teachers ask at home: listen to their parents, finish their summer homework carefully, and take the initiative to help their parents do some housework within their power.
There is still much room for improvement in academic performance. In the new semester, parents must combine more with teachers and communicate more, and strive to make their children get better grades.
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How to write comments for children? Look at Tingting You are a smart and quiet girl with a wide range of hobbies, such as playing piano, drawing, computer, reading and writing.
Students can envy you, and you can learn and develop your specialty.
Look, every subject's homework is carefully completed every day, every composition is vivid and beautiful, and every exam result is A. I am willing to serve the class collectively.
But as a monitor, you are still not bold enough, not active enough and not decisive enough. You know, I prefer your steady and provocative appearance! Jia, you are a boy who will forge ahead when you have a goal. You are also a student with a strong sense of collective honor. When I saw your enthusiasm for winning glory for the class in the school sports meeting and art festival, I was deeply moved and liked you more.
The most reassuring thing for teachers is that you take the initiative to study and love labor.
I am very happy to know that you can sit up straight in class and raise your hand to speak.
If you can be strict with yourself and insist on reading extracurricular books, newspapers and periodicals to increase your knowledge, your grades will be better; If you can see the advantages of others and communicate sincerely with your classmates, more people will like your sports commission.
Jian, you always respect teachers and love labor.
Driven by self-motivation, you can finally "pull back from the brink", study hard and make progress.
If you can write carefully, correct the bad habit of not paying attention in class and be an honest child, then teachers and classmates will like you better.
The teacher expects you to perform better. Work hard! You are a naive, lively and cheerful boy. What is unforgettable is your wonderful performance on June 1st.
Love learning, good grades, this semester to see you work fast, the teacher is also happy for this.
If you can correct the bad habit of being playful and help your aunt do housework to exercise yourself, then you are a "three good" student.
The most unforgettable thing is your heroic posture and neat homework writing on the track and field.
Over the past year, you have respected teachers, loved labor, listened carefully in class and achieved good results.
I am also keen on working for the class and teachers. It's a pity that you are still so shy that you dare not raise your hand to answer questions. I hope you can become a girl with both wisdom and courage after entering the second day of junior high school.
Lively and active, your mind is active. After hard work, you won the first place in table tennis at the school sports meeting. The teacher is happy for you.
If you can learn with the spirit and attitude of playing table tennis, your grades will definitely be better.
I hope to do things seriously in the future, don't procrastinate, be strict with myself and be a veritable "boy".
A person, no matter how active his thinking is, can only accomplish nothing if he doesn't use it for correct study.
Just like you, if you continue to study actively, don't be lazy and be modest, then your grades will be better.
I hope you can face up to your shortcomings, don't be proud, be strict with yourself and be a veritable "three good students".
Shy, you are a good boy who respects teachers and unites classmates.
Thank you for serving your classmates hard this semester and winning glory for your class at the school sports meeting.
You study actively and get good grades.
If you work harder at writing and learn from your father, you will be by going up one flight of stairs.
What I can't forget this year is your neat homework writing and serious learning attitude.
You are quiet and steady, respectful and courteous, conscientious and have excellent grades.
In the future, you should take the initiative to work boldly, correct your carelessness and be a teacher's right-hand man.
In the past year, you were always quiet and shy.
Your beautiful and neat handwriting is unforgettable, and you won the second prize of calligraphy in the art festival.
You respect teachers and are enthusiastic and helpful, and the team leader is responsible for the work. He is active in his studies and has excellent grades.
Use your head and raise your hand boldly in class, and you are an excellent young cadre.
You can correct mistakes, and self-motivation is what teachers appreciate most.
You are lively and lovely, respect teachers, observe discipline, study hard and get good grades.
Homework writing has made great progress through your efforts and won an award at the art festival.
But sometimes you can't be strict with yourself and be nice to your classmates. I hope you can be strict with yourself in the future and be a respected monitor.
Lively and active, you have an enterprising heart. You love work and study, and you tried to join the Young Pioneers.
But I'm not conscious enough, I'm playful and I don't like to use my head, so my grades haven't improved much.
If you listen carefully in class and do your homework carefully, you will certainly get good grades.
This semester, the teacher has been proud of your progress in homework writing.
You respect your teachers and love your school. You are civilized and polite, and your strong self-motivation makes you study consciously and your grades have made great progress.
If you can use your head actively, answer questions boldly and exercise your oral expression ability, then your grades will go up a storey still higher.
Active, your outstanding performance in the school sports meeting was impressive.
Little boy, if you can concentrate on class and finish your homework on time, your academic performance will not be average.
I hope you will obey orders, observe discipline and correct the bad habit of fighting in the future.
Be an excellent young pioneer.
Just like your name, you are smart and brave to climb the peak of learning, and your strong self-motivation is your motivation. You like to use your head and have your own unique views on problems.
If you can concentrate in class, your grades will make greater progress.
I hope you can give full play to your advantages, correct your shortcomings, take part in sports and work to exercise your ability and make yourself a real man.
You are a shy little boy. You respect teachers, unite your classmates and love your work.
Because of my unconscious study, I didn't concentrate enough in class and my grades were average. If you concentrate in class, continue to carry forward the advantages of correct fonts and correct your laziness, your grades will be better.
Respect for teachers, courtesy, love of labor and conscientious work are the deepest impressions you have left on teachers.
In your study, you concentrate on the class and finish your homework on time.
But I think you are always a little timid and your homework is not correct enough. Study hard, ask if you don't understand, and your grades will definitely improve.
You are a good boy who respects teachers and loves work. You study unconsciously, are not diligent, and your grades are average. If you study hard, you will go to by going up one flight of stairs.
I always thought you were a shy little boy, straight. ...
Well done, write like this: I'm glad to see that you have been studying hard, son.
I hope to make persistent efforts and make further progress.
You have great potential. Give full play to it.
You're great. We are proud to be your parents.
You will definitely exceed our expectations.
Keep trying! Not ideal. Write like this: don't criticize.
Say to the child: this must be accidental.
Probably caused by carelessness.
You will do well.
Don't rush.
Encourage and trust children to do well, and children will do well.
Let children know that it is his responsibility to read good books, not the responsibility of parents.
The future and life belong to the children themselves.
No matter how much parents love their children, they can't take the place of their children in their lives.
Tell him that those who study well and those who don't study well will come to the social hierarchy.
Tell him you have 100% confidence in him. If he studies hard, he will get excellent grades.
Don't rush him to make his own arrangements. If you rush him specifically, you are overreaching yourself.
Children will think that learning is your business.
Even if he did it under your supervision, he thought he was studying for you, not for himself. Then once he loses your supervision, he won't study. Can you supervise him for life? Children must be encouraged to make progress and do better.
Children who grow up with encouragement are full of confidence and keep moving forward. We should learn to be parents who applaud our children.
Please indicate the source? How to write * * * comments for children?