First, write a photo and tell the truth.

Kafka, a famous Austrian novelist, said, "Writing is to open everything in your heart until you can't open it any more. Writing is absolutely frank, there is nothing to hide, that is, to concentrate your whole body and mind on it. " Kafka's words have told us that telling the truth is extremely important, because only by "giving your heart to readers" can readers feel sincere and credible, and those words you wrote can have great persuasion and appeal.

A shepherd boy who lived near the village and looked at a flock of sheep shouted, "Wolf!" " "Everyone in the village ran out to help him, but he laughed at them for running like cattle three or four times. Later, the wolf really came, and the shepherd boy was frightened. He shouted in fear, "come and help me, the wolf is eating the sheep!" "But no one paid attention to his call and no one came to help him. As a result, Lang Hao ate his whole flock of sheep without fear.

From this story, we can learn that no one will believe a liar even if he tells the truth. Insisting on "telling the truth" in writing is actually the real harmony and unity of life and writing, being a man and writing. It is not only of great significance to writing, but also has great influence on the development and perfection of a writer's personality and the cultivation and formation of a sound personality.

People have seven emotions (joy, anger, sorrow, joy, love, evil and lust), which are innate talents and can be learned without learning. Therefore, feelings are real, from nature, from nature. Only by "telling the truth" can people be moved and cause * * * sounds. This kind of true feeling is from the heart, and naturally it is also those who are happy and carefree.

The expression of the author's true feelings:

My Old Classmate

It's late at night, although the last light upstairs has gone out, I still don't feel sleepy. Through the glass window, the waning moon is also hazy, and a few pale rays of light come in listlessly. Suddenly, a drop of crystal water suddenly slipped through the window lattice, as if it were the tears of the moon, slipping from the moon's face to my heart, adding a bitterness in the dead sea of memory ... alas!

It's probably fate. You and I have become deskmates, and it's this opportunity that makes me know you better. I remember you didn't copy the history exam, and you cried. This is the first time I have seen you cry. You wrote me a long letter sadly. You said that people looked down on you because you were a self-funded student, and you also said that I wouldn't let you copy because I was afraid that your score would be higher than mine. This is the first time I found that a casual move can also hurt a person's heart; It turns out that someone cares so much about a worthless report card for the senior high school entrance examination. After being with you, I always feel very stressed and unnatural, afraid of hurting you again. Your heart is fragile, and I really can't bear to make you cry again.

However, fate played a trick on you again and the teacher transferred you to the back seat. You cried again, and you cried sadly. You said you didn't want to leave me, and you liked to let me give you lectures and study with me, but it was very embarrassing for the teacher after all! Watching your back slowly move to the back, I feel really hard, and my heart is a little sour. Why did you get transferred? If it were me, I might feel better than I do now. ...

The most cruel thing is this mid-term exam. I almost cried when I heard that you didn't make the top 50. It's hard to imagine how your fragile and inferior mind could face such a huge blow when you heard the news! I seem to hear a heart-rending and soul-stirring roar ... you cried, as I imagined, and you cried very sadly. I tried to comfort you several times, but I really didn't have the courage to go there, because I really didn't know what to say. Seeing that you are so sad, I can't say anything more. I am afraid of arousing your sadness, so I have to silently send you the exercise books and papers that I haven't had time to send.

You went to the last few classes and left with your sadness. Although many students don't understand why you shed so many tears and think it's a sign of cowardice, I deeply feel and appreciate the cruelty of competition.

At this moment, the window suddenly lit up, but only the dim light flashed through it. I don't know if this is an illusion or a real meteor. I pray for you silently. May the stars bless you and your broken heart. May you stop crying and tears. ...

The night is still so quiet that people have fallen asleep. I hope that when the sun rises again, everything will pass and everything will get better.

This article is exciting to read, because the author blends sincere feelings between the lines.

There are two points to pay attention to when telling the truth.

First, the scope of feelings should not be limited. People's feelings are diverse, as long as they are their own true feelings, they can be truthfully expressed. In addition, daring to express feelings (including some bad feelings) and being good at controlling are often one of the reasons for the touching charm of the article.

Second, the expression of feelings should be properly controlled. Any real art is the unity of "freedom" and "moderation".

Tell the truth, tell the truth, the core is the truth. Truth is the basis of goodness and beauty, and it is an important condition for articles to convince and infect people.

Second, write new ideas.

Goethe said: it is genius who compares beauty to flowers for the first time; The second time, it was a mediocre person who compared beauty to flowers; The third time, the person who compares beauty to flowers is a fool. If parrot talks, even the best metaphor will lose its luster. This is especially true for the composition of the senior high school entrance examination. Most teachers have this feeling when approving compositions: reading for the first time that students sympathize with their parents' death; When I read it the second time, I felt something in my heart; Looking at it for the third time, it is unremarkable; After reading it many times, I feel numb, disgusted and suspected of plagiarism, and my composition score will definitely be greatly reduced. Then, how to be a person who eats crabs for the first time and stand out in the composition of the senior high school entrance examination is very important.

How can we make a composition that "new" life is the source of writing? "Ask clearly that the canal has a good source of living water"? Students should carefully observe the bits and pieces of life, feel the grass and trees in life, experience the ups and downs in life, understand the philosophy of life ... and then capture the "new ideas" in the rich accumulation of life.

1. New material selection:

Junior high school students have accumulated a considerable amount of life, so they should classify and screen the writing materials they have mastered before the exam. Write about family, school, individual, society and nature; Affectionate and friendly; Describing a scene, figurative; Then select qualified, novel and typical materials.

When selecting materials for articles, we should find another way to choose fresh and lively materials full of the flavor of the times. The candidate's opinion is unprecedented and unheard of. Recently, some students wrote about Zhang Haidi and Lei Feng. How many new "Zhang Haidi" and "Lei Feng" are there in our contemporary society? Why can't we grasp the pulse of the times, be close to real life and give people a refreshing feeling? Last week, I compiled an article "Growing Up". Maybe these things really left a deep impression on you, but in junior high school life, in the past three years, isn't there anything that has a profound impact on your thoughts, and is there a philosophy that you deeply understand in your life? The depth and breadth of your thinking in junior high school should far exceed that in primary school. This stage should be an important turning point in your life. Why not choose those fresh and typical materials in life?

2. New ideas:

The so-called conception is to have new ideas, new insights and new viewpoints, so that people can have new inspiration, new feelings and new understanding after reading it. Confucius said that "learning from the past can be regarded as a teacher", which shows that it is not easy to gain a "new" meaning. Students should read more extracurricular articles and get some inspiration from them. Such as Bi Shumin's ". The 28-year-old, 38-year-old and 48-year-old have different understandings and experiences of The Daughter of the Sea. We realize that people's reading and understanding of articles and understanding of life are getting better and better with their age, rich experience and knowledge reserve. This conception has undoubtedly given us endless enlightenment, and we will go deeper because of the author's article.

For example, countless articles we have studied, such as Street Trees, Humble Room Inscription, treading on thin ice and treading on thin ice, are original, novel and pleasant. When writing, we should make a fuss, make a fuss, think reversely, or associate analogy, so as to be exquisite, fresh and novel on the basis of novel materials.

3. A new angle:

"From the side of the mountain, it becomes a mountain peak, and the distance is different." Su Shi's meaning is that Lushan Mountain is in various forms. Viewed from the side, it is a continuous and vigorous mountain. Seen from a distance, it is near, medium, high and low, showing various forms.

The angle of composition is the same. How can the same topic, the same semi-propositional composition and the same material composition float out among the masses? It is very important to choose the starting point and angle of the article. Whoever chooses to write from a different angle, whose angle is unique and novel, can enjoy the infinite scenery at the dangerous peak alone, enjoy the endless fun of life alone, and write a good composition that is fresh, lively and unconventional.

For example, last year's senior high school entrance examination composition, the topic was taken from a fable called Naoko Suspicing Neighbors in Han Feizi. The title reminds candidates that there are many similar phenomena in life, but there are also many different and even opposite things. We know that things have the influence of emotional closeness, so candidates are required to write a short essay of not less than 800 words on the topic of "emotional closeness". How to look at problems objectively and rationally, understand the importance of things, and how to choose a special angle to lead a beautiful prose poem-the perfect composition of "Golden Butterfly with Blue Pupa" gives people a fresh and beautiful aesthetic feeling. The article chooses the perspective of spiritual feelings, expresses the theme with the images projected in my mind by the changes of family life, and carefully selects two or three fragments of family changes to compose the full text. It focuses on my inner feelings and the changing process of my feelings and knowledge. I didn't mention the relationship between emotional intimacy and knowing things, but implicitly showed the richness and complexity of this relationship by showing my psychological process.

Life is colorful and ever-changing, and human beings' cognitive ability, reaction ability, aesthetic ability and thinking ability to society and the objective world should be endless, as long as you are diligent in thinking and brave in exploring, even for the same thing,

Teach you how to write a good composition.

This year's English composition for the senior high school entrance examination will be increased from 8 points last year to 12 points. The composition has novel themes and various forms, mainly focusing on flexibility, practicality and diversity, mainly in the following forms.

1, the composition of the scene provided by pictures should be based on "seeing". By carefully observing the characters, scenery, words and figures in the picture, we can find out the writing intention, grasp the logical connection through analysis and thinking, find out the theme, and turn the information in the picture into an article with the help of the given words. However, it should be noted that the article should not stay on the surface of the picture, but should express the intention and connotation of providing the scene, that is, "Wen zai"

2. Using charts to provide the composition of the scene should be based on "reading". First of all, we should understand the data, time, code and their relationship in the chart, and analyze, infer, filter, summarize and choose the best information given; When writing, the purpose should be clear, and attention should be paid to the accuracy and seriousness of the content, especially the data and time in the chart.

3. Outline the composition of the scene. The main points of this form itself are very clear and the key points are also very prominent. As long as we give full play to the role of each outline and pay attention to the flexibility of wording and the correctness of grammatical rules, it will not lead to unclear problems and deviate from the theme, but it should be noted that the article must cover the main points of each outline provided.

4. Provide situational composition in the form of letters. First of all, we should understand the letter format. English letter format is different from Chinese, 1). Generally, the address and date of the writer should be written in the upper right corner of the stationery, and the addresses should be arranged in order from small to large. 2) Write the name of the recipient in the top box on the left; 3), body parts; 4), if you like; 5) Signature of the author. The content of the letter must be written according to the given requirements, and don't leave it out. If your letter requires to be sent by e-mail, please note that the other party's website must be written accurately, and it is more or less unsuccessful to send it, which can be described as "a small difference."

Several points for attention

English writing is different from mother tongue writing, and it is often restricted by new words, grammar and idioms. As long as students pay attention to the similarities and differences between the two languages and grasp the main points of writing, they can also shine.

1, in order to ensure the clarity of the article, we should fix the time, for example: remember the past tense of one thing; Use the simple present tense when writing about things that often happen or describing people. The whole character should be consistent and echo from beginning to end. Don't change it at will to avoid misunderstanding.

Don't be reluctant to use familiar common words in pursuit of "blockbuster", but find some cold words. These words can't be used with a little knowledge, and they don't know how to match them. The result is counterproductive, which makes the article blunt, uncoordinated and even full of mistakes. Therefore, we should be realistic and avoid unnecessary points.

3. Paying attention to the expression habits of different languages is also an important link in writing English compositions. For example, "My ideal is to be an architect". Many students write "myambitostodo/make an architect". todo means "do" or "do", "tomake" means "make" and "become an architect" means "become an architect". Another example is the application of "read about/newspaper" instead of "seeabook/newspaper" in "reading books and newspapers". Therefore, we should pay attention to the expression habits of different languages at ordinary times, try to sort things out from the text or blindly copy things mechanically, which will only make a joke that "my ideal is to be an architect".

4. Some students only write short sentences or simple sentences because they are choking and afraid of making mistakes. The articles written are too naive, empty and poor, and there is nothing to say. In order to make the article full of flesh and blood, we should put in what we usually learn, such as clauses, non-predicate verbs and comparative sentence patterns. Using one or two at key times will make the article stand out and be more literary, especially the use of related words. It will make your article logically structured, clear-headed, well-organized and better show your English skills, but this is not a day's work, it depends on continuous training and accumulation.

How to write a topic composition well

Shen Taoxin of Hutangqiao Junior High School in Wujin District

Topic composition is changed to full-proposition and semi-proposition composition, which is like a free and flexible stage and is welcomed by teachers and students. However, with new things, there will always be new problems. The implication is that topic composition is not necessarily easy to write. The key problem lies in the beginning, that is, the idea of examination.

Topic composition is free of material selection and has a large space for conception, but it is necessary to draw up an appropriate topic and reveal subtle ideas under this topic. When reviewing a topic, we should first look at the content of the topic and grasp the core of the topic for divergent thinking. Secondly, focus on your familiar and confident "points", cut in and concentrate on breaking through. For example, with the theme of "door", your mind will flash across the door of home, school, shop, football goal, country and soul, and then think about it carefully. What kind of door has something to say? Maybe this "door" has made you feel sad and unhappy, and you have been led.

Of course, judging a topic is not that easy. You have a lot to say about a topic in your heart, but there are also some things you can't write. Here we should use some skills to get twice the result with half the effort. First of all, we can recall the famous articles we have read to trigger inspiration. For example, with the theme of "Moon", there are many words left by scholars since ancient times, such as Silent Night by Li Bai and Moonlight on the Lotus Pond by Zhu Ziqing. If you have a certain accumulation in peacetime, you can use these beautiful words to find your own "moon" at this time. She can be the bright moon carved on your head, she can be the moonlight flowing by the lotus pond, and she can even leave a trail of the moon with her feet. In this case, we can learn from them, imitate their ideas and patterns, or intercept a part to make a pregnant embryo. Write only your interests and opinions.

Secondly, look at the topic with life. What happened recently that made you feel, excited and shocked? These things happened around you, and you have experienced them personally, which makes you remember them vividly. Then there is the source of your creation, which is called "living water in life"! Take "SARS" as an example. You can talk a lot because there are many sources of information, but what really happens around you is the most valuable material. Because it is the most authentic, because it is the most profound, and you wrote it, "everyone kept it in mind but didn't write it."

After passing the critical threshold of examination and centering, there are still several problems to pay attention to.

First, don't treat the topic as a title. The title is a face and the title is a point, which is the eye of your article and conveys the appearance of the article. Novel and unique titles can make readers feel refreshed. For example, taking "book" as the topic, some people's topics are "reading while lying down, being a man while standing up", "learning with the same people" and "picking up shells from a sea of books".

The second is to avoid digression. Although the topic composition can be "the sea is wide and the fish jumps, and the sky is high and birds fly", don't let others fail to find you. You can look back at your own topic and adjust your direction at an appropriate time.

The third is to prevent fiction. You have to have real feelings to move people. Don't talk nonsense all day. You'd rather see the truth in simplicity than exaggerate it, making people feel like they are singing a big drama.

Topic composition is a new thing, but the basis of writing has not changed. Only by paying attention to the accumulation of book knowledge and social knowledge can we "write like a god"

(This article was published in Changzhou Education News 192)

How to write the beginning and end of a composition?

The beginning and end of the composition are important positions for the marking teacher to read, so creating a wonderful beginning and end will make the article appear "bright spots", thus attracting the attention of the marking teacher and improving his composition score.

Write a wonderful beginning, love at first sight.

The ancients called the beginning of the article "phoenix head", which means that the beginning should be beautiful, exquisite, novel, appropriate, creative, shocking and attractive, so that the marking teacher will fall in love at first sight and have a feeling of eager to read and then quickly. Therefore, before writing, we must carefully conceive, deliberate and be precise.

(a) Design inscriptions, new eyes and ears

If there is an essay "Friend, I want to say thank you", it begins like this:

Fate, let me know you in September when osmanthus flowers are in full bloom; Dream on, let me vomit with you in the scorching sun in June. My friend, in the four springs when I went to Qiu Lai with you, friendship made me cherish it all the more. It is you who make my gloomy days wonderful, you make me discover the beauty of life, and you make me control it proudly and modestly. Everything, let me follow the footsteps of walking with you. -Inscription.

In this article, the examinee ingeniously set an inscription in front of the text, which not only rendered a strong atmosphere, but also set a lyric tone for the full text; At the same time, it implicitly explained the reason of "I want to say thank you" and skillfully interpreted the title. And the sentence pattern is neat, literary and charming.

(2) This is what the words mean, and the winding path leads to a secluded place.

For example, the composition "Beautiful Life" with a perfect score in the senior high school entrance examination begins:

Some people like to compare life to a road, some people like to compare life to a glass of wine, and some people send a signal that life is a mess. I like to compare life to flowers.

After laying out other people's various understandings of life, the little author changed the subject and revealed his own point of view: "I like to compare life to flowers." This leads to the main part of the article, which can be said as saying this and that, playing hard to get, winding path leading to a secluded place, and lasting charm.

(3) Pave the floor, arrange the details and get ready to go.

There is an excellent composition entitled "Door", which begins like this:

Green pushed open the door of spring.

Thunderstorm pushed open the door of summer.

Fruit pushed open the door of autumn.

Xue Rui pushed open the door of winter.

Books open the door to knowledge.

Wisdom pushes open the door of ideal.

Ideal has opened the door to success.

Listen, there are doors everywhere. ...

At the beginning of this paper, the author uses eight consecutive sentences with the same structure and meaningful meaning to give the unique meaning of "door" from different angles, which not only reveals the rich meaning of "door", but also forms an advanced and unstoppable momentum, which naturally leads to the theme of "pushing the door of life" below.

(d) Objects of interest secretly cross their positions.

I have seen a painting called

"Forever Love" left a deep impression on me from the beginning:

The morning sun came out and the lake clothed it; The new moon rises and the stars accompany it; Spring flowers bloom and green leaves set off.

Lining; Birds are singing, crickets are accompanying them ... Everything in the world is telling us the story of love.

In this article, the author starts with natural phenomena and describes that many things in nature are full of richness.

"Care" and use anthropomorphic methods to make these things human. You don't have to read it, then you know that you must transition to the related theme of "care should also exist between people", such as water fashion, and write it naturally.

Lu Ji, a writer in the Eastern Jin Dynasty, said: "If the article is spoken, it is good to quit." This sentence is also appropriate to describe the beginning of the article. There are many ways to start, and it is difficult to list them one by one. But in short, the beginning must have its own characteristics, so as to attract the marking teacher from the beginning and leave a deep impression on him, thus improving the scoring level of the whole article.

Second, temper a precise ending and make the finishing touch.

Xie Zhen, a scholar in the Ming Dynasty, said: "The ending is like ringing a bell, and the sound is more than enough." Indeed, a good ending of an article can produce the artistic effect of "lingering for three days", enhance the appeal of the article, arouse readers' thinking and * * *, and immerse readers in the realm of the article for a long time.

(A supplementary postscript, lingering.

For example, the title of the senior high school entrance examination in Taizhou, Jiangsu Province is "Only One", and there is an excellent composition "Mr. Lu Xun, Only One". After the text, the author added a "postscript":

Teacher Wang is waiting for us to step out of the flashy sea, slowly step into his heart and communicate with him in the depths of his soul!

-P.S.

In the main part of the article, the author shows the extraordinary value of Lu Xun and his works, shows his indignation in the face of social indifference, and then calls on us to get close to and read Lu Xun and his works. In the postscript part, we are called to communicate with Mr. Lu Xun from his perspective, so that the article can further hit the reader's heart and approach Lu Xun. It can be said that this postscript is the finishing touch and complements the main part of the article.

(b) Ask thought-provoking questions

There is an excellent middle school student composition "Simple is not simple", which lists all kinds of "simple is not simple" phenomena.

After analyzing the dialectical relationship between simplicity and non-simplicity, at the end of the article, the author writes:

We all have both simplicity and non-simplicity. The question is what kind of simplicity and non-simplicity we should pursue.

What do you say, my friend?

Here, the author skillfully puts forward the important proposition of "what kind of simplicity and non-simplicity to pursue", which arouses readers' deep thinking and inspires people to make correct choices and pursue meaningful life. Although the author didn't say it clearly, it was thought-provoking and alarming.

Composition title: The Story of Growing Up

Beginning: Everyone has a song of his own, a song of his own creation, because our growth is like a wonderful song, which makes us memorable. Growing up is different. There are joys and sorrows, joys and sorrows, thoughts and explorations, pursuits and longings, successes and failures. However, my growth is also colorful.

End: I like this sentence: [If a person sinks, his talent will always be cloudy. If he is proud, his talent will be lightning. If he goes out into the society, he should learn to applaud himself when he is most helpless. Give yourself a smile in the dark. "Life is a long way. I only spent 12 spring, summer, autumn and winter. My road is endless. But I know that no matter how long and bumpy this road is, I am

Composition title: the taste of-

Being cared for by teachers is a kind of happiness, being helped by others is also a kind of happiness, and helping others is a kind of happiness. Although this is a little help, my heart is full of joy and pride. If everyone can help others, then the world will become a beautiful world! )-Tan Xiutao's "The Taste of Happiness"

The autumn wind gently blows the fallen leaves, and the birds seem tired of flying leaves and hide in their nests. The grass is dead, and the cool autumn wind seems to be tired of drifting. I can't help but think of one thing in the third grade. Although it was very small, it embarrassed me at that time and was a great education for me. The autumn wind is still blowing the fallen leaves, still blowing my cheeks, gentle and cool. )-Liu Yingxiu's "The Taste of Embarrassment"

On the road of my growth, I always left my footprints everywhere, with happy memories, beautiful yearning, joy of success and troubles of failure, most of which are happiness, emotion, resentment and anger. However, what I can't forget most is that embarrassing morning. I should thank that embarrassing morning for not being at a loss, but I should also say "goodbye" to that embarrassing morning because it was embarrassing.

Recalling one's own growth process is like an overturned five-flavor bottle, which is sour, bitter, spicy and astringent, but not sweet. Although failure is hateful, it is the first step towards success. I drank a bottle of Rhizoma Coptidis and said, "The taste of failure is really unpleasant." )-Dong Chenggong's "The Taste of Failure"

When I was a child, it was you who spent so many happy days with me. Let you tell me that you still have maternal love, so no matter how long the days are and how far the land is, I want to enjoy your love in your arms. The taste of missing is like a bitter cup of coffee. Although you can add some sugar, it still makes people haggard. )-Yang Chen's The Taste of Missing.

Wildfire never completely devoured them, but they grew taller in the spring breeze. Spring has come, Sister Liu's long hair flutters gently in the air, floret's cheeks show a bright smile, and naughty little grass makes faces at you in the wind. Bathed in the spring breeze, looking at this beautiful scenery, my thoughts have drifted to four years ago. -Yi Yongqiang's The Taste of Success.

People will experience a lot in their life, but happiness is often the most desirable. Because happiness is a psychological experience, it can be said that it is far away or just around the corner. Happiness is scattered around us like stars, almost at your fingertips, don't you think? As long as people face the complicated life with a childlike innocence, always pursue the light and yearn for happiness, you will definitely become a happy pony. )