Ambition is the wings that fly high; Love is a barrier against the wind. A strong heart can be higher than a mountain, and a pure heart can be wider than the sea. Gratitude can reap true feelings, tolerance can win respect, and dedication can warm the world. The heart is a beam of light; One heart can light up the whole world ...

Please write a composition on the topic of "Heart".

Requirements: (1) The topic is self-made and the style is not limited; (2) No less than 600 words; (3) The real name, school name and place name shall not appear in the text.

Exhibition of outstanding works:

The most beautiful Shangri-La in my heart.

As long as you fly forward bravely, you can always fly freely in your own sky, and that is the most beautiful Shangri-La in your heart.

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Dawn bites the night's lips and leaves blood in the sky. The rising sun in the east rises in hundreds of millions of expectant hearts, hands folded, and everyone is willing to move forward bravely with hope.

Time ran aground in the winter of childhood, and my father and I stood on the top of the mountain together, waiting for the rising sun. In the red morning light, I was delighted to see the sun rising slowly from behind the mountain. Bathed in the warmth, my father looks particularly tall. He told me gently, "Children, take every step with hope."

How many years have passed, my father's voice still lingers in my ears, teaching me to laugh at the bumps and mud on the road of youth.

The rainy season comes as scheduled, and my sadness is like a continuous drizzle, which is closely buried in my heart. Why am I getting weaker and weaker in front of study? Why am I more and more worried about my friends? The road to youth is over.

Sitting on the balcony, the wet wind blew my wet eyes, and I finally couldn't help crying. Cry out all my hesitation and anxiety, cry out all the ups and downs in my life.

"Cry!" The big hand fell firmly on my shoulder, giving people warmth and stability in this cool autumn. My father touched my head affectionately, as if the sadness was being erased by him layer by layer. "There are many smiles and tears on the road of youth. Always walk with a strong hope, and you will find many surprises dotted with you in your future life. " My father looked into the distance, said silently, and turned to look at me. In his dark eyes, I saw expectations and beliefs.

"Heart of Hope", I repeat it alone, I will plant it deeply in my heart again and again, and all doubts will disappear instantly. On the road of life, we grow up imperceptibly and have a lot of expectations. There is no "bow" in the dictionary of youth, and some are strutting.

I suddenly realized the warmth of that winter day many years ago, and the heart of hope had already been sown in my heart, taking me through the bumpy road in the future.

I stood up and looked into the distance, telling myself that as long as I bravely flew forward and had hope in my heart, I could always fly in the free sky, which was the most beautiful Shangri-La in my heart.

Full score reason:

This article was rated as the perfect benchmark article for the following reasons:

The proposed topic is novel and unique, and the deduction takes care of nature. As soon as readers saw the topic "Shangri-La in my heart", they felt "a little sweet", beautiful and durable. At the same time, the opening point, the care at the end and the structure are integrated, which shows the writing skills of candidates.

The description is vivid and delicate, and the philosophy is inspiring. "Dawn bit the lips of the night and left blood on the horizon", "Time stayed in my childhood winter", "The wet wind wet my eyes" and so on. Integrating one's own feelings into the description, there is a kind of shocking power that can only be produced by understanding ~ "Hope, take every step" is my father's simple words, which not only gives the author, but also gives readers profound enlightenment.

Indifferent, not fame and fortune

Parting is a melodious song, missing is a cup of mellow wine, Bing Xin is a goose flying south, and caring about Gu Teng. ...

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Withered vines hang on old branches, and crows croak when they return at dusk.

I'm going! it's been hard for lovers to part ...

Wife: Go well, a piece of ice heart is in the jade pot.

Son: Dad, go ahead. A letter from home is worth a ton of gold.

Mother: The child is going well, but the mother is worried when she goes to Wan Li Road!

Tiny bridge,flowing brook,hamlet homes

Alas! It's good to be at home, but it's hard to go out! So far, I have done nothing, but I have always been "innocent". Can I look back? There is only one letter from home.

Wife: So, what is a concubine? A silver chain.

Son: The father is not young, and the son can't sleep. Only tears flow.

Mother: My heart is broken! Call back.

A piece of ice is thousands of miles away, so it is better to go home. But seeing a small bridge and flowing water, a rural family, four generations under one roof, is happy. Qiu Si, get up, anxious to return!

The path, the horses and the wind are blowing.

Oh! Lu Yu uprising, the boat was destroyed, and I rode alone ... fortunately, I met a fishing boat with leaves, but the channel in the back was blocked, and I didn't know when I would come back ... but I looked home, and the twilight was getting darker? There is a sad mist on the river waves!

Today, I know that home is still air, but I don't know, but I have lost my feeling about it, and I am speechless. My homesickness is increasing day by day. What should I do if I know that my relatives and friends miss me?

The sun is sinking in the west

Pinglan, I think of heaven and earth, there is no limit, there is no end, I am alone, tears fall! After several days of fighting, there is not a swallow, let alone a letter from home!

Bing Xin, Bing Xin Qiu, I didn't know you until now! Teach me how to miss home!

Wife, son and mother: When you came back, you came back. Burn incense for your day, kill the chicken and worship God, look around and hope that people will last for a long time ... You have no news, you don't eat at dusk, and you hide your face and cry. I care. It's only a thousand miles away.

And lovesick travelers are still at the end of the world.

I was heartbroken, but now I am heartbroken!

It's even more worrying to drown your sorrows in wine, and you're speechless when you ask flowers with tears. Sunset dream, saying: reunion tomorrow. But this is gauze. Bing Xin is dull pain!

The vine is dead, the tree is old, and the crow flies away; Small bridges and flowing water, things are human beings; The ancient road is westerly, but a thousand miles away is hard to survive ... teach me how to miss home!

If relatives and friends in Luoyang ask each other,

A piece of ice heart is in the jade pot!

Full score reason:

Concise language, quoted poems and so on can attract people's attention. It's very innovative to use the sentence "Tianjingsha Qiu Si" as the subtitle, which is connected in series from top to bottom. The expression of semi-classical Chinese stands out in many examination compositions, including Bing Xin by the master and Trouble by the family. Far-reaching and flowing, showing the rich cultural heritage of candidates.

The touching heart is hidden under the locust tree.

The dense night soaked the purple window branches, and the faint scent of Sophora japonica in the dream seemed like a clear soft wave. ...

Under the moon. Path. Laohuaishu ...

Another moonlit night, the wind gradually rises and falls, confusing people's hair and thoughts, and only that heart is particularly warm.

The locust tree is at the end of the path, and there is a wonton shop under it. The stall owner is a kind old man who looks like June 1st. Although it is the end of the path, the business is particularly good, and regular customers and new customers are constantly coming.

Students who study at night go home in groups of three or five, ride the main road and spread out at the fork in the road. I rode alone on the road. Darkness came and cold came. I sang songs to encourage myself, but that nameless loneliness climbed the new moon and hung high in my heart.

Finally, I got under the locust tree and got off to relieve boredom. It happened that the old man closed the stall and had a rest today. The old man just saw me and greeted me with a smile. "Little girl, do you want to eat wonton? I shook my head. He went on to say, "I just finished class in the evening. I'm hungry. Come to grandpa's house. Grandpa invites you to dinner today. " I sat down happily.

I have heard of this old man. His wife has passed away. Apart from government subsidies, he only lives in this store every month. The burden of life overwhelmed him. But when beggars beg, they bring a bowl of steamed wonton; Students who come home late from school can always feel love in the dim light when there is no light in the alley. Moved emotions surged more than once. ......

Under the moon, the locust tree and the old man form a harmonious picture in the late autumn night. After eating wonton, they unloaded their fears and continued their journey with affection and love.

On the road, the cold and darkness disappeared without a trace, but the joy of enjoying the moon was a little more. Tonight, the moon is like bean sprouts, playfully playing with the water waves, and the lake is buried in the flash {Zheng Golden phoenix tree is playing his own fairy tale. ...

The busy figure of the old man is particularly slender under the moon, and that touch carries my heart hidden under the locust tree and accompanies me through one dark moonless night after another. ...

Sitting by the window, I opened my diary and wrote this night with the fragrance of Sophora japonica. It was so quiet and mellow. ...

Full score reason:

The touching heart is hidden under the locust tree. Why? It turned out to be an old man who had never met before, serving a bowl of steaming wonton in the middle of the night, which was real and pure. There is no magnificent feat, and there is no rhetoric of "making the gods cry". Everything is self-evident, natural and simple, with a strong atmosphere of life, which shows that the candidates' efforts in selecting materials are different. At the same time, in the process of painting "Sophora japonica under the moon and the old man form a harmonious night scene in late autumn", every word is thoughtful, every sentence is affectionate, and the scene is mixed, which is well-founded and has endurance.

Dance with your heart

In a flash, the world of ice and snow was suddenly enlightened and full of vitality. It turns out that God warms the sky with love and warms the earth with his heart.

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Dance with your heart and let the smile be its partner; Raise your mouth slightly to show the power of a smile. At this moment, my heart is flying gently. It's not that our representative said, "I can't get rid of this situation, I frown, but I take it to heart"; "How much sorrow can there be, just like a river flowing eastward" is not our portrayal; "What a sad sentence!" This is not our slogan.

Please smile, it is the most beautiful star in the night sky, the most touching ballad when you are lonely, and the most wonderful medicine when you are sad. Only a smile can dance with the heart * * *, and deduce the legendary story through the ages. A smile is a rose that blooms in your mouth inadvertently, which makes people ecstatic.

Dance with the heart and let self-confidence be its partner. Please hold your head high and present a confident face. This second, my heart is humming silently. Let's taste the graceful combination of "flowers drifting and water flowing, a kind of lovesickness and two leisure places"; Let's experience the passage of time with cherry, red, banana and green. Let's go and listen to the generous statement "Don't be idle, it's a shame to be a teenager"; Let's go back to the helpless sigh that "the world is cloudy and I am alone, and everyone is drunk and I am alone".

Please be confident, it is a passport to happiness, a universal lock to open sadness, and a wonderful fan to drive away inferiority. Only with self-confidence, can we foil each other with our hearts and create a miracle of success with passion. Self-confidence is the most beautiful sunshine in your heart, which makes people feel gratified and yearning. ...

Smile and sadness will disappear; Self-confidence, so sorrow disappears;

Open the window of the soul, the world becomes colorful; Dance with your heart, and the world becomes beautiful in spring. Please dance with your heart and never take a curtain call. ...

Full score reason:

This is an exam composition with a unique perspective. "Dance with the heart, let the smile be its companion", "Dance with the heart, let the confidence be its companion", life is alive, if there is no "smile" and "confidence", your life will be bleak. "Smile, sadness disappears; Self-confidence makes sorrow disappear ",which is philosophical and enlightening. The language of the full text is fresh and beautiful, and there are all kinds of quotations from ancient poems and sentences, without the slightest feeling of affectation and piling up, which is poetic.

Listen, mom's heart.

Only mothers are good in the world, and children without mothers are like grass.

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The room collapsed. Oh, my God, it's so dark. Baby, are you okay?

Baby, I didn't wake you, did I? Mom is really afraid that the loud noise of the house collapse will wake you up, crush you and touch your sleeping face. Mom is relieved.

Baby, God bless you, you are all right, and you are still sleeping peacefully. Are you hungry? Thirst?

Baby, this disaster came too suddenly, and my mother was not prepared at all, so she could only hold you in her arms to prevent the hard wall from hurting your delicate skin.

Baby, did you sleep well? Mom felt it, just like when I was pregnant with you, I felt that you slept soundly.

Baby, pregnant in October, do you know the joy of mother's heart? I feel your breath, your heartbeat is connected with my heartbeat, and your pulse is connected with my pulse.

Baby, did you hear that? Did you hear mom's heart beating? Mom's heart beats for you. If you die, your mother's heart will die, so you still sleep well and there is nothing abnormal.

Baby, mom's back is pinned down by the wall and it hurts. Strangely, it doesn't hurt at all when mom touches your sleeping face.

Baby, your lips are a little dry and wrinkled. Are you thirsty? Stay a little longer, someone will come to save you soon, mom, hold on! Mom's here, baby. Come on, wait for your uncle and aunt to nurse you, okay?

Honey, mom just slept for a while. Mom dreamed that you were drinking milk, and you looked very happy. Mom is afraid that you won't wake up, but mom knows that you will wake up and drink milk, right?

Baby, mom can't hold on. Sorry, mom can't breast-feed you. Baby, mom's gone. Take care, baby, baby. ...

Postscript: 12 May, 14: 28, a major earthquake occurred in Wenchuan, Sichuan. Rescuers rushed to the disaster area to provide rescue. In the ruins, rescuers found a mother protecting the sleeping baby in her arms. Mother is dead. The medical staff found a mobile phone in the baby's firewood. On the mobile phone, my mother wrote a short message: Baby, if you are still alive, remember that my mother loves you! This is the interpretation of maternal love, and it is the mother's broad mind! Great mothers protect their children with their own bodies! The rescuers present were moved by it, and they all heard their mother's voice: Baby, mom loves you. ...

Full score reason:

This is a masterpiece of winning the examination room with emotion. There are so many touching stories in the Wenchuan earthquake that candidates skillfully use the second person to talk to the baby in faded clothes in the tone of the world's greatest mother. The word love is everywhere. Really, after reading this article, everyone will burst into tears. Moreover, the arrangement of the postscript is also very clever, which not only supplements the relevant plot, but also takes care of the topic without revealing traces, and draws a satisfactory full stop for the article.

My heart tells me

I paddle,

Across the vast sea. The wind roared,

Trying to upset my boat. The waves roared,

Disturbing my course. Confused by the fog,

Cover the scenery in front of me ......

But I'm determined, and I won't back down,

Because, my heart tells me-

Ahead, my dream is shining!

I was disappointed once, because the depressed score brought me too much sadness. I have been wandering, because the hope of success is far from me. I have hesitated, because there are too many stumbling stones under my feet, so I can't hold my head high and move forward smoothly. But I'm still firm and don't back down. My heart tells me that my dream is shining ahead!

In the distance between the starting point and my dream, I saw surging rivers, continuous icebergs and high walls ... I was scared, but my heart told me that this was a process that I had to go through before I could reach the other side of my dream. Only in this way can dreams be valuable. So, I embarked on the most difficult ice-breaking trip.

I started to build boats and cross the river. I spilled sweat on the land, and the sun never slept, which lit up my hope. Finally, a miracle appeared, and the river became a stream. I stepped on the stream and saw the grassland and rainbow, which is my dream place. I smiled, because my dream was near, and my heart told me: because of faith, because of strength, because endless enthusiasm is burning! The journey is long, but the sweat is still running. ......

My heart tells me that my struggle is like a romantic and affectionate song. The fog is hazy, and so is my heart. I can only turn sweat into a river and let it flow eastward. This is also a sad and sad song, always taking the storm as the main theme and collecting the most beautiful finale with dreams. This is a song with lofty aspirations and lofty sentiments. Under the warmth of sunshine, the moisture of sweat and the care of true feelings, the most beautiful dream flowers will always bloom.

Yes, I swear to heaven and earth with my heart, I have faith, I have strength, I have endless enthusiasm, and more importantly, I have a heart that never stops moving forward. I am walking on my own road with great interest, even if it is stormy ahead. Dark clouds can't cover the sun, yes, they can't!

My footsteps still haven't stopped, because my heart tells me that my dream is shining ahead!

Full score reason:

This is a philosophical paper. It is charming and attractive to start with a short new poem. When disappointed, hesitant and faced with difficulties, how should we spend it? My heart tells me one by one-my dream is shining ahead! As long as there is a dream, everyone will be full of hope. "Go ahead, there is a sky ahead", reading this article can really give people strength.

The clever use of various rhetorical methods, such as metaphor, personification and parallelism, and the staggered use of long sentences and short sentences, all reflect the examinee's ability and foundation to master the language.

A woman's ambition

"Heroes are sad about beauty." The long history has not neglected women. Zhou Youwang's bonfire shows many officials, but people can't praise them. "Riding a princess of mortals laughs, no one knows litchi", nor can Yang Yuhuan. But Mulan had a man's heart and joined the army instead of her father, leaving an eternal story; Yue Nv Xi made Yue state "three thousand Yue families can swallow Wu"; The women generals in Yangmen are all ambitious and loyal to the country.

On the edge of the Yellow River, I saw that the Yellow River was choppy and seemed to annex the world. In the mist, one person stopped to wait and see.

Looking at the water of the Yellow River, I have the heart to do something. There is a flash in front of your eyes. Let's go, let's go, now that we're halfway there, we can't turn back. Your heart is crossed, back, back and forward. Oh, Mulan, your heart is really like a man, decisive. Instead of your father joining the army, you fought on the battlefield like a man and were loyal to your country. At that moment, your heart seemed to become a man's heart, powerful. Galloping on the battlefield, you have made countless feats and demonstrated your honor, but your heart is as calm as a man.

Mulan and Wonder Woman, with their ambitions, left a flickering chapter in the history of thousands of years, leaving women's ambitions deeply imprinted in the long river of history.

The battlefield originally belonged to men, but at this moment, you are fighting for this feat with the ambition of women. The Yangmen female general proved a woman's ambition with facts.

In the battle, the two armies are at war, and the enemy despises you and laughs at men in Song and Yuan Dynasties. You, ambitious and angry, bear the hatred of the country and your family with your weak shoulders. You have the heart to fight hard. The smoke is filled with smoke, your ambition is soaring and spinning, and the enemy's army is fleeing in panic, looking back at you in horror. The ambition of the Yangmen female general won the war.

Yangmen women generals, a group of ambitious women, have left a shining chapter in the history of thousands of years, making women's ambition have a far-reaching influence in the history of Chang Yan.

The sky was gray, and above the execution ground, there was a person kneeling, and many people looked at her.

Liu Hulan, unyielding to the power of *, left an epic for China's revolutionary course with female ambition. In the face of the enemy's money temptation, you are still loyal to your words. In the face of death, you still maintain a woman's ambition and never shed a tear.

Liu Hulan, an ambitious woman, has left a flickering chapter in thousands of years of history, leaving her ambition deeply imprinted in the long river of history.

A woman's ambition, an ambitious woman.

Full score reason:

This is a perfect work with novel materials and unique angles. Women are ambitious and indomitable. Mulan, Yangmen female general and Liu Hulan, heroines that will never go down in history, are well-known and respectable. Detailed and informative. Three different scenes, simple sketches and fine carvings, have both individual images and group images. The skillful use of the technique of restraining before promoting, the flexible arrangement of the total score structure of the full text, and the changeable sentence patterns all reflect the candidates' good Chinese literacy.

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