Bloggers who write perfect compositions according to their notes not only get high marks, but also bring an unforgettable happy journey to the writers. The college entrance examination, with tight time and great pressure, is not easy to write a perfect composition. But it is undeniable that there are always so many children writing it every year, and so many children leave regrets that they could have got full marks but didn't get them. The following ten skills are actually summed up from previous perfect compositions. Therefore, from candidates to candidates, I believe it can give more inspiration to the candidates behind.
First, find the best angle.
1. Correct inspection.
First of all, we should carefully study the composition proposition, repeatedly try to figure out the intention of the proposer, and then make clear the various requirements of writing.
(1) Decompose the test questions: properly decompose the composition test questions so as to have a clear understanding of the composition requirements and not deviate from the meaning of the questions due to omissions. Generally speaking, a composition test can be divided into three parts: topic, material and attention. Of course, not every essay question has these three parts every year. However, if the composition is to meet the meaning of the question, it is necessary to make an accurate, detailed and comprehensive attempt to each part of the test question. Only in this way, when writing, candidates can express themselves to the letter, otherwise they will "lose thousands of miles."
(2) Finding keywords: Finding the keywords (or phrases) in the above three parts is the focus of the test questions. Just like people's eyes, what to write or even how to write an article can be seen from this word. At the same time, in the process of searching for keywords, the requirements of the test questions will become simple and clear, which is convenient for candidates to grasp in the tense exam.
(3) Turn the hidden into the obvious: explain the hidden information in the test questions and make it explicit.
(4) roll with the punches: When writing for the college entrance examination, we should choose an idea and an angle. Once you choose, you should go all out wholeheartedly. In other words, the angle of the article should be small, just one thing, dig deep and write a person, one thing, one thing and one reason profoundly and powerfully.
For example, "Tolerance III" written by a candidate in Beijing is very inclusive, so it needs to be written from a small place, which is very inclusive, so it needs to be cut in from a clever place. Starting with the mutual acquiescence between the old residents and new friends of goldfish and the gentleness and beauty after the red and yellow colors are reconciled, this paper puts forward that "tolerance is needed in life" and then sublimates it. Thereby deepening the theme. The right angle makes the writing natural and smooth, such as the natural gushing of spring water, which is full of interest everywhere. Language, the bridge of communication barriers, written by a candidate in Guangdong Province, can accurately examine questions and closely link the relationship between language and communication. By describing a small incident between mother and daughter, it shows a truth: if communication is not strengthened by language, there will be barriers and contradictions between the two generations; By using language to communicate, these obstacles and contradictions can be easily eliminated. The full text conforms to the meaning of the topic.
2. Clever association.
Liu Xie's "Wen Xin Diao Shen Long Si" said: "So I think about it silently and think about it for a thousand years; Sad and moving, see Wan Li; Between chanting, breathing the sound of pearls and jade; Before, the color of the storm. "
Qin Mu, a famous contemporary writer, once said, "Lenovo is like a circuit at a certain point. With a circuit, electricity can pass, and without knowledge, the line cannot be unblocked. "
Xie An, the prime minister of the Eastern Jin Dynasty, loves literature and is good at talking. One day, it was snowing outside the window. Xie An took his nephews and nieces to enjoy the snow scene and was not excited by poetry. He wanted to test his nephew's poetic talent, so he pointed to the snow outside the window and asked with a smile, "What is snow like?" On reflection, my nephew Xie Lang said, "Sprinkling salt in the air can be simulated", and my niece Xie Daowen said calmly, "If catkins are not blown by the wind".
Xie An listened to Xie Lang's words: "No, who has the strength to sprinkle salt all over the sky?" Salt is about to fall into the air. Can salt be used as a metaphor to accurately express the dynamics of heavy snow? "Xie An listened to his niece, clapped his hands and laughed." Good! All right! The wind blows catkins into the sky, just like snowflakes flying all over the sky. Catkins are as white as snow, and snow is as light as catkins. This metaphor is really vivid and appropriate. Xie Lang compares snowflakes to salt grains and catkins. Whether it is salt grains or catkins, they all think of it because they see snowflakes in front of them. This is Lenovo.
The so-called association is the thinking activity that people recall or think of another related thing from something at present on the basis of observation. Take something as the trigger point, so as to arbitrarily associate something related to it. When making multi-directional association, we must pay attention to the breadth, depth and novelty of association.
We don't have to guess whether the proposer thought of Mr. Shen Congwen when he was doing this problem. But we can say that it is most appropriate to compare Mr. Shen Congwen and his works with "the agility of water and the calmness of mountains". The author believes that Mr. Shen Congwen, as the narrative object, is a vision, a kind of wisdom and a unique understanding of people and mountains and rivers. On April day in the world, a candidate from Jiangsu Province linked the topic of "watery life" with Xu Zhimo's "watery life", persistent love and unique eternal life, and naturally and accurately understood its meaning.
Second, highlight personality charm.
Candidates should highlight their own personality rather than obliterate their own personality characteristics when writing. Only by paying attention to individuality can your composition be vivid, cordial and fascinating. Avoid empty slogan terms and fully display your talents.
"Development level" requires candidates to have "personal characteristics" in their compositions. In order to meet this requirement, we should pay attention to:
First, we should have a vision and be innovative in our ideas, that is, we should know things from new aspects, express things, say things that others have not said, and show our creativity. The traitor in troubled times written by a candidate in Fujian is a passionate work for Cao Cao's "rehabilitation". In everyone's eyes, a white-faced traitor, in the author's pen, has become a talented and unparalleled traitor. Is there any way to avenge him? Fascinating. A letter written by a Hunan examinee to Meng Mu is full of irony, which reveals shocking family education problems in an ironic way. From the secular point of view, the virtual "future mother" has "refuted" all kinds of behaviors taught by Meng Mu, which makes people laugh, but this kind of smile is by no means a relaxed smile, but a tearful smile, which reveals that we can't ignore the care for our children for a little temporary economic benefit. Family education begins with learning from Meng Mu. This article exposes some drawbacks of the modern education system.
Second, we should find new ways to innovate in the structure and expression of the article.
For example, the whole article is combined in a brand-new form and expresses ideas in fluent and vivid language. Intertwined loyalty and righteousness--a candidate from fujian approached sung river. Like telling a story, the analysis of characters is accurate and unique. At the end of the article, I once again quoted Song Jiang's life creed "A bowl of wine is the best friend in life and death …" and pinned my expectations on the characters. "The castle peak can't be covered, after all, it flows eastward." Song Jiang left endless thoughts for future generations. A Fujian examinee wrote "Spring Awakening", which gave full play to his imagination and brought our thoughts back to the Song Dynasty. On the surface, it describes a spring outing to overcome laziness in the form of a story, but in fact it describes Su Shi's leap from depression to awakening, from his perception of mountains and rivers to finding himself and getting rid of shackles. Spring here is a pun.
Third, you can write about the "freshness" of students' life.
Today's middle school students, many people's aspirations, tastes, habits, language colors and pace of life are very "trendy" and even "alternative". Don't be afraid to touch these things. Don't "purify" the colorful life of modern students. Don't give up the free and easy energy of young people. As long as we look at it tactfully and publicize it flexibly, we will have unexpected aesthetic effects. For example, in The Growth of Water written by a candidate in Jiangsu Province, the metaphor of "water is like a child" and "mountain is like a father" gives the topic fresh life, while the natural birth and association of consanguinity makes the topic speculative thinking colorful. In vivid language, the full text not only describes the process of children's growth under the care and care of their parents, but also vividly shows the process of the stream gradually merging into the sea, entitled "The mountains are calm and the sea is deep blue".
Fourth, we should pay attention to the standard of writing punctuation.
"Writing standard" does not mean that the font is beautiful, but that there are no typos and graffiti, the writing format is correct, and the volume is neat. The correctness and clarity of fonts in the test paper is very important. When writing, it is best that the pen tip is neither thick nor thin, the color is neither deep nor shallow, and the font is neither too big nor too small. The whole text can be written clearly in one stroke. The typo should not be underestimated. Although the deduction is limited, more will affect the whole article. Therefore, try to avoid uncertain words and be careful when writing. "Correct punctuation" refers to the correct use of indicating points, which conforms to its ideographic function and makes the language more in line with the habits of grammar and rhetoric. Therefore, the use of punctuation can not be wrong, can not be more, can not be less, especially the phenomenon of teasing to the end is prohibited. To achieve these two points, it is very important to develop good writing habits at ordinary times. A neat, clear and beautiful paper will make the marking teacher fresh and pleasing to the eye, praise your composition and help you win the college entrance examination. On the contrary, a messy paper will affect your grades. In particular, some provinces should pay more attention to the cleanliness of test papers when using online marking.
Third, show the beauty of innovation.
Zheng Banqiao, a poet and painter in the Qing Dynasty, wrote a couplet: Simplify the Sanqiu tree by deleting the complexity, and mark the new February flowers in another way. /kloc-Oscar Wilde, an English poet in the 0/9th century, said: The first person who compares beauty to flowers is a genius, the second person who compares beauty to flowers is a mediocrity, and the third person who compares beauty to flowers is a fool. It is necessary to activate the sense of innovation and achieve "no one has me, and people have me." Always seek change, change and seek new. Hegel also said: "Content becomes content because it contains mature forms. "
The purpose of setting "innovation" in the development level of college entrance examination composition is to encourage students to cultivate creative thinking through one aspect. Or new ideas, or fresh materials, or ingenious ideas, or unique reasoning and imagination, or personality characteristics. These aspects are all places that may contain "innovation" factors. We should pay attention to and encourage all the places that are conducive to cultivating students' creative spirit and thinking analysis in college entrance examination compositions.
Li Yu, an ancient Chinese opera theorist in China, said in "Follow the Fate": "Change is new, and constant is rotten; Change is born, and change is board. " The same is true of high school composition training. Only by putting innovative consciousness into writing all the time can it be possible to write a composition with good content and form.
How can we innovate? The important thing is that you think deeper than the average person, and you can understand the essential meaning from ordinary things. The ancients put it well: "whoever writes a composition expresses its meaning, comes first, speaks it and sweeps it away;" The second time, orthodox language is not available; If you come for the third time, you can only use it if you are fluent. "These three meanings represent a process of deepening understanding and deepening articles. Specific efforts can be made from the following aspects:
1. Carefully create the beginning and end. Your carefully designed "highlights" and your wonderful pen should be displayed at the front of the article as far as possible, not hidden at the end of the article. If you want to "show your face", you must be "full of color" and you can't engage in "trying poverty". The article "A Rusted Lock" written by a candidate in Henan Province gradually found the root of the problem: self-confidence goes with the years. The title of the article is a pun, on the one hand, it refers to the real lock, on the other hand, it refers to the spiritual lock, which is vivid. The article "Chrysanthemum Fragrance Season" written by a candidate in Chongqing shows a vast picture from the beginning, which is rich in imagination, rich in literary flavor and fascinating. The last two paragraphs sublimate the theme, take care of it before and after, and the writing is natural and smooth.
2. keep up with the times. The author of "Fashion is popular, I am determined" written by the examinee of a higher vocational college in Beijing first uses "fashion" as the opening words of the article, and then expounds the so-called fashion with various "fashions" in real life. Then, through extensive quotation, it lists the fashion life of all walks of life in ancient and modern China and abroad. It is closely connected with modern life and has the characteristics of the times. The advantage of "Burning Opinions into a CD" written by a candidate in Jiangxi Province is that it does not stick to the old model and adopts the form of online search, which looks very graphic. Historical and realistic examples are naturally presented to readers, "search results" become the author's brief comments, and the final conclusion is naturally drawn. There is nothing special about the content of this article, but its form is the highlight.
3. Dare to think backwards. In Tolerance (VII) written by a Beijing examinee, it is easy to understand the tolerance of the big to the small and the thick to the thin, but the tolerance of the small to the wide, the tolerance of the static convection and the tolerance of the static to the noisy are really unique and extraordinary. The author's Wang Xiang, written by a candidate in Jiangsu, is imaginative and bold. It extends the tentacles of thinking to history, portrays and interprets Wang Xiang as a historical figure with a brand-new eye, and reveals a theme more profoundly: smart water can maintain a blue smart wisdom and can create a hero.
Fourth, the language is wonderful.
Language is the coat of an article. Whether it is bright or not directly affects others' first impression of you. As the ancients said, it is not far to have words without words. Without skilled language skills, just like without sophisticated technology, it is difficult to sew a high-grade fabric condensed with facts and ideas into a decent and beautiful coat. Only vivid language can infect readers and become the charm of the article. Vivid language, expressed in the scenery, is vivid and vivid, making people feel as if they were there; When writing about people, shape God into a smile and let people see what they have done; Reasoning is also harmonious, accurate and clear, giving people an internal logical force.
"Win two sentences in three years, one song and two tears" is Jia Dao's creative experience in tempering language; Du Fu's persistent pursuit of art is "indulging in human kindness sentences and making amazing words". Vivid and vivid language not only refers to gorgeous words, but also refers to an inner charm of "clear water produces hibiscus, which is naturally carved", and a realm of "the eyebrows are not painted, and the lips are red."
Wang Guowei said: "The great cause of ancient and modern times and the questioner of the university must pass through three realms:' Last night, the west wind withered the green trees, and I went to the tall building alone to look at the sky. "This first place also. My belt is getting wider, and I am haggard because of Iraq, and I don't regret it. So is this second environment. The crowd searched for her for thousands of Baidu, and suddenly looking back, the man was in the dim light.' So is this third place. None of these words are big words. But if you explain it this way, I'm afraid Yan and European governors will not allow it. "
On the road of honing language, we must go through many difficulties before we can usher in "looking for him in the crowd for thousands of Baidu, and suddenly looking back, that person is there, and the lights are dim." Field.
To examine a perfect composition, its language has the following characteristics:
1. Full of personality. According to a Fujian examinee in The Sea Depends on Heaven, he described a "trusted, spurned, admired and despised name-Zeng Guofan". He wrote different historical tasks and different lives with different styles, different angles and different laymen. A candidate in Chongqing's "A Man on a Tall Building" has a concentrated theme and is imaginative. Singing three sighs is full of poetry, implicit images, philosophy in it, vivid words and fluent language. Finally, the finishing touch is really brilliant.
2. Integration and dispersed phase combination. As the saying goes, "words are silent, actions are not far away." The article "Tolerance (VI)" written by a Beijing examinee has various sentence patterns, and the long and short sentences, interrogative sentences and declarative sentences set each other off, showing the author's extraordinary writing skills. The poet, the bright moon and the yellow flower written by a candidate in Chongqing is based on the images in the poems of two poets, and is combined into two subtitles, which are full of charm, poetic language and touching feelings.
3. It contains philosophy. The book "Making Coffee" written by a candidate in Henan Province uses excellent coffee powder as a metaphor for self-worth and boiling hot water as a metaphor for other people's advice. It advocates the combination of the two, so that the coffee cup exudes the fragrance of humanity, and shows Zhou Yan's philosophy. A Gansu examinee's "Walking in Your World" is not only closely related to the topic, but also full of philosophy and reverie. Rich vocabulary and gorgeous language, poetic and philosophical exposition of the topic theme are the outstanding characteristics of this composition.
4. Side bid and quotation. In Su Shi's Red Cliff written by a candidate in Fujian, there are both "Luoyang friends ask each other, and there is a piece of ice in the jade pot." There is also a worry that "Xiao Qiao is newly married, handsome and heroic, feather fan, black scarf, and all his jokes are gone." Magnificent and literary, it embodies the author's rich knowledge of ancient Chinese. Henan examinee's "believe him or believe yourself?" There are not only excellent comments on Emperor Taizong, King Qi and Sun Yat-sen, but also "sitting in front of the court and watching the clouds unfold in the sky." "Life is rough and feelings are more open. "Quote properly, highlight the overflowing literary talent.
Fifth, writing shows talent.
Either the words are vivid and good at quoting famous sayings, or the sentences are clever and swaying, or they are good at portraying images by rhetoric, or the sentences are meaningful and philosophical, or the thoughts are artistic and memorable. These are all literary expressions. It can be understood that candidates should be affirmed and encouraged as long as there are bright spots in their writing, so that their various language styles displayed on the basis of fluency can be properly evaluated.
For example, in "The Most Holy" written by a candidate in Fujian, "the holy of individuals, the holy of society, the holy of education and the holy of culture. Most holy. " We have to admire the young author's accurate evaluation of Confucius, the founder of Confucianism in China. Imagine if the author didn't read enough articles and didn't know everything about Confucius' life, could he write such beautiful words?
Candidates can fully show their thinking about life, reading literacy and writing skills to the marking teacher. For example, take the feeling of life as the theme of the article, take the famous words and articles read outside class as arguments, "transplant" a unique idea of an article into your own composition, imitate vivid and interesting language at home, and so on.
For example, a candidate in Jiangsu wrote "Tears of Fish, Heart of Water", in which he described his grandparents' "noisy life" with simple and seemingly unadorned brushstrokes. But in this noisy life, we see the deep love hidden in it. It can be said that the kind of "love" in Korean dramas and romance novels is just a clever ripple on the water; The kind of "love" between grandparents is the deep blue condensed by smart ripples. It is also the author's unique understanding of life. The full text of "Smart and Steady" written by a candidate in Jiangsu is straightforward, with no praise or criticism. In its original description, it explains the author's cognition of "smart and steady" and shows the author's clear attitude towards this sensitive topic.
Sixth, the style is eclectic.
In the composition of college entrance examination, "style is not limited" and "style is optional" gives candidates the freedom to choose style. Formal innovation is also a good embodiment of "ingenious conception", and it can also show and publicize the creative thinking and personality of candidates. Many candidates choose to write essays, poems, short stories, fairy tales, fables, new stories, science fiction stories and so on. , telling the truth, experimental reports, meeting minutes and celebrity conversations, drama scripts, diaries, medical instructions and other styles and get full marks. Generally, use it with caution. Don't give up if you can't use it. Some provinces do not advocate gun collision, and some marking teachers don't like it. These can't be ignored.
It is worth noting that candidates who choose to write argumentative essays should write like argumentative essays, and those who choose to write argumentative essays should write like essays, so be careful not to write four unlike essays. Judging from the specific operation process, candidates are required to:
Consider which genre this topic is most suitable for. In the form of poetry and philosophical language, The Dark Horse written by a examinee in Hebei Province expounds the growth process of a dark horse from mediocrity to blockbuster, with flexible sentence patterns, which well expresses the central idea of the article. A letter from Gansu examinee to Xiao Shenyang. The candidate chose a letter style with a high degree of freedom and "talked" directly with people to express his views. It should be said that he has a lot of courage. Using the first person can directly express your feelings, which is conducive to the expression of true feelings. The content of the article also fits the topic very well.
Choose the genre that suits you. God is Fair, written by a candidate in Fujian, infused the vitality of modern people with poetry, the essence of China for 5,000 years. Its content conforms to the times and has its own personality. In the genre of fairy tales, My Self-report written by a candidate in Jiangsu adopted a unique narrative angle, describing a hypocritical, treacherous and greedy director Zhang as a calm and upright good cadre. His corruption is described as "four seasons change different colors". It has a strong irony and is suitable for the author's writing style.
The author of "The Course of Growing Up" by a candidate in Henan turned himself into an eagle, and told a series of short stories about growing up in an eagle's tone, which was full of myths and clear and novel explanations. You are a Landscape written by a candidate in Henan Province contains poetic language in the form of prose, giving people a feeling of prose poetry, fresh and natural. Write a new idea.
Seven, to be profound.
Profound, refers to the profound insights of the composition. The argumentation is thorough and profound; The narrative is vivid and profound. The college entrance examination composition encourages profound insights, which encourages diversity, or goes deep into the essence, or reveals the reasons, or explains the results, or points out the laws, or foresees the development, or grasps the key points, or inspires people, and so on. "There are poems outside the poem, which is a good poem; If there are words outside the words, it is a good word. " Poetry is like this, and so is the article. Good articles should be sent with interest, otherwise they will be as clear and tasteless as boiling water at first sight.
Good at feeling. Rodin, a great French sculptor, once said, "There is no lack of beauty in life, but the lack of eyes to find beauty." When many students watch the same scene, some people are inspired and some people are at a loss; Experience the same thing, some have mixed feelings, some are indifferent; Faced with the same topic, some people are full of thoughts, while others are puzzled: this is the difference in perception. People with strong perception are alert, attentive, sensitive, good at discovering the beauty of life, good at stimulating inner feelings, and writing is full of "spirituality"; People with weak perception, who are deaf and blind, are not interested in everything, indifferent to everything, have no feelings, no passion and no opinion, naturally regard writing as a kind of fear.
If you want to write a profound article, you must "see people, see people and send them." If you want to have thoughts, you must go from this to that, from the outside to the inside, from the superficial to the deep (from the individual to the general), go deep into the essence through phenomena, reveal the causes of problems, and analyze them dialectically, so that your own views can be instructive.
For example, "Confidence and Listening" written by a candidate in Henan Province is well written and deeply described, which makes people feel very strong. Beautiful words, thorough analysis, in-depth description and strong style of writing are convincing. The ending is to point out the main idea, which is intriguing. In elegant writing, I have gained profound truth. The Fourth Return of Henan Examinees uses artistic techniques such as sharp turn, contrast and care to carefully construct the plot and reveal the theme. Different attitudes towards other people's comments determine the bitter and happy life of two little people with the same experience, which is thought-provoking and thought-provoking.
Eight, rich material image
Abundance means rich materials, full images and profound artistic conception.
Rich material means rich content, which should include reading accumulation, life accumulation, aesthetic accumulation and so on. If you accumulate more at ordinary times, the examination room will be used up. In this way, the composition content of the college entrance examination often presents a "rich" state. The rich materials in expository and explanatory articles are allusions, and theoretical quotations, factual examples, analogies and digital materials are more accurate and powerful. Holography mainly refers to narratives (including essays, stories and short stories, etc. ), a complete image or a complete description of the portrait, psychology, language and movements of the characters, and the characters are full and vivid; Or the narrative is concrete and complete, and the plot is tortuous; Still detailed and realistic, a little face. The profound artistic conception is mainly aimed at prose, poetry, novels and other literary genres. Far-reaching artistic conception means that "meaning" and "environment" are well integrated, or scenery and lyricism are combined to blend scenes; Or symbolic metaphor, profound meaning, or poetic, endless meaning.
For example, "Do you believe in yourself or others?" The author's thinking is broad, based on Faraday's discovery of electromagnetic waves, Copernicus and Heliocentrism, Emperor Taizong's rule of Zhenguan, Qi Huangong's victory over the imperial court and China's four modernizations. The materials are rich, convincing and characteristic of the times, and the last paragraph is inspiring. The writer's story written by a candidate in Hainan vividly explains the rich connotation of happiness with the colorful stories of writers. Rich and typical materials, no sense of piling up. The outstanding feature of this paper is the combination of detail, narration and discussion, and the surging literary talent.
Nine, the title is fascinating
The title of the perfect composition for college entrance examination is the eye of the article, which is the first contact point between the content of the article and the emotion and psychology of the reviewer, and also an important content to convey the theme of the work and show the talent of the author. As the saying goes, "a good job is half the battle, a good title is half the battle" and "a good title makes a good article half the battle". Therefore, candidates must work hard on the topic, and never take the topic directly as a topic. A simple and eye-catching topic can quickly catch the eye of the reviewer and win a good "first impression" for his composition.
Titles should be concise and vivid, and the principles of drafting titles are "small", "accurate" and "new", which can show literary talent and play a leading role.
Appropriate rhetorical devices can be used. For example, Guangdong's "linking the starry sky with language" means that the mind is the starry sky, language is the bridge, and the communication between the heart and the heart is vivid and vivid. The novel "Holding a Rattan Rope Hanging from Others" written by a examinee in Henan Province is novel and appropriate, which vividly illustrates the importance of listening to others' opinions. Full marks in college entrance examination composition.
Use ancient poetry. Ancient Chinese is the essence of China for five thousand years. "Busy, busy title and what?" The classic and renovated "What" written by Shanghai candidates. Written by Xiang Yu in Song of Gaixia gives people a strange sense of humor and ridicule. A few lines of confusion and helplessness revealed in the title are a powerful magnetic force to attract readers to read. People-oriented knowledge of gains and losses, written by a candidate in Henan Province, uses the old saying, with clear views, profound implications, gentle and rich connotations.
It has a local flavor. The words "dad" and "in-laws" seem to have a strong local flavor from the day they came into being, but the business between dad and in-laws done by a candidate in Henan is very innovative. What business will there be between the two old husbands? The title is novel and fascinating.
Use historical and literary materials. Ancient Ouyang Xiu said: "The meaning of drunkenness is not wine, but between mountains and rivers." The meaning of drunkenness in Jiangsu examinee's works is not the landscape —— On Chai Dai, one of the twelve women in Jinling, taking the two protagonists in A Dream of Red Mansions as materials, this paper analyzes the landscape relationship she pursues. Unique point of view, unusual things. A Dream of Red Mansions is one of the Four Great Classical Novels, and a candidate in Fujian is particularly eye-catching with the title of "Soul Broken Grand View Garden". The fate of Xue Baochai is much better than that of Lin Daiyu. Why did she resurrect the Grand View Garden? The different views of ordinary people are the highlight of this article.
The college entrance examination is full of essays, revealing philosophy. "I'm not a person" written by a candidate in Gansu took the lead in revealing in the form of a story that "seeing others, for others, my life is meaningful and I can become a real' person'!" Deep truth. Everyone knows that "self-confidence is the premise of success" and "self-confidence is half the battle". Self-confidence on the Road, written by a candidate in Henan, further expounds the dialectical relationship between self-confidence and success, which has benefited a lot from reading.
The college entrance examination is a perfect composition. The title of this kind of composition is novel and unique, with rich connotations. Of course, "love at first sight" is superior enough for the marking teacher. This inspires us to scrutinize and polish the topic more, so that the topic becomes the bright spot first.
X. Natural expression of true feelings
"Touching people, don't worry about love first." What is "love" in the world? "High mountains and flowing water" is a sincere friendship; "Feelings deep in the calf" are true feelings; "Leaves fall to the root" is love for the country ... "Love" is the truth of life, love, kindness and sympathy ... the silk thread that sustains life and the gurgling spring water that is the source of life.
Writing articles should also be "sincere", express true feelings and avoid affectation. "Zhuangzi Fisherman" said: "Not refined but sincere, not touching, so those who cry are not sad, and those who are angry are strict but not arrogant." Specifically, candidates should pay attention to
The next two "truthfulness": the first is "truthfulness": this mainly refers to narration. Things often reveal feelings, and the "truth" of feelings first needs the "truth" of things. The real thing is not only what the author sees and hears, but also what the author thinks (boldly imagine according to the meaning of the question). As long as it conforms to life, it can be regarded as "truth". The second is "truth": this mainly refers to discussion. People often associate emotion with reason, which is called reason. If you want to convince and impress people, you must have "emotion" to join. Therefore, truth is helpful to feelings. Only in this way can "sincerity" be "sincerity" forever.
For example, "Dad, I Love You" by a candidate in Yunnan! Love every word, tears, this is an excellent essay full of deep affection between father and daughter, which makes people cry. The article is written sincerely, without any exaggeration and affectation, unpretentious and touching. In particular, those affectionate calls to his father in the text, one after another, struck the readers' hearts heavily. ...
Fujian examinee's "Zhuang zai, warrior!" The author is deeply impressed and admired by Mr. Lu Xun's personality, behavior and personality charm. The article is full of touching feelings between the lines, which naturally and appropriately reveals the true feelings to the pen. True ocean deep, as vast as the sky, strongly arouses readers' thinking, which is thought-provoking and intriguing.