My colleague was writing, and I saw her trembling slightly and mumbling. Her handwriting is fast, not neat as before, but with feelings and parting. I patted her on the shoulder and smiled at her. She turned around and smiled at me. I found that there was no sadness in that smile, but a tacit understanding and encouragement.
Suddenly the light went out and a song sounded. The noisy classroom was quiet and became silent. We all looked up at the podium. It's the monitor that plays songs with multimedia, not friends! We are all moved by this familiar song. In the song, the monitor told us affectionately: This song spent the first New Year with us and won the first prize in the singing competition. This poem. . . . The monitor couldn't go on, and there was a sigh in the classroom. Everything in the past came to mind in tears. In the dark, the students quietly looked at the big screen and sang softly. "Friends have been together all their lives, but those days are gone ..." At this moment, there was a loud noise, and Qin Yiming, who was sitting next to me, burst into tears. I don't know how long the tears have accumulated. I couldn't help it at the moment when the song started, and big drops of tears dripped down. Still sobbing the melody of Friends. The classroom is an ocean of tears.
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When writing a composition with about 2.400 words, whether it is to remember people or narrative, it is inseparable from the description of the scene.
Writing a scene well can render an atmosphere, contrast the spiritual quality of the characters and dig the deep meaning of things. The article "Farewell to the Prime Minister in Shili Long Street" (see lesson 13 of Volume 7 of the People's Education Press textbook) describes that the people of the capital spontaneously gathered in Chang 'an Avenue to bid farewell to the Prime Minister, and the scene was very touching.
Its scene description adopts the way of combining point and surface. The weather is gray, cloudy and cold.
The sidewalks on both sides of Chang 'an Avenue are crowded with men, women and children. The road is so long and there are so many people that you can't see the east end and the west end.
People are all wrapped in black gauze on their arms and white flowers on their chests, and their eyes are all looking at the direction where Premier Zhou's hearse will come. An old woman with silver hair, with crutches and a locust tree on her back, waited anxiously and patiently.
A young couple, husband holding his little daughter, wife holding their six or seven-year-old son, squeezed off the sidewalk and looked around. A group of red scarves have tears on their faces, holding each other's shoulders and standing on tiptoe ... Here, the scenes on the sidewalks on both sides of Chang 'an Avenue are described very touching. Firstly, the whole scene is described and a gloomy and depressing atmosphere is rendered.
Followed by a specific description: "an old woman with a cane in her hand"; A young couple "looked around"; A group of "tears-stained" red scarves ... This combination of dots and faces depicts a touching farewell picture and expresses people's infinite nostalgia for the Prime Minister. When students write compositions, especially those about sports competitions and practical activities, they usually use the method of combining points with surfaces to describe the scene. Please watch Cao Li's game "Planting Radish" (fragment), and all the students in the audience are eager to try.
After a while, the "dirt" on the stage formed a human wall, and you were next to me and I was next to you, all glowing. Sometimes look back from time to time to see who won the lottery; Others pretend to be calm; Some people blink and tell others that they have planted "radish".
You see, Xiaoxian described the whole scene here, "the dirt on the stage is lined up as a human wall", rendering a luminous atmosphere. Then Xiao began to write from the beginning: some "look back", some "pretend to be calm" and some "blink", with different postures, which makes people feel a kind of "high spirit"! This combination of point and surface creates a very childlike atmosphere for the "performance" of the "planting radish" game! In our campus, whenever you turn around or change your perspective, different scenery will appear in front of you: quiet and lively teaching buildings, lush fir forests, colorful flower beds and pleasing plastic track practice ... And I like her corner best-the place surrounded by teaching buildings and affectionately called "quadrangle" by our teachers and students.
In the middle of the yard, there is a tall and straight pine tree, like a green pagoda. As high as our classroom on the fourth floor! The bark feels uneven and full of vicissitudes.
Its feet are covered with a layer of dark green furry "carpet", and the grass surrounds it, looking up at it, as if snuggling in dad's arms. On the left of the pine tree is the most exciting drip pool.
The drip pond is built next to the East Teaching Building. The wall next to it is a stone wall made of special decorative materials. The colors are green and gray, and it is concave and convex. A few bright flowers on the opposite corner make it vivid at once! There is a hole under the stone wall, and on the other side of the hole is the corridor of the East Teaching Building.
Many first-grade children put their heads in curiously from time to time and then shrank back. Below the hole is a swimming pool.
The pool is surrounded by pebbles and cement of various colors. There are aquatic plants in the pool! There are all kinds of goldfish: red hydrangea, pink pearls, colorful dzi beads ... Look, the fastest and most naughty one is my beloved "Little Butterfly", and she is playing hide-and-seek with her friends again! There are some stone tables and chairs on the right side of the pine tree.
Always clean! Why? Because we all like sitting there reading and playing games! Class is over, it's boiling here. At the beginning of class, Xiaoyu must be listening to Lang Lang reading ... A corner of the campus. Why didn't your beauty make me love my campus more? ! 2. Unforgettable years of tug-of-war are like a raging torrent, constantly washing away my memory. Many things have been blurred, but in my heart, one thing has always made me unforgettable.
I remember it was last autumn. In the composition class, the teacher organized a tug-of-war competition in order to let us exercise, cultivate sentiment and cultivate observation. The teacher divided us into two teams, one is the tiger team and the other is the eagle team.
I was assigned to the eagles. The strength of the two teams is equal, the students hold their heads high, and a tit-for-tat game is about to begin.
With the teacher's whistle, the game began. The players on both sides clutched the rope tightly, landed one by one, leaned back and pulled the rope desperately in their own direction.
The red ribbon in the middle of the rope was moved to the tiger and the eagle for a while, to outdo each other. Cheerleaders from both sides also shouted in unison and kept beating drums for their teams.
My hands were red, but the rope still didn't move, and the two sides entered a stalemate. At this time, our players were all red-eyed, some were flushed, some were grinning, and some were clutching the rope and struggling to pull in their own direction.
Finally, our team did its best. With the shouts of cheerleaders, HongLing suddenly moved towards us, and our eagles won. Later, our team took advantage of two victories and won in a row. Finally, we won.
This tug-of-war made me understand that unity is strength, and it also helped me build up confidence in overcoming difficulties in the future. I will never forget this tug of war.
Today, the sun shines like fire on the earth, and it is also the annual parent-child sports meeting in our school. Everyone is very happy, because they can win glory for their collective together with their parents.
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After visiting the sports center we are going to, the students entered the venue in an orderly manner under the guidance of the teacher. All the students in our class are full of energy and high morale. There is only one wish in their hearts: I hope that this sports meeting will win the championship all year round.
The opening ceremony of the sports meeting began. The headmaster said on the radio: "Hello, classmates, teachers and parents, this year's annual parent-child sports meeting has begun now!" " "The whole school is dressed in neat school uniforms.
We lined up neatly and started a parade on the playground, shouting the slogan of our class. The slogan of our class is particularly heroic: "1234, 1234! Four, five, four, five, first of all, you must be able to write and type! outside
Not others, exactly! "After the square team ceremony, the tense sports meeting began!
Today's sports meeting can be very rich, with parents jumping long ropes, parents and children jumping over obstacles in relay races, and long-distance running from 60 meters to 800 meters.
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The wonderful event is the obstacle relay race between parents and children. As soon as Mr. Tang's gunfire rang, I saw Wei Liangyu in our class holding the baton, crossing the obstacle and passing it on to the next parent, our class.
The cheerleaders cheered and the students shouted one by one. The game is going on nervously. Suddenly, a parent lost his center of gravity because he ran too fast and fell to the ground. No, what can I do? The game can continue.
Really? The students on the side were shocked, only to see that the parent was not discouraged and was still fighting the pain. Come on! Come on! The students shouted louder, and the game was over! The students and parents in our class have tried their best.
Got a good result of second place.
Sweat and smiles flow on their faces, and honor passes in everyone's heart. Although everyone is very tired in this sports meeting, everyone is very tall.
4. The scene description of the combination of point and surface is purely hand-played ~
Listen, the deafening sound of gongs and drums goes straight into the sky; Look, people with smiles are in high spirits. What brings people together? What makes people ecstatic? It is being held in founding ceremony, People's Republic of China (PRC).
This is the Tiananmen Square on June 1 949,65438+1October1day described for us in the article founding ceremony. This is a sacred day. People from all over China gathered in Tiananmen Square, where the five-star red flag was raised for the first time, the national anthem of the Republic of China was sung for the first time, and the motherland reviewed the mighty army for the first time!
"founding ceremony" has such a description: "In the two and a half hours of review, people kept cheering and clapping in the square, one by one. The crowd almost shouted themselves hoarse and numb their palms. They still feel unable to express their joy and excitement. " From these descriptions, I seem to feel the excitement of the people who were exploited by feudal landlords and destroyed by war after they turned over and liberated; It seems that their faces are filled with expectations and longings for a happy life, and their joy and excitement are beyond words.
Pure hands ~
5. Beautiful sentence 1. Suddenly rising waterfowl, or fish accidentally jumping into the water, will make the beautiful images of mountains and stockades reflected in the water tremble.
2. Moonlight in the pine forest and crystal stone in the stream.
3. The sun is shining, and the shadow is on the stone, but it does not move; When you are far away, communication is sudden, like enjoying tourists.
4. The shadow of the fish is reflected at the bottom of the stone, which is dull and motionless; Suddenly, he swam away again and came and went briskly (from Little Stone Pond)
5. Thousands of miles are frozen, and snow drifts in Wan Li.
6. The fog will stop and apes and birds will sing. Night is coming and the scales are sinking.
7. Needless to say, green vegetable fields, smooth stone well fences, tall acacia trees and purple mulberries; Needless to say, cicadas are singing in the trees, fat wasps are squatting on cauliflower, calling the son of heaven (lark) gently, and suddenly they go straight from the grass to the sky. Just around the short mud wall, it's fun.
8. Needless to say, elegant and rich peony, beautiful and pure lily, lively and lovely Smurfs, noble and elegant Clivia, but an elegant and fragrant forget-me-not is intoxicating.
9. There are green mountains and green waters, vigorous pines and cypresses, floating white clouds and blue sky. Needless to say, the nightingale is singing softly, sparrows are twittering and playing, and beautiful butterflies are dancing in the wind. Just a humble grass is enough to make people feel relaxed and happy. It is so bright green and strong, standing proudly in the cold wind. Sunflowers look up at the sun. Bright flowers, let me pick a lot, how beautiful it is at home!
10. Needless to say, green nameplate, smooth floor, tall doctor, purple nurse lips; Needless to say, Zhang San is seeing a doctor in the clinic 1 room, while Li Si, who is obese, is giving an injection in the injection room, and Wang Wu, who is thin, suddenly drops the infusion bottle on the ground. Pockmarked Li was shocked by the cost of treatment alone.
1 1. Needless to say, the world-famous miracle terracotta warriors and horses, the ancient city wall of Xi 'an with blue bricks and ancient tiles, the bell and drum tower with morning bells and dusk drums, the beautiful and beautiful Xingqing Palace, the solemn historical museum and the beacon tower of Lishan Mountain, the famous Bin Jian Pavilion, Big Wild Goose Pagoda and Little Wild Goose Pagoda in Xi 'an Incident, I was deeply moved by the forest of steles alone. Six BMW reliefs of Six Horses in Zhaoling and Li Shimin in Emperor Taizong were smashed by robbers in Eight-Nation Alliance, which are irretrievable treasures, not to mention the steep Huashan Mountain in Xiyue and the unique scenery of Huaqing Pool here. However, what I miss most is not the history and culture of Xi 'an ancient city for two thousand years, but the snacks of Xi 'an.
12. I gave up my resistance and quickly entered the play to bring back the feeling of being hypnotized and sharing. The Promise is definitely an exquisite stage play. Needless to say, the beauty of the scenery, the twists and turns of the plot, unconstrained style, touching. Needless to say, the assassin fell from the branch, the fat king fell on the roof, and the vigorous fairy went straight from the field to the clouds. It's just that the acting skills of several international big names around him have unlimited fun.
Note: 1-6 lists some poems and sentences that contain the combination of static and dynamic; 7- 12 list some paragraphs that combine dots and faces.
6. About the scene description of the combination of point and surface, seeking charity sale.
The sky is as blue as the sea, and the rehearsal cloud turns into a huge smiling face, as if welcoming an exciting charity sale.
Wait, hope. Finally, the charity sale arrived, and I couldn't wait to pick up the money. I came to the playground as fast as I could and looked around.
Look! The originally quiet playground suddenly boiled up, with a sea of people and a lot of excitement, as if it had become a flea market. An eye-catching signboard "rises from the ground" flies into the ear, "Don't miss it when passing by, sell it cheaply, sell it cheaply!" The students suddenly became experienced salespeople and salesmen. "Your love, your sincerity, your value-for-money lottery has begun!" "The shouts on the playground are endless.
Merchants also have their own tricks to attract customers! Look! The female students of Class 5-7 danced a Bai dance at the gate of the store, smiling all the time, and the beautiful dance attracted many customers to watch. Shops, some selling toys and books, some selling school supplies, some selling accessories, and some selling nameless gadgets. ...
Everyone is very busy, which is really a pleasure. Look! Several salesmen in Class 63, pedaling chairs and holding some plush toys, jumped up and down in the air, flushed and shouted, "Look, look!" " Bought a toy book in the lottery, bought a book once, 100% won the prize! "Small accountants are not far behind. They record the amount of everything in an orderly way and help with sales from time to time. The students who bought the goods came up with a strange way to buy exquisite goods, looking around the playground, buying at a low price and selling at a high price. Ha ha! Really worthy of the title of small businessman!
At this time, Ben's shop was also crowded with people sticking their chests to their backs. Peng Kun, the great Yang Man, was dangling in the air with a book in his hand, shouting, "A great detective novel, 10 yuan! Good luck is not to be missed! Come and buy! " As he spoke, he stood on tiptoe, his eyes wide open and his body swayed from side to side. Salesman Pu Wenxuan is not idle. He held the money in his left hand, handed it to the customer in his right hand and quickly changed it. He also reported the number to the students who kept accounts behind him: "Thank you for your patronage! Yes, 10 yuan! "
Just then, I also started a big search, "Well-start with my own store!" "I said to myself. The orange cover caught my eye. Oh, is this my favorite One Hundred Celebrities Who Moved the World? I suddenly shouted happily, "I want this book, Pu Wenxuan. Here is the money. Keep the change! " "
Time seems like running water, fast, the charity sale is over and the playground is quiet again. Although there are not many angles, it contains a love and a dedication; Little by little, but condensed into great power. This charity sale bought a lot of favorite items, which also contributed to the arrival of ethnic partners and offered a piece of love.
7. There are 1000 people in the four-word "face".
Beyond recognition,
All smiles,
Be red in the face,
Two-faced,
In all directions,
Looked at each other,
Embattled,
Noodles don't change color,
To be independent,
Everything,
Pigeon-shaped noodles,
Unkempt,
Red face,
Turn over a new leaf,
Show your face,
Bull's head and horse's face,
Damn face,
Superficial articles,
Be lenient,
Tears streamed down her face,
Human faces and animal hearts,
Red face,
Unscrupulous,
Oil head and powder surface,
Exquisite in all directions,
Never met,
Shame,
One-sided story,
Wax yellow emaciation