The snow in the air falls gracefully one by one, blooming with that peerless beauty and gentleness. That's dandruff that God forgot to wash his hair. Honey, I forgot to wash my hair, too, but why did my hair fall everywhere? White roofs, white houses, white birds quietly flew over my years, stood in the snow and picked up a snowflake, watching it turn into transparent water drops little by little, reflecting a tragic white, and the whole world was like a luxurious worship.
Poetic language. Taking Emotion as the Scenery, Blending Emotion as the Scenery) —— Hubei examinee's "Three Life Lucky"
If you don't start from one step, such as shaking clothes in the dust and stamping your feet in the mud, how can you transcend the dust and get rid of vulgarity? Life will not take a step back, such as moths to the fire, sheep touching fans, how to be a man? This requires our pursuit and ambition of "three provinces and one's own body", and we need to "three provinces and one's own body" to do things and be human. However, if the Mayfly shakes the arrogance of the tree and doesn't know the ignorance of the Spring and Autumn Period, it will not succeed even if it has the highest ambition and ideal. Self-reliance requires self-confidence and wisdom to find; Self-improvement needs our perseverance and reflection. Life is not smooth sailing, not flattering, but a sincere introspection process and a noble introspection spirit.
(Contrast)-Introspection of Hubei Candidates
Yes! I want to let the tears of struggle soak my bud, let the blood rain of sacrifice spill over my whole body, pursue all the good things, realize my unfinished vision for you and turn it into an eternal fragrance in the long river of history! Even if one day, I have become a mass of spring mud, but I have realized my vision, and the fragrance I once gave off will spread all over the world!
(Poetic Language)-Visual Tianjin Candidates
There are also many things that move me in the world. Cong Fei, suffering from cancer, frequently passed away from death, and wrote the most shocking notes in his life with love and dedication. Facing the physical obstacles, Tai Lihua interpreted the beautiful Guanyin attentively. Shi Tiesheng tells the most perfect and rich story with his broken body and conveys the strongest heart. None of these people need my help. For them, it is themselves who can help them.
(Classic use case)-I'm Godot, a candidate from Fujian.
A winding path does not forget to leave a little blank, which reminds people of the beautiful scenery behind the blank, that is, "there is no doubt that there is another village."
After another wave of unrest, I don't forget to leave some blank space, which makes people wander in the magnificent scenery of "the stars are leaning down from the clearing and the moon is running from the river".
A poem doesn't forget to leave a little blank between lingering and lingering tests, which makes people appreciate the poetic sentiment of "flying stones flying in the air, hitting the shore and rolling up thousands of piles of snow"
On the pure land side, silence does not forget to leave some blanks, which makes people render the spectacle of "the desert is lonely and straight, and the long river sets the yen".
The blue sky leaves a blank, and there are waves of "thin clouds play tricks and flying stars hate"; History, because you left a blank, there will be an empty grave and the yearning will continue.
(parallelism, quotation)-Fujian candidates "pick out the blank and finally see the scenery"
The sunset melts gold, the evening clouds merge, and the sunset glow falls on the green grave with endless meditation. Clouds are silent, grass is silent; Falling into that blank reminds me of you, making white hair vicissitudes with wisps of hair, dyeing that pure land, that ethereal side, that blank side and that scenery with my bright eyes.
(Short sentences, poetic language) —— Fujian candidates "take time to see the scenery"
Let me think calmly when I am upset and sing "If life is between heaven and earth, it is sudden"; Let me steal half a day from my busy schedule and enjoy a time when "when he was young, he got a guest on the moon, not by the plum blossom, but by the willow". For example, Mr. Wu Liu said that "if you are pregnant, you can go alone, or plant a stick to sow"; For example, Mr. Dongpo's Ode to the Bright Moon, Singing Graceful Articles; Such as Thoreau guarding Walden Lake, such as Hemingway watching Kilimanjaro's snow. They are all poets, living poetically in their own empty world.
Leave a little blank in life, leave a little blank in this arrogant and restless world, even a little, but it can save countless drowning people.
The full moon is a painting, and the lack of the moon is a poem.
Accustomed to the brilliance of the full moon, it is perfect, but the curved moon allows lonely people to peep at the true meaning of life with silence and wisdom vacancy.
2. I am eager to have a teacher's green heart, full of spring colors, full of vitality and infinite hope. E I hope to have a teacher's heart that belongs to spring. In this heart, there are flourishing trees. I hope to have a teacher's heart that reproduces spring, bright sunshine, elegant fog clouds, green buds, blooming buds, pleasant breeze and continuous drizzle. Because of this dream, my flower season will always be immersed in sunny days.
Winter breeds spring, not fighting for it. Spring has come, and her cold skin gradually melts into a drop of spring water, selflessly irrigating the greedy seedlings. By the time a hundred flowers blossom and the sound of trees jointing, she has completed a year's historical mission and quietly returned to heaven with the gratitude of spring, waiting for the arrival of next year.
I held the grass ring of hope and watched it slowly disappear from my sight. I sat down with a smile, only to find that the grass behind me was so green and full of vitality.
Praise is hope, praise is motivation. A hopeless goal is like an extinguished lighthouse, and a journey without motivation is full of difficulties.
Bring a smile to life, just as the sun shines on the earth, the breeze caresses the warmth of the forest, the sunset burns the fiery red of heaven, and the waves wash away the passion of rocks.
It is always like the sun when people are cold, the breeze when people are hot, the delicious food when people are hungry, and the shower when people need it.
Life is like wild flowers in the suburbs, colorful and fragrant. The applause of life, like sunshine and rain, moistens every petal. A gift is a piece of sunshine shining in winter, which makes people who are hungry and cold feel the warmth of the world. Applause is more important than a gift. Spiritual encouragement inspires everyone who is lonely and helpless.
3. Does the lyric narrative composition in junior high school have a good beginning and end, and a good sentence ends first and then begins?
If the beginning is compared to "firecrackers", then the end is like "bells". The ancients said: "A good ending is like chewing dried fruit and tasting fragrant tea, which makes people memorable."
Like the beginning, the ending is also very important. It would be a pity if an article with a clear theme and a novel angle was ruined by an ominous ending when it was finished! The ending should not only serve the content and center of the article, but also be restricted by the "beginning", which increases the difficulty of writing the ending.
People call the end of a good article "leopard tail". Judging from the composition of the senior high school entrance examination, although the ending of the article is not necessarily required to be "leopard tail", it is also required to be concise, vivid and just right. Generally speaking, the common mistakes at the end of students' compositions are: ① gild the lily.
That is to say, the full text is over, which should be thought-provoking, but the author is still uneasy and determined to shake a few words, leaving the whereabouts of people who don't need to be explained one by one and piercing the meaning that could have been realized. Empty slogans.
Finally, in order to show his position and attitude, he shouted something irrelevant to the content of the article, which was a big theme. 3 sloppily.
The meaning of the ending is clear, but it is too late to finish, which conflicts with the theme of the article. From this point of view, the ending of the senior high school entrance examination composition is particularly important. How to write a good ending and improve the quality of exam composition? The following are the commonly used ending techniques for senior high school entrance examination compositions.
1, natural beam. No matter what style of article, after expressing the content, it naturally closes the full text, instead of designing profound philosophical sentences and carving rich symbolic forms. This ending is called "natural ending".
It completely avoids the end fault of gilding the lily and moaning without illness, which is concise, lively and unpretentious, and is widely used in the composition of the senior high school entrance examination. The composition atmosphere in the examination room is tense and the competition is fierce, so we should not pay too much attention to "form" and "law".
As long as you have passion, write freely and fully express your feelings, it is a good article. However, attaching importance to "nature" does not mean being arbitrary and hasty, but ending the overall situation along the natural trend of literary thinking development. There are many such examples in the learned text, so I won't repeat them here.
2. Echo from beginning to end. The end should echo the beginning, write a sentence that echoes the beginning, and don't simply repeat it. This way of ending is a common way of ending all kinds of articles.
This method can arouse readers' psychological aesthetic feeling and produce a feeling of rounded head and tail. For example, A Precious Shirt says, "In my house, there is a white shirt, which is really cool."
Finally, I wrote: "I have carefully collected this precious shirt for four years, and I have never been willing to wear it once." Praise the end of the poplar and the beginning echoed at a distance: "I want to praise the poplar loudly!" " 3, the pawn Zhang Xianzhi style.
This way of ending is to express the theme clearly at the end of the article, relying on the content of the full text and using concise language, or to explain the writing intention clearly at the end of the full text, so this way of ending is also called "making the finishing point". For example, at the end of Jujube Kernel, it reads: "Changing the nation does not mean changing the national feelings. No nation is so attached to its homeland as we are."
At the end of "Remember a Spinning Wheel", I wrote: "It is a pleasure to struggle with difficulties. -Remember a spinning wheel. "
4. Famous sayings and epigrams. Ending with famous aphorisms and poems is intended to extend the article and reveal the true meaning of some kind of life.
It often appears at the end of essays, narratives and essays. In a few words, it expresses profound and thought-provoking philosophical or warning content, which is deeply imprinted in readers' hearts and has the effect of "endless words and endless meanings" At the end of "Pear Blossoms in the Post Road", it reads: "Pears in the Post Road are everywhere."
5. Lyric discussion. Ending an article with lyrical comments can express the feelings of the author, arouse the emotional waves of readers and arouse their voices, which has a strong artistic appeal.
This way of ending is mainly used in narrative, explanatory and argumentative writing. There are various forms of the ending of lyric discussion, so the ending is more free. A good lyric discussion ending will inevitably bring true feelings and give readers a sense of reality and sufficiency.
For example, at the end of Flower Market, it says, "She stands among hundreds of flowers with a smile, like a flower, like a beautiful and elegant orchid." Another example is the two natural paragraphs at the end of Missing Mother, which are typical lyrical endings.
The composition should be done in one go, and the ending should be in the same strain as the previous text, which is indispensable. The end of a composition is the same as the beginning, although it is different, it also has its own rules to follow.
The above ending methods are just some common ending methods, so don't copy them mechanically. The really good ending lies in the students' solid training at ordinary times, in the candidates' improvisation and in the candidates' "extra-poetic merits". Please look at the end of a candidate's composition: If life is no longer green, we are still looking for it. Why can't we take actions to protect green and the environment, so that we can always have green?
At that time, green would sing: "I come gently, just like you (desert) walk quietly ..." (Anonymous "If life is no longer green") Comments: The author naturally thinks of green from the environment, and then launches a topic around "If life is no longer green". The article starts with the comparison of "past", "today" and "tomorrow", and then skillfully uses Xu Zhimo.
Middle school students' friends, there is no fixed method for writing. Which ending method you use depends on the stylistic requirements and your own preferences, and you can't copy dogma. If some can be discussed, some can be described, some can be suspended, some can be quoted, and so on.
Middle school students' friends also need to exercise more and experience more in practice, and try their best to explore in order to achieve the same effect. In this way, I believe that the students will be able to write the ending of "When the bell rings, the reverberation will be around the beam".
Migration training The ancients said, "A good end is like chewing.
I don't know how many times I have walked that road.
I didn't notice the broken branches on the dead tree again.
Come here again
Looking for the sweetness of yesterday, or forgetting the sigh of today?
The mood I left behind is like a lyric poem in transition. ...
Is there no chord in the rhythm of autumn, or is there no such feeling in peace?
Poetry is like ripples on the lake?
Silently think of a word
Love is not a lyric poem ...
Even if the feelings are strong, they also contain sour memories.
If you want to give up that troublesome episode, you must miss that irreparable past.
It takes courage to be blind.
It is also beautiful to revisit the old place.
Just, don't continue what should be over.
A windy day
I photographed a cloud and said to myself.
Long-distance relationships have no address.
The moonlight enters the atrium, and the sunshine leaves gently.
Thoughts hanging on the window
I wonder if it will follow the seasonal rain.
Until when? ...
I have to say
Love is not a lyric poem.
5. Good words and sentences praising Guilin, Guilin landscape songs
Jingzhi He
God in the clouds, fairy in the fog,
The mountains in Guilin are the realm of immortals!
As deep as love, as beautiful as a dream,
Love is like a dream, the water of Lijiang River!
How much do water and mountains weigh?
Water surrounds mountains and Guilin City. ...
Is it a mountain city or a water city?
All in the green mountains and green waters ...
Oh! This mountain and this water come into my mind,
Where are you from at this time?
..... The waves of the Yellow River and the wind beyond the Great Wall.
The trip to Guanshan is very heavy.
Saddle dreamed of drawing on the sand table:
"Guilin's landscape is the best in the world" ...
Oh! Is it a dream or a fairyland
At this point, I am in Duxiufeng!
Is the heart drunk or awake?
The water meets the mountain and draws the screen!
Picture-in-Picture-Lijiang River as I am in Chikage,
Song of songs-the mountains echo with me ...
Wave to ask Laorenshan:
What has covered the country for tens of thousands of years?
-Pearl Cave at the foot of Fubo Mountain,
Fang Zhu is waiting to knock at the door. ...
As soon as Jilongshan sang, the screen opened.
Green water, white sails and red flags!
Spring rain washes the sad face of the earth,
Please look through the mountain mirror-
Oh! The mountains in Guilin come from the water of Lijiang River-
The smile of the motherland is so beautiful!
Guilin landscape into the heart,
This scene, this situation, the soldier's heart-
How charming and lovely this country is,
Let my white hair never grow!
Jiangshan people are proud of it.
Let me stay young forever!
Qixingyan went to the fairy society,
Hello, Third Sister Liu. Come back from heaven ...
The road between heaven and earth is open,
Come with me if you want to sing a new song!
Third sister's folk songs are full of charm.
Soldiers, guide the country and sing about the motherland. ...
The red flag weaves brilliantly,
Haibei Tiannan will watch!
The sand outside the Great Wall and the waves of the Yellow River,
Spring from Wan Li to my hometown.
Under the red flag: young heroes are born everywhere-
Endless: all kinds of "extreme"!
-Full of meaning, full of emotion,
Like the Lijiang River, the spring water is strong!
Oh! Throw colorful sweat and rain:
Guilin landscape-all over the world! ……
He Jingzhi, the author of Guilin Landscape Song, 1924, is from yi county, Shandong. He began to write poetry in the 1940s, and successively published poems such as songji, Song of Lei Feng, Selected Poems of He Jingzhi and Answering the Contemporary World. He Jingzhi, as a famous contemporary poet in China, is famous for his "small quantity and good quality". Poetry is good at grasping and expressing major themes, with bold momentum and strong spirit of the times.
Guilin Landscape Song is not only a beautiful landscape poem, but also an affectionate ode to the motherland. The opening of the poem brings readers to a fascinating artistic realm: "God in the clouds, fairy in the fog,/Mountain of Guilin! /Love is as deep as dreams,/Love is like the water of Lijiang River! " The appearance of the gods is like a dream, and the mountains are surrounded by water, which is intoxicating. This poem not only captures the natural features of Guilin's landscape, but also is full of romantic legends.
This poem has a strong flavor of folk songs. Poets explore the development of China's new poems in various poetic forms. Most of his political lyric poems adopt Mayakovski's "step-by-step" style and a free style with enthusiasm and less constraints, while lyric short chapters are often welcomed by the masses. "Guilin Landscape Song" sings Guilin landscape, which is obviously suitable for using fresh, lively and euphemistic lyric folk songs to form a form close to aria. The poet skillfully used the tune of northern Shaanxi folk song "Xintian", which can be compared with another famous song "Back to Yan 'an". A Guilin landscape in praise of the south, a revolutionary holy land in praise of the north. Singing the same song is amazing. Poetry consists of two lines and one section, and the language is natural and smooth, such as flowing clouds and flowing water, with harmonious rhythm and rhythm, which is easy to sing. This poem occupies an important position in He Jingzhi's lyric poetry because of its beautiful artistic conception, beautiful rhyme, unique thought and exquisite art.