2. Commentary [Commentary-Composition on Qiantang River Tide] Commentary-Hello, audience and friends who are watching Qiantang River Tide! You are now watching the annual live broadcast of Qiantang River Tide, with a commentary-watching the tide composition. Every year on August 18 of the lunar calendar, people come to Qiantang River in Haining City, Zhejiang Province to watch the tide. The seawall levee is full. Everyone is waiting for the tide to come early. At about one o'clock in the afternoon, there was a rumbling sound from the east, which was told by an old man beside me. The audience under the stage looked surprised. The white line in the east moves quickly towards us, slowly elongating and thickening across the whole river. When the white line came to us, it turned into a huge white wave, forming a white wall more than ten feet high. In a short time, white waves rolled, just like thousands of white war horses go hand in hand, and the noise was deafening. The fifth grade composition "Explanation-Watching Qiantang River Tide". This scene is so spectacular that the audience and friends present are dumbfounded. At the moment, the tide is rushing to the west, but the aftermath is still rolling all over the sky and the river is still roaring. It will take about 30 minutes for the river to calm down. At this time, we can see that the river under the embankment has risen by two feet. Commentary-450-word composition for primary school students (/).
I am a commentator. Unconsciously, I have been a lecturer at school for two years. In the past two years, everything has been ups and downs. Now, let's take a look at my commentary career with me!
"Again, more natural. What you said here is not enough. Look at what I said ... "The counselor teacher began to whisper again. Well, the school has another urgent task: the leader will come tomorrow morning. Therefore, some of our commentators are practicing their explanations nervously. It's finally my turn. I smiled and took a look at the counselor and teacher first, and gave a team salute according to the standard. Then, naturally and fluently, I said everything I had to say. However, the counselor and teacher still have that expression, and my heart can't help but tremble. It seems that something bad is going to happen. However, after a while, the counselor teacher spoke: "Well, that's right this time." I was a little flattered and stayed there. You know, counselors and teachers are very strict. So, I said to the teacher, "Thank you, teacher, I am practicing by myself!" " "In this way, I talked about an extracurricular activity in the Young Pioneers team room. Time goes by, the leader is coming in a blink of an eye, and other friends are impatient, but I am still explaining. After a while, the commentator on the same floor with me came up and told me, "The leader is here, in the hall!" " "So, I went downstairs to listen, indeed, the commentator in the hall is explaining! It's my turn soon! Sure enough, as I expected, the commentator on the second floor sent me a message, Wheat. She helped me put it on carefully and left in a hurry. When the leader came in, I gave him a bright smile first. Then I started my explanation. I led the leaders around the team room, naturally flowing, but unexpectedly, the leaders clapped their hands after listening to my explanation, so I bowed deeply to the leaders and left. Maybe, I am not the best, but I will try my best.
I will be a very good commentator in the future, because I will try my best.
4. A 350-word composition about the Great Wall (I want to explain the composition). I am a small commentator to explain Shapotou and the 400-word composition. Hello, everyone, welcome to visit the Revolutionary Martyrs Memorial Hall. I am a commentator here-composition angel heart. Now let's look at this hook.
Tourists, please look at this hook. You may ask, "This hook is no different from other hooks. Why is it released in the memorial hall? " Then I'll tell you, this ordinary fishhook has an extraordinary story.
1935 Autumn, when the Red Army crossed the grassland, many soldiers got gastrointestinal diseases and fell behind. The cooking squad leader had to take care of three sick people crossing the grass. The old squad leader saved the lives of three soldiers with this hook bent with a needle. The vast grassland is sparsely populated, birds are extinct, and the Red Army soldiers are hungry with cold and lack food and clothing. There is a blockade in front and the pursuers of the Kuomintang reactionaries behind. In this hard revolutionary war era, it is easy for an old monitor to cross the grass with three sick people. The old monitor was in poor health, but he persisted with amazing perseverance. He bent a sewing needle into a fishhook and fed it to the soldiers by the pond, but swallowed the remaining fishbone, grass roots and bark. When they were about to walk out of the grass, the old monitor died of overwork, but he helped three soldiers walk out of the grass with his life. ...
6. I am a small commentator. I write a 450-word composition (an experiment). I am a small commentator.
"Dear tourists, welcome to the Revolutionary Martyrs Museum. The items on display here are the relics of those revolutionary martyrs, such as; Glasses, articles, pens, etc. Martyrs used it before they died. There are also hooks used by the old squad leader we are all familiar with. "
First of all, we saw the hook of the old monitor, which was left by a revolutionary comrade named Liang Xiao. According to his oral account, it was the autumn of 1935, when the Red Fourth Front Army entered the grassland, and many comrades got gastrointestinal diseases. He and two young comrades were ill and couldn't keep up with the team. The instructor appointed the old monitor to take care of them and let them walk behind.
One day, the old monitor washed their clothes by the pond. Suddenly, he saw a fish jump out of the water. At that time, the old monitor was very worried about our nutrition. However, he saw a chance, and he immediately made fishing tools. On the same day, they drank fish soup. One day, Liang Xiao discovered the secret of the old monitor, but the old monitor told him to keep it a secret. After many days, they have reached the edge of the grass. The old monitor said happily, "I'm going fishing. Get ready. " We were in excellent spirits, so we looked for pickles everywhere. After a long time, they found the old monitor by the pond, but he was dying. They immediately prepared food and went fishing in Liang Xiao, but for a long time, no fish took the bait. After a while, the fishing rod moved. When he pulled it, a fish jumped up. When they give the old monitor food. The old monitor said that he would not eat anything and blamed himself. Finally, he died with honor.
Later, the hook found us.
7. Who can explain the anti-plagiarism system in TOEFL composition in detail? Is there a similarity detector for TOEFL composition? I always thought only GRE had it. ...
The scope of the detector in GRE includes all the articles in Book 4 of New Concept English, as well as the compositions written by all the previous candidates.
Judging criteria, if there is a sentence above 15, a sentence is the same as other articles, so plagiarism is judged.
As for the operation mode ... it's just a software. It must be operated by a computer (Khan ...)
In fact, similar detectors are easy to cheat. Even if there is TOEFL, you can adjust the word order in the template and replace synonyms, and he won't find it.
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What you think is classic, others think it is classic. Who can guarantee that no one has used it before ... but I don't remember any similar detectors. I took the exam in the first half of the year, completely copying my classmates' templates, no problem ... but for the sake of safety, I'd better change them.
8. Help write a composition about the name of the school group, 300 ~400 words is enough. Tomorrow, the teacher will let us form a group, which will help us study, because we can help each other and promote each other. We are (write down your names), so I have a very loud name: Young Eagle.
Why do you want this name? Because the young eagle can be carefree, because the lamb is in the blue sky. And the most important thing is that they can hone in the most difficult environment and constantly improve their abilities. I hope the members of our group can also have this wonderful spirit, because I think with this spirit, we will have the confidence to overcome everything, and we will continue to grow and improve our achievements. Eventually become the strongest group.
Please help us achieve this goal. I firmly believe that we can do well, but we must stick to it. Give and you will get. We are a young eagle team, and our slogan is to fly in the wind and grow in adversity! Thank you all.
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