If the beginning is compared to "firecrackers", then the end is like "bells". The ancients said: "A good ending is like chewing dried fruit and tasting fragrant tea, which makes people memorable."
Like the beginning, the ending is also very important. It would be a pity if an article with a clear theme and a novel angle was ruined by an ominous ending when it was finished! The ending should not only serve the content and center of the article, but also be restricted by the "beginning", which increases the difficulty of writing the ending.
People call the end of a good article "leopard tail". Judging from the composition of the senior high school entrance examination, although the ending of the article is not necessarily required to be "leopard tail", it is also required to be concise, vivid and just right. Generally speaking, the common mistakes at the end of students' compositions are: ① gild the lily.
That is to say, the full text is over, which should be thought-provoking, but the author is still uneasy and determined to shake a few words, leaving the whereabouts of people who don't need to be explained one by one and piercing the meaning that could have been realized. Empty slogans.
Finally, in order to show his position and attitude, he shouted something irrelevant to the content of the article, which was a big theme. 3 sloppily.
The meaning of the ending is clear, but it is too late to finish, which conflicts with the theme of the article. From this point of view, the ending of the senior high school entrance examination composition is particularly important. How to write a good ending and improve the quality of exam composition? The following are the commonly used ending techniques for senior high school entrance examination compositions.
1, natural beam. No matter what style of article, after expressing the content, it naturally closes the full text, instead of designing profound philosophical sentences and carving rich symbolic forms. This ending is called "natural ending".
It completely avoids the ending fault of gilding the lily and moaning without illness. It is concise, simple and unpretentious, and is widely used in the composition of senior high school entrance examination. The composition atmosphere in the examination room is tense and the competition is fierce, so we should not pay too much attention to "form" and "law".
As long as you are rich, you can play freely and you can fully express your feelings. However, paying attention to "nature" does not mean being arbitrary and hasty, but ending the overall situation along the natural trend of literary development. There are many such examples in the learned text, so I won't repeat them here.
2. Echo from beginning to end. The end should echo the beginning, write a sentence that echoes the beginning, and don't simply repeat it. This way of ending is a common way of ending all kinds of articles.
This method can arouse readers' psychological aesthetic feeling and produce a feeling of rounded head and tail. For example, A Precious Shirt says, "In my house, there is a white shirt, which is really cool."
Finally, I wrote: "I have carefully collected this precious shirt for four years, and I have never been willing to wear it once." Praise the end of the poplar and the beginning echoed at a distance: "I want to praise the poplar loudly!" " 3, the pawn Zhang Xianzhi style.
This way of ending is to express the theme clearly at the end of the article, relying on the content of the full text and using concise language, or to explain the writing intention clearly at the end of the full text, so this way of ending is also called "making the finishing point". For example, at the end of Jujube Kernel, it reads: "Changing the nation does not mean changing the national feelings. No nation is so attached to its homeland as we are."
At the end of "Remember a Spinning Wheel", I wrote: "It is a pleasure to struggle with difficulties. -Remember a spinning wheel. "
4. Famous sayings and epigrams. Ending with famous aphorisms and poems is intended to extend the article and reveal the true meaning of some kind of life.
It often appears at the end of essays, narratives and essays. In a few words, it expresses profound and thought-provoking philosophical or warning content, which is deeply imprinted in readers' hearts and has the effect of "endless words and endless meanings". At the end of "Pear Blossoms in the Post Road", it reads: "Pears in the Post Road are everywhere."
5. Lyric discussion. Ending an article with lyrical comments can express the feelings of the author, arouse the emotional waves of readers and arouse their voices, which has a strong artistic appeal.
This way of ending is mainly used in narrative, explanatory and argumentative writing. There are various forms of the ending of lyric discussion, so the ending is more free. A good lyric discussion ending will inevitably bring true feelings and give readers a sense of reality and sufficiency.
For example, at the end of Flower Market, it says, "She stands among hundreds of flowers with a smile, like a flower, like a beautiful and elegant orchid." Another example is the two natural paragraphs at the end of Missing Mother, which are typical lyrical endings.
The composition should be done in one go, and the ending should be in the same strain as the previous text, which is indispensable. The end of a composition is the same as the beginning, although it is different, it also has its own rules to follow.
The above ending methods are just some common ending methods, so don't copy them mechanically. The really good ending lies in the students' solid training at ordinary times, in the candidates' improvisation and in the candidates' "extra-poetic merits". Please look at the end of a candidate's composition: If life is no longer green, we are still looking for it. Why can't we take actions to protect green and the environment, so that we can always have green?
At that time, green would sing: "I come gently, just like you (desert) walk quietly ..." (Anonymous "If life is no longer green") Comments: The author naturally thinks of green from the environment, and then launches a topic around "If life is no longer green". The article starts with the comparison of "past", "today" and "tomorrow", and then skillfully uses Xu Zhimo.
Middle school students' friends, there is no fixed method for writing. Which ending method you use depends on the stylistic requirements and your own preferences, and you can't copy dogma. If some can be discussed, some can be described, some can be suspended, some can be quoted, and so on.
Middle school students' friends also need to exercise more and experience more in practice, and try their best to explore in order to achieve the same effect. In this way, I believe that the students will be able to write the ending of "When the bell rings, the reverberation will be around the beam".
Migration training The ancients said, "A good end is like chewing.
2. The beginning and end of the composition of the parallel sentence 1, the beginning: What is happiness? Some people say that happiness is a lot of money; Some people say that happiness should be a leisurely life. Listen to what Ouyang Xiu, one of the "Eight Masters of Tang and Song Dynasties" said. Happiness is the prosperity and happiness of the people. How can a person who can define "happiness" in the Song Dynasty in feudal society not be admired and moved?
2. Ending: Fan Zhongyan said it well: Worry about the world first, and enjoy it later. Take the happiness in the world as my own happiness, and I want to be happy after the happiness in the world. What a broad mind and feelings! This is the true meaning of happiness.
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1. I once heard the story of a fisherman who hid in the sunshine by the sea all day. A tourist asked him why he didn't pursue wealth, and he said that as long as he met his realistic psychological needs, he would soon. Perhaps this is the bottom line of fisherman's happiness.
Happiness has no fixed standard, but there is a bottom line. The bottom line of happiness is happiness: I am happy, so I am happy.
There is a fable about a young man who is unhappy all day and laments that the world is not good and he has no rich family wealth. One day, an immortal said to him, "Young man, give me your hand and I will give you a lot of money." The young man thought for a moment: how can I cook and do things for you myself? No way! The fairy said, "Then give me your leg and I will give you a lot of money." The young man thought for a moment: can't walk, can't move, or can't. The fairy smiled and said, "Young man, you are so happy! Your hands and legs can't be bought by your rich family! " "Yes, the young man is very happy. Not only does he have "great wealth", he just doesn't realize it. Many times, like this young man, we lack the happiness around us.
Ending:
Under the cover of heavy snow, everyone knows that fresh seeds are beginning to sprout. People can't believe that no matter how cold the snow is, no matter how long the winter is, it can't stop the warmth from returning to every corner and pore. After a long time, everyone forgot that spring, at least time, shines with the light of daughter-in-law at this moment.
The heart is a vast sky, which contains everything in the world; The mind is a calm lake, occasionally rippling; The mind is a snowy area, reflecting a colorful world.
2. Pain-pain gropes in the dark, and the road ahead is bumpy; Pain is a kind of sadness that no one understands, and it is helpless in the face of all setbacks; Pain is the deepest torture of the soul, and it cannot be confessed without tears; Pain is a natural expression and a devil in trouble. 3. stupidity-stupidity is a natural helplessness, an acquired laziness, a bad result planted by oneself, and a moth in good fruit.
4. Lies-Lies are moths of the mind, eating people's hearts beyond recognition; Lies are a deep quagmire in which people can't extricate themselves; Lies are an endless black hole, which makes people fall into the abyss of sin. 5. insidious-insidious, is a wolf in sheep's clothing, doing activities that can't see the sun; Sin is a good enemy and a jealous friend; Insanity is the iceberg of the soul, which makes people feel chill through clarity.
6. Selfishness-Selfishness is a mirror, in which you can only see yourself forever; Selfishness is a piece of cloth that covers your eyes and can't see the pain of others; Selfishness is a layer of glass, which looks transparent, but always separates each other. 7. Love-love is a piece of sunshine shining in winter, which makes people who are poor and sick feel the warmth of the world; Love is the spring in the desert, which makes people on the verge of despair see the hope of life again; Love is a ballad floating in the night sky, which gives spiritual comfort to lonely and helpless people.
8. Beauty-still life is the beauty of solidification, and moving scenery is the beauty of flow; Straight lines are smooth beauty, while curves are euphemistic beauty; A noisy city is a prosperous beauty, and a quiet country is an elegant beauty. There is beauty everywhere in life, as long as you have a pair of eyes to find beauty and a heart to feel beauty.
9. accumulation-the old saying goes: "if you don't accumulate, you will be thousands of miles away; If you don't accumulate small streams, you can't become rivers and seas. " Those who have made meritorious deeds are well-known in the world, starting from a small place, paying attention to the accumulation of dribs and drabs, consciously cultivating their moral talents and constantly improving themselves.
If there is no persistent perseverance to smell chickens and dance every day, how could Zu Ti be famous for his northern expedition to the Central Plains? If Wang Can Xizhi didn't spend many years drawing water with dragon and snake ink, how could he be honored as a book saint? Without the foundation of studying calculus hard all his life, how did Chen Can Jingrun win the pearl and become famous in the world? 10. mistakes-Galileo, Newton and Edison are all human beings, and their shortcomings and mistakes are inevitable, but this does not prevent them from becoming "giants." Who can deny that the laws of falling objects, inertia, motion of throwing objects and pendulum vibration in physics were established or discovered by Galileo? Who can deny Newton's position as the founder of classical physics? Who can deny that Edison was a great inventor who made great contributions to human material civilization? 1 1. Firmness-If you have all kinds of "fish" hearts and have no intention of "netting", you will definitely accomplish nothing.
Although this truth is simple, it is not clear to everyone. Some people want to be Edison's "king of invention", but they are afraid of the difficulty of delving into scientific knowledge; Some people want to win the title of "king of short stories" after Mo Bosang, but they are afraid of the hardships of practicing calligraphy all the year round; Some people want to become a "master of music" by making a blockbuster, but they are too lazy to bury themselves in the field of staff; Some people want to be sports stars themselves, but they are too lazy to "smell the chicken and dance" for training.
So ambitious, and it is a sparrow trip, even a small fish can't be caught, let alone realize that grand ambition! 12. Choose-choose is a brand-new beginning. Choosing a steep cliff towering into the sky requires the belief that "the road is long and Xiu Yuan is awkward, and I will seek it up and down"; Choosing a choppy sea requires the lofty ambition of "straightening clouds and sails to help the sea"; Choosing a cold desert requires a broad mind of "get drunk in the sand, don't laugh, and go out several times since ancient times"-13. Life-what is life? Different people have different opinions. Some people say life is like wine.
Childhood is like a cocktail, colorful and sweet. Youth is like chilled beer, deep in color, cold and bitter; Middle age is like spirits, pure and colorless, and the spicy taste makes your insides burn; Old age, like wine, has been stored in Micari for a long time. Didi makes you feel the sweetness in the fragrance. (What is Life) 14. Sunflowers-from early summer to late autumn, flowers bloom forever.
A brocade has always maintained a bright color-the morning glory has withered in the hot summer sun, the canna is tired and weak, and the rich peony has long lost its look. Only sunflowers have no reservations about the scorching sun. The hotter the sun, the more gorgeous, enthusiastic and vigorous it is.
(Sunflowers Full of Life) 15. Honesty-Honesty is the smile on the children's faces when they hand over the penny they found to the police uncle, and the flash in the young pioneers' eyes when they take the oath. Honesty is the spring breeze that Jiao sent away from the villagers in Chai Men village, and the deep affection of covering his frostbitten feet with his arms.
Honesty is the call of "China people stand up from now on" issued by the founding leaders in the face of the first light of new China. Honesty is the decision made by the leaders who look down on the West that "China should achieve great rejuvenation".
16. Choice-choosing fraternity means choosing to cherish emotions. To choose fraternity is to choose persistence in everything.
To choose fraternity is to choose lofty life aspirations. 17. Hope-don't give up hope, hope makes people face up to difficulties and failures.
Difficulties and failures are not terrible. The terrible thing is that a person loses the hope and courage to fight against them. Qu Yuan is patriotic, "seeking up and down"; Once the state of Chu perished, it lost hope, leaving only the desperate road of jumping into the Miluo River.
Don't give up hope, hope to make people look forward to a bright future. With hope, there will be yearning for the future and the pursuit of a better life.
Heine, a German poet, wrote emotionally in a poem: "Everything plundered in winter will be returned to you in the new year." Don't give up hope, hope will increase people's motivation.
How many people with lofty ideals are there at all times and in all countries.
The beginning and end of the composition are 1. The mind is a vast sky, which contains everything in the world; The mind is a calm lake, occasionally rippling; The mind is a snowy area, reflecting a colorful world.
2. Love is the sunshine that shines in winter, which makes people who are poor and sick feel the warmth of the world; Love is the spring in the desert, which makes people on the verge of despair see the hope of life again; Love is a ballad floating in the night sky, which gives spiritual comfort to lonely and helpless people.
Honesty is the smile on children's faces when they hand over the penny they found to the police uncle, and the flash in the eyes of young pioneers when they take the oath.
Honesty is the spring breeze that Jiao sent away from the villagers in Chai Men village, and the deep affection of covering his frostbitten feet with his arms.
Honesty is the call of "China people stand up from now on" issued by the founding leaders in the face of the first light of new China. Honesty is the decision made by the leaders who look down on the West that "China should achieve great rejuvenation".
4. Some people have it but don't cherish it ... This may be because they are numb because they have too much, so the feeling after losing it will make you understand the preciousness of having it. When you sketch the dawn sky in the dark, you realize how beautiful the sunrise in the east is before your eyes; When you are past middle age, you realize how much time you wasted when you were young. When you silently count the muddled past, you realize that there are too many things to do but not to do; Only when you walk on the road of life alone can you feel the happiness of your peers.
5. What is kinship? Affection is the winter night when the north wind whistling, and the needle and thread in the mother's hand; It is the banana fan in dad's hand that repels mosquitoes in hot summer. This is a simple question brought back by long-lost relatives; When my father flew into a rage, it was a heavy blow. ...
5. How do primary school students write comments 1 with parallelism at the beginning of their compositions? Pay attention to emotions when commenting. The composition of primary school students truly reflects their thoughts and practices, and is a natural expression of their innocence.
Infecting students with teachers' true feelings can arouse students' voices and improve their ideological understanding. For example, a student in our class has poor academic performance and is usually very withdrawn.
After reading his article "Speak from the Heart", he confided that he often caused troubles and fights because he felt bitter and bored after his parents divorced. This article is very true. I almost cried after reading it. When writing a review, it is like this. Although the article is short, every word is golden, because every sentence reveals that you are a student with great personality. Every day you don't think and make progress. Your bitterness and annoyance are your motivation. As long as you don't play fighting, I believe you will succeed. If you have teachers and classmates around you, will you still suffer and be bored? Secondly, the comments should be encouraging. As adults, we all hope that others will appreciate us warmly and sincerely, not to mention being children of students. In the process of writing, whether students write well or not, the length is the result of their labor.
Therefore, teachers should look at students' writing content, feelings expressed, languages and methods used, and their outstanding achievements or personalities. The evaluation of students' compositions should focus on praise, so that students can gain new knowledge and successful experience in the process of composition evaluation.
Third, comments should focus on enlightening writing. Composition evaluation pays attention to encouragement and does not exclude criticism, because comments also play a role in pointing out the maze. However, we should pay attention to euphemism and goodwill, and we should not directly accuse, let alone be cynical. For example, when a classmate was writing the composition "My Teacher", there was a passage: Her black and shiny eyes seemed to be able to talk, inspiring us every day, sometimes making you blush and sometimes making you happy.
Such an article can't simply write down unspecified comments. This is what I wrote. What did the teacher's eyes say? Can you write it specifically according to your usual observation? After reading it, the students will add it immediately. Fourth, there should be discussion-oriented comments. Pupils are just beginners and beginners. Most of their compositions are semi-finished, so naturally there are many shortcomings and problems. This is very normal for them to lie and lie.
We can't use literary standards to demand students. If students use discussion-based comments, they are more likely to accept the shortcomings in their compositions.
For example, when a student was writing the composition "Spring is bursting", he wrote a sentence at the beginning: Spring is the season when everything is fluffy, and nature is full of vitality. In this sentence, the word fluffy is not used properly. I first wrote him fluffy meaning: describing grass, leaves, hair, fluff and so on.
Then I wrote a comment. Do you think,' Mao Mao' is appropriate here? What is a more appropriate word? When the student saw the comments, he found me with a composition book and told me that he knew that the word Mao Mao was not used properly and should be changed to recovery. I affirmed that discussion-based evaluation can achieve a harmonious and democratic atmosphere, encourage students to study actively, improve their enthusiasm for revising their compositions and improve their ability to revise their own compositions.
6. A wish, like a seed, can produce the most beautiful flowers when sown in the soil of the heart. A wish, like a stream, flows in the land of love, but it can water the green hope. A wish should be a long-term wish, it should be beautiful and good for others. It can also be about relatives, friends or strangers. The formation of this desire is mostly related to their unique life experiences. The wish of children in poor mountainous areas is to realize their dream of reading. The patient's wish is to restore health; The wish of good people is to help the weak; The desire of the brave is to challenge the limit; Students' wishes are to be admitted to an ideal university, children's wishes, old people's wishes ... Of course, I also have my wishes.
7. At the beginning of the composition (parallelism), all the interesting childhood stories are forgiven. Who often lingers in my childhood dreams? I really want to stay awake like a sleeping beauty. If I were to describe the fun of childhood, I would compare it to a flower, a fragrant flower; A box, a box with many secrets; A grape rack, a grape rack full of countless grapes.
Let's enjoy fairy tales together! Soul-the soul is a vast sky, which contains everything in the world; The mind is a calm lake, occasionally rippling; The mind is a snowy area, reflecting a colorful world.
Pain-pain gropes in the dark, and the road ahead is bumpy; Pain is a kind of sadness that no one understands, and it is helpless in the face of all setbacks; Pain is the deepest torture of the soul, and it cannot be confessed without tears; Pain is a natural expression and a devil in trouble. Stupidity-stupidity is a natural helplessness, an acquired laziness, a bad result planted by oneself, and a moth in good fruit.
Lies-lies are moths of the mind, eating people's hearts beyond recognition; Lies are a deep quagmire in which people can't extricate themselves; Lies are an endless black hole, which makes people fall into the abyss of sin. Insidious-insidious, is a wolf in sheep's clothing, doing shady business; Sin is a good enemy and a jealous friend; Insanity is the iceberg of the soul, which makes people feel chill through clarity.
Selfishness-selfishness is a mirror, in which you can only see yourself forever; Selfishness is a piece of cloth that covers your eyes and can't see the pain of others; Selfishness is a layer of glass, which looks transparent, but always separates each other. What is kinship? Affection is the winter night when the north wind whistling, and the needle and thread in the mother's hand; It is the banana fan in dad's hand that repels mosquitoes in hot summer. This is a simple question brought back by long-lost relatives; This is a punch when my father was furious ... greeting cards are warm friendship and warm wishes.
It brings the message of spring, it spreads the seeds of love, it conveys good wishes, and it conveys the true feelings about the world. Conditional parallelism sentence
For example, with a firm ambition, you can be smartly satisfied with the difficult environment of "eating, drinking and drinking"; With extensive intelligence, we can plan skillfully and win thousands of miles; With extraordinary courage, we can wisely turn the tide in the crisis and remain calm. The chic in my eyes can never be achieved overnight.
It is wine that needs years to accumulate, and it is a pearl that needs sand and stone polishing. That kind of mellow and mellow, always built on the long and even painful accumulation. Inflectional sentence parallelism.
For example, some people want to be the king of China Edison's invention, but they are afraid of the difficulty of learning scientific knowledge; Some people want to be Mo Bosang of China, but they are afraid of the hardships of practicing calligraphy all the year round; Some people want to be great musicians, but they are too lazy to work in the field of staff. So ambitious, ambitious, you can't even catch a small fish, let alone a big ambition. The parallelism of causal sentences (mind and action).
For example, it is precisely because of the lofty sentiments of keeping promises, that Xiao's tragic song was played. Honesty-the eternal law of China chivalrous man.
It is because of the persistence of vows of eternal love that the dance music that became a butterfly was sung. Honesty-China's lingering swan song.
It is precisely because of the commitment to make a living for heaven and earth and to seek happiness for the people that one song after another has popped up. Honesty-the immortal song of China literati.
A rhetorical question. Such as: full pond sludge, black or not? Black! However, the lotus leaves the mud and is not stained.
"Swallow and black magpie, nest and altar", in the late Chu State, was it black? Black! However, Qu Yuan is "the world is cloudy, and I am the only one". Eunuchs are in power, and villains are rampant. Was the Ming Dynasty black? Black! However, Yu Qian only left innocence in the world.
He who is near ink is not black. Will we still be moved? Will the children preparing for the college entrance examination be moved by a glass of milk brought by their mother? Will an overbearing boss be moved by a humble suggestion from his subordinates? Will tourists be moved by the trees that are scratched all over, but still strong and straight? If you can still be moved, prove that your blood vessels are not hardened and your nerves are not numb; If you can still be moved, prove that you can still see the world and know yourself.
Love is a sweet spring, which makes unfortunate people forget the bitterness of life; Love is a beautiful ballad that makes boring people feel the joy of life. Love is a flowing spring, which makes thirsty pedestrians feel the sweetness of life journey; Love is a beautiful ballad, which makes people who walk alone feel the beauty of life; Love is a clear spring flowing in my heart, which makes people immersed in pain feel the sweetness of the world; Love is a ballad that reverberates in the ear, making lonely people feel the warmth of the world; Love is the spring that knocks on the ice door and shakes the heart of stone; Love is a beacon that shines in the dark, allowing lost ships to find a harbor; Love is the drizzle in spring, which makes lonely people enjoy the nourishment of their hearts; Love is a tear flowing in a clear spring on a summer night, which makes people who are hot and sleepless appreciate the poetic peace; Love is a small umbrella held up on a rainy night, which allows people wandering in a foreign land to get the shade of family; Love is a rainbow flying from the horizon, so that people full of sadness can see the beauty of the world; Love is a glass of ice water sprinkled on the top of your head, which makes people feel dizzy and dizzy with high fever. Love is a piece of milk candy in the mouth, which makes people who drink coptis chinensis for a long time taste the sweetness of life. Caring is a look, giving students a silent blessing; Caring is a green wind, which gives students physical and mental comfort; Caring is a spring rain that moistens students' hearts; Caring is a greeting, giving students the warmth of spring.
Gratitude if love is the spring breeze in March, gratitude is the new green exposed by grass; If love is the sunshine of early summer vitality, gratitude is the thick green of wood growth; If love is snow in winter, gratitude is wheat with full grains; Praise you is not rain and dew, but brings new hope; You are not spring, but you bring the sweetness of life; You are not the sun, but you bring the warmth of the world. You are like a stream, without the turbulent waves of the river.