Overall comments: Classroom - our lovely home, what a familiar and kind place it is! The transparent glass windows, neatly arranged desks and chairs, and the blackboard "like a piece of black farmland"... have left so many traces of our childhood and accompanied us through so many happy times.

When mentioning the pen-writing classroom, the students’ love for it must have arisen spontaneously. How to express this sincere feeling?

First, express your feelings directly. For example, the title at the beginning is "Our classroom is spacious and bright, I like this classroom", and the ending is "I feel very happy to be able to study in such a classroom", which echoes the beginning and directly expresses the love for the classroom.

Second, incorporate emotion into the description of the scenery. For example: "The blackboard is like a black farmland, where the teacher sows the seeds of knowledge, and we harvest knowledge every day." This not only describes the characteristics of the blackboard, but also contains the author's affection.

With sincere emotions, how can you write down the article in an orderly manner according to the order of observation? The order of observations is usually divided into two categories, temporal order and spatial order. For example, first introduce the characteristics of the classroom, and then introduce the tables, chairs, blackboard, bookcase, podium... from the middle to the surroundings. This achieves order. This is the writing method of "changing scenery with each step" that we see in many articles.

Many students have this worry: If everyone writes about classroom, will it be the same? This is a matter of viewing angle. The angle needs to be new, for example, it is still writing on a blackboard, but if you use metaphors or other rhetoric, it often looks different.

Having achieved sincere emotions, clear organization, and novel perspectives, are you still worried about not being able to write about our classroom?

Reviewer: Quanzhou Xiaoting

Our classroom is spacious and bright. I like this classroom. (The beginning is concise, pointing out the characteristics of the classroom.)

In the middle of the classroom are four rows of neatly arranged desks and chairs, and we sit on (in) them to study culture. On the front wall of the classroom is a (rectangular) magnetic blackboard. (, it) This blackboard is like a black farmland, where the teacher sows the seeds of knowledge, and we harvest knowledge every day. Directly above the blackboard is a bright five-star red flag in the middle. On both sides of the red flag is the class motto "The interests of the motherland, above all else." It reminds us all the time: We must love the motherland and put the interests of the motherland first. Be a useful person to the motherland. To the left of the blackboard is a bookcase. There are more than 200 extracurricular books in the bookcase, which can expand our knowledge and become a useful person in the future. Directly in front of the library cabinet is a podium. There is a computer on the podium and a large screen behind it. This is a good helper for our study - multimedia equipment.

There is also a large blackboard on the wall behind the classroom, which is our blackboard newspaper. The content on it is rich: there are riddles; (,) there are exquisite pictures; (,) there are interesting mathematics; () ,) Have common sense of life...

There are two large windows on the left and right sides of the classroom, and four transparent glass windows are opened. The fresh air immediately hits our nostrils, making us feel relaxed and happy, and immediately become energetic. . There are famous quotes on the wall between the two windows, which always inspire me to study hard and make progress every day. (The above three paragraphs describe the furnishings and scenery in the classroom according to the order of space, and the description of the blackboard is very vivid.)

I feel very happy to be able to study in such a classroom. (Echoes the first and last. But the suggestion is to change it to: This is my classroom, which is spacious, bright, clean, neat, and full of vitality. It is the place where I study and live, and it is the cradle for me to increase my knowledge. I study happily here. growing up.

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