Let pop songs enter your composition

You may often encounter this situation when writing: the melody and lyrics of pop songs appear unexpectedly, and it allows you to find your way back. It gives you that distant life memory, gives you a final shape for your chaotic emotional experience at this time, gives you an inspiration for your painful and boring ideas, and gives you some inspiration to polish your uncertain choices, so that the words you write are kind and sweet. There is a sense of agility. You have a clear mind and a beautiful heart. When you read it afterwards, you will be loved by everyone and it tastes great. That has become the highlight of the article. Maybe it's just an accidental success, but it adds confidence to your writing and gives you inspiration.

One of the wonderful uses: Use it at the beginning of transfer

Applause

"100 points - it is not easy to say that I love you" I always thought That's right. I got the highest score in the class for today's chemistry test. I couldn't help but cheer, as if I had received the highest honor. I like this feeling, I have an impulse, I suddenly and strangely long to hear other people's applause. Just like bitter coffee, there is sweetness in the bitterness, the most beautiful taste.

The above composition begins: ""100 points--it's not easy to say that I love you." I always thought that was the case." This sentence is very unique, seemingly coming out of nowhere, and carefully The taste, twists and turns, is full of flavor and chewy. It not only sets the contradictory and longing emotional tone of the whole text, but also hints at the following context of writing. Once you find this kind of clever starting sentence in your writing, you can sail down the river and write with ease. When refining the above starting sentence, pop songs played an important role in expanding the point.

If popular songs made the author of "Applause" create a good starting sentence, then the soul-stirring lyrics of Zheng Jun's "Back to Lhasa" in the "Under the Lamp" clip below also made it possible. The author finds a unique transitional sentence and embeds it in the transition point, which makes the article suddenly turn into a wave and surprise from the dullness at the beginning.

Under the lamp

Every night is spent mechanically like this: after dinner, without waiting for a break, he comes to the familiar lamp, picks up the inseparable textbook, and does something. I had to update the test papers every day until late at night...

The day ended in exhaustion.

Tonight, as usual, I sat at the table full of books, rushing non-stop...

"Back to Lhasa, back to Potala..." From the neighbor This beautiful song sung by Zheng Jun came home. The beautiful melody brought people into a dreamlike wonderland, as if they were entering heaven.

Second use: used at the end of sublimation

Why do pop songs easily move us? One reason is that pop songs express more ordinary and real feelings of ordinary people. Isn't it? You and I are all mortals, born in this world, but lately I have been troubled and too soft-hearted in everything... This kind of ordinary and real life experience has been condensed and refined, and has the power to penetrate life and radiate the soul. If you can hum a few sentences at the end of the narrative to express your ambition, and make it the finishing touch, you can not only sublimate the theme and idea, but also overcome the common shortcomings of empty and weak lyrical arguments in narrative writing, and obtain a natural and appropriate tone. Reading effect.

Home

Home is not only a place to eat and sleep, but also a workshop for family happiness. Here, there are the smiles of children and the warm faces of parents... However, home In those days, I was always terrified, fearing that I would be imprisoned in a dangerous operating room again.

Sometimes, I really want to ask the cold stars in the sky: Have you ever cared about the humble joys and sorrows of the world? On the river of death, our lives are no longer than a drop of water, but we spend half of our time working and a quarter of our time arguing. Is there still enough time left for us to be silent, to hesitate, to wait and see?

Every time I think about this, I really want to yell at those two faces that were once so kind and warm: "I have something to say!..."

Sitting by the window Looking at the small tree outside the window, what does it need? It's water, it's sunshine, it's air... Yes, home was once the direction my tears returned to. How I wish it would no longer be an operating room full of danger! However, I always endure it and endure it.

Finally, one sunny afternoon, my always reserved depression finally released - "Dad, Mom, I want to have a good talk with you..."

I remember the whole afternoon, The hearts of the three of us were beating and burning, and I couldn't help but sing "Home" by Luo Dayou:

"Every old poem

is written in the rain In front of the glass window behind

Every lonely song

Singing unintentional promises to you

Give me a warm family

The back view of me going out makes me feel like I am back home...

"I" sings at the end of the above article Luo Dayou's "Home" accurately captures the main theme of the full text, without any pretense, and achieves excellent sound effects. Of course, this "end sound" effect depends not only on the lyrics, but also on the perfect harmony between the lyrics and the full text. , be coordinated, and never sing pop songs for the sake of singing pop songs.

In addition, writing articles about finally accomplishing something after a lot of hard work, often quoting the lyrics of "Real Heroes" "How can you see the rainbow without going through wind and rain" can also achieve good results. Effect.

The third magical use: used in the clue chain

The three uses mentioned above are just borrowings and transformations of local content language. There is another wonderful use, that It is to borrow the whole pop song as the prototype of the idea, and use it to string together relevant life materials, so that the pop song becomes an interlocking link in the chain of clues in the full text, and becomes a uniquely charming language at the key points of succession and transition in the article. Let the whole story unfold with the accompaniment of pop music. Please see:

The taste of growing up

"I was so young at the time/I cried/I made trouble/Oh, mom - don't think that's not true..."< /p>

This is a Taiwanese campus folk song, a song in my heart, in my young and growing years...

When I was young, I held my mother’s hand on countless nights, clamoring for the stars in the sky. My mother always said with a smile: "Silly boy, my mother can't pick it!" "Why?" The childish voice still contained stubborn pleading. "You will understand when you grow up!" "Grow up?" - What a magical word for me at that time! "I want to grow up." These four words took root deeply in my heart. Although at that time I could only point to the stars and say: "Light! Light!" Even though I was naive and could only squat on the ground to learn from the neighbor's dog barking; even though I would chase a clumsy duck inexplicably.

Unknowingly, I said goodbye to elementary school and entered middle school. It was already the third year of junior high school.

On the same starry night, I sat under the lamp and reviewed the lessons I had learned during the day. "Take a rest and have something to drink." As I spoke, a bowl of steaming milk appeared next to me. . "Mom, how do you solve this problem?" I put the notebook in front of my mother. She read it for a while and calculated it over and over again in the draft notebook. Finally, she closed the book and said to me: "I can't do it." "What?" I was so surprised that I almost spit out the half-drunk milk. In the past, when I asked my mother a question, she never refused. Looking at the surprise on my face, my mother said: "As you grow up, you learn more and more things. Mom really can't keep up with you!"

Perhaps, this is growth, unconsciously , I have really grown up, spending less and less time with my family, and gradually formed a solitary personality, longing for freedom, and no longer longing for the warmth of home. However, just that night, "Mom really can't keep up with you!" This sentence actually made my eyes sore for a while: Home, Mom, this place I have always wanted to stay away from, is now the place where I return with tears.

"Oh, mother - don't think that it's not true/and I don't understand how/when the journey of this life will have to wait..."

I chanted repeatedly in my heart Listening to this song, looking at the faintly visible cold stars in the sky, and thinking about my mother's heart-wrenching words, I realized the meaning of home for the first time, and I also understood that the so-called "wandering around the world" is just "youth and frivolity".

It is my mother who wakes me up from my silent sleep, it is my mother who lights up my dim light, and it is my mother who tells me what growth is.

The above article borrows the artistic conception of the lyrics of a Taiwanese campus folk song to expand the material, arrange the plot, organize the language, and make the lyrics appear intermittently at the beginning, end and climax, repeating and singing, singing one's own heavy life Enlightenment. Learn wonderful languages

Many of the lyrics themselves are extremely vivid and vivid poems. When you listen deeply and sing passionately, I think you will never forget to appreciate and learn from the lyrics. Like the clever misunderstanding of "vest" in "Vest" "can only go back to back but not heart to heart", "grow up, get married, live, go out", "not afraid of spicy food" and "sweat, tears, The wonderful understanding and use of the word "hot" in sentences such as "Fire, Song" and "Ye Spicy". In "Men Should Be Strong", "Courage is like iron, bones are like gold steel, mind is as big as gold, and vision is as far as ten thousand miles." "Metaphors, exaggerated vivid images, the wonderful use of "Xing" in "It's not windy, it's not raining, there's sun in the sky, the girl doesn't speak, the girl doesn't speak, the girl doesn't think," etc. How to make your own language more vivid, the language of pop songs will definitely give us a lot of inspiration.

Of course, there are also certain grammatical errors in phrases such as "Passing by your path", "I was knocked on the waist by youth", "The moving heart", "A hot-blooded man, brighter than the sun". It will arouse our attention and alertness.

2. Help you complete wonderful ideas

The material selection, concept, structure, etc. of the lyrics will inspire our ideas. For example, in "Chinese Baby", materials such as drinking Yellow River water, eating green onions mixed with tofu, wearing mille-soled shoes, and writing square characters were selected to express patriotism. The role of exaggeration in shaping the image of manliness makes us excited. However, "I'm So Happy Today" only repeatedly shouts "We, the common people, are so happy today" without any specific and vivid narration or description. It wakes us up.

Music itself also brings us many surprises: music pays attention to melody, rhythm, beat, speed, and intensity. Doesn’t the development of the plot of a novel also pay attention to relaxation and relaxation? Doesn’t the expression of emotion in prose also pay attention to the "starting, changing and combining" just like the melody of the song? Doesn’t the rhythm of argumentative and lyrical language also have the same alternation between high and low pitch as in songs? The way of singing is also the way of writing, and they are closely connected deep in the "soul". Because of this, the article you want to write can sometimes be conceived based on some characteristics of one or several songs, or it may be exciting, or soothing, or swirling, or simply like a serenade...

3. Beautiful songs dress up beautiful articles

1. Let your article have "bright eyes that are good at seeing"

The title is the eye of the article and the window to the soul. Only with good articles can you look forward to your emotions. Lyrics with a strong lyrical flavor can often be surprisingly successful if they can be transformed into "bright eyes that are good at gazing". For example: writing a retrospective article can be titled "Looking Back Again", writing about the world and bidding for the Olympic Games can be titled "Infatuation is not a sin", and other articles such as "In the Field of Hope", "Men Should Be Self-Strengthening", "Who Am I" , "Can't Play the World", "Ambition is in My Chest", "Stars Light Up", etc. Aren't they also good topics? This type of title may be enthusiastic and high-pitched, or passionate, or subtle and graceful, lively and fresh, full of the flavor of the times and infectious, and can arouse readers' endless associations, deep emotions, and strong emotions, no matter what kind of title they are. The style will produce unique effects. Isn't the text "Why are the Flowers So Red" just an expository text?

To introduce words into the title, you can either borrow the original sentence or make appropriate changes according to the needs of the article.

2. The lyrics are included in the text - My love is naked

This is an old tradition. The lyrics are concise, easy to understand or full of philosophy. The vivid and contagious effect produced by clever use in the composition has made many students have special feelings about it. The most common uses are:

(1) Make a beautiful beginning. It may arouse the reader's curiosity and reflection, or it may set the emotional tone of the whole article, or it may hint at the context of the whole article. With this kind of clever starting sentence, the following writing is "Happiness Express". For example, when bidding for the Olympic Games for the second time, a classmate took the title "Looking Back Again" and wrote at the beginning, "Looking back again, it's like a dream, looking back again, my heart is still the same." Then he recalled the process of bidding for the Olympic Games, expressing the Chinese people's desire and pursuit for the Olympic Games, and giving people The impression was very deep. However, after this kind of beginning is readily available, it needs to be refined and refined.

(2) Make clever transitions. Clever transition can give people a feeling of "behind the scenes". Finding a unique transitional sentence and embedding it in the transition point can make the article change from dullness to excitement and surprise. Some students wrote an article about environmental protection. They first wrote about the serious pollution of the surrounding environment, and then used the lyrics "clear streams, green mountains, beautiful nature is the paradise of mankind. I love nature, la la la..." .” The transition to a depiction of an ideal home has this effect.

(3), the twinkling stars at the end of the chapter. If you can hum a sentence or a few sentences at the end of the article where the chapter expresses your ambition, making it the finishing touch, sublimating the theme, and creating a heart-stirring, three-day lingering effect, you will surely be able to overcome the shortcomings of a hollow and weak ending and achieve a natural, appropriate, and harmonious effect. . For example, Gu Linchun used "I Love You in My Own Way" as the title when he wrote about his senior year in high school and wrote about his understanding of senior year in high school. At the end, he wrote: "Outside the window, there are stars. I hope the stars will illuminate my future and illuminate my future." Our future." The lyrics from "Stars Light Up" give people a sense of intimacy.

But it should be noted that you must not get carried away and the number of quotations must be subject to the needs of the article. As for whether it stops abruptly after singing, or whether it is a combination of rap and rap, it depends on the needs of the writing.

(4), as a clue to "illuminate the future"

Since the high school text "Suo Yi" recalls Lu Xun with two lines of Mr. Lu Xun's poem "A cold eyebrow is pointed at a thousand fingers, bowing the head" "I am willing to be a Ruziniu" is the clue that guides the whole text. "For Premier Zhou's Entrustment" uses one sentence as the clue, so the same can be done with pop songs. For example, you can use a lyric throughout the text. In the composition "Does it snow where you do?" the classmate starts by asking "Does it snow where you do?" and then writes that he thinks of distant friends in the snow and recalls past interactions. The paragraphs all begin with this sentence, and the care and longing for friends are vividly displayed on the page, producing a very touching effect. Of course, you can also borrow an entire song and scatter it throughout the story, stringing together related materials and letting the whole story unfold with the accompaniment of a popular song. You can also expand it and use a plot related to the content or image of the song to run through it, which will become a brand new idea, and sometimes it will have extraordinary effects.

4. "Love me more" - a by-product that cannot be ignored

Excellent pop songs are the product of noble emotions, integrating beautiful, touching, positive, noble and magnificent, Inspiring and true emotions, flowing with profound undercurrents of thought, touching people's hearts. It is a rare and good teaching material for sentiment and moral education. For example, "Devotion of Love" conveys: As long as love exists, warmth will be sent to every corner of the global village. Only because of love, life will be rich and colorful. "Speak from the Heart" expresses the noble sentiments of the bright moon of selfless dedication to defend the country at the expense of oneself. "Real Hero" expresses the noble philosophy of "If you don't experience the wind and rain, how can you see the rainbow".

Use excellent pop songs, which are full of wind, rain, lightning, and thunder, to express the students' emotional screams, enter the ears and brains, emotionalize and purify the students' hearts, inspire students' self-examination consciousness, and provide them with self-education. Aesthetic education opens a new path. When students stand in the mirror of excellent songs, they will inevitably enter the role, absorb the spiritual nutrition, constantly examine themselves, adjust themselves, strive to improve their sense of responsibility, willpower, and enterprising spirit, and create a newer and more positive spirit. The perfect "me". For example, students reflected on the filial piety and love expressed by children in "A Letter from Home" and "Come Home Often": "How many of us often have our parents in our hearts and can know and remember their parents' birthdays or special occasions?" Memorial Day? How many people can send blessings and care to their parents during the festival? This ancient regret that "it is only when you raise a child that you can repay your mother's kindness" should not continue in our generation." Students sang "Like this. After "Like Red", I solemnly swore, "Money can't buy the sunset, so that my tomorrow is not a dream, to say goodbye to yesterday, cherish your youth. Let the full emotions be guided by rational thinking, and live every minute in a down-to-earth manner, Chase with your heart, spread your wings and fly high, cross all boundaries and write your own tomorrow."

Some lyrics have become well-known aphorisms. For example, "This little pain in the wind and rain is nothing" ("Sailor"), "You must use your hands to polish your life" ("Streetcar of Life"), "Thirds of days are destined, seventy percent depends on hard work" ("Love Fighting") Only then will you win").

Students realize from "Love to Work and You Will Win": We must be good at grasping the opportunities that are "destined by nature", and we must work hard to create opportunities for development; opportunities do not just wait, work hard to win. , If you don’t fight, you will lose. Students realized from "Going Home" that it feels so good to go home, where there is deep family affection, tenderness, and warm care. Home is not only the natural habitat of human beings, but also the spiritual home and spiritual home of human beings.