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First, the conception process
1. Quick test: pay attention to the limitations of the topic. The best way is to expand the topic into one sentence, which is helpful for the exam.
2. Choose the angle: see the big from small, and see the big from small.
3. Selected style: foster strengths and avoid weaknesses.
4. Determine the intention: reflect your own thoughts, opinions and emotional attitudes.
5. Material selection: Pay attention to the typicality (the most convincing) and novelty (the most distinctive) of materials.
6. Structural arrangement: pay attention to arranging materials from shallow to deep and from small to large, highlighting the main idea.
7. Determine the topic: A good topic is half the battle! Pay attention to simplicity.
8. Language expression: Pay attention to the flexible use of beautiful language forms.
B, overcome the difficulty of conception
How to quickly determine three sub-arguments in argumentative writing?
1, quick thinking: start with materials!
2. Shortcut method: seek differences from the same, compare the differences of three materials (mainly three), and find three angles to determine the argument or central sentence.
3. examples.
Take our composition for the senior high school entrance examination this year as an example:
A, my style: argumentative;
B, my opinion: Suffering makes life (the topic is "Suffering is a compulsory course in life");
C, my material: Beethoven, Hawking, Japanese girl Kiko;
D. Comparing similarities and differences: All three people have been tempered by hardships, and all three people's lives shine brilliantly. The difference is that Beethoven is a world music master and suffers from deafness; Hawking is regarded as the greatest physicist after Einstein. His body has only three fingers to move. Noriko, an ordinary Japanese girl, lost her arms and painted with her feet. Beethoven brought us beautiful music; Hawking showed us the extreme of intelligence; Kiko's strength is amazing.
E. My arrangement: from shallow to deep, from ordinary to special.
F, my argument: Suffering makes life stronger, suffering blooms the wonders of life, and suffering makes life more pure.
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utility program
The secret of quickly constructing argumentative papers in the examination room is "one, three, five, six and seven". Specifically:
"One" means: well written; A good center; A good start; A happy ending; Good topic.
1. "Good handwriting" is very important: The Grading Standard for Composition in Senior High School Entrance Examination divides this test center into four grades: First, the font looks good; The second category, the font is correct; The third category, the font is clear; The fourth category, scrawled handwriting. "The grading standard stipulates that every mistake 1 word is deducted 1 minute.
2. "A good center"
Require a clear center and a healthy mind, and pay attention to the following points when determining the center:
(1) Not suitable for deep play-not too complicated, not too advanced, not too reversed;
2 clearly express what is for, what is against, what is affirmative and what is negative;
The central argument of an article should remain unchanged;
(4) Can't put forward opinions that are contrary to or contradictory to the central argument;
⑤ Positive and healthy thinking.
When determining the center, we should start small and be strict and standardized. Specifically:
(1) "Start with small things", concentrate on "see big things with small things", deepen the theme and stick to the theme;
② The center is expressed in a rigorous and standardized form. Don't write an unprepared style. If you are not sure of 100%, you'd better write a standard argumentative essay or argumentative essay, so as to be good at stability and win in stability.
3. "A good start"
There are many kinds of good beginnings, and we recommend four types that are the easiest to master and score: figurative parallelism; Set the suspension type; Famous aphorisms; Clever use of inscriptions.
Metaphor and parallelism: if life is a solemn castle, then faith is the pillar of the dome; If life is a lush tree, then faith is a deep-rooted root; If life is a flying seabird, then faith is flapping its wings.
Establish a meditation: people have seven emotions and their own likes and dislikes. However, when this kind of likes and dislikes is mixed with the understanding of truth, what impact will it have?
Famous aphorism: As the saying goes, "the weather is not as good as the geographical position, and the geographical position is not as good as human harmony", and the key to "harmony" lies in "security". Those who are "safe" are stable and harmonious. If the family is safe, the family will be lucky; When the country is safe, the country will prosper; Peace in space leads to harmony of all things. Peace is the foundation of peace. Therefore, safety is the foundation and harmony is the most important.
Clever use of the inscription: "Revelation of Echo": "He who loves will always love him; Respect people and people will always respect them (Mencius). " -inscription
4. "Happy ending"
Requirements at the end of the article: concise and exquisite. The ending is an organic part of the structure of the article, the receiving place and foothold of the article, and the destination of the full text. Any anticlimactic article, without an ending, is difficult to arouse readers' aesthetic feelings and get high marks.
There are many kinds of happy endings. I recommend four types that are the easiest to master and score: famous aphorisms; Zhang Xianzhi's style; Call for lyrical style; Fore and aft care.
Famous aphorism: "Watch the flowers falling before the court, and follow the clouds outside." Accept the clouds and keep the rain with peace and wisdom. Show your strengths, support the weaknesses of others, and show your win-win wisdom in life in the vast sea of competition.
Zhang Xianzhi, a pawn, said, "Look, honesty is so precious and important. Integrity cannot be lost. Only honesty can make your life like a clear spring, refreshing and never exhausted! "
Appeal to lyricism: 2 1 century, we are the spring of the motherland, and enthusiasm is our character. Let the fire of enthusiasm in our hearts burn more violently, string our laughter with love, and let the whole world be enveloped in love. Don't suppress yourself, don't change yourself casually. "I am who I am. Give me a little sunshine and it will be so brilliant."
Head-tail reference: Head-tail reference is one of the most practical methods in examination composition. Generally, the author puts forward the center of the article at the beginning, and then emphasizes it again at the end, taking care of the beginning, so as to make the center of the article stand out clearly. In argumentative writing, it is manifested in the following ways: or echoing the topic and strengthening the theme; Or answer the opening question; Or reiterate the argument put forward at the beginning; Or vividly express the argument; Or the practical significance of the argument, and so on. (Click on "Xiaoshengchu" under the heading to get more educational experience, methods and learning materials immediately, and update them every day! )
For example:
Rain (the first time), rushing rain, bean-sized raindrops are overwhelming. My eyes are white.
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(End) The rain is still not small. I really hope it can wash away excess dust and return our splendid world!
"Good topic": As the saying goes, "There is a flying dragon in the eye, which is called the glory of the gods." The title of the test paper is concise, novel, vivid and meaningful, which often wins the favor of the marking teacher. Of course, there are many ways to quickly draw up questions in the test paper. In fact, it is not only a smart move to quickly draw up a composition topic in the examination room, but also to make the article colorful and interesting by appropriately changing the titles of film and television dramas, songs, famous poems, proverbs, two-part allegorical sayings, advertising slogans and lyrics.
"Three" means: three good examples; San Chu Dian Ming center
1. Three good examples
Basic requirements of material examples: relevance, typicality and novelty.
An excellent argumentative essay should have at least three good examples.
From the structural point of view, the "three good examples" generally require: a big example; A small case; A set of parallel small examples.
From the content point of view, it is best to have "three good models" at the same time: positive models; Negative examples; Examples of progress.
Take a big example: in terms of words, it is generally between 150-200 words, and in terms of content, it is best to be a positive example.
Take a small example: generally speaking, the number of words is between 70- 100, which can be a counterexample from the content.
A group of examples with small parallelism: fewer words, and a group of parallelism forms a whole, which can be a progressive example.
Behind the major and minor cases, we should closely follow the reasoning and argumentation, and the so-called "well-founded". There are causal method, hypothesis method, conditional analysis method, inductive analysis method and so on. For exam-oriented composition, there are two main methods: ① Causal analysis. ② Hypothesis analysis method.
A group of trivial matters, such as: in the national flag stretching in the wind, we understand the connotation of Mencius' noble spirit, Wen Tianxiang's courage of "no one has died since ancient times" and Zhou Enlai's oath of "studying for the rise of China".
2. Three points out of the center.
The role of the point is reflected in the following three aspects:
(1) makes readers clear at a glance, and it is easy to grasp the center, focus and improve reading efficiency;
(2) Make the center stand out and leave a deep impression on people;
(3) Sublimation of the theme can make readers suddenly enlightened.
Where are the questions sorted? Learn to skillfully point the topic, the subject words or symbolic language should appear repeatedly in the article, and the "keywords" or "materials" in front of the topic should appear at least several times at the beginning, middle and end of the article (but you can't copy the materials), which will have an impact on the reader's vision.
Click the questions in these locations (5-7 times):
(2) The first sentence in the middle of each large paragraph indicates the center of this paragraph; After quoting the argument, you can comment and deduct the topic;
(3) The last paragraph of the article, or the end of the penultimate paragraph, these places are generally the places where the full text is summarized, which can be summarized and interpreted in accurate language.
"Five" refers to five segments.
After the central argument is determined, how to discuss it is the most difficult moment for everyone. When extracting sub-arguments, the hierarchical method can be used, that is, the sub-arguments can be refined according to the questioning idea of "what-why-how-how".
Besides the first two sections and the last two sections, the structure of an argumentative essay is called the main part.
The main part is generally divided into 3-5 segments, with three segments being the best, which is what we call "five segments". The main body consists of three paragraphs, each of which belongs to a sub-argument, and the three paragraphs are three sub-arguments, that is, the article analyzes the central argument from three aspects.
"Five paragraphs" can sometimes be slightly modified. If necessary, we will write 6-7 paragraphs, but if there are too many paragraphs, the brushwork will be scattered.
"Six" means 600 words.
The composition of the senior high school entrance examination requires "no less than 600 words". But in the actual marking, it is not enough to write only 600 words. The marking teacher will default your composition as "the material is not rich enough" and deduct the impression points. I think it is most reasonable to write 650-700 words in the composition for the senior high school entrance examination. Too few words, easy to be concealed; Too much talk is not worth wasting time.
"Seven" refers to seven excellent sentences.
Read the excellent works with full marks in the senior high school entrance examination carefully, and you will find that there is one kind of light that shines the brightest-that is, excellent sentences.
An excellent composition requires six or seven excellent sentences. I won't give specific examples. What does the high score composition in the senior high school entrance examination look like over the years ~
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Take the exam.
The following set of senior high school entrance examination compositions is for everyone:
Read, analyze and examine the questions accurately, make it clear at the beginning, and the meaning is not implicit.
It is difficult to explain clearly by metaphor. Use parallelism to create the motivation of writing.
It is not good to write about yourself with examples. Suspense sets off psychology.
Pay attention to detail. See most of the points in the small picture.
Discuss many typical examples. Combination of positive and negative contrast and practice.
From beginning to end, clear thinking and profound meaning are seen at all levels.
Young people's foul language is extreme, and making it up is a taboo.
Elegant style, full of book spirit, lyrical and realistic.
The untitled words are in a mess, and the score of hard injury is the lowest everywhere.
Many famous works have been studied. Analyze and imitate the laws.
Fat pork belly with crown leopard tail. Grammar is flexible and creative.
Just practice one or two styles, and do well in the composition test.
It is not advisable to cover everything. Develop strengths and avoid weaknesses to show talents.
Be familiar with the characteristics of online comments and vote for their good results.
Remember the above matters, practice makes perfect, don't speculate.