I got full marks for my college entrance examination essay. I think this is both unexpected and reasonable. "On the 11th, when being interviewed by reporters, Hao Shijia showed a faint smile on his face, "Although my composition has always been very good in the past, this is the first time I have received full marks. ”

Hao Shijia, a girl from Class 1, Grade 3, No. 4 Middle School, Xinzhou District, Shangrao City, in this year’s college entrance examination, her article "Approaching Lu Xun" received full marks for college entrance examination composition, and With a total score of 579, she ranked first in the science subject of the college entrance examination. How did she achieve a perfect composition? On the 11th, the reporter interviewed Hao Shijia and shared her experience in writing a good composition.

The full score essay wants more people to understand and accept Lu Xun

The topic of this year's Jiangxi college entrance examination essay is: In middle school, students have three fears: one is afraid of the Mathematical Olympiad, the other is afraid of English, and the third is afraid of Zhou Shuren. Please explain your views. You can discuss or narrate, and you can choose your own topic.

“When I saw the essay title when the paper was handed out, I thought to myself, what does Zhou Shuren have to be afraid of? I just like reading his works, and it’s not too late for me to like him. "Hao Shijia said that the beginning of her composition quoted a sentence from Mr. Lu Xun's work "This Is Life": "The infinite distance and countless people are all related to me. I exist, and I will live...". The article compares Lu Xun with the outstanding Japanese writer Natsume Soseki, highlighting the excellence of Mr. Lu Xun's works. "I just want to tell everyone where Lu Xun is excellent, and we must get closer He, in turn, allowed more people to understand and accept Lu Xun, so that Zhou Shuren would no longer become a fear in the hearts of students. ”

Hao Shijia said: “The end of the composition is also a quote from Lu Xun’s work: The mud of life is abandoned on the ground, and no trees grow, only weeds. This is my sin. ”

In Hao Shijia’s view, “Lu Xun’s works may be profound and not easy to be understood, but don’t let the obscurity of the text stop you from understanding him.” Ending with this sentence is also another time The topic echoes the previous article, making the whole article flow smoothly.

Huang Li, Hao Shijia’s Chinese teacher, told reporters that the analysis of Lu Xun in this full-mark essay is very accurate and in-depth. Unique point of view.

“Because I had been immersed in writing at that time, I accidentally wrote Kong Yiji’s B with another homonym,” Hao Shijia told reporters, “but the marking teacher agreed that this composition was too It was so good that this typo could be ignored, so this essay finally got full marks. ”

Talk about family education and parents cultivating my habit of independent learning

Hao Shijia was born in an intellectual family, and his parents are middle school teachers.

“I I have loved reading books since I was a child. I read whatever I am interested in. I have a whole bookcase full of books. Personally, I like the works of Lu Xun and the Japanese writer Akutagawa Ryunosuke, such as "Morning Blossoms Picked at Dusk", "Weeds", etc., since junior high school. I started reading it when I was young. My parents are also quite supportive of this. As long as they are books I need, they will buy them for me. "Hao Shijia told reporters, "My parents basically gave me a free-range education and generally didn't care much about me. However, if my behavior deviated too much, they would talk to me in time and give me correct guidance. This also cultivated my habit of independent learning. ”

It is precisely because of her love for reading and her ability to study consciously that Hao Shijia’s composition has always been good. When she was in junior high school, she won many awards in composition contests held in the city. This year, her composition The article "Growing Up Slowly and Elegantly" won the second prize in the national essay competition.

Not only did Hao Shijia have excellent grades in composition, but he also did very well in other subjects. He was often in the class in high school. She is the first in school and has won the first place in grade several times.

She is very good at studies and also likes comics, printmaking, and calligraphy. Her hard-pen calligraphy once won the first class in Shinshu District. In addition, she is also very interested in sports. She often plays football, table tennis and badminton with her classmates. She jokes that she is a "wonderful flower".

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Hao Shijia summarized his experience in writing good compositions: First, there should be no deviation in the intention, otherwise it will be difficult to write well, and secondly, there should be no need to expand too much. , we should use more short sentences, and don’t pursue too much gorgeous rhetoric. We should turn to antique sentences, such as four-character phrases, which are also very good when written in the form of imitating classical Chinese.

The most important thing is the material. Hao Shijia said frankly that before the exam, it is not as good as memorizing by rote, so he should read more classic articles, pay proper attention to news events, and read some books of his own, both ancient and modern, both Chinese and foreign, both historical and modern. Only in this way can we "write like a spirit" when writing essays

Hao Shijia's total score this year is 579, which is more than 60 points higher than the first line. Hao Shijia will choose to get a perfect score in essay. What kind of major?

When talking about the future, Hao Shijia told reporters: "This time I am applying to Chongqing University and plan to study architecture. Because I think I like ancient architecture very much. This is a new and unknown field. My ideal is to be an ancient architect.

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