On a sunny day, piggy took delicious bananas to the park to play. On the way, while eating a banana, the pig flew out like visiting a park. At this moment, the elephant said, "Little pig, how can you litter?" As if he didn't care, the elephant bent down and picked up the banana peel and threw it into the trash can.

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After visiting the park, the pig was fascinated by the delicious watermelon. It bought five watermelons with 10 yuan. It eats watermelon while walking, and it throws the watermelon skin on the ground. The little panda came and was hit by watermelon skin.

The little panda put his feet in the air, touched his ass and said loudly, "Who threw peels everywhere and dropped others?" Really. " The little panda went to grandpa goat's house to rub herbs while covering her ass.

This is, the pig exclaimed, "God, a piece of watermelon skin can cause such a big disaster!" " "In the future, I want to learn from elephants and be an environmental defender. Later, the pig threw the watermelon skin on the ground into the trash can. Since then, the pig has become a hygienic child.

The second article

One sunny morning, a greedy and naughty pig was walking in the park. He ate bananas while walking. After eating the banana, he threw the banana peel behind him and said, "Goodbye, banana peel."

Uncle elephant saw this scene and asked, "Little pig, did you throw this banana peel?" The pig said, "I don't know what a banana peel is." Uncle elephant said, "Little pig, if you are dishonest, no one will make friends with you." Piggy hung his head in shame. So the elephant picked up the banana skin thrown by the pig and threw it into the dustbin.

Just then, Brother Panda jumped over, accidentally slipped by the watermelon skin on the ground and fell to the ground, crying with pain. The pig saw it and thought, I want to throw the garbage thrown by others into the dustbin like uncle elephant.

So, the pig rushed over, picked up the watermelon skin on the ground and threw it into the trash can. Then he helped Brother Panda up again. The pig said, "Are you all right, Brother Panda?" Brother Panda said gratefully, "Thank you." At this time, Uncle Elephant came and patted the pig and praised him: "You are a good boy who corrected your mistake!" "

The third article

One day, the pig bought a bunch of bananas, sang a ditty and ate bananas. After eating, he threw the banana peel on the ground.

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Uncle Xiang came over, picked up the banana peel with his nose, put it in the trash can, stopped the pig and said, "Tell me honestly, did you throw this banana peel?" Do you know how serious the consequences are? "The pig will die?

Admit and say confidently, "I didn't throw it." After much deliberation, he had a brainwave and said, "Then open your mouth and let me have a look." Hearing this, the pig suddenly blindsided, knowing that he could not hide the elephant, and bowed his head in embarrassment.

The elephant saw it and proudly said, "Hey, hey, this is called self-help!" " "The pig is ashamed.

After a while, the little pig saw the little bear trip over some watermelon skins on the ground. The bear cried out in pain, "Who is it?" Throw watermelon skin here? "When the pig saw it, he quickly picked up the bear and threw it into the trash can. The bear said, "thank you, you are really something." "The pig said shyly," This is what I should do. "

Finally, the little pig went home happily.

Composition is the "half of the country" that determines the score of Chinese exam, so the success or failure of composition often determines the success or failure of the whole Chinese exam. So how do you get high marks in the exam composition? I think the following points must be noted.

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Questions and ideas All exam compositions should be tested, because candidates should compete fairly in the same environment. Examining a question is to read and understand all the contents of the question comprehensively and accurately, and to read out the intention of the proposer.

Come on, examine the limitations of the topic clearly, and make it clear what I want to write, how to write it, and to what extent, so as to truly understand comprehensively, grasp profoundly, and write an unbiased composition. The composition of the college entrance examination was clearly judged.

It is stipulated that the final score of any test paper with problems generally does not exceed the lowest score of the second-class volume. It can be seen that the accuracy of the test questions is the key factor in the success or failure of the composition. The idea is to ask the author to observe from the height of the times.

Understand life, refine the theme, make the theme reflect the spirit of the times, reflect and act on the times, beat the pulse of the times and promote the progress of the times.

In fact, it is an idea gradually developed by the author in his life experience. It is the product of the "collision" between the author's subjective understanding and the objective reality. It reflects the author's ideological level, cognitive level and formation in social life.

World outlook, outlook on life, values, etc. The reform of composition teaching in recent two years advocates students to be loyal to life and to themselves. Some students ignore the grasp of the ideological tendency of the article, see the problem incompletely, have extreme views, and what's more, are corrupted.

Failure and doubts about the party's leadership and policies. Although today's China is politically clear and free of speech, it will not pursue any political issues if it is wrong, but as a builder of the future society, it is still necessary to have a correct view of right and wrong.

Yes This must be noted.

2. Titles and paragraph titles are the eyes of the article, and also the first impression of the marking teacher on the article, especially the writing of self-made topics. The marking teacher attaches great importance to the goals put forward by the candidates.

Title: Pupils' Composition "Pupils' Composition Learn from Pigs". As the saying goes, "a good seedling has half the grain, and a good topic has half the text", which shows the importance of the topic. Some candidates write the text first, and then draw up the title. After writing the article, they may not have time to write.

The title, maybe I forgot to fill in the title. Although the score stipulates that there is no topic to deduct 2 points, the actual result is far from 2 points. Someone has done an experiment to divide several well-written compositions into two categories: retaining titles and hiding titles.

Type I allows two groups of teachers to mark papers separately, and their scores are generally more than 5 points. This is because the marking teacher has a psychological distance from the untitled composition and unconsciously reduces the score. As for how to draw up the title, I

I think we should do the following: ① accuracy means conforming to the content of the article, and conforming to the norms in choosing words and making sentences; (2) concise, appropriate words; (3) to be vivid, that is, the topic can reflect a kind of vitality, readability and emotion.

Interesting. 4 novelty. Is to have a new perspective, new ideas, new insights, can give people a sense of freshness. ⑤ meaningful. It means there is an inner meaning. There are many ways to raise a topic, which can be used in rhetoric, quoting common sayings or using.

The use of old sayings can be borrowed from idioms, used in buzzwords, and skillfully used in formulas or symbols of other disciplines. Candidates can use it flexibly according to their own situation. Duan Zi: Exam composition is the most taboo.

The structure of the abdomen and tail is three-stage. It is best to divide the article into several paragraphs. /kloc-for a composition of less than 0/000 words, I think it is enough to divide it into 5-8 natural paragraphs. Because the more natural a natural paragraph is, the more mature and sophisticated you are. Besides, you should divide each one well.

Write the first sentence of each paragraph. The first sentence of each paragraph is like a human eye. The first sentence is well written, "with fine eyes", and the whole paragraph is remarkable.

3. Style and Content There are two types of requirements for style in the composition questions of the college entrance examination: one type.

It is stipulated that a certain style must be written, such as "writing an argumentative essay"; The other is to exclude writing a certain style, such as "except poetry". Candidates must write in accordance with the prescribed style. In recent years, the college entrance examination composition topic "Wen"

Style is not limited, so that candidates can choose their own style freely. Here, pay special attention. Style is not limited to unwanted styles, but after you choose a style, you must write according to the characteristics of this style. What you want to write is what you want.

Write a nondescript "four unlike" article at will. Content: Never write what you can think of without thinking; Don't write your own thoughts after a little thinking; Take a few minutes to think of something that no one else can think of.

Write it. It is best to set the protagonist as yourself in the narrative, enter the article in the first person, and let the passion of "I" shine in the article, which will cause * * * sound. It is forbidden to talk big, set words and nonsense in argumentative writing, and empty comments should be avoided.

Groaning, shouting slogans, making empty calls, expressing determination, etc. Writing can be fictional and "allowed" to write stories, but it does not mean advocating "writing stories". Writing stories should be "boldly imagined and justified".

If you make it up, you will never get high marks.

4. The beginning and end of the exam-oriented composition are the cutting edge of the article. All kinds of methods learned in and out of class can be used in exam-oriented compositions. no matter

How do you start and end? You must grasp the main points at the beginning and point out the main idea at the end. In order to leave a good impression on the marking teacher, you must not smear both the beginning and the end. As the saying goes, a good beginning is half the battle.

However, some candidates have made the mistake of "slow entry": some copied all the original materials in large sections; Some expand the original simple raw materials; Some materials are laid out from the beginning, ancient and modern, Chinese and foreign, take your time. The mouth is loose, accounting for a lot.

There are so many pages, and the content behind the truth should be said to be "yet we called and urged a thousand times before she started toward us", and there is only a passing, hasty withdrawal, and the proportion is seriously out of balance, which makes it difficult for teachers to measure their actual writing level. The ancients wrote articles about "phoenix"

The words "head", "pork belly" and "leopard tail" have some truth. However, some candidates just can't stop, or they break in one sentence, or they click on a string of ellipsis, so that even if they carve a "phoenix head", they will grow into a "pig"

Belly ",because there is no" leopard tail ",it will not be a good article and will not get high marks. The marking teacher measures the quality of an article, first of all, looking at the whole. Therefore, what the examinee gives to the teacher should be a complete work anyway.

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5. Language and word count test The composition language should be standardized, accurate, individual and energetic. Don't confuse literature with white; Don't use dialects and words that others don't understand; Use less long sentences and more short sentences; You can introduce some times.

New words, quotations from famous sayings and aphorisms, lyrics of popular songs and people's oral folk songs, but the orientation must be positive and make the language really light up. It stands to reason that articles are tools to express feelings, and words are long.

Everything is short, and it seems that there should be no word limit. However, as a special form of composition, in order to achieve a certain test purpose, and taking into account the test time and other factors, the number of words is generally specified. we will

It must be done in accordance with the regulations. If the minimum number of words is limited, write enough words or slightly more than 50- 100 words. The number of words is insufficient. Although the scoring standard stipulates that the number of words is insufficient, every 50 words will be deducted 1 minute, but the actual situation.

In fact, the small number of words is often considered to be the thin content of the article, which is difficult to be graded. If the number of words is limited to the maximum, don't exceed it. Otherwise, it will give people a bloated feeling. Besides, writing a composition is very long and takes a lot of time.

If you spend less time on the topic, it will definitely be affected. If there is no limit to the maximum number of words, it is generally limited to the composition paper, that is, you should write in the composition paper grid. Don't flatter yourself, go beyond the writing style, lest you be ungrateful.

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In recent years, writing has accounted for a considerable proportion in the scoring standard of college entrance examination composition. Generally speaking, writing does not require good-looking, but requires neatness and legibility, clear strokes and no cursive characters. Punctuation marks should also be standardized.

Fan, especially the format should be correct, and no period, comma, question mark, exclamation point, pause or semicolon can appear at the beginning of the line; Quotes, brackets and book titles do not appear at the end of the first half of the line. You can write one after these symbols.

Words; Quotes, brackets and the second half of the title do not appear at the beginning of a line, but can be squeezed at the end of the previous line. Ellipsis and dash occupy two spaces and cannot be broken. As for the volume of the composition,

Face, like a person's appearance, gives people an impression that is very important, especially for college entrance examination composition. Whether the face is neat or not directly affects the psychology and mood of the marking teacher. The handwriting is neat and the face is clean, which makes people feel very happy at first glance.

The result can be imagined.

7. Check and revise the exam composition questions and other questions. After you finish, you need to check carefully to see if there are any typos.