"Seeing the mountains is full of feelings, but seeing the sea is full of feelings." A work with simple language and true feelings can be called a masterpiece. In fact, the article is not only ingenious layout and gorgeous rhetoric, but also the expression of inner feelings. Diderot, a French enlightenment thinker, said. First, observing life is rich and accumulating writing leaves life, just like water without a source and a tree without a root. Therefore, students should be conscientious in life, always observe, feel and accumulate bits and pieces of life, and extend their ideological tentacles to the corners of life. Touched, sad, sad, happy, bitter and helpless, the colorful life also enriches our composition. Feelings are sincere, and it can't be false. Only when something, a sentence or a look really touches the softest part of your heart, it will make you unforgettable. I remember a student wrote in his composition that everything blooms in spring, and he said to his mother, "The willow tree has sprouted", "Yes, the willow tree has bloomed." His mother's words amazed him. "Blooming" vividly reproduces the vigorous vitality of breaking through the imprisonment of winter and welcoming spring. Therefore, Only in this way can we have more writing materials. Second, devote ourselves to arousing feelings. "Feelings are always moving when they are true." Zhu Ziqing's "The Back" is not full of words, but every sentence is moving. That "the back of climbing the platform to buy oranges" has long been a permanent picture in our minds. If you haven't stirred up feelings yourself, how can you make readers sing? A student once wrote in his composition that in the cold wind, the bleak moonlight added a bit of sadness. When I arrived at the entrance of the village, I saw the elongated figure in the light at the door of my house from a distance, but the fluttering skirt was not clear. Approaching, facing my mother's familiar smile, I saw a pair of unfamiliar hands, rough, cracked and covered with blood. I took off my gloves. Hold those cold hands tightly ... The students carefully wrote the scene of their mother's waiting. Looking at the wet eyes of the listener, I believe this composition is very successful. Third, temper the language details to describe "there are a thousand Hamlet in the eyes of a thousand readers". As witnesses of the incident, some narratives are dull and some are vivid. The reason is the use of language. An article can be freely cut as needed. There are many different genres. It can make the article colorful. The use of rhetoric can quickly catch the reader's eye, but when expressing the true feelings, the key is to describe the details. What is the detail description? It is the description of some small events, subtle features (language, appearance, manners, actions, etc.) or scenes. Good detail description not only makes the article concrete and vivid, but also real and touching. For example, the article "Lutihai Punches the Town of Kansai" describes Lutihai's three punches: one punch hits a "sauce shop", two punches hit a "colorful silk shop" and three punches hit a "land and water Dojo". The description is vivid and vivid. It is like writing about a female classmate, "When the teacher praised her, she lowered her head and gently twisted her skirt". A shy girl jumped out of the paper, which is much better than direct description. If you generalize it in general, even if you experience it personally, it will give people an unreal feeling. Therefore, many articles skillfully use details to make the articles shine. Some students mistakenly think that expressing true feelings is the inner catharsis. No scruples. Actually, the composition should express positive and healthy true feelings. We should cultivate sentiment, improve personality, pay attention to life, and choose those healthy and upward emotions to express them. Insert rational wings for emotions and let perceptual knowledge shine with rational brilliance. Ba Jin once said: "I am not using word skills, but using the author's true feelings to impress readers and inspire them to move forward. My highest level of writing, my ideal is by no means perfect skills. But the brave Danke in Gorky's Prairie Story-he grabbed his chest with his hand, pulled out his heart and held it high on his head. "I believe that true feelings are the soul of an article, and such an article can really enter the reader's heart." 2. how to write a composition with true feelings

first, the composition should learn to accumulate "reading thousands of books, writing like a god" and "a clever woman can't cook without rice", which shows the importance of "accumulation" in writing from both positive and negative aspects.

"We usually rely on accumulation, but the examination room depends on exertion", which is the same experience of the students in the examination room. (A) language to establish a "vocabulary".

vocabulary is the cell of an article. Vocabulary in a broad sense refers not only to the collection of words and phrases, but also to sentences and sentence groups.

There are two ways to establish a "vocabulary": the first is reading. Usually, you should read books, newspapers and periodicals extensively, and make reading notes, extract some beautiful words, sentences and paragraphs in a specific notebook, or make reading cards.

The second is life. At ordinary times, we should capture the fresh language in the spoken language of the public and write it down in a small notebook or card that we carry with us, so that over time, we can speak out in chapters and write beautifully.

(2) to strengthen the accumulation of materials. Materials are the flesh and blood of the article.

Because many students usually don't pay attention to the accumulation of materials, they worry about it every time they write a composition, or make it up or copy it. The solution to this problem is to accumulate materials.

If you can, you can take a video camera and tape recorder, observe life deeply, take an active part in life, and record your experiences in family life, campus life and social life in time by sketching, keeping a diary and writing observation notes. When recording, we should grasp the details and grasp the characteristics of people, things, things and scenery.

in this way, the article written is flesh and blood. (3) We should strengthen ideological accumulation.

opinions are the soul of an article. The center of the article is not clear, or the idea is not profound, which often shows that the author's thoughts are superficial.

therefore, it is necessary to establish a "think tank". There are two ways: first, be thoughtful.

"One more thought, one more gain." Think deeply at ordinary times and ask "why", "what" and "how" when something happens.

so we can see the essence through the phenomenon. We should also record the "sparks" of thinking and the conclusions of thinking at any time.

Secondly, it is necessary to compile, that is, to extract famous sayings, aphorisms, etc. In a word, the composition should be accumulated, and three writing warehouses, namely, vocabulary warehouse, material warehouse and thought warehouse, should be regularly counted, sorted and classified, and constantly enriched and expanded.

Second, learn to observe first when writing a good composition. When Mr. Lu Xun answered the question of how to write a good article for literary youth, he emphasized two points: one is to read more and the other is to practice more. "Look more" here means to observe more.

This shows that if you want to write a good article and master skillful writing techniques, you should observe more, learn to observe, and observation is the necessary premise and foundation of writing. Chekhov, a Russian novelist, earnestly warned beginners: "A writer must train himself into an observer with keen eyes and never give up! -It is a habit to exercise yourself to observation, as if it were second nature. "

It takes time to practice observation as a habit and second nature, which is very useful and remarkable. Pay attention to the people, events, sights and things around you, and hunt for the materials you need in your composition: you should be interested in some seemingly insignificant things that are meaningful, and pay attention to the causes, processes and results; You should pay attention to how the plants in the campus flower beds change their colors all year round, learn to get to the bottom of it and find out the ins and outs of these changes; You should go out into the society, get in touch with more people, observe their words and deeds, think about some things and merge them into the long river of your own thoughts at any time.

This is the process of observation. In the process of observation, we should pay attention to the following points: (1) Observation should never be limited to "seeing with the eyes". In a broad sense, observation with more practical significance refers to mobilizing all human five senses: listening with ears, feeling with body, and more importantly, thinking with heart and brain, so that such observation will be more delicate and profound.

(2) Pay attention to the use of "bad writing" in the observation process. As the saying goes, a good memory is better than a bad writing.

Many students see a lot and think a lot every day, but they are not good at writing it down at any time, which will make the observed materials go to waste and many valuable things will be wasted. (3) observation should pay special attention to perseverance.

Don't commit "brain fever". Three minutes of heat is not good for writing a good composition. You should observe life and think about life every day of your life, so that you can write a wonderful article. Learning to observe plays a great role in laying the foundation and promoting a good composition. Without observation, you will often find it difficult to write.

I hope you can learn to observe, constantly cultivate and improve your observation ability of approval, and make great progress in your writing practice. Third, if the meaning is high, the text will win the idea, which is to establish the center and intention of the article.

so what problems should the article pay attention to when formulating ideas? (1) Correct conception is the first essence of the article's conception. The so-called correctness is to ensure that the article's feelings and ideas are correct, in line with the nature and laws of objective things, in line with China's basic political principles, in line with people's basic moral requirements, and can give people positive inspiration. (2) Intention to be single-minded "The matter of composition is more expensive than single-mindedness, and specialization makes perfect, and dispersion is stupid."

no matter how complicated things are, the main idea cannot be dispersed. If an article wants to explain this problem as well as that point of view, it will be ambiguous if it rambles.

In fact, if you want to cover everything, you will definitely not meet in place. Besides, an article can only have one center. Instead of "biting off more than one can chew", it is better to concentrate on expressing a center with pen and ink. Even if you express the center through several things, you should stick to the center, keep the goal consistent, and focus on the combination of materials and centers, so that all the power contained in materials can be directed at the center. (3) the idea is to be novel. The article should not follow the crowd, and the novel angle is the core of composition innovation.

The novelty of conception requires jumping out of the old box, not following the forward thinking, habitual thinking or the original psychological formula, but examining the alternative content contained in the topic from a unique perspective, avoiding what others often write and writing what others have not written. Even the same writing object can always be cut in from many angles, as long as we break the stereotype of thinking, stand at the height of the times, avoid "vulgarity" and seek "otherness", think from multiple angles and sides, or associate, expand, analogize, or reverse, and what people have not made can be found. 3. How can I write my true feelings in writing?

I'll provide you with some writing methods, hoping to help you:

First, careful observation

Careful observation is the golden key to improve your writing level. The article is the product of objective things reflected in the author's head and mind. To reflect the object, it is not necessary to observe the objective things carefully. Only by careful observation, can we find the broken jade from the mineral deposits of life phenomena and grab the shining treasure from the mixed sediment. If you don't master "observation", the golden key to the door, the "iron gate limit" of the composition will definitely not be crossed.

Second, read more

Extensive reading is a prerequisite for improving the writing level. To write a good article, you must read more books. "Reading is a million volumes, and writing is like a god." "I am familiar with three Tang poems, and I can't make poems and sing." Mr. Lu Xun also advocated reading more books. "You must pick many flowers like bees, so that you can brew honey. If you bite in one place, your income will be very limited and boring." We emphasize that we should not only read more, but also read selectively, and even more, we should read in, understand the structural skills and language characteristics of the articles we read, and master the composition from them to be more profound and varied.

Third, choose materials skillfully

Careful selection is an accelerator to improve the writing level. The requirement of material selection is novelty, and the so-called novelty means that the batch should choose something that ordinary people have never touched, or turn a blind eye to it with profound meaning. Once the author writes in a book, it will make people think deeply about exciting materials. The angle of material selection should be small, and we should see the big picture from the small, and write materials that are in everyone's eyes and not in everyone's pen. To this end, we must compare, analyze and synthesize all kinds of materials in our minds, remove the rough and extract the fine, and transform and process them. Only in this way can we make the materials novel. And this kind of active thinking and repeated deliberation is very helpful to improve the level of composition.

Fourth, practice writing often

Practice writing often is the key to improve the writing level. If you want to enter the door of composition and make continuous progress, it is more important to practice more. As the proverb goes, "It is better to write one article than to read ten articles." This tells the truth that writing practice produces true knowledge. After learning an article, we understand the structural methods of the article and the writing characteristics of the article, so we must learn to use these knowledge and methods to practice and make it become our own writing ability. In fact, we can all practice writing after learning the first text. However, fragment practice is a good way to practice writing, which takes a short time and achieves the purpose of practicing writing. Keeping a diary is also an effective way to practice writing. Keep keeping a diary every day, and then Russian will have a solid foundation.

5. Frequent revision

Repeated revision is the catalyst to improve the writing level. Revision is an essential step in composition and an effective measure to improve the quality of composition. The predecessors said well, "the article never tires of changing." "The article was changed." Cao Xueqin wrote A Dream of Red Mansions, which was read for ten years, added and deleted five times, and Tolsiqin's War and Peace was revised seven times. Mr. Lu Xun advocated that "it is no pity to read it at least twice after the decision and try to delete unnecessary words, sentences and paragraphs." Visible, article revision, generally refers to the process from the first draft to the final draft. When repairing, we should do five things: whether the words are fluent, whether the theme is clear, whether the structure is compact and whether the language is beautiful. In short, "the article is changed." Generally speaking, articles are always getting better and better, and we should work hard on "revision". 4. How to write "true feelings" in composition

In this class, we will "touch the heartstrings with true feelings" to make the composition show the charm of true feelings. 2. Make clear the learning objectives: (students read) 1. Teach students to observe life with emotional eyes and experience the taste of life with their own hearts; 2. Be good at capturing emotional points and learn to describe them in real and delicate details; 3. Improve your ability to master language and learn to express your true feelings and understanding in your own words. 3. Understand what detail description is. Detail description refers to a description method that captures subtle and specific typical plots in life or some small things with artistic expression, some subtle behaviors and actions of characters, and scene fragments, and vividly and meticulously describes them. Undoubtedly, vivid and specific detail description has a direct effect on expressing the feelings of characters.