The first is the accumulation of words. Writing requires good words and sentences to be literary and attractive. An article, no matter how wonderful it is without good words and witty sentences, is also dull and tasteless. How can we attract people and make them appreciate it? You wrote this article for nothing.
The second aspect is observation. Writing a composition is not confined in a room, but observed and experienced in real life. Because life is the source of writing! Some people, he went out to "observe", just glanced at it and ignored the details. Therefore, the composition written is just an outline, and there are no main points or details at all. Therefore, when observing, we should pay attention to it and be careful, so as to write a unique and good composition.
Third, read more extracurricular books. This is an important channel for accumulating words and the key to writing a composition. Including books ordered at home and various books in bookstores. As long as I have time, I will go to the bookstore to read all kinds of extracurricular books. Of course, you can't write a perfect composition just by reading. The key is to accumulate, remember and use it well. Only in this way can we achieve the goal of "serving others and serving me", so that when writing a composition, we can do whatever we want and write freely.
2. Write a speech with the theme of "Work hard, work hard and use emotion" and do things with your heart.
In my life motto, I always ask myself: "Do things with your heart and be a man with your feelings". As long as I choose, no matter how difficult the process is, I will stick to it, because people don't walk through the choice in this life, but live in the process.
In these ten days, from the moment I received training, I began to be strict with myself as a golden pen writing teacher. I know my basic knowledge is poor and my internal software facilities can't be upgraded at once, but I can have my hardware released now. "As long as you are willing to change, you can succeed." I must remember the teacher's education. In just ten days, I worked as hard as a sponge. I may not be able to digest too much knowledge for a while, but I will try to realize it by dividing it into sections. I remember and recite with my heart, in order to gain something for myself. I kept telling myself, "I can do it! I am the best. " In class, I ask myself not to be a little sloppy, because I know that I am not smart, and I may have to write what others can write down twice or more. But I always tell myself that it doesn't matter if I'm not smart, as long as I'm diligent. It doesn't matter if you have a bad brain, as long as I'm not stupid, I will definitely learn. I will try to change myself and absorb knowledge in order to go back. Only in this way can I live up to the students' repeated calls to my teacher. In just over ten days, from scratch, the process is painful, but the result is sweet. After ten days of transformation, I know the characteristics of knowledge at all levels and the division of composition knowledge at all levels. In this way, I can integrate the advantages and disadvantages of all levels of composition knowledge, better understand how to approach students, how to guide students, and let them increase their knowledge in the process of learning. I see. After the short training, our hearts are a little more reluctant, but we still have to return to our respective lives, but no matter where we are, we have more love, more thoughts and more "grateful hearts".
3. How can I write a good composition? Hehe, when writing, narrative should be emotional, and other official letters should be brainy.
Adding more stories and allusions can not only add more words to the text, but also make the text more vivid.
Don't make people feel bored when writing. I think it will help to read more allusions. There are usually only a few writing objects in the exam. Write down a few typical examples for each topic. For example, honesty can be changed by Lincoln charging more money and going back a long time. I don't know whether you are a junior high school or a senior high school, but you should have a certain depth, otherwise it will be superficial, and some famous words should be remembered.
Composition is not difficult, usually accumulate a little, don't make up too much, know how to use it.
How to write a good composition is not difficult, but there are some skills in writing a good composition.
A good composition either has an attractive theme or is full of words and emotions. Or both.
A composition that combines the two is usually called the best composition, which can be called writing or creation. As a student, I think it is not easy to reach the level of good composition.
Let's talk briefly about writing a composition with some articles or poems. I really appreciate some articles in Yilin or Reader. To put it mildly, it is called the best composition.
Why appreciate it? Because it really belongs to a kind that can impress people and give people deep thinking. For example, there is an article about the embarrassment of teachers in class. This story is very popular. It is said that one day when the teacher called the roll in class, he met a student's name he didn't know, and he used his decades of teaching experience to deal with it. After the roll call, he asked the students in public: Who did you miss when you called the roll call just now? It is conceivable that if that classmate immediately stands up and says that he dropped my name, it will be a cliche, because everyone knows the story.
But that's not what the author wrote. The teacher's inquiry was silent below.
How to end it? Teachers are naturally people who have taught for decades. On the spur of the moment, he said that since all the scores had been calculated, some students might refuse to speak in public because of their feelings. Well, you can report in my office alone after class. If the missed students come to the office and say their names, this article is still meaningless.
The author's writing was unexpected because the classmate went to the office to find the teacher after class and left after only a few words. He said, "Teacher, I have encountered the same thing every year from the first grade of primary school to the second grade of junior high school."
You said teacher, my name is really unusual. Why didn't the teacher ask me directly? Is the teacher always so insensitive? "The article came to an abrupt end. It is also a story that everyone has heard, and it is also a cliche. The author's writing reflects a fresh theme, that is, teachers should learn from students' teaching and should not cover up their knowledge defects with vanity.
A good article is like this. With a good theme, the composition is more than half successful. A good theme usually adopts the technique of dripping water into the sea and storing grains of sand in the world.
How difficult it is to see the sea from a drop of water and the whole world from a grain of sand! However, a good theme is usually expressed like this. How do you want to write about the changes of the times and the great changes of society? You can't write everything.
Lao She is a great writer. He used a teahouse to write the reason why the fate of that era could not be changed, and wrote the truth that only by completely overthrowing the old society could the tragic fate be ended. It is good for me to see a student's composition.
The fact that she only washes clothes says a lot. Grandma is at leisure, because she is afraid that the only dress at home will be washed out, and she dare not wash more, let alone wear more, and she is not fixed on that person. She is the only treasure in the family and only wears it once when she goes out to meet people.
She is also more leisure, because although there are a lot of clothes now, as long as you put the clothes into the washing machine bucket and follow the procedure, the clothes will be dried in two hours, and reading newspapers and novels will not be delayed. The hardest thing is her mother, from slate to board. She doesn't know how many clothes she has wiped, because in her mother's life, the family is already very rich. Everyone has six or seven sets of clothes, including winter clothes, spring clothes, summer clothes and autumn clothes. Some are for work, some are for home, some are work clothes, and some are casual clothes.
But at that time, the washing machine was not invented, and later it was too expensive to buy. It is not a bad theme to write about the great changes in the old society, the new society and the contemporary era from the laundry room.
If you want to write a good theme, you must first start with a person, an event and an object, and don't be greedy for perfection. An article that craves perfection is not a good article. Second, it is both literary and emotional.
Literature refers to literary talent. How to show literary talent? It depends on the author's skill.
Students with strong writing skills will generally grasp how to write, how to write, what to be auspicious, what to abbreviate, what to embellish and what to be plain. Mastering words is very good. Literary talent is not born to everyone. It is a process of gradual accumulation, sublimation and maturity. It takes a lot of reading, long-term accumulation, spiritual understanding and concise refining to re-create skills, which should be gradually improved in daily study.
As the saying goes, after learning 300 Tang poems, even if you can't write, you will steal them. This is a fact. Affection refers to feelings.
Emotion is the most touching place. Generally speaking, you have to show your heart to others, and others will show it to you. You should write something with emotion. This thing is emotional and will be conveyed to readers. As the saying goes, give me a peach, give me a plum, give me a papaya and give me a Joan. That's the truth.
There is a poem whose purpose is to praise a famous general who was a hero during the war. In peacetime, he has become an ordinary person. He wrote this poem, entitled "A Broom", saying that it once crossed the imperial court in Wang Ting, knocked down the stars on the road, fought against sandstorms, wiped away dead letters (fallen leaves), drove away dirty dirt and dust, and ushered in colorful sunshine, clean air and the sound of peace. When the world is clean, it lies quietly behind the corner door.
Look, how well written! He just gave his feelings to this broom, and wrote this broom into something with feelings, and he could feel the whole world. Therefore, a good composition should also have this condition.
Writing a good composition is not easy, and it requires a good theme, full of words and feelings. If these two points are achieved, any article can be called a creative work and can be published in literary journals.
Therefore, for young friends who are studying, there is no need to ask them to have these conditions.
5. How can I write a good composition?
Practicing martial arts pays attention to routines, and clear strokes can be superb; Writing a composition should also pay attention to routines, so as to be gradual and natural. I summed up my writing routine into six tricks, hoping to play a role in attracting jade.
The first trick: diligently collect and accumulate wonderful words, phrases, sentences and chapters to enrich your writing warehouse. There are two ways to collect accumulated materials: one is from newspapers and books. You can circle the materials that are beneficial to you directly in newspapers and books, you can cut newspapers, extract them, or feel after reading them, take other people's things for yourself, just like bees make honey, and collect a certain amount of pollen first. The second is from life. People who are willing to live and observe the world with a pair of discerning eyes will find that social life is rich and colorful, and all kinds of people and things in society are good writing materials: small to the people around them; Major events at home and abroad can be the content we collect and accumulate. In order to achieve better writing effect, we need to devote ourselves to life, experience the ups and downs in study, life and work, and then let these ups and downs naturally flow into the pen and become real and touching articles.
The second trick: strengthen writing practice. Writing often begins with keeping a diary. If we regard the diary as a bosom friend, as an object to talk about, and tell our personal joys and sorrows in the diary to the fullest, over time, the diary will accumulate more and more thick, and before we know it, we will find that the length of the diary has become longer, the expression of words has become clever, and our observation and adaptability to life have also been enhanced. Keep an army for a thousand days-keep a diary, use troops for a while-write a composition, and it will come naturally!
The third measure: keep brewing-conceiving, looking for a breakthrough-inspiration, and then write it down. Collecting accumulated materials, such as a pile of dry wood, needs the spark of inspiration to ignite; Collecting accumulated substances, such as a lot of pollen, must be brewed by bees to become honey; The materials collected and accumulated are also like a bag of rice, which must be processed by a clever woman to become delicious rice. Therefore, the process of brewing-conceiving is the process of sorting out, selecting and integrating materials. When the conception is mature, it will naturally generate inspiration-the feelings that have been accumulated in the chest for a long time urgently need to be vented, and the unpleasant instantaneous impulse will not be unpleasant. People who care seize this fleeting moment and write it down.
The fourth measure: humbly ask for advice and constantly revise. Good article revision. After writing a good composition, you are not satisfied, but you can't see where there is a flaw. You must find someone else to guide you. After listening to praise, it should be regarded as encouragement to yourself; After listening to criticism, change it if you have it, and encourage it if you don't. If you do this often, you will continue to improve your writing. However, it is not a long-term solution to completely rely on others to revise your composition. Learning to revise your own composition is the key to writing a good composition.
The fifth measure: write a composition with confidence. Many students report that after reading articles in newspapers and books, they feel unattainable and lose confidence in their composition, thinking that they can't write well all their lives. In my opinion, this idea is caused by inferiority and utilitarian psychology. They don't know how hard the author and editor have worked to publish an article. If you spend so much effort to write your composition and polish it by editing, you will definitely reach the level of publication. In addition, writing a composition is not for publication, but to improve your writing ability, so a well-structured article is a good article. We don't have to use those published articles to measure the quality of our composition, and we don't have to affect our writing mood.
The sixth trick: organize and collect your own diaries, weekly notes and compositions. Diary, weekly diary and composition are all the results of your own efforts. If the diaries, weekly notes and compositions of primary schools, middle schools and universities can be classified and bound into several "books", these "books" are the history of personal struggle and a lot of wealth in life. You can look through your own exercises at any time and learn from your own writing experience and lessons. The exercises you write can be better than others.
Composition teaching is an indispensable link in Chinese teaching, and a good composition represents a student's personal quality. How to make students' compositions written with content, organization, center and emotion?
First, the composition should be specific.
The Chinese syllabus for primary schools stipulates that the composition must have content. This means that the content of the composition should be specific and not empty talk. For a long time, the problem of empty composition has been puzzling students, and "concrete content" is the most basic requirement of composition teaching in primary schools. What should I do if I have substantive content? Here are some of my views.
1, "multi-perspective" observation.
"Seen from the side of the mountain, there are different heights", which is a famous philosophical saying of Su Shi. This famous saying brilliantly shows that objective things have the inherent characteristics of many faces and angles. Therefore, our observation must adopt a corresponding multi-angle approach. When observing things, we must be comprehensive and meticulous. We should look at all the parts that make up a static thing and carefully look at all aspects of each part. Every concrete thing is always made up of several parts. If we miss a part when observing, then what we observe is incomplete. For example, when we observe a pot of jasmine, I should notice that it is composed of four parts: root, stem, leaf and flower. Especially visible stems, leaves and flowers. You can't miss it when you observe. If omitted, the jasmine we observed is incomplete, and people can't clearly understand its whole when expressing it. If we don't pay attention to the quality, color and shape of its stem, it is difficult to understand its characteristics. If you don't carefully observe its color, shape and taste, it is difficult to understand the characteristics of flowers. On the contrary, if we carefully observe these aspects, then our understanding of jasmine is not general, but concrete. Of course, we should not only look at static things, but also look at the whole process of things' change and each development stage carefully.
6. How to write a composition is not difficult, but writing a composition well does have certain skills.
A good composition either has an attractive theme or is full of words and emotions. Or both.
A composition that combines the two is usually called the best composition, which can be called writing or creation. As a student, I think it is not easy to reach the level of good composition.
Let's talk briefly about writing a composition with some articles or poems. I really appreciate some articles in Yilin or Reader. To put it mildly, it is called the best composition.
Why appreciate it? Because it really belongs to a kind that can impress people and give people deep thinking. For example, there is an article about the embarrassment of teachers in class. This story is very popular. It is said that one day when the teacher called the roll in class, he met a student's name he didn't know, and he used his decades of teaching experience to deal with it. After the roll call, he asked the students in public: Who did you miss when you called the roll call just now? It is conceivable that if that classmate immediately stands up and says that he dropped my name, it will be a cliche, because everyone knows the story.
But that's not what the author wrote. The teacher's inquiry was silent below.
How to end it? Teachers are naturally people who have taught for decades. On the spur of the moment, he said that since all the scores had been calculated, some students might refuse to speak in public because of their feelings. Well, you can report in my office alone after class. If the missed students come to the office and say their names, this article is still meaningless.
The author's writing was unexpected because the classmate went to the office to find the teacher after class and left after only a few words. He said, "Teacher, I have encountered the same thing every year from the first grade of primary school to the second grade of junior high school."
You said teacher, my name is really unusual. Why didn't the teacher ask me directly? Is the teacher always so insensitive? "The article came to an abrupt end. It is also a story that everyone has heard, and it is also a cliche. The author's writing reflects a fresh theme, that is, teachers should learn from students' teaching and should not cover up their knowledge defects with vanity.
A good article is like this. With a good theme, the composition is more than half successful. A good theme usually adopts the technique of dripping water into the sea and storing grains of sand in the world.
How difficult it is to see the sea from a drop of water and the whole world from a grain of sand! However, a good theme is usually expressed like this. How do you want to write about the changes of the times and the great changes of society? You can't write everything.
Lao She is a great writer. He used a teahouse to write the reason why the fate of that era could not be changed, and wrote the truth that only by completely overthrowing the old society could the tragic fate be ended. It is good for me to see a student's composition.
The fact that she only washes clothes says a lot. Grandma is at leisure, because she is afraid that the only dress at home will be washed out, and she dare not wash more, let alone wear more, and she is not fixed on that person. She is the only treasure in the family and only wears it once when she goes out to meet people.
She is also more leisure, because although there are a lot of clothes now, as long as you put the clothes into the washing machine bucket and follow the procedure, the clothes will be dried in two hours, and reading newspapers and novels will not be delayed. The hardest thing is her mother, from slate to board. She doesn't know how many clothes she has wiped, because in her mother's life, the family is already very rich. Everyone has six or seven sets of clothes, including winter clothes, spring clothes, summer clothes and autumn clothes. Some are for work, some are for home, some are work clothes, and some are casual clothes.
But at that time, the washing machine was not invented, and later it was too expensive to buy. It is not a bad theme to write about the great changes in the old society, the new society and the contemporary era from the laundry room.
If you want to write a good theme, you must first start with a person, an event and an object, and don't be greedy for perfection. An article that craves perfection is not a good article. Second, it is both literary and emotional.
Literature refers to literary talent. How to show literary talent? It depends on the author's skill.
Students with strong writing skills will generally grasp how to write, how to write, what should be auspicious, what should be abbreviated, what should be embellished and what should be plain. Mastering words is very good. Literary talent is not born to everyone. It is a process of gradual accumulation, sublimation and maturity. It takes a lot of reading, long-term accumulation, spiritual understanding and concise refining to re-create skills, which should be gradually improved in daily study.
As the saying goes, after learning 300 Tang poems, even if you can't write, you will steal them. This is a fact. Affection refers to feelings.
Emotion is the most touching place. Generally speaking, you have to show your heart to others, and others will show it to you. You should write something with emotion. This thing is emotional and will be conveyed to readers. As the saying goes, give me a peach, give me a plum, give me a papaya and give me a Joan. That's the truth.
There is a poem whose purpose is to praise a famous general who was a hero during the war. In peacetime, he has become an ordinary person. He wrote this poem, entitled "A Broom", saying that it once crossed the imperial court in Wang Ting, knocked down the stars on the road, fought against sandstorms, wiped away dead letters (fallen leaves), drove away dirty dirt and dust, and ushered in colorful sunshine, clean air and the sound of peace. When the world is clean, it lies quietly behind the corner door.
Look, how well written! He just gave his feelings to this broom, and wrote this broom into something with feelings, and he could feel the whole world. Therefore, a good composition should also have this condition.
Writing a good composition is not easy, and it requires a good theme, full of words and feelings. If these two points are achieved, any article can be called a creative work and can be published in literary journals.
Therefore, for young friends who are studying, there is no need to require them to have these conditions. I think one of them is a good composition. Finally, just give it to the big one.
7. Writing skills: When you walk into our campus, what you are most concerned about is the rockery on our campus.
This rockery is small and exquisite. It is composed of rocks of different sizes in Taihu Lake. The rockery is engraved with the three characters "Ling Yunfeng". From a distance, the grotesque rocks are colorful, and the visitors are dotted, tall and straight, beautiful and pleasant.
On the top of the fake mountain, a black square stone is slim and graceful. At the bottom of the square column, there is a pocket pavilion surrounded by several unknown flowers and plants. The sun shines through the dense flowers and plants, and the uneven shadows under the pavilion yard. Ants are busy with brisk steps, butterflies and flowers are dancing. There is a winding stream in the center of the rockery. The small water gurgles and falls into the pool gently, scaring away a few frolicking small fish.
On closer inspection, all parts of the rockery look different. Or like a baby elephant squatting quietly, or like a camel pacing in the desert, or like an eagle flying high, or a little like the Sphinx, like a lion standing tall, ... It really makes people think a lot from another angle.
Around the rockery, surrounded by an oval pool, the water in the pool is crystal clear, and the lotus flowers in the pool bloom gracefully; Below the water lily is flowing water, hiding frolicking fish. A winding pebble road surrounds the pool. This is a busy road, and students always like to play here. Around the rockery, there are some willows and some unknown trees, which are lush.
Real water surrounds the rockery, and the rockery reflects real water. This rockery really adds a lot of interest to the campus.