I tell you, before you write a composition, think about the main meaning of this composition.
And then let it out vaguely from the beginning.
For example, at the beginning: I didn't believe in XXX until such a thing happened.
Conclusion: This incident made me understand XXXX, and then I realized that XXX is true.
Too little action may be that you read too few extracurricular books. Reading more extracurricular books is very helpful for writing articles.
For example:
You want to write "uncle who closed the door"
It can be changed to "My uncle gave me a look back and gently closed the door. At the moment of closing the door, I seemed to hear a slight sigh. "
These are all skills that can be learned in extracurricular books.
2. How to get to the point at the beginning of the composition and how to reach the end of the composition? 1, quote the famous saying 1 Ask how the world is, and teach people to live and die together.
Yuan Haowen is really good at asking questions, and so is he. His question can be said to have been asked for a long time
Over the years, how many people have lingered on this issue, and how many people have made the final answer in life after paying a huge price. But every family's words are as different as everyone's face.
Shi said, "Love is a tool. "(What is Love in the World) In a medieval church, a saint began his speech:" I became a saint because I saw through money, and what I have belongs to everyone. "
Long years, a snap of your fingers. In a cross-century prison, a thief began his monologue: "I became a thief because I saw through the money, and everyone's is mine."
Rodin, the master of aesthetics, once said, "Beauty is everywhere. For our eyes, it is not the lack of beauty, but the lack of discovery. " Today, inspired by this innovative scholar, I want to say: "The answer is universal. For our brains, it is not a lack of thinking, but a lack of perspective. "
Many times, we are confused by problems or wandering at the crossroads of multiple solutions. How to go has become a mystery in our hearts, and we are often indecisive. At this time, it is necessary to consider it from another angle, which will bring you more chances of success. ("Rotate this kaleidoscope") 2. Clever use of letter format 1 Dear Grandpa Confucius: Hello! I am your ordinary descendant. Thousands of years later, I still dare to write to bother you, not only to pay tribute to you, but also to have some difficult problems waiting for your advice.
(A Letter to Confucius) The hateful standard answer: I am really outraged to see you. Therefore, driven by the flame of anger, I wrote this letter to condemn you.
The answers are colorful, but you have to wear a "standard" hat. You know, because of the word "mark", countless tragedies have happened.
The following are your three major crimes: ... ("A Letter to the Standard Answer") 3. Borrowing Zhang Hui's novel style (1) "It is said that the general trend of the world will be combined for a long time, and it will be combined for a long time." At the beginning, the era of Wei, Shu and Wu Dingli no longer existed. In The River of No Return, the waves washed away the heroes of the past.
And the former Shu heirs have also become "happy without thinking about Shu", and the world has become Sima's world. (Heroes of the Three Kingdoms) Liang Shanbo's Juyi Hall is now brightly lit and full of people.
One hundred people and eight people are gathered here, and everyone is quarreling. What are they arguing about? It turns out that Liang Shanbo is going to select heroes who fight tigers recently.
It's great to be awarded this honorary title. Whoever is awarded can sit in the second place in the Water Margin. That's why all the heroes gather here and argue endlessly.
Who is the hero who killed the tiger? 4. Clever use of rhetoric can easily express the author's feelings and arouse readers' interest in reading. For example, in 2002, the beginning of "Choice of Heart" wrote: "If you choose wings, you will embrace the whole blue sky; If you choose fins, you will kiss the vast blue sea; If you choose a quadruped, you will appreciate the vast green forest.
And my choices are one by one. "The sentence pattern at the beginning of the parallelism sentence is neat, and the language is sonorous, which forms a contrast before and after, which not only points out the topic but also sets suspense to promote people to enjoy reading.
In addition, the article "Honesty-Forever Green Card" written in 200 1 College Entrance Examination begins: "Honesty is like the first sunshine in spring, which is desirable; Such as a sweet watermelon in summer, contained in the mouth, sweet in the heart; For example, the autumn wind sent a fiery maple leaf from a distance, which attracted infinite attention; Such as snowflakes flying in winter, cover the wheat fields with thick quilts. " At first, metaphor and parallelism were used to describe the value and significance of honesty and express the desire for honesty.
5. Lyric method. That is to say, pour out your true feelings directly at the beginning of the article to point out the main idea of the article.
There are three common lyric ways: hypothetical lyric, comparative lyric and comparative lyric. For example, the 200 1 college entrance examination masterpiece "Carrying a Backpack of Honesty" wrote at the beginning: "If life is a Mercedes-Benz train, then honesty is an indispensable wheel; If life is a long-distance ship, then honesty is an indispensable backpack, which will accompany you all your life. "
The author uses metaphor and contrast to illustrate the importance of honesty from comparison. Another example is the beginning of the excellent composition "The Footsteps of Choice" in the 2002 college entrance examination: "What suddenly crossed my mind and left an instant glory? What is it, quietly watering the heart and cultivating sweet memories? What gently taps the soul and brings eternal beauty? What makes your heart, my heart and his heart play that magnificent movement together? One by one is a shocking choice, a difficult and beautiful choice again and again, a song of one's own choice ... "The four parallel questions at the beginning cause people to think deeply, expressing the value and significance of choice to life, thus expressing the author's feelings.
Step 6 cut to the chase. Because this kind of opening is straightforward, it can go straight to the subject, enter the scene described by the writer at once, or grasp the essence of the discussion at once, so it is suitable for many styles.
For example, the excellent composition "Choosing the Chinese Soul" in the 2002 college entrance examination begins with "Looking through the past history and looking for the choice of the soul without regrets", and the subtitle is: 1, the choice of heroes. 2. The king's choice.
3. Choice of scientists. In this way, a few words are directly introduced below.
Another example is the excellent composition "Wisdom and Thought-My Choice" written at the beginning of the college entrance examination in 2002: "After finishing middle school and receiving the enrollment brochures of three universities, I must make a sacred choice." The author is straightforward and concise, and introduces the following with a general introduction, giving a general introduction on how to choose between "Fortune University", "Power University" and "Wisdom University".
7. Descriptive method. Descriptive method is to use some rhetorical devices or some descriptive devices to describe the scenery, render the atmosphere, contrast the atmosphere, and pave the way for the beginning of the people or things behind.
This method is particularly effective for narratives, essays and argumentations. For example, the excellent composition "Zhao Jun's Choice" in the 2002 college entrance examination begins with: "Deep fence.
3. What excellent compositions do this? Many argumentative papers are often "discussed" because of "things" In the form of expression, articles always quote examples at the beginning and then discuss them. Articles such as "being good at building a new world" and "opposing liberalism" are very rare in middle school students' compositions. The argument is compelling. The following three paragraphs have such characteristics: (1) You should lay a good foundation in your study. "Deep roots can flourish", which means the importance of laying a solid foundation. If Sima Qian didn't "read thousands of books and follow Wan Li Road" when he was young, could he write Historical Records? If Leonardo da Vinci didn't work hard on painting eggs when he was a child, could he become a master painter in the future? Ince was mentally deficient when he was young, but he carried forward the spirit of "one person knows what he knows, I know it ten times, one person knows what he knows, and I know what he doesn't know", and finally climbed to the peak of science. Throughout the ages, countless accomplished scholars and experts have eloquently proved this point with their own experiences! (2) What does it mean to "worry about the world first, and enjoy the world later"? That's sacrifice. This kind of sacrifice is not for individuals, but for people all over the world, so it is noble and great! This kind of sacrifice is not for personal gain, but for the public interest of the country, so you can compete with the sun and the moon! What is sacrificed is fame and fortune, status and even life, but what is won is the prosperity of the country and the admiration of the people. (3) Inappropriate and untimely praise and criticism are enough to hurt a person, especially premature praise. Once the singing contest has come to an end, it can often be seen that the young contestants who won the prize are called "singing stars" and "famous singers" in newspapers and periodicals; Some players wearing such laurels are even students studying in middle schools! I wonder, what benefits will such publicity bring to young people's ideological progress and artistic growth? The underlined part of the above three paragraphs is the argument. We say that the full text should be supplemented at the beginning of the argumentative paper. A Qing dynasty Tang Biao said in the book Reading Composition: "The program of the whole article is in the first paragraph, and the first paragraph is in the ascendant, so the whole article is better." He refined his opinions into arguments, displayed them strategically at the beginning of the article, and began the full text. It is also conducive to the smooth flow of ideas and the discussion around arguments; At this time, the role of "every article is good" can not be underestimated. So, how to get to the point? First of all, according to the requirements of the topic and the feelings of discussing things, we should have our own incisive opinions and formal judgments, and have refined the arguments of the article. In other words, we have a clear idea before writing. For example, in the first paragraph, the author has made the center of the discussion very clear, and extracted the central argument that "learning should lay a good foundation" from the materials of Sima Qian, Da Vinci and Einstein. For example, in the second paragraph, the author got the enlightenment that "that is sacrifice" from the famous saying "worry about the world first, and enjoy the world later"; For example, in the third paragraph, the author witnessed many inappropriate "laurels" being worn on young players in newspapers and periodicals, and deeply felt that the seriousness of the problem lies in "inappropriate and inappropriate praise and criticism, which can hurt a person, especially premature praise". It is precisely because of the "answer" that he formed a clear opinion on the object of discussion, and confirmed that his opinion was in line with the meaning of the question or the meaning of the materials provided, which was of discussion value. "Secondly, to change your writing habits, the first sentence does not need narrative language, but uses argumentative language. That is to say, with a clear affirmative or negative sentence, the "argument" is suddenly opened. Some students are used to writing narratives, and there are often long narratives in argumentative essays, especially those who are not good at stating arguments and posing for discussion; Some students have no clue before writing, no matter what argumentative paper they write, they always start with notes, and even after a long narrative, they will concentrate on thinking about what arguments should be put forward; The above-mentioned writing habits greatly hinder the writing of argumentative essays. If you don't change them, you can't come straight to the point and make an argument clearly. Naturally, the writing method of "one thing, one discussion" at the beginning of the case, in which "thing" comes first and "discussion" comes last, is also an argumentative layout, but this layout is relatively common and easy to master, so it is difficult for us to get straight to the point, as mentioned above. If the author does not form a clear judgment in his mind in advance, or according to his usual style of writing, it will often turn into such a beginning: (1) Sima Qian, a great historian in China, read thousands of books when he was young, took the Wan Li Road, and finally wrote Historical Records, which will be circulated through the ages; Leonardo da vinci, a famous Italian painter, practiced painting eggs as a child and finally became a master of painting. Einstein, a great physicist, was mentally deficient when he was young, but he carried forward the spirit of "one person knows, I know ten things, one person knows ten things, and I know everything", and finally reached the peak of science ... (3) At the end of every singing competition, it is often seen in newspapers and magazines that those young winners are called "singing stars" and "famous singers" and put on such laurels. I'm thinking, what's the benefit of such publicity to young people's ideological progress and artistic growth? .
4. The method of entering the first grade composition 1. Topic Background In students' compositions, we often find that some compositions are well written, with exquisite writing and avant-garde examples.
But the article just doesn't get to the point. At first glance, it gives people the impression that the topic is unclear and the grades are very low. Some students, following their feelings, wrote thousands of words all the way, either at arm's length from the topic or off the topic of Wan Li.
This shows that students can't "point". Second, the research objective 1. Let the students understand the pointing method at the beginning of the narrative.
2. Make students master the method of asking questions at the beginning and deducting points at the end. 3. Let students learn to use the method of asking questions at the beginning and deducting points at the end.
Third, the method (a) to teach students the method of asking questions at the beginning of the composition. As the saying goes, "everything is difficult at the beginning."
He also said, "A good beginning is half the battle." The same is true of composition, especially narrative.
At the beginning, it is very important to create an atmosphere, set the tone for the article and give the reader the first impression. If the beginning of a composition is just right, it can often catch the reader at once and increase the highlights of the article.
Therefore, whether you can write the beginning of a composition flexibly, uniquely and accurately is often related to the success or failure of an article. In primary school, we mainly write narratives. There are many ways to start a narrative, and the common ones are as follows: 1, come straight to the point.
This method is to cut to the chase at the beginning of the article, directly explain the main content of the article, so that readers can see at a glance who, what and what activities this article describes. Such an opening can attract the reader's attention at once and will not stray from the subject.
For example, the article "Ten Minutes Between Classes" begins like this: As soon as the bell rings, the students quickly walk out of the classroom and take part in their favorite activities on the playground, and the campus suddenly boils. At the beginning, the time is "class is over", the place is "playground", the characters are "classmates" and the things are "recess activities".
Very straightforward. 2. Prompt center method.
This method points out the center of the full text from the beginning, so that readers can have a clear understanding of the central idea of the article. Let's look at the beginning. "Living in the collective is happy. Two years ago, I deeply realized this. "
This is the beginning of the article "Living in a Warm Collective". 3. Describe the introduction method. When describing people and scenery, this method is to introduce description.
To describe a character is to describe his portrait, clothes, manners and so on. The character image at the beginning of the article, so as to achieve the effect of establishing a vivid character image in front of readers. Another method of description is to describe the scenery at the beginning, that is, to describe the natural or social environment where the story is located at the beginning of the article, so as to illustrate the background and highlight the atmosphere. 4. Set the suspense method.
When writing an article, we often write the result of something or a fragment in the text at the beginning to arouse readers' doubts, and then describe the cause and process of something. This initial method is called suspense method. This method can arouse readers' strong interest. For example, at the beginning of the article "Intelligence and profiteering", it was written: On the second day of summer vacation, my cousin and I went shopping together.
Walking to the north gate of the food market, I saw many people in front. My cousin and I took a few steps and also surrounded ... 5. Contrast method.
At the beginning of the article, different people and things or the same person and things are compared and introduced at different times and in different aspects. The application of contrast can make the depicted image more prominent, enhance the expression effect of the article and leave a deep impression on people.
6. Recall association method. Through people, events, scenes, things, etc. In order to arouse memories, associations, lead to the following and expand the plot, this method is called recall association method.
The application of back association method at the beginning gives people a kind of cordial and natural feeling. 7. Dialogue opening method.
Start with the dialogue between the characters. This kind of writing at the beginning is natural and often gives people a sense of freshness.
Starting with a dialogue, we must make the dialogue wonderful and meaningful, and stick to the center. (2) Teach students to deduct questions at the end of the composition.
Methods: Make full use of the texts learned in class and related materials collected after class. V. Measures and steps: 1. Teach students how to ask questions at the beginning of a narrative.
2. Make full use of written materials to fully guide students to understand the questioning methods in the articles they have learned in the usual classroom teaching. When instructing students to write unit composition, guide students to summarize the questioning methods in this unit text. 3. Guide students to analyze the requirements of this composition and exchange this composition with each other.
Write the beginning of the composition in a straightforward way. Some people say that a good beginning is half the success of a composition. This shows that the form of the article is very important. When writing a composition, you can choose the following methods at first:
A way to write directly when writing an article. This method is widely used in writing all kinds of articles, accounting for a large proportion. Its expression angle can be the direct narration at the beginning or the point of writing; You can reveal the main idea of the article at the beginning, or you can come straight to the point and tell the enemy directly. Because this writing is crisp, quick and clear, it can be used as the first choice for composition, especially at the beginning of the composition in the examination room.
The most common "straight to the point" is as follows:
1) clue type. It is usually used at the beginning of a story. In order to start a touching story or express delicate and rich emotions, the author often leads the clues of the article naturally and directly in a kind tone.
2) Element type. Also used at the beginning of a narrative. Start writing and explain the time, place, characters, plot and other elements of the narrative content, so that readers can have a general understanding of the content of the article from the beginning.
3) plot style. At the beginning, without any bedding and rendering, the topic and story are directly launched, thus making the article fascinating and stimulating readers' interest in reading.
4) Introduction. At the beginning, the article introduces the people, things, things, causes, reasons, purposes and processes related to the central content of the article. This kind of entry is simple and clear, and people can see it at a glance.
5) The first closed type. In the first paragraph of the article, the full text is summarized and the theme of the full text is pointed out to help readers understand and grasp the meaning of the article.
6) Conversation style. Start directly or enter the topic directly at the beginning in the form of a, b or a, b dialogue. Dialogue method is mainly used to conceive scientific sketches, and a scientific truth is clearly explained by setting dialogues. Due to the limitation of form, this kind of article rarely adopts the opening way from far to near, and touches on the main content at the beginning, so it has certain attraction.
7) topic type. This is a common beginning of an article. They come straight to the point, or put forward arguments in the first sentence, or express their views in the first paragraph, showing a clear attitude of discussion and comment and the strength of writing.
8) Tree target type. At the beginning of the article, the enemy theory was put forward and the object of rebuttal was set. This straight-to-the-point approach is mainly used to refute arguments, with the aim of getting straight to the point and targeting the target.
6. Go straight to the key points at the beginning of the composition. Do you have any good suggestions or information? There are many ways to start a composition, which can be summarized into the following four categories: 1. Get to the point: account (subject, person, time, summary) 2. Usage skills: suspense, comparison, analogy, etc. 3. Use rhetoric: quote, ask questions, ask questions.
Thinking: What is the topic of this article from this beginning? What method does it use? What is involved in the following? Clear: The topic involved in this article should be "door". It adopts a "straight to the point" approach.
The following contents include the door of joy, the door of sadness, the door of courage, the door of depression and so on. Induction: A straight start will not only make the article straight to the point without beating around the bush, but also let the marking teacher save the tortuous language fog and directly enter the author's theme narrative.
Problems that should be paid attention to when adopting straight to the point: (1). Before you start writing, you should think carefully and extract the beginning that can lead to the theme of the full text; (2) This kind of prologue should be very concise and have a fascinating effect, so as to arouse the reading desire of the marking teacher. The topic of the exercise is "Believe in yourself and listen to other people's opinions", and it begins with "Get to the point".
Pursuing life is like sailing on water. Only by raising two sails high: believing in yourself and listening to others' opinions can we advance and retreat freely and reach the other side of victory. Summary: Cut to the chase and explain (topic, people, time, summary) 2. Ex. 2: Persevere in everything.
Don't think too hard about everything: what is the topic of this article from here on? What method does it use? What is involved in the following? Clear: The topic involved in this article should be "persistence".
The beginning method it adopts is "positive and negative contrast method". What is involved below is the problem that dialectical analysis insists on.
Note: when using the "positive and negative contrast method", we should pay attention to dialectical reasoning and make a clear comparison. Exercise: Take "survival and life" as the topic, and write a beginning with "positive and negative contrast".
[Stone of Other Mountains]: Survival is rice, oil, salt, sauce, vinegar and tea. Life is a flower of piano, chess, painting, singing and dancing.
Live just to live, but live not just to survive. 3. Example 3: There is no eternal rainbow in the sky, and there is no eternal splendid scenery in life.
Perfection is beautiful, and incomplete regrets are sometimes beautiful. Thinking: What is the topic of this article from this beginning? What method does it use? What is involved in the following? Clear: The topic involved in this article is "Incomplete Beauty".
It adopts the method of "comparing prosperity with beginning". The following content should be about "incomplete beauty".
Using the method of "competing at the beginning" can create an atmosphere and produce fascinating artistic effects. Note: What is produced must be intrinsically related to what is sung, and it must never be "irrelevant".
Appreciation takes "colorful life" as the topic, and writes a beginning with the method of "pen is at the beginning" The lush grass in the mountains, the golden ears in the fields, the fresh red carp in the pond and the black eagle flying high in the sky are all dotted with nature.
As a primate in nature, human beings should also enrich the world with colorful life. Example: I decided to do an experiment: I didn't say a word for a whole month.
(Liu's white teeth) Thinking: What is the starting method adopted in this paper? Clear: This kind of beginning is the method of "setting suspense". The advantage is that it can arouse readers' interest.
Note: Contextual care appreciation takes "self-knowledge and other people's expectations" as the topic, and uses the method of "setting suspense" to write a beginning [stone from other mountains]. These days, I have been anxious about how I should die. Summary: "Positive and negative contrast", "competition start" and "setting suspense" are all methods of "using skills". In addition to these three skills, there are five situations such as comparison and analogy. Five: It was the voice of a Confucian master thousands of years ago, which became worthless in intrigue and intrigue. It ...
Thinking: What is the startup method used in this paper? Clarity: This method of starting with "parallel questions" can enhance the momentum, make people feel shocked and get the first impression. Note: (1) The logical level between clauses (2) The topic should be "frustrated" and the beginning should be written by the method of "parallelism into the topic".
What will you do if you encounter setbacks? Perhaps, you will choose to escape and find a sheltered harbor; Perhaps, you will choose to cry and wash your broken heart with tears; Perhaps, you will choose to ask for help ... 6 ... Example 6: As the old saying goes, those who seek things in a dark room are not good at fire; The cableway is on earth, and it's not good to tell the truth. Ceng Zi's word for killing pigs is "faith", and Kong Ming's word for "trusting orphans" is "sincerity"; Because of the word "sincerity", the century-old shop has always been full of customers, and Liu Bang's three chapters of the contract have been passed down as a beautiful talk for a thousand years.
Thinking: What is the startup method used in this paper? Clarity: this kind of beginning is the method of "quoting into the topic". This is a simple and clear beginning, which is easy to resonate with the marking teacher.
Note: the quotation should be accurate and appropriate, and never be arrogant. The exercise is based on the topic of "life" and begins with the method of "quoting into the topic".
Actors say that life is like a play; The singer said that life is like a dream; People who like to travel say that life is like a journey; People who like dreaming say that life is like a dream; I said, life is a challenge. Summary: parallelism and quotation belong to the method of "rhetorical beginning" At the beginning of the composition, rhetorical devices such as rhetorical questions, rhetorical questions and metaphors can also be used, as well as methods such as portrait description, scene description and scene description. 7. Example 7: When dusk came, Cui Cui sat under the white tower behind her house and watched the thin clouds being baked into peach blossoms by the sunset ... The air smelled of earth, plants and beetles.
Cui Cui looked at the red clouds in the sky ... and felt a little sad. Thinking: How to start this? What are the advantages of this method? Clear: This is the method of "description at the beginning", which can be a scene description, a scene description or a character description. The advantage is that it can set off the atmosphere and render.