Composition is a common teaching and homework in our teaching. After writing the composition, our teacher's comments are the key. The following is a complete set of comments on my composition. Welcome to read for your reference.

Comment on the composition 1 1. The article is detailed, orderly, vivid and concrete, which is a masterpiece.

2. The close-up is unique and interesting. The full text is full of childlike innocence and interest, and it is very kind to read.

3. The article can be described in fresh and interesting language … between the lines, it is full of childlike interest in childhood, and laughter is endless, which is a masterpiece.

4. Appropriate details and the combination of reality and reality are the two major characteristics of this article, and it is also the content of this article ... richer and more vivid.

5. The full text is fresh and elegant, friendly and euphemistic, simple and unconventional, which is worth learning.

6. The full-text language is vivid and accurate, and the plot is wonderful and tortuous, which seems to bring readers into a happy paradise and make people smile.

7. The full text is easy to understand and interesting.

8. The full text is clear, vivid, compact and interesting.

9. The success of this paper lies in observing specific things and developing appropriate imagination.

10, the article melts into the scenery, paints the scenery lyrically, and is good at using analogy to make the article vivid and concrete.

1 1. The article is novel in content, reasonable in structure, fluent and coherent, and naturally accessible.

12, this article is based on real life, with appropriate materials, great originality, clear paragraphs, natural transition, full of interest and strong readability.

13, the full-text language is fluent and the writing is free and easy, which is a relatively successful work.

14. Although the language of this article is not gorgeous, it is extremely accurate and vivid, with rich and true emotions, which is pleasing to read.

15, the structure of the article is concise and reasonable, and the author's understanding of the original text is also very profound and thorough. The full-text language is forceful and hit the floor, which makes people excited and excited.

16. This composition has novel materials, wonderful ideas and lively language. There is a fresh breath of life and children's interest between the lines.

17, the article narrates the events of … according to the sequence of events. The language is fluent, the level is clear, and it looks very happy from beginning to end.

18, the full text is lively, the language is fresh, always full of humor, and it is very interesting to read.

19, the full-text narrative is concentrated, the language is concise and smooth, and the feelings are sincere and touching.

20. The tone of the whole article is relaxed and humorous, and it is interesting and fascinating to read.

2 1, the author is clever in conception, good at choosing points to expand, and his writing is ups and downs, which is intriguing.

22. There are many wonderful sentences in the full text, which add some literary interest to the article.

23. Although the article is short, the narrative is vivid and delicate, with a strong flavor of life and accurate words and sentences.

24. The central sentence revealed at the end of the article is clear and summary, short and powerful.

Through careful observation, I vividly described it in appropriate language. Although the article is short but not monotonous, the language is popular but interesting.

26. Characters' language, demeanor, movements, etc. , are described in detail, which is a major feature of this article. The ending is full of expectation and enthusiasm, and the words are still unfinished.

27. The article is written in detail, revealing the warmth like sunshine between the lines, which naturally sublimates the theme of the article to a higher level.

28. The music is beautiful, so is the language of this article. Poetic language and fantastic imagination, how beautiful!

29. The "reading" of the article is closely related to the "feeling". Examples of actions move people's hearts at the beginning and have real feelings.

30. The structure of the article is concise and reasonable, and the author's understanding of the original text is very profound and thorough. The full-text language is forceful, hit the floor, and it is exciting to read.

3 1, the implicit ending of the article is both topical and intriguing.

32, full of passion, describes ...

33, focused, detailed properly, specific content.

34. The metaphor is appropriate and the words are vivid.

35. The story is vivid and concrete, and the words and deeds of the characters conform to their respective identity characteristics. It can be seen that you are a conscientious person in life. So although the language is not so beautiful, it is true and interesting, and the writing is reasonable.

36. The full text is fluent in language and free and easy in writing, which is a relatively successful work.

37. The full text is hearty and full of joy and expectation. Sincere and touching, the beginning is extraordinary.

38. The article is realistic, three-dimensional, readable and interesting. Fairy tales, with keen social insight, reflect the dark side of reality and vivid language, depict a series of greedy existence, which is profound.

39. This article takes … as a clue, which is coherent, fluent and natural. At the same time, through the comparison of specific cases before and after, it criticizes …. The language of the article is vivid and rich, and it is readable.

40, can lead to a reasonable imagination, embodies the profound philosophy, ... The writing is smooth and concise, and gives full play to one's imagination, which is good ... The article is elegant, fluent and coherent, especially the humor of the characters' language, coupled with the use of some subtle words, which invisibly adds a lot of interest to the article.

4 1, the language of the article is easy to understand, close to the reality of life, and it is very kind to read.

42. Tell us in a relaxed and pleasant tone, which is unforgettable.

43. The narrative is natural and vivid, with compact structure, natural connection and prominent center.

44. For the description of the scenery, the language is concise and accurate, while the association is touching the scene, and the scene naturally blends into one.

45. By enriching the characters' language and actions, the ideological quality of the characters is set off.

46. This article is lyrical in narration.

47. the article is miscellaneous but not chaotic, but it can be detailed and focused.

This article fully and appropriately renders the atmosphere of … and gives a detailed and vivid description of the key points of the article.

49.… is practical and contains simple and profound philosophy. Reading is exciting and exciting.

This article is full of passion. Between the lines, we can understand the little author's love for …. The full text has distinct levels and fluent sentences.

Comment composition 2 1. Such beautiful handwriting and clear and neat structure can not help but give people a refreshing feeling, which teachers should really learn from you. Let's promote each other in the future Chinese study, shall we?

Your writing is as simple and open-minded as your personality. Your writing skills are very good, which is also the crystallization of your long-term tempering. I hope you will feel and appreciate life with your heart and write more touching articles in the future study process.

I think this article reflects your heart. The road of life is indeed tortuous and long, but as long as you work hard and persevere, the crown of success will definitely belong to you.

4. The language is clear. You should not take writing as a burden, but record your mental journey with a positive attitude and delicate brushwork.

It can be said that your article is full of true feelings. People, failure is inevitable, and it is even more valuable to have the courage to face it. I believe it is gold, and there will always be flashes. I hope you can adjust your mind as soon as possible, and you will find that the sky is bluer.

6. It is really "writing like a god". It seems that you must have read a lot of literary works. The content is so rich that it shows your literary skills. Only by adjusting the materials in a certain logical order will this article be more exciting.

7. After reading your article, it seems that a stream flows in front of my eyes, pure and lovely. I hope you can keep this style of writing and express rich connotations in pure language.

8. Writing is like being a man. From your life experience, you can see that you are a good young man who makes progress. You have your own unique insights and profound understanding of things, which is really commendable.

9. This article expresses sincere praise for the beautiful mind with concrete examples, vivid and beautiful language and novel and unique writing style.

10. The beginning of the article is simple and appropriate. It is very artistic to contrast the emotions of the characters through environmental description.

Comment composition 3 1. Briefly explain the time, place and result …

2. The language is concise, standardized and attractive at the beginning.

3 ... begins with ... which is more innovative.

4. The opening is concise, concise and orderly; Pay attention to description ... leave a deep impression.

5. I used a scene metaphor at the beginning, which is quite innovative; Flashback the beginning and render the artistic conception.

6. Getting to the point at the beginning is also a way of writing.

7. The beginning is very lively. The use of personification makes the beginning lively.

8. Ask questions at the beginning to attract readers.

9. Cut to the chase at the beginning, making people clear at a glance.

10. Point to the beginning and use attractive words.

1 1. The description of the scene and atmosphere adds a lot of color to the article;

12 ... briefly describe the wonderful place; Link local work with overall work.

13. briefly introduce the situation and naturally transition to the next paragraph;

14. The situation description causes suspense;

15. Make full use of language, action and psychological description to make things concrete and visual.

16. Briefly describe the cause and effect and pave the way.

17. Dialogue or some psychological description can be added to this part.

18. It is more appropriate to change … to ….

19. Naturally, the connecting link between the preceding and the following, and the detailed description highlights the quality of the characters and is touching.

20. Describe the scenery in the narrative, measure people and compare them with each other.

2 1. personified language makes the article more vivid.

22. The description of appearance is very interesting, which highlights the loveliness of …. The introduction is all my own ideas, which are very infectious.

23. It is very vivid to use the method of giving examples in a column diagram.

24. The transition is natural, and each paragraph is explained clearly.

This part refers to the examples in the text. The language is too flat, so it can be modified appropriately to make it more vivid.

26. The beauty of ... is vividly written through rhetorical devices such as metaphor and personification. This section can also be expanded to show …

27. The use of figurative sentences is accurate. Add ancient poetry to associate, full of charm.

In sharp contrast to ..., stand out from the crowd. ...

29. It is impressive that primary school students can have such an experience.

30. The metaphor of ... is well used.

Comment composition 4 1. The plot develops smoothly, lacking certain ups and downs.

2. The plot changes are unremarkable and lack of new ideas.

3. The plot is straight, there is no suspense, and it seems to be a running account.

The process is very detailed, but the ending is short. The structure is unreasonable, giving people the feeling of anticlimactic.

5. The idea is unreasonable and the content is full of loopholes, which can't reflect the truth of life.

6. The plot is ups and downs, and the transformation is too fast and not coherent enough.

7. The metaphor is vivid, the ontology is similar to the metaphor, and the interest and persuasiveness of the article are greatly enhanced.

8. Appropriate use of comparison and other methods, through the disparity and differences between things, effectively prove the center of the article.

9. Seize the opportunity to explain the characteristics of things in many ways by parallelism, which not only enhances the language potential, but also leaves a very deep impression on readers.

10. The clever use of personification makes the things in the text have the characteristics of human behavior, thoughts and feelings, and reflects the mental journey of the protagonist in the text from the side.

1 1. The selection of materials is too popular and unrepresentative to some extent, and the old themes and old ideas are unremarkable.

12. Although the events with certain narrative value in life are selected, the hidden truth of the events cannot be deeply reflected due to the incomplete analysis and mining.

13. The materials are plain, too old, vulgar, simple and naive, and have no new ideas, so it is difficult to deeply reflect the authenticity of life.

14. Failure to reflect the truth through trivial matters, and lack of proficiency in the use of the expression "seeing the big from the small".

15. Lack of multi-angle description of the characters, only a narrow theme is selected, showing the one-sided personality characteristics of the characters.

16. Being able to choose typical themes in life, the events are more representative.

17. The material selection is novel and unique, not mediocre, and it is refreshing.

18. Although it describes ordinary things, the analysis is thorough and reasonable, and the rational excavation is in-depth, highlighting the essence of the incident.

19. Although the incident is small, it reflects profound truth and has certain universality.

20. Multi-angle material selection fully reflects the personality characteristics of the characters, and the characters are full.

Comment composition 5 1. The language is simple, the feelings are dull and the feelings are not deep.

2. Emotion is too strong, and it doesn't look too emotional. On the other hand, it is complacent.

3. Emotion lacks depth, fails to convey feelings through scenes, and fails to generate feelings from events. Although feelings are hidden in words, they fail to dig deep.

4. Psychological depiction is not vivid and concrete enough to effectively express the attitude, likes and dislikes of the characters. Rationality: Repeatedly emphasize the author's point of view from different angles and aspects, with thorough reasoning and clear thinking.

5. Quoting classic examples of famous sayings is more convincing and can express the author's point of view more powerfully.

6. Strong arguments, thorough and reasonable analysis and strong philosophy.

7. Rich examples, proper selection and description are more convincing.

8. Strong feelings, such as volcanic eruption and bubbling out, can deeply move readers.

9. Sincere feelings, strong feelings, like mellow wine, make people drunk if they don't drink it.

10. Emotions are real and natural, and there is no suspicion of affectation. Show your true feelings with a normal heart.

1 1. The mental journey is true and delicate, and the thoughts and attitudes of the characters are clear to readers at a glance.

12. The feelings are true and delicate, and the words are touching, which really comes from the author's heart.

13. Seek the gains and losses of life from self-reflection, reveal the true feelings in confession, and the words are powerful and shocking.

14. The sentence is fluent, the sentence meaning is fluent, the words are beautiful, the narrative image is vivid and vivid, and the language expression ability is strong.

15. The language is concise, the words are concise and powerful, and a few words can convey the spirit of the characters.

16. The language is fluent, detailed and vivid; The meaning of the sentence is implicit and euphemistic, with profound implications. After reading it, it is like a lingering fragrance after drinking.

17. The language is vivid and humorous, which makes people laugh.

18. The words used in behavior description are exquisite and accurate, and the verb series vividly highlights the psychological state of the characters and points out their personality characteristics.

19. The language is basically fluent, occasionally fluent.

20. The language is not fluent enough, and the meaning of the sentence is vague and puzzling. This statement is wordy, but it doesn't convey the meaning. Just verbose.

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