The above one is too bad, typical Chinese English. Here is a very formal way of writing a diploma in English:\x0d\XX University (school name)\x0d\on the nomination of the undergraduate studies /graduate studies (undergraduate/graduate studies)\x0d\have conferred upon\x0d\XXX (name )\x0d\the degree of Bachelor / Master (Bachelor/Master) of Science/ Arts (Science/Arts)\x0d\In XXXX (professional name)\x0d\with all the rights and privileges thereto pertaining\x0d\given at XXX (Name of school location)\x0d\this twenty ninth day of June (can be modified according to the actual date) in the year\x0d\two thousand and nine\x0d\(Note: In the above format, the typesetting is centered and the first letter of each word is capitalized )\x0d\\x0d\President of the University: XXXX Dean of the XXX Department: xxx\x0d\\x0d\Stamp the school’s English seal in the middle of the above signature