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1, five beauties of Ma's Ode to Joy 1 and their life experiences
Introduction: Introduction to the popular TV series Ode to Joy.
2, Lei Xiao-now search or recite.
Introduction: Artificial intelligence is so powerful, why should we study?
3. Yan Jiang Kun-poor Charlie Munger's collection of cosmic wisdom.
Introduction: Let's take a look at what universal wisdom is.
4. Su Xiangru-"After reading so many successful experiences, let's look at a failure-Summary of Class 5 in May"
Introduction: Our class is highly valued, highly valued.
5. Qin Ling-How to influence parents with back-to-back tactics?
Guide: How to make parents accept our kindness?
6, Shang Chaoqing-"June 1" Festival for my daughter
Guide: How to personally influence children to study hard?
7. Hu Meimei-enjoy it.
An interesting little boy.
8. Ni Shuqing-sincerely face your first step and face up to your professional problems.
Introduction: Overview of career planning.
9. "Practice cairol Ye 007 324" series insurance scheme.
Guide: Did you buy insurance for your family?
10, Zhou my college entrance examination composition
Guide: How many points do you give to this composition?
1 1, Wu Muling-it is better to be respected than liked.
Guide: How to be respected?
12, Du-I received the first advertisement.
Introduction: The author is somewhat naughty.
13, Liu Xiaoqin-how do I read the original English books?
Introduction: The methods for beginners to learn English.
14, silk flower Chen-Don't let friends gossip about you behind your back.
Guide: How to get along well with classmates?
Comment area:
1, Lei Xiao -2 articles.
1 Comment article: "Rethinking why you can't write 600 words"-Wan Kang
Material, material or material. You can't make a silk purse out of sow's ears. The writing skills are high, not comparable to several excellent materials. Usually accumulate more. It is suggested to refer to the article "Inspiration" in "Taking Time as a Friend".
② Review article: Find Your Learning Cycle-Mou Tao
I'm lazy in column study recently. I haven't left a message for a long time. After reading your article, I am motivated again. Thank you! Although your article is not long, you should have a subtitle to let readers grasp the structure.
2, Shang Chaoqing-2 articles
① Comment article: Find Your Learning Cycle-Mou Tao
Comments: After reading the article, the first impression is smooth and logical.
The periodic phenomenon in the writing process is also described in detail and in place.
"I believe that as long as I keep writing, it will blossom and bear fruit one day." I believe that as long as I keep writing, I will write better and better. More natural, because flowering and fruition is a terminal thinking, what we want is growth, which is endless.
In the penultimate paragraph, you should increase your investment in the trough. "Increase your investment" means "slow down and seek stability". But this reference is not clear, whether it is a learning project with increased investment or the same learning project with more time to increase investment.
On the whole, it's well written. Make persistent efforts.
② Comments on the article: "It is better to be respected than to be liked"-Wu Muling
Comments:? "If someone must like us ..." The contents of this paragraph and the next paragraph are logically contradictory to those of the previous paragraph.
As I said in the last paragraph, love comes from character and respect comes from temperament.
? And this paragraph says that I like it because the other person feels some kind of peaceful warmth, which is called security and comes from the protection signal, and this signal needs strong personality strength. I have read this passage many times, it is too difficult to understand, and I can't see what it has to do with personality.
? Your following methodology, the second, fourth, eighth, tenth, twelfth, fourteenth, fifteenth and seventeenth, is reasoning or methodology?
What is "methodology"? Go down and study it.
? The first few paragraphs of your article are ok, but I can't stand the rest. The logic is too chaotic. There are too many things to express later, and I don't see anything. Besides, I don't understand what temperament you are talking about. The temperament of teaching research, the temperament of the online passage you quoted and the temperament you will talk about later may not be the same thing. If you really want to write an article in this field, first define the "temperament" in your article!
[Golden sentence is good]
The temperament produced by our words and deeds is determined by past experiences. In your present temperament, there are hidden the roads you have traveled, the books you have read and the people you have loved.
Although the comments are a little spicy, I hope they are my real feelings after reading your article. I hope you will carefully carve your article in the future.
3, Su Xiangru-2 articles
1 Comment article: "Notes on the Simple Survival Guide of the Blockchain World"-Cao Zongjin
Regarding blockchain investment and learning, we are in the approval stage. Combined with this week's article by Mr. Laughter, before entering, we must first understand the concept of cycle, then face the blockchain investment with that firm mentality, and then calm down and learn the blockchain knowledge bit by bit to uncover the mystery, so I think the first thing to do is to truly master the technical principles and applications behind the blockchain and judge whether the projects behind the blockchain assets are worth investing.
I hope this time we can keep up with the times and use our own judgment!
② Review article: "Going Home"-Yu
An unfinished memory about home aroused the desire to read and hope to see the other half of the story.
4, strict-2 articles
1 comment article: zhixing 002 | how to make the future come now? "Zuo Fei
Predict the future development trend, then design your own goals according to the development trend and practice step by step.
② Comment article: A Brief Reading of Animal Manor-He Kang
Everything the animals in the animal farm do is for their own benefit.
5. Chen Juanhua -2 articles
1 article comment: To be a good protagonist, you must have these five characteristics | Story analysis-Hu Aishan
The audience certainly doesn't want the protagonist they pay attention to, no matter how hard they try, they won't achieve their goal in the end. How desperate it is! Although this is the reality of most life. David Thoreau said that all sentient beings live a life of silence and despair. Most people may not realize their wishes all their lives until they die, and they all leave with regrets. But most listeners are not allowed to believe in their own ordinary, so we are willing to listen to stories. What we want is hope.
Comments: I really felt deeply after reading your article. From the life-and-death battle between Altman and the monster, Pleasant Goat managed to escape from the hot pot. Battle of Red Cliffs and Cao Cao suffered a crushing defeat and nearly died. He also lost100000 troops, but he was able to learn from his mistakes and divide the world into three parts. There is also the protagonist in "Remaining Sin", who goes deep into drug lords and shares life and death with gangs. These heroes will all have the qualities you said. The appeal of the story may not stop there. I hope your story has more highlights.
② Comment on the article: Thinking on the wall-Zhao Huaying
Comments: From the mother's point of view, dealing with the contradiction between father and son, the interference of factors leads to the father's scolding, which makes the children feel wronged and makes the father angry. Mother is not partial to either side, pointing out that both sides have mistakes and trying to reconcile. When the father doesn't always stare at the child's mistakes to criticize, the child won't have rebellious psychology. Moderate tolerance and mutual concessions may be more enjoyable.
6, Du-2 articles
① Review article: The Harvest from Multidimensional Competition-Jiame
Perhaps what a "learner" wants to see most is that he is subtly changed by what he has learned.
You can reasonably integrate the concept of multi-dimensional competition into your life and work, which may be the ultimate goal of our study-to solve all kinds of problems we encounter through learning!
This is great!
However, when describing the part I "got", the meaning is not clear enough because of the unreasonable sentences. I scratched my head and couldn't understand the context of some sentences, such as this sentence in the fourth paragraph: "If I can do a good job in product operation at the same time, I can be a full-time product manager in Shanghai." Ask for guidance
PPSS .. "In other words, how does the iron wolf favor the rhythm of good people?"
② Commentary: Seven years, a lifetime-Xiao Yan.
Comments: Hello, classmates!
First of all, I'm sorry that I can't give you any substantive advice about your troubles.
Should we be grateful that at the end of this life, before the arrival of the next life, we have the opportunity to realize that our body and mind need to be conditioned? You can put the problem that bothers you on the table and let the outside world expose it, which may solve this problem to some extent.
Moreover, the teacher's laughter gave us the concept that seven years is a lifetime, and we also agreed with this concept. Then, seven years, can we also regard her as several seven-year cycles in our lives? The answer is yes. So ... what if there is a problem with the cycle? -read the teacher's special topic this week.
I hope you can find what you want, ABZ. Let's go
Finally, running is a good way to exercise. Recommend it to you
Wish: be healthy first, and then work smoothly!
7, Ni Shuqing-2 articles
1 Comment on the article: Life Essay-Weng Xin
Comments:
The article is divided into two parts, although it is an essay, but it can also be seen that it is not completely random. They are all written according to the structure of event+reflection+sublimation.
Story 1:
Event: lost the basketball game; I thought I just couldn't compete with others, and I psychologically eliminated myself from the beginning.
Reflection: The reason is (1) insufficient training (2) influenced by fear of failure (3) In fact, the strength between teams is similar.
Sublimation: The same is true at work. When I think others are very powerful, I am also belittling myself and giving myself a reason to give up.
The second story:
Event: (1) I went home to visit my grandfather and stayed at home for three days. (2) At the wedding of my best friend, I was infected by the atmosphere at the scene.
Reflection: Pain and helplessness, happiness and emotion are contradictory to us at the same time. How should we face the aging of the elderly? How to seize the immediate happiness? Grandpa's story, let us tell us to "go home often"; Buddy's wedding reminds us to learn to "create happiness".
Sublimation: life is trivial, but we should not fall into triviality; When complaining and fidgeting, when facing life and pressure, I often think about what I am trying to do.
Golden sentence:
1. Don't be scared by what you see and hear. A lot of what you see and hear is not true. You won't know until you act and try.
Whether you are happy or sad, this day will pass. Why not make yourself happier?
A suggestion: The second part tells two stories, and the reflection on the two stories is actually very different, or rather compared. These two stories are often interspersed in articles. If they are separated, the structure may be clearer.
Finally, thank you very much for your comments on my article.
② Comment on the article: The confusion of writing-Long Peng Qi
Comments: I have had such confusion. It is really difficult to write a complete article like this. There are many articles that are scrapped after being drawn in half.
I think writing is more of an expression, that is, having an idea before expressing it. In order to make myself have ideas, it is necessary for me to have more time alone and feel life seriously. . This may be more convenient. However, sometimes if you don't do well, you are also deliberately training.
Finally, you said, "I am used to being in a circle designed by others", which has something to do with the education we received since childhood. In fact, I found that you have found a way to break through yourself, that is, "asking questions", and the process of asking questions also takes time to train. Personally, I think it's a good way to ask myself every day.
Psychologically speaking, when you realize your problem, you have actually solved half of it. Looking forward to your happier writing!
Thank you for sharing, and thank you for writing the voices of many of us. Ha ha laugh
8, cayrolye-2 articles
Comment: Do you value your credit-Dai Guoqing
This paper introduces the concept of "credit" = assets; Quote teacher Wang's words to grasp the theme; Explain the theme clearly with specific cases of new consumption patterns; The concept of credit can be further extended: from credit to business reputation to personal trustworthiness, it can lead to the future society's "operating assets = operating individuals", with clear thinking-looking forward to the next masterpiece.
2 Comment article: Get up early, you need to win the struggle with the ID-Shi Jun.
This paper uses the habit of getting up early to cultivate and introduce the concept of "id self"; Describe two specific concepts through your own experience; A strong desire to sum up experience+sufficient persuasion to convince the ID to form habits; The psychological part of the article is too complicated (too much psychological activity makes you tired. How can I get up early to exercise? There is only one reason to get up early, and there are many reasons not to get up. Getting up early is actually the cultivation of habits-there are many things that can be used for reference in this respect; You should let the reader know how to realize a habit after reading it, instead of walking around the concept again.
Looking forward to the next masterpiece
9. Qin Mausoleum -2 articles
Comment: Do you value your credit-Dai Guoqing
Before reading your article, I really didn't value my credit that much. Imagine if we shop like drug dealers and need to point a gun at each other and trade so much every day. It's a little scary to think about how many scenes need that gun. This shows how important credit is!
Personally, it's good to write a copy for Alipay. Typesetting looks quite comfortable.
Golden sentence:
Assets = owner's equity (visible)+credit (extractable liabilities)
2 article comments: Make a comeback to the official account of WeChat-Hu Jiandong
Because I have expectations for myself, I don't want to disappoint readers, and I can't copy other people's articles everywhere in order to make more money. Your persistence will definitely pay off!
"But do good, the future of Mo Wen!" I have put this sentence in the signature of WeChat since I knew it. Let's work together!
Each of us should give ourselves some lonely time, so that we can control our desires without relying on anyone in our lives. People who can control their desires will have a much happier quality of life than those who are bursting with desires, and can also maintain a psychological balance.
10, weekly -2 articles
Comments: the glory of the king, do you still play? -Liu Xing
Comments: The article describes an interesting thing in life and tells a story. I haven't played the glory of the king, and I don't play any video games. Learn some interesting things in the game through the article, which is very fresh. In particular, I am convinced that everyone has a rich story.
The writing of the article is colloquial and the typesetting is very rough. It may be that the comrades finished it in a hurry and didn't have time to polish it carefully. Actually, I finished it in a hurry, too. I hope everyone can improve together.
2 article comment: how to talk about a love of modern value? -Meng Shunzhen
Comments: The title of the article is very attractive and useful to some people. The content of this article is compiled from the video courseware of Liu Xuan's psychology class, which is similar to reading notes. You can really learn a lot about psychology from the article.
The article lists four common problems, and I agree with the last three. For the first kind, the article thinks that you should not look at each other's mobile phones when you are in love. This is controversial, and the first issue of "Seven Ba Shuo" has a debate on this theme. I think what a psychologist advocates is wrong.
The article has a more detailed layout and a longer length. In fact, each point can be written separately. In terms of language, personal suggestions are concise, and there are too many miscellaneous things, so be concise. Maybe I'm wrong, maybe all emotional articles are like this.
Finally, I wish you a happy love. [Ross]
1 1, Wu Muling-No comments, the red envelope has been sent.
12, Hu Meimei-no comments, no red envelopes.
13, Ma Lirong-too many!
14, Liu Xiaoqin-15 articles.
① Comment on the article: Ode to Joy 1 Five beauties and their families-horses.
The article describes the family background and personality characteristics of the five heroines, and the family background still has a great influence on their personalities.
Smooth writing and comfortable typesetting. I think it is great!
② Comments on the article: "Search now or memorize it"-Lei Xiao
The author pointed out the source of this article at the beginning, which naturally led to the problems to be discussed. Then describe the two viewpoints respectively, and finally put forward my own ideas. The thinking is clear. I'm here to talk about my views. Now that artificial intelligence is so powerful, why study? I think learning can make my brain more flexible, that is, the density of gray matter increases, thus increasing the chances of integration.
3 article comment: "Poor Charlie Collection-Munger's Universal Wisdom-Yan"
This is a reading note, which talks about five important concepts. I want to make a small suggestion. If we talk about a few concepts, explain everything thoroughly, and then give some easy-to-understand examples so that a liberal arts student who has never read this book can understand it, it will be very good. Is it too much to ask? Ha ha. Reading notes are for myself. If you want to promote learning through teaching, then study how to teach these concepts to readers, and it is estimated that you can write more articles.
Article comment: After reading so many successful experiences, let's look at a failure-the summary of Class 5 in May.
Xiang Ru is still asking too much of himself. If you can do more work, everyone will see your service to the class. Nothing is perfect, so don't be demanding.
Explore while doing, sum up a set of methods that suit you and balance work and life. Learning while doing, there will always be times when things go wrong. I am very happy to see your growth in the process!
⑤ Comment article: "How to influence parents with back-to-back solutions?" -Qin Ling
We just want to coax, cheat and be patient with our parents.
If we don't coax, naturally someone will coax. And it's also very good, that is, a salesman selling health care products.
Comments:
From the article, we can see that the author is filial to his parents and willing to spend time studying them, which is very rare.
Indeed, children don't work hard on the elderly, and the sellers of health care products will work hard for you.
I hope I can accept my children's filial piety, manage my finances well, eliminate worries and be an old lady who keeps pace with the times.
⑥ Comment article: "Children's Day"-Shang Chaoqing
I think the most valuable thing I can do to help children is to be myself, be a person who loves knowledge and pursues truth, and persist in lifelong learning. I don't think there is a better way to influence children's views on "learning".
Comments: The author's writing style is quite teacher-like. I feel familiar after reading a few words, haha. The author has a good attitude. First of all, he reviewed his parents' education and affirmed that they had done their best. Then think about how to be a good parent and how to educate your daughter. Finally, draw a conclusion, be yourself, be a persistent learner and set an example for your children. I think it's well written.
⑦ Comment on the article: "Enjoy it"-Hu Meimei
The author, a music teacher, described a little boy he taught, from being forced to learn the piano to coming to class, getting to know the teacher and starting a heart-to-heart conversation. It can be seen that the author is a patient and understanding teacher. The writing is fluent and eloquent. The children are lucky to meet you.
⑧ Comment article: "Face yourself sincerely-the first step, face up to your professional problems"-Ni Shuqing
The author summed up the problems he encountered in his work, and clarified his ideas in written form, which is of great significance for future improvement. Let me make a little suggestion. If we can classify these problems and give some examples, it may be clearer for readers.
Pet-name ruby comment article: The insurance scheme of the wallet series "Practice Cayrol Ye 007 324"-cayrolye.
Because of the illness of his family, the author studied the method of buying insurance for his family. I haven't studied this. My husband's company bought medical insurance for employees' families, but it was more worry-free. Students in need can read this article.
Attending comment article: "My College Entrance Examination Composition"-Zhou.
First, I checked the number of words in my composition. Well, more than 900 is enough. Then I thought, if the college entrance examination is so proactive, what a good school it would be! So now I give you full marks, vanity. Ha ha.
Commentary: "Being liked is not as good as being respected"-Wu Muling
When I was studying Elite Day, I thought of another author's related article and elaborated it according to my own understanding.
Comment article: "I received the first advertisement"-Du
The author recommended an app to watch HD videos. Interested parties can have a look.
Comment article: "Don't let friends gossip about you behind your back"-Chen Juanhua
The author is still a college student, with youthful vigor and childishness. Youth is capital. You have time to make mistakes and correct them.
Comment article: "Wait for the flowers to bloom with enough patience-answer friends with psoriasis"-Yan Hongyu
There is no unbearable night, and there is no waiting dawn. There are too many golden sentences, so let's take this example.
Feeling:
How well written!
Thanks to this experience, you became a doctor after a long illness and formed your own unique health care method. This is the most precious wealth. I studied Chinese medicine, but I didn't engage in medical work in the end. I only know a little, and I have never used it myself. Traditional Chinese medicine is empirical medicine, and you are already your own doctor.
In addition, the layout of this article is particularly beautiful and clear. I really want to learn typesetting with you.
? Comment article: "I want to talk to you"-Hui Yu
Be a good person in your world. I hope I can forget that I have you in my world. [I really don't want to choose! ]
Feeling:
I really don't want to comment. I want to cry with you. Every word is true, and every word is attached. How can two people come this far? In the face of words that reveal true feelings, all praise is pale. May you get out of the pain as soon as possible, because you have to hold up a sky for your children!