Ask the composition master to help me see what this composition material can do. Is the writing struggle off topic?
It is not very good to write about struggle. It mainly reflects an old view of China, which has been particularly prominent in rural China since ancient times. This view holds that being admitted to a university is just like being a top scholar, and it also embodies China's theory of training students through exam-oriented education. I suggest you start with students' life goals and life planning, and emphasize that reading is not the only way out. Take grassroots heroes Yun, Niu Gensheng, Liu Chuanzhi and Wang as examples.