Fan Wen:

"quenching" life

Lu boxin

Let life be quenched in suffering and let life shine in struggle.

Life is a piece of wrought iron with impurities. If we want to forge the radiant "Longquan" and "Taiya", we must endure pain, undergo tempering, remove impurities and move towards purity. Only by letting the hammer of suffering strike frequently can the spark take away everything that affects the quality of life, awaken tenacity and seek maturity.

In fact, as senior three students, we are also doing this kind of work. Have you ever found that on campus, students are trotting all the way, fighting for each other; Have you noticed that in the classroom, the students are silent and orderly; Have you noticed that on the desk, the students are burying their heads in hard work and racing against time. Don't you smell, on the playground, the slogan bursts, and the earth shakes; You can't smell it. In the morning reading class, the book sounds loud and beautiful. If you don't smell it, you will swear before class, and the sound is as deafening as Hong Zhong. Our classmates really have the ambition to win the moon for nine days and the courage to save the tiger from the dragon.

Our classmates all have their own role models. Please look at their rhetoric:

"Life is poor, why not struggle as calmly as Hong Zhanhui; Life meets a wheelchair, why not smile at the flame like Jin Jingri? Life encounters great power, why not be awed by the butcher's knife like Zhang Zhixin?

"The postman Wang Shunyou walked out of the rugged mountain road, the pilot Li Jianying slipped out of the unusual trajectory in the plane crash, and the peasant woman Lin Xiuzhen continued to write a legend on the ordinary road to help the elderly."

As young people in the new era, we should "let life be quenched in suffering and let life shine in struggle."

However, once suffering really comes, we are often at a loss. When the aura of staged success dazzles our eyes, we can't resist the huge paralyzing effect and fall into a gentle trap. When the temporarily frustrated whip is pumped into our hearts, we can't stand the torture of the bone marrow and fall to pieces on the bitter cliff; Finally, in the next contest, we either run away or disappear. Perhaps, success and disappointment have never visited us, and the feeling of being left out has frozen our once boiling blood like an ice cave, so that our actions are finally stuck on the symbol of zero. Then, a strange phenomenon happened. The deafening slogan on the surface can't hide the inner hesitation; Verbal promises can't shake a rock-solid bad habit. Scribbled strokes and irregular homework are like overwhelming plastic bags in scenic spots, which makes people feel heartbroken. Perseverance in the brow can't suppress the rebellion of habit. Facing all kinds of homework, I forgot to be calm step by step; In front of the grandiose "I am the master of learning", I forgot the elegance of overall consideration; Faced with the "red light" on the exercise book frequently, I calmly forgot to look back. Confused, panicked, confused. You have sadly become a prisoner of pain.

We are surprised to find that we can't just stay in words, but also implement it in action. If ambition is the bud of action, then action is the branch of ambition, and success is the similar fruit of the two. If you have ambition and do it vigorously, then suffering will be vulnerable.

The college entrance examination is just around the corner, and all the sufferings, like a flock of migratory locusts, pounce on the green hope in our hearts. Perhaps it is to dress ourselves up as many trivial and insignificant mistakes to test our will and see if we can eliminate them calmly; Maybe it has been disguised as a screen and a wall in front of us, waiting for us to find a way out. Perhaps the various problems that are constantly being cut and confused are its embodiment, waiting for you to sort them out one by one; Maybe just treat each subject coldly, waiting for you to arrange your time scientifically. Maybe an inexplicable anxiety storm is raging on your forehead, or maybe a sweet killer is waiting for an opportunity to devour your will. They all test your patience.

Maybe you are surrounded by pride, maybe you are suffering from failure, maybe you are struggling with difficulties in a helpless quagmire, maybe you are struggling with difficulties ... then, don't lose heart, you should continue to maintain good fighting spirit, so that you will eventually feel proud.

If suffering is a train, then our foreheads are rails, and the wheels of suffering run over our foreheads; If suffering is a fire, then our forehead is a pool of fire, so that the flame of suffering burns on our forehead; If suffering is a hammer, then our foreheads are chopping boards, so that the pounding of suffering can be heard on our foreheads. Action is better than action. We should ask suffering about Jiuding's weight with practical actions.

Let us once again blow the horn of marching into suffering: let life be quenched in suffering and let life shine in struggle.

Test analysis: this is a propositional composition, with a topic and a material. "Sudden death" is a very abstract topic. "Quenching" means that steel is suddenly cooled at a certain high temperature and reaches a certain hardness. According to this original intention, if we carefully read the materials given in the topic, it is not difficult to find that it tells us a truth, that is, "tempering" ourselves will make us stand higher, see farther, have stronger adaptability and make our lives more colorful.

Comments: For some abstract topics, such as responsibility, pursuit, tolerance, cooperation and friendliness. Write a narrative, you can think of it as "through a story I saw (heard and read) about XXX people (responsible or irresponsible), (tolerant or intolerant, (friendly or unfriendly)." ...