2. Composition Counseling for the Fourth Grade of Primary School [Composition Counseling for the Fourth Grade of Primary School] Teaching Plan of Composition Counseling Course for the Fourth Grade of Primary School 1. Compare the differences of composition training between primary school and junior high school (1). The goal of primary school students' composition: there are two main types of compositions written by primary school students in terms of genre: one is simple narrative; One kind is commonly used practical writing, which is helpful for the composition of the fourth grade in primary school. Simple narrative writing should include notes, travel notes, interviews, activities, writing landscapes, objects, etc. Commonly used practical articles mainly include: leave notes, messages, notices, bulletin boards, diaries, letters, etc. In the form of composition training, in addition to the commonly used propositional composition and semi-propositional composition, there are also training forms such as looking at pictures, supplementing the beginning, supplementing the end, abbreviations, modifying words with symbols, and changing the fragments that are not specific enough into concrete ones. The basic goal is to learn to choose materials, write an outline of the composition, and be able to write a central one. A simple narrative of about 400 words, true feelings and fluent sentences. (2) Analyze the following 20 essay topics and classify one thing in the summer vacation according to the content. I love the story that laughter is exchanged for sweat in my hometown. I am familiar with the person who wrote the notice in the morning. Write a thank-you letter to love me. I love farmers' markets (see picture composition). A kind-hearted man wrote a letter to Mr. Zhao and recorded a personal experience. A man I respect wrote a blackboard newspaper to hire my good teacher. Two or three things about my life after school. Narrative: (1) Writer: (2) Notes: (3) Notes: (4) Activities: (5) Object: Practical writing: (3) Literary works express meaning word by word. They can write in ordinary ways according to the needs of daily life. Junior high school is an important stage of a person's personality growth, so personalized writing has become the most important requirement in junior high school students' writing. It requires junior high school students to strengthen their life accumulation, use the most appropriate and personalized materials, and use the most appropriate expressions and forms. To show a deeper understanding of life. (4) The general form of junior high school students' composition training: practical writing training such as propositional composition, semi-propositional composition, topic composition and material topic composition. In recent years, the hot topic of exams is topic composition. Topic composition generally consists of three parts: prompt, topic and writing requirements. We will guide you to carry out specific training later. Second, personalized writing training (about 400 words) Scheme 1: Customize the topic (optional), content and genre according to your usual writing habits, and write down what you want to say most recently. Option 2: Go to the farmer's market (or your favorite place) and write down your experiences and feelings. How to write an article (1) Content: How to modify the composition 1. Famous sayings about article revision. Deliberate good sentences repeatedly. It is better to do good than to do good. 3. He Qifang: Throughout the ages, whoever writes well has probably worked hard on revision. 4. Ye Shengtao: It's a good habit to read things several times, revise them and then calculate. 5. Lu Xun: Read it at least twice and do your best. It's not a pity. Second, the story about the revision of the article: 1. Bai Juyi's poems are easy to understand, even an illiterate old woman can understand them. One day, Bai Juyi read a well-written poem to her neighbor's old woman, who didn't understand it at first. Bai Juyi went back and carefully revised it, and then read it to her, but the old woman still didn't understand. He is only satisfied. 2. According to legend, Wang Anshi, a famous litterateur in the Northern Song Dynasty and one of the eight masters in the Tang and Song Dynasties, repeatedly scrutinized and revised the word "green" when writing the sentence "Spring breeze is greener in Jiang Nanan", from "to" to "successively. That's why this famous saying has been passed down to this day. 3. The essay "Mr. Fujino" by Mr. Lu Xun, a great master of China literature, is less than 4,000 words, but there are more than 160 changes. Hamming 4. According to records, the great novels War and Peace by Russian writers Lev and Tolstoy have been revised seven times, while Anna? Karenina has been written for five years, and only the beginning has been revised 20 times. Wei revised the end of A Farewell to Arms, that is, the last page, and revised it 39 times before he was satisfied. Three. The revision of (1) regular composition is 1. Pay attention to external beauty: First of all, the basic requirements of writing modification are correct font, clear strokes and proper modification. It's a blur. Whether the font is correct or not and whether the words are neat or not is also one of the manifestations of a person's language quality. A person with high cultural accomplishment must master Chinese characters, develop good writing habits and give people a good impression. Second, we should pay attention to the style of writing. For line format, the font size should be moderate, the stroke thickness should be appropriate, and the word order should be just right. Horizontal paper and check paper. This is something you should pay attention to when writing. In addition, punctuation marks not only play the role of sentence breaking, but also play a very important role in tone, which directly affects the ideological expression of the article. Therefore, for punctuation, the usage should conform to the regulations, the standard of formal writing, and the format should be used properly. For example, various periods cannot appear at the beginning of a line; Quotes, brackets and the first half of the title cannot appear at the end of the line, and the second half does not appear at the beginning of the line; Dashes and ellipses occupy two spaces and remain open; Serial number and interval number occupy a grid, and these four symbols live on the line when writing; The words are marked with bullets, appropriate titles and wavy titles. 2. Pay attention to inner beauty: modify the conception, structure and language (1)(2)(3)(4)(5)(6)(7) The specific steps and methods are as follows: See if the content of the article is relevant and the center is clear. The missing places should be filled. Second, whether the structure of the article is clear depends on whether the paragraph arrangement is reasonable, whether the details are appropriate and focused, whether the transition is natural, whether the whole process is taken care of, and so on. If there are any inadequacies or deficiencies, they should be adjusted or changed, and if there are any repeated paragraphs, they should be deleted. Third, look at the language of the article.
There are many things I can't forget in my childhood, but one thing (comparison) is vivid in my mind.
Once, I went to live with my grandfather. One day at noon, grandpa was humming a tune and lying in a chair (taking a lunch break).
Grandpa likes Peking Opera very much and wants to be a Peking Opera actor. I think I will help him realize this wish! From the beginning, I took out ink and watercolor pens from the drawer, and all I needed was the east wind-when grandpa was asleep. At two o'clock in the afternoon, I waved in front of my grandfather and made sure he was asleep before I dared to touch my hand.
I dipped my brush in ink and got it ready. I thought: What are the faces of the actors who sing Beijing Opera? At this time, I thought, the face (spectrum) must look like a clown.
I started painting. First draw a circle on the nose with a red watercolor pen, and then draw two dark circles on the eyes with ink.
At first glance, it looks like a living invincible giant panda! I am very satisfied with my masterpiece. Grandpa woke up, hummed a few songs and went to see the Peking Opera Theatre. Dad smiled from ear to ear when he saw grandpa. At this time, my mother came and saw my grandfather. She even laughed her head off. Grandpa is a monk in Zhang Er-at a loss.
I asked grandpa to look in the mirror. Grandpa looked in the mirror, saw himself and laughed with us. Students, do you think this is funny? .
4. Talk about the teacher's composition topic with interval numbers. The beautiful campus is like a lush tree, and we live in it like happy birds-we learn from our classmates and play games. However, the young eagle always leaves the embrace of the tree and flies towards higher and farther goals. Now I am about to graduate and leave my alma mater, and I am reluctant to go.
Flowers thank the rain and dew, because the rain and dew moistened its growth; Grass is grateful to the earth, because the earth has given it a living space; I want to thank my alma mater, because he taught me the ability to deal with people and master knowledge.
Time, like rushing water, is fleeting. Memories are like warm spring breeze, blowing through my heart. Like a clear spring, it flows through my heart In a blink of an eye, I have been in the first grade, from a child who knows nothing to a teenager full of dreams; From a primary school student who doesn't know A, B, C and D to a middle school student who can write articles in English; From a primary school student who only knows 1+ 1=2, he has grown into a middle school student who can know equations and do geometry; From an illiterate primary school student to a middle school student who can write more than 600 words, I should thank my alma mater, Boao Primary School, and all the teachers. Unforgettable parting attachment. Here, we have hesitated, been happy, moved, failed and succeeded; Here, we learned to be a man, do things and learn; Here, we have a strong book fragrance; On campus, there are hearty laughter; Every grass and tree in Fenghua Primary School remembers our songs and laughter. The morning light and the stars can prove it, and the classroom can also prove that we spent the most precious youth here! We should be grateful to our alma mater! It was she who used her extensive academic background to teach us the truth of dealing with people and the ability to contribute to the country.
In the 1 1 year when I was growing up, there were many people who deserved my gratitude. Among them, my alma mater taught me a lot of knowledge, and some teachers taught me how to be a man. This is the first starting point of my life. With these teachers, I took a good step and entered middle school smoothly. Leaving is to fulfill the expectations of my alma mater for every graduate; Leaving is to rush to a grand life banquet and complete our mission.
Only when the mountain is grateful can it become lofty; Only when the sea is grateful to the river can it become broad; Only by thanking the birds can the sky become magnificent. Our alma mater laid a good foundation for us, but she didn't ask for anything in return. She only hopes that we can become the pillars of the country, which means that we will be separated from our alma mater. At this time, we have been unable to do anything for our alma mater.
Now, I'm in the sixth grade, but I'll never forget my alma mater, which gave me a good growth environment and explored my potential. When I grow up, no matter what I do, I will go back to my alma mater and try my best to build the school better. I believe that with my alma mater as a solid foundation, I will succeed!
Today, we are listening to wonderful symphonic poems on campus and growing up healthily. Tomorrow, we will bravely go on the road and walk on the road to the ideal. For a better tomorrow, we should read more books; Read good books; Experience happiness in books; Draw nutrition. At this moment, I remembered a poem: Plum Blossom Pond is not as good as my affection with my alma mater.
5. Talk about the teacher's composition topic with interval lines. The beautiful campus is like a lush tree, and we inhabit it like happy birds-we learn from our classmates and play games.
However, the young eagle always leaves the embrace of the tree and flies towards higher and farther goals. Now I am about to graduate and leave my alma mater, and I am reluctant to go.
Flowers thank the rain and dew, because the rain and dew moistened its growth; Grass is grateful to the earth, because the earth has given it a living space; I want to thank my alma mater, because he taught me the ability to deal with people and master knowledge. Time, like rushing water, is fleeting.
Memories are like warm spring breeze, blowing through my heart. Like a clear spring, it flows through my heart
In a blink of an eye, I have been in the first grade, from a child who knows nothing to a teenager full of dreams; From a primary school student who doesn't know A, B, C and D to a middle school student who can write articles in English; From a primary school student who only knows 1+ 1=2, he has grown into a middle school student who can know equations and do geometry; From an illiterate primary school student to a middle school student who can write more than 600 words, I should thank my alma mater, Boao Primary School, and all the teachers. Unforgettable parting attachment.
Here, we have hesitated, been happy, moved, failed and succeeded; Here, we learned to be a man, do things and learn; Here, we have a strong book fragrance; On campus, there are hearty laughter; Every grass and tree in Fenghua Primary School remembers our songs and laughter. The morning light and the stars can prove it, and the classroom can also prove that we spent the most precious youth here! We should be grateful to our alma mater! It was she who used her extensive academic background to teach us the truth of dealing with people and the ability to contribute to the country.
In the 1 1 year when I was growing up, there were many people who deserved my gratitude. Among them, my alma mater taught me a lot of knowledge, and some teachers taught me how to be a man.
This is the first starting point of my life. With these teachers, I took a good step and entered middle school smoothly.
Leaving is to fulfill the expectations of my alma mater for every graduate; Leaving is to rush to a grand life banquet and complete our mission. Only when the mountain is grateful can it become lofty; Only when the sea is grateful to the river can it become broad; Only by thanking the birds can the sky become magnificent.
Our alma mater laid a good foundation for us, but she didn't ask for anything in return. She only hopes that we can become the pillars of the country, which means that we will be separated from our alma mater. At this time, we have been unable to do anything for our alma mater. Now, I'm in the sixth grade, but I'll never forget my alma mater, which gave me a good growth environment and explored my potential.
When I grow up, no matter what I do, I will go back to my alma mater and try my best to build the school better. I believe that with my alma mater as a solid foundation, I will succeed! Today, we are listening to wonderful symphonic poems on campus and growing up healthily. Tomorrow, we will bravely go on the road and walk on the road to the ideal.
For a better tomorrow, we should read more books; Read good books; Experience happiness in books; Draw nutrition. At this moment, I remembered a poem: Plum Blossom Pond is not as good as my affection with my alma mater.