The theme of the essay writing activity tonight is "How to make the article profound". First of all, it is the classic speech of Mr. Ma, then the exchange of teachers in the room, and finally the guidance of Mr. Cao Hongbiao from a strategically advantageous position. Tonight's activities are effective and have practical guiding effect on our Chinese teaching. The following is the written content exchanged by the room teacher. Ma said to everyone: the narrative is full of feelings and the discussion is under way. Sublimate the theme in refined sentences. Express your ambition. Infiltrate feelings in narration, light up philosophical thinking in discussion, and infiltrate rationality in lyric. Sublimate the theme in refined sentences. Yawei Hu said to everyone: I think in junior high school, students should recite a famous saying every day, so that the articles written will be much more profound. Pupils often imitate compositions, and Guo Chenxian, the second middle school in Puyang County, should have an example. She said to everyone: you can see the forest from the tree and the whole from the individual, and everyone will like it. There will be depth. For example, I hope that people will last for a long time and students' compositions will be deep. It is really necessary to understand the times, life and individual groups. It's really a good idea. The thickness of reading is the depth of composition-thus, students' composition is very accurate. Usually pay more attention to some national events and make some records. When writing a composition, writing novels and fairy tales is also good. Nanle Shen Xiayun tells everyone that the thickness of reading is the depth of composition. Cultivate students to have more feelings about what they have experienced and are experiencing, and constantly improve the depth of their thoughts. The depth of thought is the depth of composition. The best way is to read and write more, and this is the beauty of tasting language. The depth of language is the depth of composition. Cultivate students to have more feelings about what they have experienced and are experiencing. Summarize more and constantly improve your ideological depth. The depth of thought is the depth of composition. Guide imitation writing. If students really master the writing method of this kind of article several times, it may not be difficult for students to take the exam. Life values are fundamental, and incorrect values will distort the theme to carry Tao, and Tao should be an understanding of life and everything. Susu said to everyone: An article is very good. Look at things not one-sidedly, but dialectically; Transcend oneself and pursue a higher realm; Good at using some appropriate expressions, etc. Only in this way can our article be attractive. If the article is well written, it is important to observe, examine and understand objective things with full flavor. We can condense the theme of "everyone has something in his heart" into "everyone has nothing in his pen". Fan Xian-Yu Qiucun tells everyone that children who love reading have deep intentions in their exercises and good language outlook. Zhao told everyone that they usually pay more attention to some national affairs and make some notes when writing to express their feelings. There are also some celebrities who are determined to accumulate more materials. Su Zhimin told Wang Guanxi, the central school of Zhifang Township. This means that it is easy to write an article if you are willing to work hard on reading. In No.1 Middle School, Zheng Shichuan told Ma that the improvement of composition is related to students' reading. You must practice writing more. I think we should find model essays for students to appreciate and analyze their writing characteristics. Create a collaboration platform. To stimulate students' creative desire, Guan Zijun said to everyone: I think to make students write in depth, we must start from the following four aspects: 1, seeing the big from the small and understanding life. 2. Diligent accumulation improves reading. 3. Observe carefully and think deeply. 4. Pen and ink remain unchanged, and the concept is correct. Children must be educated to have a correct outlook on life and values. Peisi stage. Teachers should correctly guide students' thoughts. Multi-angle thinking training can enable students to refine innovative themes. What students lack, we should cultivate in our study and life. If students lack life experience, let them experience it in their studies or activities, talk about their feelings after the experience, and then sublimate their writing. The true feelings of composition are the feelings of students after experiencing life. Chen Changhong of Oilfield No.1 Middle School told everyone: In short, in narrative and argumentative essays, students are guided to analyze the theme step by step with in-depth conception methods; The profundity is revealed. Yang Guoping from Yuancun Middle School in Nanle County told everyone: The article comes from careful observation at ordinary times, plus diligent pen and teacher's guidance. Only in this way can the article shine! Lei Haishan, a student in a small oil field, told everyone that without a lot of reading, writing skills can only be passive water without roots. Fan told everyone that only when students have the ability to write a composition can they have profound thoughts. It should be said that students with high writing level can often write a profound composition. It is difficult for students with weak language skills to write profound compositions, which is a gradual process. The profundity of their thoughts is not deliberately shown. Without a deep understanding of life and a unique insight into life, the composition will not be profound. The profundity of thinking determines the composition, which comes from the accumulation of knowledge, from the usual use of the brain and from the habit of thinking about everything. A good composition comes from a good idea. I think it means having a good idea, which is beyond the average person's good idea. Have a good idea before writing. When writing, you will always write a meaningful composition, either with feelings in your words or lyrical comments at the end. Generally speaking, material composition is conducive to training students' creative ability. Because there are rich ideological connotations in materials, as long as you can dig and concentrate on materials and analysis, you can find valuable ideas from materials. This view is an idea. It is not in favor of students' deliberate writing that people have nothing but themselves, and people have nothing new. Because a good idea is a good inspiration, and the time of composition class is short, students may not always have inspiration. So first of all, write a composition from normal thinking. If you have a new idea, write a novel and meaningful composition. Accumulate thinking, accumulate improper nerds, and think unimaginatively. Through composition training, students' comprehensive ability is cultivated, and their ability to see people, things, society and the world in an all-round way when they grow up is cultivated. Zhu Jinfang said to Ma: First, the article is intended to arrange content levels and adopt writing methods such as layer-by-layer analysis, positive and negative comparison, quoting famous sayings and dialectical analysis, so that the article gives people a "profound" feeling. Second, in writing techniques, we should make our own views impressive. Specifically, when writing, we should make the views and contents of the article appear hierarchical, developed and focused through the arrangement of structure, the selection of materials, transition and cohesion, the use of language, conclusion and other related writing skills, thus making the article more profound. Linear example demonstration. Fourth, the article should have its own thoughts and feelings in content, and give people speculative power and momentum. Grasping dialectical analysis is an important part of the profound content of the article. Fifthly, from the linguistic point of view, the proper use of epigrams in famous sentences can enhance the expository nature of the article; Rich language can also enhance the depth of the argument; Carefully arranging important paragraphs or wonderful sentences in a certain part of the structure, the so-called "finishing touch", can also enhance the strength of the article. Whether it is the center of narrative or argumentative, its main purpose is to move people with true feelings, or to philosophize about life, or to pay attention to a certain situation in society. It should be said that it is more profound or slightly profound in line with the above three aspects. Feeling is the highest state of learning. Only when you feel, can you get something, not. It will be a pity. From life, reading and active thinking exercise, we can promote the breadth and depth of thinking, thus improving the depth of composition. Li Huiping of Puyang County told us that as long as we break the old thinking mode, actively train our thinking ability, develop good Chinese learning habits and form the concept of learning Chinese, we will certainly have a profound outlook on life and values in composition teaching. Bloom brilliant thoughts. Conception is a common problem in many students' compositions now. Some ideas have simply become irrefutable iron formulas-writing candles must be "burning yourself and illuminating others"; Writing that bees must be "getting less, paying more"; These formulas "have a long history" and "far-reaching influence", which fetters students' creative thinking and stifles the individuality of students' compositions. Wang Yongmin of Nanle told everyone that the primary purpose of composition as a kind of training is to improve the ability to observe, comprehend and refine life. Only in this way can we make our eyes more and more acute, our thoughts more and more profound, our emotions more and more abundant, and our writing more and more skillful and true. A person full of vulgar tastes, his true feelings will not be healthy and noble. As a student, it is very important to keep a pure and healthy heart. "When viewed from one side of the mountain, everything has many sides, so things will be viewed from different angles. How to think and observe from multiple angles? First of all, you can analyze the problem. Secondly, we can analyze different aspects of participating in activities. Third, we can analyze the nature of the event. Fourth, from different angles, Zhu Yurong in the real world tells everyone that he has a thick accumulation, a deep ideological understanding and a poor discipline. Yang Guoping, from Yuancun Middle School in Nanle County, told everyone: I think that if you want to do the article better, you can't do it without reading at ordinary times. There is no "ink" in your stomach. You need to learn the strengths of many families and communicate more in language. If you read too much, you will become "smelly water" even if you don't communicate. A good idea needs the teacher's careful guidance and careful reading, summing up the strengths of many families and using it for me! Ren of Nanleyuan Middle School tells us that reverse thinking can also help students open their minds. This method is very good. It's worth a try. Wang Yongmin of Nanleyuan Village told us that when the ancients wrote poems, they advocated "seeing people but not learning". When observing people, things and things, we should be able to find new perspectives or angles, or observe them more deeply and carefully than others. Sun Yanjuan of Nanleyuan Village told us: People are superior to me. " This sense of superiority may be based on profound meaning and breadth. Ge of Xinzhuang Township Middle School in Fan County told everyone: I think the thinking should be not only new, but also profound. This requires us to explore the intrinsic nature of things through their phenomena, to think about life, to think about what is meaningful and valuable to society, to go further in general understanding, and to discover things that others have not discovered. And it can enlighten people. Wang Ruijin of Fanxian said to everyone: Read more and accumulate more. Accumulate language and ideas. Understand life from a small perspective. Deeply feel life and develop study habits. Observe carefully and think deeply. Song Xiuge of Fanxian said to everyone: Promote the breadth and depth of your thinking in positive thinking practice to improve the depth of your composition. Wang Shouyong of Liangzhuang No.1 Middle School in Puyang County told Fan Hanchaohui: The concept of the article can be new, but it can't be true. It embodies the students' ability to see things in detail, which needs us to focus on training. Jiangshan Duojiao said to everyone: Don't give up the truth and take the new, don't give up the truth and take the beauty. Really first, then goodness and beauty. Otherwise, goodness is hypocrisy and beauty is false beauty. There are two main feelings for students to remember the truth, namely, a sense of retrospect and a sense of reading. Observing life, reading articles is a branch, and feeling is real. A set of examples is enough. The depth of the article's intention is best not to encourage Miao Miao, but to provide students with opportunities to experience life and let them write down their own ideas. Life experience is not so deep, intention has risen, and the previous content can't keep up with Nanle Guo Huiyun. Let us all miss reeds. Time is reserved for those who are prepared. Let's get ready. Hu Yuling of Fanxian Experimental Middle School said to everyone: The ancients said: "Be pure and consistent." Wang Fuzhi said, "The idea is still handsome. Without a handsome soldier, it is called martial harmony. " Let's work hard. Ordinary people say: education is to awaken and release people, and writing is an important way. Teaching to become an aspiring person is more important than writing in a sense. Everyone is wise. Write down what you want to say. When students say what others say, Chinese teachers should lead students to write what they want to say. Write a new life quickly from a new perspective. How to write a composition? The word order should be specific and clear. The theme orientation of the composition determines the quality of the article.