Friendship, what a sacred word, contains the feelings between friends. Speaking of friends, I think everyone has friends, and everyone's friends are different. Some people have one good friend, while others have two good friends. And I have five good friends: honest and civilized Li Kaixuan; Understand Yu Bin; Lively and lovely Yin Siyuan; Learn from the excellent Qian Chong, and make steady progress. They are always with me. We stick together almost every day, as if stuck together. It takes two or three people to do everything, which makes the head teacher, Mr. Wang, very helpless.
We have been together for a long time, so there are many happy things. Although sometimes there are contradictions, we are still good friends after the rain clears.
Once, Yan Jin said, "I wish I were a boy!" " "Qian Chong inexplicably asked," Why? " Yan Jin replied, "Because boys can shave their heads and spoons. How beautiful! "After listening to this, we all laughed, and Yan Jin liked the bald gourd ladle. After seeing the bald gourd ladle, he said loudly, "Yan Jin, your favorite hairstyle!" " "
Once in physical education class, we stayed bored. Yu Bin said, "Shall we play chicken with eagles?" Almost everyone agreed, except Yan Jin who didn't want to play. We advised her, "Play! Play! " Finally, I was persuaded that Yan Jin is a hen, Li Kaixuan is an eagle, and we are chickens. The game is in progress. Suddenly, Yu Bin rushed out of the team, hugged Li Kaixuan and said, "I caught it, I caught it, I caught the eagle!" Yin Siyuan smiled and said, "When did the eagle catch the chicken? It is obvious that the chicken caught the eagle! "
On another occasion, Wang Siyuan provoked Yu Bin, who asked us for help. Our whole army fought and cleaned up Wang Siyuan. Wang Siyuan huddled in the corner and shouted, "Help! Help! " Seeing that no one paid attention, he begged us again; Sister, I was wrong, wrong. ' '
We went back to our seats and burst into laughter. Through this incident, I also realized that unity is strength.
There is so much happiness between my friends and me that I can't count it. I hope our friendship will last forever and give me endless happiness. ...
2. How to write my happy composition, where to start, and how to find the beginning and the end 1: The beginning: happiness, like a shadow, follows us everywhere and gives us happiness. I feel very comfortable when I am happy, and everything looks beautiful. My happiness, there are many, many, don't worry, wait for me to finish.
Conclusion: Yes, happiness is inseparable from you like a shadow. As long as you look for happiness, find happiness and pursue happiness, then happiness will follow you like a shadow. In fact, when you really have happiness, there will be an invisible happy tail behind you.
2. Beginning: Reading is a pleasure. For those who love reading, once they read it, they can't stop, can't give up reading, and want people to read to the ends of the earth. Some people say: "The deepest and most peaceful happiness in life is to look at the world, look at this life, and slowly taste its harmony and beauty." Calm down and open the book, those deposited ink will fill the space little by little, and those dusty happiness will open little by little. Reading is really interesting!
Ending: The book is the ladder of my progress; Books are the key to my wisdom. Books are the source of my inspiration and creation; Books are my motivation for progress; Books are the steering wheel of my life; Books are an indispensable part of my life. Books, like vacuum cleaners, remove stains from people's souls; Books, like my bosom friends, accompany us through the vicissitudes of life. I love books, and I love reading more. Books are the source of my happiness and will benefit me all my life. Books, the source of my happiness, will accompany me all my life. ...
I brought myself happiness. How to write happiness at the beginning is just a very intuitive emotion, the simplest emotion endowed by nature-sometimes, happiness doesn't need any reason.
Sometimes, quietly, a person riding a bicycle in the shade, playing hide-and-seek with the lights in the mottled sunshine; In the dotted night, thinking about the story of cowherd and weaver girl, eating crisp and sweet watermelon; Peeking at vines with little green heads sticking out of their balconies; Standing under the sea of flowers, enjoying the beautiful scenery of falling flowers in the wind and smelling the refreshing taste of the mixture of soil and flowers; Walking alone on the horizon in the evening, I was dragged by the sunset for a long time, because there are my parents ............................................................................................................................................. at the other end of the horizon. Some people say that happiness is far away from you, but I say that happiness is everywhere.
Happiness is created by yourself, and you are the source of happiness! Life is so short that I believe everyone wants to spend it happily. But life is bound to have many bumps, which make us unhappy.
Then if you want to have happiness, you need to pursue happiness. I always feel that happiness seems to have no fate with me. Sometimes, I even think that I was too happy in my last life, so the happiness in this life has left me.
My living conditions are not too bad, my academic performance is not so backward, I have no ideological burden and I don't have to do housework. It can be said that I am a little princess with clothes to reach out and food to eat. And I hear praises from my parents, teachers, friends and neighbors almost every day … but I often feel that I have too little happiness in my life.
This idea has been bothering me for a long time. Until now, I found that there are many, many happiness around me. Who can say that I will live in melancholy forever? Who can say that he is an unhappy person? Who can say that there is no happiness around you? I am afraid that we don't have.
Because happiness is always around people, including me. Whenever I am lonely, there will always be friends who send me kind care-a candy, a greeting, even if there is only a smile, it will scatter sunshine into my lonely heart, unlock my heart and make me have unlimited happiness.
Because I have friends, I will say, "Happiness is around me." .
4. How to start a happy composition? How to end a composition? If the beginning is compared to "firecrackers", then the end is like "bells".
The ancients said: "A good ending is like chewing dried fruit and tasting fragrant tea, which makes people memorable." Like the beginning, the ending is also very important.
It would be a pity if an article with a clear theme and a novel angle was ruined by an ominous ending when it was finished! The ending should not only serve the content and center of the article, but also be restricted by the "beginning", which increases the difficulty of writing the ending. People call the end of a good article "leopard tail". Judging from the composition of the senior high school entrance examination, although the ending of the article is not necessarily required to be "leopard tail", it is also required to be concise, vivid and just right.
Generally speaking, the common mistakes at the end of students' compositions are: ① gild the lily. That is to say, the full text is over, which should be thought-provoking, but the author is still uneasy and determined to shake a few words, leaving the whereabouts of people who don't need to be explained one by one and piercing the meaning that could have been realized.
Empty slogans. Finally, in order to show his position and attitude, he shouted something irrelevant to the content of the article, which was a big theme.
3 sloppily. The meaning of the ending is clear, but it is too late to finish, which conflicts with the theme of the article.
From this point of view, the ending of the senior high school entrance examination composition is particularly important. How to write a good ending and improve the quality of exam composition? The following are the commonly used ending techniques for senior high school entrance examination compositions. 1, natural beam.
No matter what style of article, after expressing the content, it naturally closes the full text, instead of designing profound philosophical sentences and carving rich symbolic forms. This ending is called "natural ending". It completely avoids the ending fault of gilding the lily and moaning without illness. It is concise, simple and unpretentious, and is widely used in the composition of senior high school entrance examination.
The composition atmosphere in the examination room is tense and the competition is fierce, so we should not pay too much attention to "form" and "law". As long as you are rich, you can play freely and you can fully express your feelings. However, paying attention to "nature" does not mean being arbitrary and hasty, but ending the overall situation along the natural trend of literary development.
There are many such examples in the learned text, so I won't repeat them here. 2. Echo from beginning to end.
The end should echo the beginning, write a sentence that echoes the beginning, and don't simply repeat it. This way of ending is a common way of ending all kinds of articles. This method can arouse readers' psychological aesthetic feeling and produce a feeling of rounded head and tail.
For example, A Precious Shirt says, "In my house, there is a white shirt, which is really cool." Finally, I wrote: "I have carefully collected this precious shirt for four years, and I have never been willing to wear it once."
Praise the end of the poplar and the beginning echoed at a distance: "I want to praise the poplar loudly!" " 3, the pawn Zhang Xianzhi style. This way of ending is to express the theme clearly at the end of the article, relying on the content of the full text and using concise language, or to explain the writing intention clearly at the end of the full text, so this way of ending is also called "making the finishing point".
For example, at the end of Jujube Kernel, it reads: "Changing the nation does not mean changing the national feelings. No nation is so attached to its homeland as we are." At the end of "Remember a Spinning Wheel", I wrote: "It is a pleasure to struggle with difficulties.
-Remember the spinning wheel. "4. Famous aphorisms.
Ending with famous aphorisms and poems is intended to extend the article and reveal the true meaning of some kind of life. It often appears at the end of essays, narratives and essays. In a few words, it expresses profound and thought-provoking philosophical or warning content, which is deeply imprinted in readers' hearts and has the effect of "endless words and endless meanings"
At the end of "Pear Blossoms in the Post Road", it reads: "Pears in the Post Road are everywhere." 5. Lyric discussion.
Ending an article with lyrical comments can express the feelings of the author, arouse the emotional waves of readers and arouse their voices, which has a strong artistic appeal. This way of ending is mainly used in narrative, explanatory and argumentative writing.
There are various forms of the ending of lyric discussion, so the ending is more free. A good lyric discussion ending will inevitably bring true feelings and give readers a sense of reality and sufficiency. For example, at the end of Flower Market, it says, "She stands among hundreds of flowers with a smile, like a flower, like a beautiful and elegant orchid."
Another example is the two natural paragraphs at the end of Missing Mother, which are typical lyrical endings. The composition should be done in one go, and the ending should be in the same strain as the previous text, which is indispensable.
The end of a composition is the same as the beginning, although it is different, it also has its own rules to follow. The above ending methods are just some common ending methods, so don't copy them mechanically. The really good ending lies in the students' solid training at ordinary times, in the candidates' improvisation and in the candidates' "extra-poetic merits".
Please look at the end of a candidate's composition: If life is no longer green, we are still looking for it. Why can't we take actions to protect green and the environment, so that we can always have green? At that time, green would sing: "I come gently, just like you (desert) walk quietly ..." (Anonymous "If life is no longer green") Comments: The author naturally thinks of green from the environment, and then launches a topic around "If life is no longer green". The article starts with the comparison of "past", "today" and "tomorrow"
Then, he skillfully used the beautiful sentence in Xu Zhimo's Farewell to Cambridge, which triggered thinking about life without green, leaving room for imagination. Middle school students' friends, there is no fixed method for writing. Which ending method you use depends on the stylistic requirements and your own preferences, and you can't copy dogma.
If some can be discussed, some can be described, some can be suspended, some can be quoted, and so on. Middle school students' friends also need to exercise more and experience more in practice, and try their best to explore in order to achieve the same effect.
In this way, I believe that the students will be able to write the ending of "When the bell rings, the reverberation will be around the beam". Migration training The ancients said, "A good ending is like chewing dried fruit and tasting fragrant tea.
My happiest day, composition, how to write my hometown at the beginning, it is a beautiful city, and the whole city is full of green breath.
. In the green belt in the middle of the long road, the trees with lush green leaves look so vibrant that they stand solemnly like soldiers.
The green branches and leaves are shining in the sun, so fresh and dazzling. The breeze blows through the leaves and makes green waves, which is very beautiful.
Flowers, bees and butterflies near the trees gather together like a market, forming a beautiful scenery in Cixi. In spring, the river in front of the house is crystal clear and sparkling, like a mirror.
Lively and lovely little fish are playing in the water, as if playing hide-and-seek with them. The grass on the side is green, covered with green leaves.
The trees in the sky stand upright behind the house and stand there proudly like a soldier. The children are playing under a century-old tree.
The farmer's uncle is busy transplanting rice seedlings to prepare for the autumn harvest. In summer, pomegranate flowers on the roadside and lotus flowers in the pond are also competing to open.
When the fiery red sun rises, lotus and dew are reflected as fiery red. A gust of wind blew, and the farmer's uncle showed a smile on his face.
In autumn, farmers' uncles gathered in pieces of hard-working rice, golden, and farmers' uncles were happily harvesting rice. The mountain is more lively, look! Apple Orchard, the apple orchard is full of fire. Passing through the apple orchard, we come to the orange orchard. The golden oranges, red dates and grapes ... are a scene of bumper harvest.
In winter, the wind is biting. The earth is covered with layers of snow, but my hometown is still beautiful.
Snowflakes are still falling, and I can't help thinking, "Like the strong wind in spring, it blows at night and blows the petals of ten thousand pear trees." I praise the beautiful scenery of my hometown, because in my eyes, my hometown is such a beautiful word; Hometown, a warm home; Hometown, an elegant place.
Location. Not as warm as home.
My hometown is surrounded by green fields and people are busy every day. In the field, in spring, there are tall sheds and iron shelves everywhere, like a small tribe; In summer, when the plastic in the greenhouse is taken, it is full of green melon branches and golden melons; In autumn, there is a mature atmosphere in the village. Looking at the field, it was golden, and everyone in the village laughed. It snowed heavily in winter, putting a snow-white cotton-padded jacket on the village.
The fields are more beautiful. Snowflakes fall on the fields, which are extraordinarily beautiful and vast. My hometown has different beautiful scenery in four seasons, and Tao Tao intoxicated my heart.
Let me immerse myself in the beautiful scenery all year round. It is really "knowing people and being good at their duties"
I love my hometown and stare at first frost, because its beautiful scenery intoxicated me, because it gave birth to me. Because it taught me.
Love my hometown, it is fertile ground and pure land for educating people; In my mind, it has many unique features that places of interest can't match.
6. How to write at the beginning of the composition "I have my happiness" (Shunde Teaching and Research Section) Jia Baoyu said a very insightful sentence when commenting on the Grand View Garden: all beauty must be "natural and interesting".
The excellent college entrance examination composition of millions of candidates in China cannot be separated from a "reason" and a "fun". The college entrance examination magazine collected and sorted out the excellent compositions of the college entrance examination in recent years, and found that there are many remarkable places, but they are all interesting.
Just reading the beginning and end of these articles is enough to make us feel gratified and encouraged. Let's classify them and dedicate them to you. Maybe you can learn from them.
First, the most taboo to read the opening is to give people the feeling of digression with a pen. It directly tells the marking teacher that the author has not carefully judged the meaning of the question, and the composition score will be greatly reduced. Please look at the beginning of several compositions in the 2004 Guangdong College Entrance Examination.
Example 1 "remembered by language and communication": "Look at the flowers blooming and falling, the clouds are rolling and the clouds are comfortable. The bright sunshine in early spring reveals the breath of summer; The lush green clothes in midsummer indicate the harvest in autumn; The fruit of autumn shows the bleak winter.
The four seasons cycle, autumn comes and winter comes, and everything in nature is wonderful. How can we expect the hope of early spring without the baptism of severe winter? Our human society is just like nature. Without language connection and the same lifestyle, how can we connect the world into a whole and build a bridge of communication? "The metaphor at the beginning is improper, and the previous metaphor part is not well paved in similarities.
Why do you say that? Language and communication are the relationship between premise and result, but where is the relationship between "green dress" and "bumper harvest", "fruit" and "bleak"? In particular, the rhetorical question "How can we hope for early spring without the baptism of severe winter" has nothing to do with the topic. Example 2 "Spiritual interaction": "Trees never laugh at the weakness of grass, which, though weak, adds green to the grassland; Peony never laughs at the simplicity of wild flowers. Although wild flowers are simple, they bring infinite vitality to the earth.
Trees and grass, peony and wild flowers can be harmonious because they have a common language, communicate with each other and interact with each other. "At the beginning, I was close to the topic and found no similarities, which seemed far-fetched.
Example 3 "Language and Communication": "Language is a grass, and communication is a shade; Language is white clouds, communication is floating clouds. Language is a flower, and communication is an ocean of flowers. " This beginning regards "language" and "communication" as the relationship between individuals and the whole, and fails to understand the relationship between them.
All the above three situations use metaphors to increase literary talent, which is also the usual writing method of many candidates. If the examinee does not have an accurate grasp of the topic, he will take a wrong turn at the beginning, which will seriously affect his score.
The following examples illustrate the function of language more accurately and vividly. Example 4 "Communication begins with language": "Language is a bridge, connecting this shore and the other shore; Language is a waterfall, connecting streams and deep pools; Language is a rainbow, connecting the sky and the earth.
Only when the language is expressed accurately can communication be successful. If the language is wrong, it may have unpredictable consequences.
So how can we express the language accurately and promote the success of communication? Therefore, whether the opening is well written or not, the core issue is still in the exam; When judging the meaning of a question, seek accuracy first, and then seek image. Many methods are introduced at the beginning.
1, quote the famous saying (1) ask how the world is and teach people to commit themselves to life and death. Yuan Haowen is really good at asking questions, and so is he.
His question can be said to have been asked for a long time Over the years, how many people have lingered on this issue, and how many people have made the final answer in life after paying a huge price.
But every family's words are as different as everyone's face. Shi said, "Love is a tool.
..... "("What is love in the world ") 2 In a medieval church, a saint began his speech:" I became a saint because I saw through money, and what I have belongs to everyone. "Long years, a flick of a finger.
In a cross-century prison, a thief began his monologue: "I became a thief because I saw through the money, and everyone's is mine." Rodin, the master of aesthetics, once said, "Beauty is everywhere. For our eyes, it is not the lack of beauty, but the lack of discovery. "
Today, inspired by this innovative scholar, I want to say: "The answer is universal. For our brains, it is not a lack of thinking, but a lack of perspective. " Many times, we are confused by problems or wandering at the crossroads of multiple solutions. How to go has become a mystery in our hearts, and we are often indecisive. At this time, it is necessary to consider it from another angle, which will bring you more chances of success.
("Rotate this kaleidoscope") 2. Clever use of letter format 1 Dear Grandpa Confucius: Hello! I am your ordinary descendant. Thousands of years later, I still dare to write to bother you, not only to pay tribute to you, but also to have some difficult problems waiting for your advice. (A Letter to Confucius) The hateful standard answer: I am really outraged to see you.
Therefore, driven by the flame of anger, I wrote this letter to condemn you. The answers are colorful, but you have to wear a "standard" hat.
You know, because of the word "mark", countless tragedies have happened. The following are your three major crimes: ... ("A Letter to the Standard Answer") 3. Borrowing Zhang Hui's novel style (1) "It is said that the general trend of the world will be combined for a long time, and it will be combined for a long time."
At the beginning, the era of Wei, Shu and Wu Dingli no longer existed. In The River of No Return, the waves washed away the heroes of the past. And the former Shu heirs have also become "happy without thinking about Shu", and the world has become Sima's world.
The Juyi Hall in the Water Margin is now brightly lit and full of people. One hundred people and eight people are gathered here, and everyone is quarreling.
What are they arguing about? It turns out that Liang Shanbo is going to select heroes who fight tigers recently. It's great to be awarded this honorary title. Whoever is awarded can sit in the second place in the Water Margin.
That's why all heroes gather here to argue.
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