Seven, two short articles

Knowledge goal: to understand and accumulate words such as "greed, depravity, embellishment, Ran Ran, embryonic form, complicated strings, red wine, exquisitely carved, concrete and implicit". Learn to find the central sentence in prose, and use this to understand the main idea of the article and dialectically understand the "sadness and joy" of street trees; Experience the meaning of "the first experience is not always pleasant, but it is fresh, exciting and unforgettable" and "the more firsts in life, the more colorful life will be". Recite ostrovsky's famous words about life.

Ability goal: grasp the eye of argumentative paper and grasp the content of the article as a whole. Cultivate the ability of independent questioning and inquiry, and cultivate the habit of cooperative discussion.

Emotional goal: to experience and expand the philosophy of life expressed in essays, draw lessons and cultivate noble aesthetic taste.

Teaching emphasis: grasp the key sentences. Explore and grasp the main idea of the article and understand the writing intention.

Difficulties in teaching: Dialectically understand the meaning of keywords in connection with life experience.

Teaching method: reading aloud. Discuss the methods of inspiration. The Street Tree expresses the selfless and dedicated life belief through the image of the street tree. "It's good to be the first time" describes an experience in life through two examples. The two essays are narrated and discussed. Guide students to explore incisive arguments in the text, mobilize positive thinking, and give timely and appropriate guidance so that students can fully understand the content of the text.

Teaching tools: multimedia courseware.

Course arrangement: 2 hours

1 class: Read Street Tree repeatedly, grasp the finishing touch of the article, deduct the topic and grasp the tail, guide the inquiry and understand the main idea of the article. Contact life experience, achieve mastery through a comprehensive study and gain life experience.

Trees by the roadside

Zhang Xiaofeng

Teaching process:

1. Guide design: Students, let's enjoy a painting together. (The physical projector displays the picture, and the students observe it. Please describe the picture with beautiful sentences. (The students made it clear: roadside trees dedicated to shade in two-lane cities. Today, let's walk into the street trees written by Taiwan Province woman writer Zhang Xiaofeng and see how the image and spirit of the street trees are praised by people.

Second, information-assisted reading (projection:) Zhang Xiaofeng's prose creation

In order to make readers have a general understanding of all her prose artistic creations on a horizontal plane, I summarize the ideological and emotional connotations in Zhang Xiaofeng's prose works into three "feedback circles" that gradually expand and penetrate each other, and constantly expand its ripples and waves: First, her gratitude for nature, mountains and vegetation on the earth can only be compared with her religious piety; Second, she has an unforgettable love for the bright moon of her old country; Third, the woman writer's broad mind is overwhelming, and her meditation on the value of life is based on a broad thinking space. The emotional connotation of these three aspects can also be said to be a type of composition, which runs through every paragraph of her whole creative career.

Comments praised her "pen is like the heat of the sun, the chastity of frost and snow." Every article has the fragrance of Lengmei, and every word can be said to be the first perceptual sketch of her poetic prose. -Excerpted from Zhang Xiaofeng's Prose Collection, Literary Review 1994.7.

Third, read the text aloud and feel the whole.

1, students read aloud in groups, requiring accurate pronunciation, moderate speech speed, intonation and emotion. Tell me what this text is about.

2. Students can read aloud freely, circle and outline their favorite paragraphs, and briefly explain the reasons.

Students' answers may be:

Favorite paragraph: (1) The second paragraph describes the growing environment of street trees and its comparison with counterparts in virgin forests; (2) Paragraph 3 describes the pain of street trees; (3) In the fourth paragraph, street trees greet the morning sun and are compared to citizens immersed in the joy of nightlife; (4) Paragraph 5 states that the proudest moment of street trees is early morning.

Fourthly, students can reread the text freely, find the central sentence of the article and understand its profound meaning.

Let the students think for two minutes. In order to find the central sentence, you can first draw the sentences you think are key in the text and compare them to see which one can better summarize the central meaning of the article.

The central sentence of the article appears in the third paragraph: "The sacred cause is always painful, but only this kind of pain can give us depth."

"Sacred", "painful" and "profound" are the three key words to grasp the content of the text.

Ask the students to explore the following questions in groups to master the spirit of the text.

1. Why do street trees think their profession is sacred?

2. What sufferings have street trees engaged in the "sacred cause" suffered? Since the pain, why "choose" this fate?

3. How to understand "only this kind of pain can give us depth"? Why do you say "deep"?

4. The first paragraph and the second paragraph of this article refer to each other, but they are slightly different in word order and words. Why?

Students discuss and answer, and make it clear:

1. Street trees realize that the cause that society needs and people need is a sacred cause. Residents need fresh air, pedestrians need shade, the city needs sunshine, and street trees are willing to stand in the dust of the city and engage in sacred undertakings.

2. Grasp the understanding of key words that describe pain, such as "shaking smoke", "suffering at night", "sadness" and "depravity". Compared with their companions in the virgin forest, they abandoned superior living conditions and were always shrouded in smoke and dust. Compared with people who enjoy nightlife in the city, they are lonely, lonely and miserable. They are always worried about the pollution in the city. In short, they are painful. But they realize that the sacred cause is always painful, they are willing to sacrifice themselves and are proud and happy for their dedication. This is the beautiful heart and spirit of selfless devotees.

All sacred undertakings always need to pay a huge price and bear sacrifices, but only by paying this price can we make greater contributions to mankind. For example, street trees bear the pain and bring "freshness" and "shade" to cities and pedestrians. This kind of sacrifice embodies the spirit of dedication, and this kind of sacrifice of personal happiness for the happiness of the people is a deeper happiness.

4. The two paragraphs have different emphases. 1 paragraph mainly highlights the harsh environment in which street trees live, and the last paragraph mainly highlights the self-awareness that street trees are willing to contribute despite being in harsh environment.

The students answered clearly: What does the street tree in the text symbolize?

The image of street trees is the image of selfless devotees.

5. Taste languages: What languages do you think are difficult for you to understand?

There are several questions in the sentence: the meanings of "depravity", "sadness embellishment" and "sadness"

1. What does the word "degenerate" mean?

The usage of "depravity" is inconsistent with our sense of language. How can it be called "depravity"? It is clearly written below that "this fate is actually our own choice". How can you say "degenerate"? Look it up in the dictionary, "autumn", autumn, autumn. One of the meanings of "depravity" is depravity and wandering. Street trees left home, left the virgin forest, stood in the dust of the city, and their living conditions and self-image were greatly reduced. It is in this sense that depravity is said.

2. Why do you say "our existence is just a sad embellishment"?

This sentence is written in front of "a city full of cars and chimneys". Vehicles and chimneys constantly produce smoke and dust, polluting the city. Urban residents have long been insensitive and used to filth. They don't value freshness. The feeling of the tree is very distinct. In their view, the city is full of smoke and dust, which is really sad. A row of green trees is just an ornament, which can't change the sad situation, so it's just a sad ornament.

3. The last sentence says "We are a sad and happy tree". Why are you sad? What are you worried about? Happy about what?

As mentioned above, "maybe everyone has long been used to pollution, but we still stubbornly create a sense of freshness that is not cherished." Pollution has seriously damaged the health of citizens. Unfortunately, people have become accustomed to it, are insensitive, and do not want to control pollution. Although street trees try their best to make them fresh, they are limited and cannot change the overall situation. They are worried about the air pollution in the city and the health of citizens. Happily, I can create fresh air and freshness for the city, shade it in summer and welcome the sun and light at dawn.

Exercise in class: Read the passage and complete the topic.

Chinese milk vetch

It may be because I have lived in the countryside in the south of the Yangtze River for a long time, and I am particularly unforgettable about the unpretentious safflower.

Safflower, also known as Chinese milk vetch, is a kind of herb with strong vitality. In the rice-growing areas in the south, her footprints are everywhere. In early spring, the farmland during the winter break is still dead, and stubborn red flowers will appear around the rice stubble in the coming year. Her green feather leaves lean against the frozen soil, and a small red flower with frost on the tender stem feeds the earth like a small torch and a red agate. It's beautiful.

However, my love for safflower is not only because of its vitality, but also because of its simple and lofty feelings.

In the middle of winter, everything is bleak, but safflower grows in the snow. How energetic her life is! Spring blossoms, flowers bloom, and safflower has no intention of competing for spring. They take root and sprout in obscurity. How humble her character is! Spring has come, English has fallen, and red flowers are in full bloom; At this time, her stamens are full of fragrance, and the air seems to have penetrated into the sugar filaments, which makes countless bees crazy and gather honey around her all day. The famous "Chinese milk vetch honey" began to sprout amber soft light from this moment. In the transplanting season, safflower is generously turned into soil and soaked in water, becoming a good green manure and sacrificing itself for greater harvest.

Red flowers, alive, dare to fight for winter, have no intention to fight for spring, and concentrate on making honey for a better life; When you die, don't complain silently, die a fair death, and add thickness to the eternal land. Yes, red flowers are not expensive and brightly colored, so it is difficult to enter the ornamental forest. However, isn't her selfless spirit that never goes out like a flame a symbol of noble personality?

1. The main writing technique of this article is _ _ _ _ _.

2. In what order are the vitality and noble qualities of safflower described? ( )

A. Time sequence from far to near B. spatial order from outside to inside

C. Time sequence from near to far D. Logical sequence from inside to outside

3. What are the virtues of safflower similar to human beings? Complete the table below, with no more words than the box.

Chinese milk vetch

The noble qualities of human beings

(1) Dare to fight the cold winter.

(2) I have no intention to fight for spring, but I am single-minded and honey.

(3) Death is to enrich the soil it gives.

4. Find the sentence that best expresses the center of the article.

Reference answer:

1, use things to describe people, and use things to express ambitions.

2. A.

3, ① Brave ② Silent dedication ③ Self-sacrifice for others

However, her flaming life demands less contribution and more selflessness. Isn't this a symbol of noble personality?

Teacher's summary: Through the monologue of the inner world of the roadside tree, the words express the mind of the devotee and praise the lofty spirit of the devotee.

VIII. Homework 1:

Athena Chu (9): depravity, embellishment, hardship, greed, sister, Ran Ran, chewing gum, pride.

Explanation (8):

Degeneration: ① the change from (thinking and behavior) to bad; (2) degenerate, wandering (mostly used in early vernacular Chinese). Down, down, down.

Decorate: Set off or decorate to make the original thing better.

Deep: calm and heavy; Thoughts and feelings are not exposed.

Complex strings and emergency pipes: all kinds of cheerful music. A string refers to a stringed instrument. A wind instrument.

Red light and green wine: describe the bustling nightlife.

Greed: ① insatiable greed (including derogatory meaning); I don't know how to satisfy.

Ran Ran: Slowly.

Endure pain (for a day).

Homework 2: Give full play to the imagination in the exercise book, creatively outline the image of street trees with a brush, and explain your own ideas.

Nine, blackboard design:

Trees by the roadside

Zhang Xiaofeng

Keywords: sacred, painful and deep

Street trees-companions of virgin forests.

-citizens immersed in the joy of nightlife.

(image of selfless devotee)

Lesson 2: Guide yourself to read It's Good to Be First Time.

It's good to be the first time.

Zhou Sushan

Teaching process:

First, students read the text aloud and think that "the first time is very good", so what is good about the first time? Grasp the key words and analyze the meaning of "good".

The author described a life experience through two examples. So what are the two "first" life experiences described in detail? Please summarize.

The answer is clear: The essay recounts two life experiences in detail: the first time I saw a strong grapefruit tree and the first time I saw a bird hatched by ten sisters.

Joy, novelty, surprise, low taste, indelible impression, surprise, fresh excitement, endless aftertaste, etc. The first experience is wonderful, fresh and exciting, with endless aftertaste. Specifically, the first time I saw the grapefruit tree, my heart was full of joy and novelty, and the first time I saw the hatched birds, it was even more pleasant.

Second, cooperative discussion: What words do you think are difficult to understand or meaningful in this article? Group communication.

1. Why is the thick grapefruit tree "an autumn painting" instead of "landscape painting" and "landscape painting"?

To delve into this kind of problem, you can look up reference books. Even if the words are not unfamiliar, it is good to look them up. The "custom" here refers to the local customs. The pomelo tree grows in the south, and the pomelo tree I saw is next to others. This landscape shows the local customs and even human feelings in the south.

2. What is the difference between "embryonic form" and "concrete implication" when writing about the birds hatched by ten sisters?

If you analyze words, you can understand them more carefully, and you will also consider your own words and sentences carefully. A rudiment, an unformed form Specific and subtle, with systemic. I can see that the appearance is very different. It is very appropriate to describe meat balls as embryonic forms and adult birds as concrete and tiny.

3. Why do you say "the first experience is not always pleasant"? But "memorable". Why "The more firsts in life, the more colorful life will be"?

As far as the examples given by the author are concerned, we can also know that the first experience is not necessarily pleasant. For example, when I saw those two small pink meatballs, "But I think it looks ugly, and I can't eat it because of it", I was unhappy this time. Another example is camping, sometimes you will encounter difficulties and sleep very comfortably; Cooking for the first time is not necessarily pleasant. However, whether happy or unhappy, that kind of feeling is fresh, unprecedented, particularly exciting and indelible, so it makes people remember deeply. The more firsts in life, the more experiences and feelings, and the more colorful life will be.

4. What does it mean to say at the end of the article: "May you cherish your first time"?

"Treasure" is the author's first hope for readers, that is, he hopes readers will constantly expand new areas of life, pay attention to and look for opportunities at any time with a novel's childlike innocence, and broaden their horizons and enrich their experiences with more and more bold first attempts. On the contrary, if you are confined to your personal life, you will be ignorant. The first time is not much, life will be monotonous.

Third, freedom of speech:

1. Do you want to try all the first time?

Some "firsts" are bad, so you can't try them. Never try taking drugs for the first time. If you try, you will ruin yourself. The "first time" in the article is self-evident, and it all means good things. Be discerning before you do something. Distinguish right from wrong.

2. The first time was really good, and the feeling of the first time was really wonderful. Think about it carefully: How many "firsts" in life are worth your low taste? How many "firsts" left an indelible impression on you? See who tells a wonderful story.

Fourth, in-class exercises 1:

Please read two short passages carefully, imitate the sentence patterns in the passage and complete the following blanks to make them reasonable and complete sentences.

(1) When night falls, _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _.

A huge _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ hangs on the branch.

(3) _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ is just an ornament.

(4) _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ deserves low taste.

(5) Seeing _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ for the first time, but feeling _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _.

(6) May you cherish _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _.

(7) _ _ _ _ _ _ _ left an indelible impression on _ _ _ _ _

Classroom exercise 2: Read the following paragraphs and complete (1) ~ (5) questions.

A few years ago, my family raised a cage of ten sisters for the first time. When the mother bird gave birth to several delicate eggs smaller than her little finger for the first time, my children and I were eagerly waiting for the bird to hatch. One day, while we were having lunch, the child suddenly shouted, "The bird has hatched." I was surprised to walk to the front of the birdcage and saw that the so-called birds in the bird's nest were _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _. I saw the newly hatched chicks for the first time, but I found them ugly, so I couldn't eat them. However, I prefer them to those old birds. When they grow up, their feathers become richer and richer, and everything is concrete and subtle.

1, the following is the original sentence in the blank space of paragraph 1 of the selected text. The sentence order is out of order. Please adjust the order of the whole sentence.

A.he has only a few sparse hairs. He has only the rudiment of a bird.

C.just two small pink meatballs. D. Two black eyes are very big.

The correct sentence order is _ _ _ _ _ _ _:

2. At the beginning of the text, it is said that pomelo trees are "not necessarily beautiful" and "autumn wind paintings". Is it contradictory? Why? How does the author feel?

Reference answer 1, CBAD 2, not contradictory. Because it is the first time to see the fruity pomelo tree, my heart is full of joy and novelty. So even if the scenery is not necessarily beautiful, it is still an autumn painting in the author's view. (Just answer correctly)

(2) When I gave birth to a child for the first time, the nurse wrapped it in swaddling clothes, and only the red-faced boss was held by me. The first time I saw the separation of flesh and blood, the first time I saw such a fresh baby, less than an hour after birth. My mood is very complicated, both excited, novel and nervous. I just stared at him, fearing that this fragile little life would disappear at any time.

In the second paragraph of Selected Works, when describing the "first time" experience and feelings, it is intertwined with maternal love, which reminds people of the poems of Meng Jiao, a poet in the Tang Dynasty. ____________,____________。 (Wandering Son)

But how much love does an inch of grass have when it gets three spring rays?

Seven, class summary:

Life is beautiful, and it belongs to people only once. How should we spend this only life? The cause of street trees is sacred because it contains profundity; The image of street trees is very touching, because it is a portrayal of selfless devotees. What is the meaning of life? Ostrovsky, a writer of the former Soviet Union, said in How Steel was Tempered: "A man's life should be spent like this: when he looks back, he will not regret wasting his time, nor will he be ashamed of doing nothing. In this way, when he dies, he can say,' I have devoted all my life and energy to the most magnificent cause in the world-the struggle for the liberation of all mankind.' Please understand the meaning of this motto and taste the realm of life full of ideals and beliefs.

8. Homework: 1, 2 required, 3, 4 optional.

1, skillfully recite ostrovsky's famous words about the meaning of life.

2. Athena Chu:

Prototype, rich, sparse, cherished, numerous, heavy, eager, exquisite, colorful, ten sisters.

Description: prototype (chú): the prototype before finalization.

Shuoà: (Fruits) are abundant and big (many are useless).

Shū: (objects, sounds, etc. ) are far apart in space or time.

Waist: Nostalgia.

Exquisite and exquisite: Describe the exquisite and meticulous objects with clear holes and grotesque structures.

Concrete and subtle: I already have it all over my body, but it's relatively small.

Unforgettable: Describe impressions, achievements, etc. Will not disappear because of the long time.

Endless aftertaste: after eating a good food, there is endless aftertaste, which means that the more you think about it afterwards, the more meaningful it becomes.

Vulgar: A vulgar person.

Today, you must have many meaningful "first time" experiences. Please choose the best "first time" and write a paragraph of about 200 words.

The last sentence of "Street Tree" says: "We are a sad and happy tree". The sadness of street trees is for urban air pollution and public health. Nowadays, great changes have taken place in this city. Please write about the changes of blue sky, clear water, green grass and red flowers in this city from the perspective of street trees.

Nine, blackboard writing design

It's good to be the first time.

Zhou Sushan

Ten sisters hatch birds.

Pomelo trees are full of fruits, which are surprising, happy and new.

Yue qi ↓

-Fresh, exciting and memorable.