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Full score composition for college entrance examination
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Read the following poem and write as required. (60 points)

Xing Wu's ZaShi [Qing] Ruan Yuan

At the turn of the four rivers, the city is inclined and scattered into thousands of streams all over the house. Plant water chestnut in the depths, rice in the depths and lotus in the depths.

What kind of thinking or association does this poem contain? Please write an article according to your thinking or association, no less than 800 words.

Note (1) Make your own ideas, make your own topics, and do not restrict the style except poetry. (2) No interplanting or plagiarism.

③ Don't disclose personal information. (4) writing norms, the correct use of punctuation.

Second, writing guidance

Third, write examples.

In recent years, a famous person, Vae, has appeared in Anhui Province. He is called "Jay Chou's successor" and "Han Han in music", which shows his influence. Regardless of who he is, any search by any search engine is his massive credit.

Anyone who has read his resume knows that he is a graduate of Anhui Medical University. But he has embarked on the road of independent music creation. The collection of songs and records is made by one person, who is one of the few strange people among creative singers. He didn't sign any record company, but promoted it through official website, which sold well. He has a large number of fans around the world. This shows that he is successful and an example to everyone. Medicine and music are examples.

It is very important to choose the one that suits you; What doesn't suit you will only make you lose more.

Let's take marriage for example. Finding someone you love is a lifetime, not a so-so life. The road of life is not long, but short. You can't live on the spot, but you have to live with relish. Now David's blind date programs are all about men choosing women and women choosing men. It is shocking that foreigners have doubts about China people's love and values. Are all people in China so vulgar? If you ask others, you should first weigh your own weight. The right bond is tied to two people, not on the condition that one of them is out of line and violates the social atmosphere. In that case, one end of a suitable balance will be unbalanced and tilted. The satirical Xifeng, Fuguishan, is so deep that she can't even figure out her own weight. She boasted that only graduate students from Peking University and Tsinghua were suitable for her, and she didn't blame me for being thrown eggs at the show. Pebbles must be thrown. According to accurate estimates, there are six people in China who meet the requirements of Xifeng. I hope one of these six people can stay with Xifeng until the end of his life.

Onions are onions, and garlic can't be put anywhere. Everyone knows this simple common sense: wheat can't be grown in paddy fields and rice can't be grown in dry lands. If we insist on subjectively acting against objective laws, it will only backfire and end up in a mess.

The same is true in life. Start what you can do and stop what you can do (60 points)

20 10 selected compositions of Beijing college entrance examination.

Look at the stars in a down-to-earth way

Finally, I caught a glimpse of you. You didn't choose to retire, and you didn't want to argue with other scholars all day. You just run around the land of China, appear in front of the world as a walker, and run around from the mire to solve the worries and sufferings of all the people. "Be the best in the world, its stone is still right", you are so down-to-earth, and your steps are so solid and unyielding.

I finally understand that it's not that I can't look up at the stars. Your star is "One World". It's just that compared with other philosophers who only look up at the starry sky and only make feeble slogans, you would rather practice your ideals in a down-to-earth way and make your starry sky more brilliant. So, you are always on the run. You once lobbied the king of Chu for thousands of miles to "reject the opportunity of Luban to attack the city" and save the Song people; You are running around again, "not attacking", "not being happy", "not robbing" and "not being Confucian" in order to put forward a real "salvation prescription" for this troubled times. You look up at the stars, but always keep your feet on the ground. Therefore, your footsteps never stop, and your footprints are all over China. And after this high-sounding lie still exists in the world for two thousand years, your steps are getting stronger and stronger.

It turns out that your eyes have been looking up at the stars; So your feet have never left the earth!

With dark hair, dark eyes and dark face, staring at the starry sky and stepping on the earth, you are like a black lightning, piercing the sky and lighting an eternal flame for the five mountains in Kyushu!

Humans need to look up at the starry sky, because without the shining of the starry sky, our road will not have a front. However, while looking up at the starry sky, don't forget to be down-to-earth and do something for others and society. After all, the beauty of the starry sky never belongs to the earth. Only by keeping your feet on the ground can you reflect the splendor of the starry sky with your own footprints.

Mozi, thank you for letting me understand this simple but profound truth, and for giving me the most lasting motivation in my life.

Expert group rating:

Marking the composition 1 (in a class of literature) has 20 points for content, 20 points for expression and 20 points for expansion, with a total score of 60 points.

note:

This is a traditional "old cultural composition", but it is also a "new cultural composition": from the concept of teacher Tan Hengjun's cultural composition, it has the characteristics of elegant language, and it is a composition that can be expressed beautifully after being trained in elegant language. Second, no matter what materials it uses, whether ancient or contemporary, materials are just a carrier or means. The key is whether there is cultural spirit and feelings in the article. From the above two aspects, we confirm that this is also a new "cultural composition".

As for the life-oriented expression of "new culture composition", we will launch 20 10 excellent works for everyone to know and discuss, and popularize the knowledge and understanding of "new culture composition".

20 10 Chongqing college entrance examination perfect score composition

Please write an article on the topic of "difficult problem".

Requirements: ① Independent decision; (2) Except poetry, the style is not limited; (3) Not less than 800 words; (4) Don't copy, and don't copy.

Difficult problem

It's June, and it's sunny and southeast.

At the seaside, the workers' horns resounded through the sky, purple smoke and yellow paper lingered around the fleet, and the waves beat against the solid hull. Urged by chanting on the altar and the sound of bells and drums, 3,000 boys and girls boarded a fairy-seeking ship ready to set sail, carrying the first emperor's desire for immortality and sailing for the legendary Penglai Fairy Island.

In 2 10 BC, Qin Shihuang died.

The first emperor's extravagant hope never came true, but he died early because he was too eager to visit the Taoist temple and ate a lot of Dan medicine containing heavy metals. However, in the dynasties that take history as a mirror, there was never a shortage of people who longed for immortality, immortality and early death. Perhaps they are responding to the old saying: "Man's greatest enemy is himself."

Desire and reality are always twins. Expansive desire and constrained reality always contradict each other in the same time and space, but they always lead to the ultimate unification. Undeniably, this is not only a life problem, but also an eternal philosophical problem.

I remember my mother always complained about her poor legs and feet, walking slower than others and doing less than others, but in the eyes of others, no one walked faster than her mother, and no one did much more than her mother. Gradually, my mother became more and more unhappy and simply complained, "I wish I could change my leg." I said, "Mom, it's not that you are in poor health, but that your heart is beating too fast." Some students once asked me such a question, what is the fastest thing in the world? I said, it must be light. Is there anything faster than light? The classmate shook his head, it was desire.

The Buddha said that "no desire leads to rigidity", and the words "gold" and "rigidity" in the Diamond Sutra are proof of this truth. Some people say that "King Kong" is an instrument in the hands of the Buddha, invincible, invincible and invincible. In fact, the Buddha is invisible and exists in the avenue. How can it be a physical thing? Therefore, "King Kong" is "great wisdom", invisible and intangible, but it is the most tenacious and sharp deity. As the saying goes, "the avenue is invisible" and "the big one is hidden in the city". The premise of great wisdom is that there is no desire and no demand. Without demand, you can watch all the flowers bloom and fall coldly, and your heart can quietly break everything in the world, transcend the limitations of time and space, reach out to the universe, and then jump out of reincarnation and realize great wisdom. Buddha said: "Color is empty, and empty is color", color is human desire, and empty is human desire. Desire and non-desire are unified under great wisdom, and the problem is no longer a problem. The simplest is the most difficult, and the most difficult is also the simplest.

We ordinary people still have such a big problem because we can't have the great wisdom to realize the unity of desire and reality. Once upon a time, we fantasized about flying to the Moon Palace to see Chang 'e. The pioneers, represented by thousands of families, gave their lives to realize this wish, only to find that we could not fly at all and had to rely on tools. Before that, our dreams had been wandering on the moon for thousands of years. Now, when we can escape from the embrace of Mother Earth at the speed of the first universe, our desire has spread to the vast universe, looking for the next goal aimlessly and hungrily, and even distant stars hundreds of millions of light-years away have become a topic.

"The satisfaction of desire can only be exchanged for instant pleasure and eternal vanity." I don't know which expert once summed it up like this. When we look back on the past, this sentence really stung our fragile hearts, and our outlook on life and the world suddenly had the urge to subvert. When we say we have to, when we say that people can't help themselves in the Jianghu, when we say that there is no road in the world, and when we use these excuses to escape from ourselves, are the questions of desire and reality still as lamentable as Sisyphus's, pushing others and ourselves again and again?

20 10 Chongqing college entrance examination perfect score composition

Please write an article on the topic of "difficult problem".

Requirements: ① Independent decision; (2) Except poetry, the style is not limited; (3) Not less than 800 words; (4) Don't copy, and don't copy.

Difficult problem

Hearing the knock at the door, I quickly opened the door. An old man with a basket on his back stood hunched in the corridor, almost touching the ground at both ends, like a bow with full strings, facing the ceiling of the corridor.

I leaned over and saw that it was uncle!

I was busy pulling Uncle Yao into the house and sat down. He refused to go in and said, "Rural people are poor at home and have nothing to send. They just slaughtered Nian pig and gave you a piece of meat. It's not big. Don't be disgusted. "

I have always been frank, so I said rudely, "Uncle Yao, you sent me meat for no reason. I'll take it. You should stay at my nephew's house for a few more days. "

"Also play, you are not I don't know, I a person, doesn't even have a janitor at home, although there is nothing to be afraid of stealing, but these live animals are still waiting for me to serve. Don't go back! "

I tried several times, but I couldn't keep him, so I had to let him go

I'll find him a car. He can walk back more than twenty miles, all of which are mountain roads.

He doesn't want me to find him a car anyway. He said, "If you find me a car, I will owe you another favor. I am old and unable to repay my kindness. Don't give me a problem. "

I suddenly froze. He didn't send me pork to repay the so-called love.

This spring, he went to town to buy fertilizer. He is in his sixties, carrying a bag of 80 kilograms of chemical fertilizer and crawling slowly on the ground like a snail. Seeing that he was really struggling, I found a jeep to take him home.

This time, he said absolutely, "You can find a car, even if you kill me!"

I had to look at his back and watch him slowly disappear into my sight.

Uncle Yao is actually not related to me. When I was young, I lived in a village with him. He is more than thirty years older than me, and I have always called him Grandpa Yao. More than twenty years have passed, and Grandpa Yao is getting old. For more than twenty years, I always go back to my hometown several times a year to visit my second brother. Every time I hurried back, I didn't even have time to take a look at my hometown. Naturally, I often don't see my uncle for many years. I heard from my second brother that the nursing home came to pick him up. He said that he was not free and insisted on living alone.

I went back to my hometown before the Spring Festival this year and told my second brother about Grandpa Yao. I said he gave me a piece of pork, and I would pay him a New Year call anyway. The second brother said, "Don't go, he said. He gave you pork for the Spring Festival in return for finding a car to send him. If you go again, won't it give him another problem? " Won't he always worry about how to repay you? "

My second brother's words confirmed my previous guess. However, I didn't listen to my second brother, and I don't want to owe anyone. I went to grandpa Yao's house with 200 yuan in my hand. What kind of home it is, a room, a dusty table with the same potholes in the middle. He sat alone at the table to eat. When he saw me, he was busy making tea with fire. In order not to delay Uncle Mo's dinner, I quickly explained my intention to him: "I wanted to buy you some new year's goods, but I couldn't buy them well, so I had to ask you to do it yourself." Uncle Yao didn't accept anything, but pushed for a long time. I finally let him compromise with an outlet.

Back to my second brother's house, I was having breakfast, and I was crying with my second brother and sister-in-law about Uncle Yao's situation and people. The second brother said, "I bet that Uncle Yao will come to repay you before it is finished next spring at the latest."

Just then, Uncle Yao came, but he didn't come into the house. The second brother took him to dinner, but refused, saying, "I just ate." Li Xiong saw it. " The second brother pulled him to drink, and he likes flattery best in his life. He won't sit down for anything. The second brother knew that Grandpa Yao was afraid that it would be difficult to repay his debt after drinking his wine, so he stopped pulling.

Grandpa Yao said that he brought me some eggs, not many, and he will bring them to me when the chickens lay more eggs next year. Putting down the convenient bag, Uncle Yao left trembling.

I had to look at Grandpa Yao's back in a daze. Second brother said, let's go back to the house for dinner. It's not that you don't know that rural people are like this. No matter how poor you are, you don't want to owe others. If you owe a debt, you will sell a pot on your head, especially for the elderly, and you are even more afraid that you can't owe it. Uncle Yao will bring you eggs next year, so don't embarrass him any more.

I let out a cry and froze there. For a moment, I didn't know what to say.

20 10 Fujian college entrance examination perfect score composition

Material title: jacob green and william green's hypothesis, they just wanted to prove whether there is a connection between folk fairy tales and history, but in the end they couldn't prove it, so they put the notebook on the shelf. Later, his friends discovered and published the book, reprinted it tens of thousands of times, distributed hundreds of millions of copies, and translated it into more than 50 languages by more than 40 countries. Choose your own angle, write your own topic, and decide your own ideas. However, it shall not exceed the content and significance of the materials.

Why not change your mind?

Superman is just an ordinary person. After taking off his robe, he will fall from his horse and become paralyzed. However, actor christopher reeve knows how to turn his mind in the dark period of depression. "The' No Pass' sign doesn't tell you to stop, but reminds you that it's time to turn."

Some things can't be accomplished with passion and perseverance, just like the brothers Grimm can never find out the relationship between those legends and the history of human development, because they are fairy tales suitable for children to read. At this time, let your mind turn a corner and maybe you can (see) the other side of success. The grass is rich and the water is beautiful, and the wind is fine and the willows are oblique.

Difficulties followed, and nothing was achieved. Why don't you turn your head?

The road ahead is full of thorns and the stones are rough and sharp. Why do you want to be confined to tradition and refuse to look back? You can't know whether you are ehrlich, who was lucky enough to succeed in the 666th experiment, or priestley, who tried more than 500 times but had little effect. Engels bluntly said in Dialectics of Nature that Soller "didn't find the truth when the truth hit the tip of his nose", perhaps because the latter, like the brothers Grimm, was unwilling to give in to the original hypothesis, turned his mind around and finally handed over the title of "discoverer of chlorine". Life is extremely long and short, and time will not allow you to be the Xue Xisi who pushed the boulder to the top of the mountain and rolled back to the bottom again and again in vain. Let your mind turn a corner, useless work will only reduce the output power of life machinery.

You are in prison, and you are very compassionate. Why don't you change your mind?

When everyone is saying, "I hope we can't hang a long rope in the western world, it's a day to fly west", MacArthur's sentence, "Fortunately, we will only lose one life", is like a wooden array, awakening the world. When the whole world is sighing that "the wind has stopped the dust and the fragrant flowers have run out" and complaining that "the lonely window is cold and rainy", some people say in a clear voice that "I would like to believe that there will be spring in the coming year" and "the spring scenery will return to people twice next year", just like the bell in the clear night. Things often have a bright side, and life is too short to be full of unhappiness. Let the mind turn a corner, find beauty in disappearance and gain in loss.

So when the catkins are white and dancing up and down, you might as well let go of the obsession that "the grass and trees know the worries, and the young flowers are bald and willow", and let your mind turn a corner and believe that "the young flowers have no roots, and the good wind frequency (by) helps me to get to Qingyun".

Therefore, when fame and fortune lock the people around you, you might as well put down your firm belief that "knowing what you can't do" and let your mind turn a corner. Zhuang Zhou's "knowing what you can't do is also a kind of frankness and cuteness of human nature, and it is an open-minded and heroic spirit."

You know, when the Golden Globe Award for Best Director and the world bestseller list champion were both embraced by him, christopher reeve, the "superman", was the luckiest (no longer an actor) to turn his head after that misfortune.

Why don't you turn your mind around?

comment

What do you mean, "turn a corner"? How to "turn a corner"? Why "turn a corner"? Argumentative writing pays attention to discussion and speculation, and this paper is better in this respect.

This article is not written according to the material, but retells the story in the second paragraph with Brothers Grimm as an example. This also reflects the author's wisdom and wisdom to avoid entering the routine. Two sub-arguments: "One difficulty after another, nothing can be achieved. Why don't you turn your mind around? " "I am depressed and imprisoned, and I sympathize with others. Why not let my brain turn a corner? " Each section is divided into separate sections, which are neat, eye-catching and summarized.

Quotations and examples should be natural and appropriate. In terms of expression, the narrative and long sentences are used to enhance the appeal and persuasiveness.